good work dear..india forums ka medals ka baarish..many of you are here in the forum for more than 10 yrs
good work dear..india forums ka medals ka baarish..many of you are here in the forum for more than 10 yrs
I have to stop imagining all OS,FF visually🤣🤣🤣🤭🤭😝🙈
Thank you and will do so soon. Keep reading and giving me your feedback. Much appreciatedOriginally posted by: krazykajuO GOD! She already confessed.❤️😍
He loves her and already admitted that to himself.
Wowww..... And this is soo Shaurya to dismiss it as a crush. He is finally at his mother's place for her.
He is going to take her back and make her his intern ?😀
Wonderful concept. I'm already waiting for next part. Looking forward to read more on Shakhi from you.
Update soon
Love!!
Thank you so much for the feedback and don't mention the mention 😀Originally posted by: ..KpopIsLife..Wow that was beautifully written, especially, loved the last part where she comes out of the bathroom and he is mesmerized...☺️
Please do continue and thank you for the special mention!🤗
Thank you so much for your feedback. Will update soon and yes I hate abandoning stories so will complete it shortly.Originally posted by: attiya1.3Oh my my😳
That's such an awesome scenario. I totally loved it. + Your transition of story😍♥️
Beautiful piece.
Plzzz complete it soon🙈
Thank you. Indeed he is moon pie.
Akhir kaar wo bhi to insaan hi hai.Originally posted by: tashafarshiits amazing....and the last part😍 shaurya ke liye apne hormones ko control karna kitna hard hoga...plz.. continue. ..
Thank you for your feedback and yes will update soon. I am hoping you'll like the next part.Originally posted by: AriyatogetherWow its so beautiful❤️
Anokhi confessed to him but he rejected thinking its just a crush..😔
I thought he rejected coz he dont love her😃
Lol now he will pacify his love😆Who seem to ignoring him badly🤣
Cont soon
Thank you for feedback and I hope you enjoy the upcoming parts.Originally posted by: Nan_ArHiNow that's an interesting start! Waiting for more. Thank you for this story
Ha ha coming from you the compliment is a huge endorsement so thank you for your amazing feedback and I just hope you'll love the coming updates. And yes somehow I don't see them accepting their feelings in a college setting even if they develop it there.Originally posted by: Guneet80OH MY GOODNESS!
Let me start by saying, I'm SO jealous of you. No seriously!
You write so well, I was completely engulfed in the story. Felt it when Anokhi or when she blushed, felt every point of view of Shaurya.
You portrayed their emotions so well and this is how a writer should be. Hands down, the best thing I've read in the forum.
I'm blown away! 🙇🙇
I'm glad you didn't make them have a relationship in college because no matter how much we like it, Shaurya and Anokhi wouldn't do it so easily. I loved the angst between them. Loved the way, Anokhi surrendered herself to him in a way, exposing her deepest feelings.
If there were any forum writers award, I would've given the best writer to you! Please please update soon, I'm dying of anticipation here! 😭❤️
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