Shaurya Aur Anokhi Ki Kahani

Ye tune kya kiya (Shaurya + Anokhi ) OS

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Well I atually don't know why I am writing this but this plot is wandering in my mind from last week.Shayaad yahaan likhne se dimaag se chala jaaye. Hopefully, So I can concentrate on other chores. 



*Ye tune kya kiya*


The Story starts when Anokhi is in 3 rd year .Shaurya has tried his best to throw her out of SIAC but has miserably failed.And along with his each failure he has fallen for her,he has lost his heart to her.While Anokhi is still focussed on her studies,for her till there is no space for love/relationship in her life. While Shaurya is running and hiding his feelings.he is running from his feelings.


Ishq woh bala hai

Ishq woh bala hai

Jisko chhuaa

Isne woh jala hai

Dil se hota hai shuru

Dil se hota hai shuru

Par kambakht

Sar pe chadha hai

Kabhi khud se kabhi khuda se

Kabhi zamaane se lada hai

Itna hua badnaam phir bhi

Har zubaan pe ada hai.



SIAC @ around 11 pm.

Anokhi is walking f fast from library blabbering.

"Nikki jaldi bhaag ,aaj actually main bohot late ho gaya hai.Well, wo toh iss pure hafte se ho raha hai par aaj kuch jyaada hi ho gaya hai, Shukr hai matarani wo meri landlady out of town gayi hai kisi shaadi ke liye warna yeh pura hafta itni der se aata dekh usne toh ghae se hi nikal dena thaa tujhe.Jaisi bhi ho par jab koi bhi accomodation facility nahi mil rahi thi tab only she was the one who trusted and gave me the room.He matarani,jaldi jaldi ke chakkar main ,main toh cab mangwana hi bhul gayi



She takes her phone out logs in to app ,fingers crossed matarani bass cab mil jaaye ek toh mausam bhi itna kharab ho raha hai.Husshh Ho gaya 20 min lagenge but ho toh gaya.While waiting she notices lights on from Shaurya's cabin.

'Sir itni der tak,kya nikki tu bhi exams sar par hai ,unhe bhi toh jyaada kaam hoga. She notices lights have been off Shaurya is trying to come down on staircase,but he is loosing his balance.

Before he falls,Anokhi holds him.


Ishq ki saazishein
Ishq ki baaziyaan


He was gettting unconscious,She pats his cheek

Anokhi- Sir,Sir aapko kya huaa?,AAp theek toh hai.While he is lost watching her with half opened eyes.He wants to watch her but even after trying his eyes are not cooperating him.


Haara main khel ke
Do dilon ka juaa.


He bhagwaan aapko toh bohot tej fever hai,Patting his cheeks sir sir makhhan kaha hai?

He answers is nhis semi-conscious state use maine ghar bhej diya. Suddenly,there starts thundering. Sir aap gate ki shelter ke pass chaliye she drags him and it starts raining.Both are in shelter.


Kyun tune meri fursat ki
Kyun dil mein itni harqat ki
Ishaq mein itni barqat ki
Ye tune kya kiya


The cab arrives Anokhi requests the cab driver to change the destination As she can't leave Shaurya in this state alone.The cab driver agrees after promising him thrice of charge and he says he will drop both of them to Sabarwal mansion .So Anokhi has to agree,she thought she will walk back to her PG,though it will be way far too long but she has to,there is no option.


She takes Shaurya along with help of cab driver in cab.In cab Shaurya is unable to balance he is getting unconscious.

His head lands on her shoulders.Anokhi is patting his cheeks and rubbing his hands which have fell cold. 

Sir- Just hum pohoch jayyenge abhi,don't worry sab theek ho jaayegaa.We are gonna reach buss thodi der aur apni eyes close mat kijiye please.



Phiru ab maara maara main

Chaand se bichhda taara main

Dil se itna kyun haara main

Ye tune kya kiya


And he again gets lost in her eyes.Anokhi thinks it is because of his illness.They arrives at Sabarwal mansion. Anokhi pays cab driver he helps Anokhi to take Shaurya along till gate.It 's raining heavily...

From gate the cab driver goes,Now Anokhi has to take him alone ....


From gate to mansion taking him to home she blabbers.

Pata nahi ye logon ko itna bada lawn area kyu chaahiye,Abb gate ke pass door hota toh itna bheegte nahi.Though he is walking but maximum of his weight is on Anokhi's shoulders.He just could smile on her antics.  


Saari duniya se jeet ke

Main aaya hoon idhar

Tere aage hi main haara

Kiya tune kya asar


Huh finally phoch gaye.Anokhi sees lock,yeh kya taala ghar par koi bhi nahi hai kya?, abb inhe aise kaise chodd ke jaauu? 

She feels more weight on her shoulders .

She pats his cheeks,

Anokhi- Sir,Sir where are the keys?

Shaurya- Hmm umm though he cannot speak much he signals to his pocket.

Anokhi- OK ok just wait main nikalti hun.


She takes out keys from his pocket,opens door.

She asks Shaurya where his room is and takes him in his room.

She helps him in drying him and pass him his clothes in hurry so he could change.

Anokhi-Sir ye lijiye,jaldi se change kar lijiye warna aur tabiyaat bigad jayegi.

Shaurya just responds in hmmm.

She wents out and brings a glass of water along with medicines from first aid box which she has asked from Shaurya where the first aid box was kept.

When she comes she notices Shaurya was struggling with buttons of his shirt.

She went there and helps him in changing his shirt, While she was doing so Shaurya was just inhaling her,her scent.


Main dil ka raaz kehta hoon

Ke jab jab saansein leta hoon

Tera hi naam leta hoon

Ye tune kya kiya


After she was done she gives him medicines and asks him to rest.

But only after getting contact no of Shaurya's physician.She contacts him and takes necessary precautions.


After around 2 hours she wakes up Shaurya.

Anokhi- Sir,soup bana ke laayi hu ,please thoda le lijiye you will feel better.

Initially he refuses but Anokhi scolds him and then he agrees .

She feeds him soup .While he was busy in storing her in his heart with his eyes.In between the pillow kept beside Shaurya starts to misplace Anokhi wents forward and adjusts it.In the process her hairs flew on Shaurya's face.

She was so close to him that he can inhale her,which he did.His mind recalled all the incidences in which they have accidently came such close to each other many a times Anokhi in his arms.



Meri baahon ko

Teri saanson ki jo

Aadatein lagi hain waisi

Jee leta hoon ab

Main thoda aur


Anokhi- Sir maine dr uncle se baat kar li hai wo kal aa jayenge,These are some medicines tab tak ke liye.

She gives him medicines and as he don't have any energy to argue with her .

She keeps changing icepacks on his forehead as his fever was too high.In the process sleep drifts her.

@Morning Shaurya  wokes up.

before he could get out og his bed he notices a pair of hands has blocked his arms he turns and notices little Anokhi sleeping in an uncomfortable position and posture.The wind flew her hairs on her face which blocks his view.he tucks her hair back behind her ear lovingly gazing her.

He smies looking her full.


As he tucks her hair,Anokhi wakes up too.

Shaurya hides his smile.And gives a stern expression.

Anokhi- sir aap uth gaye,how are you feeling?

Shaurya- Thoda theek mehsus kar raha hu.

He was just watching actually scanning her from top to bottom.


Anokhi notices his gaze.and she comes to senses.

She thinks- gadbad ho gayi na nikki,abb yeh wapas chor na samajh le.Socha tha ye uthne se pehle change kar lungi.But nahi tujhe to sona thaa na nikki.

She awkwarly says.

Anokhi- Wo sorry sir,actually last night it was raining too heavily and whole clothes were drenched and as you were already ill donon ke bimaar hone ka risk nahi le sakti thi.

So,Sorry aapki T-shirt aise.

Shaurya( controlling his laugh)- Toh why did you wear just T-shirt,pura set hi pehen leti.

Anokhi- nahi sir,bass ho gaya thaa uski koi jarurrat nahi padi.

She blabbers Itne lambe chaude ho,ye T-shirt hi short dress ki tarah aa gayi pura set kahan se pehenti,which Shaurya listenes. he giggles


Anokhi- ye bhi sunai diya ise, Iske kaan kya haathi ke hai,jab bhi,jitna bhi dheere bolo yehsun hi lete hai.

Meri dil ki ret pe

Aankhon ki jo

Pade parchhai teri

Pee leta hoon tab

Main thoda aur


Shaurya tells her- Do,one thing he tells location of rooms of his bhabhi and sisters and asks her to use their clothes.first she refuses but then he says

Shaurya- Main keh raha hu,koi chori ki hai aisa nahi kahega,I promise.She keeps looking at him.

What happened?

Anokhi- Kuch nahi.

She agrees and wents to his sisters room but .

A. She couldn't find decent clothes in their almirah and then she thinks that his sisters are more cruel than him,she doesn't want to take risk pata nahi kis baat pe beijjati kar de.

So,she selects an suit of kanchan

It is slight heavy for her - but is much better than his sister's clothes.

Before she goes to Shaurya's room

Door bell rings.

She grits doctor and takes him to Shaurya's room .he checks him and gives him medicines.


Out of his room.Doctor tells Anokhi he thinks it can be pneumonia the 3 to  days are very critical for him.They suggests her to be alert and to have all precautions which are needed  to be taken care of.She agrees and thanks him.


She doesn't tell Shaurya about it.She asks him about where his family members are in response to which he tells her they have went abroad for somedays around a week as  badi ma's close relative passed away and there were no relatives of them there.he has load of works so he stayed and just he was there so,he gave holidays to all helping staff.


Anokhi-Ohh.

(Thinks)- Abb kya karu, Imhe aise akele bhi toh nahi chod sakti.And even dr has suggested agar 3-4 din exact precaution nahi li toh it can lead to a critical condition for him.

She wents to see off doctor till gate and when comes to his room he sees he was working on  his laptop. She snatched his laptop from him.

Anokhi- Kya kar rahe hai aap?

Shaurya- can't you see.kaam kar raha hu...

Anokhi- I am not blind,dikh raha hai but why? Aapki tabiyaat kharab hai Dr ne rest ke lye bola hai.

Shaurya- unka kaam hi hai kehna anyways I am feeling slight better so, i can work.

Anokhi- scolds him and says no means no,aap koi kaam nahi karenge.She takes his laptop away.Dikh raha hai aap kitne better hai. 


Dil karta hai teri baatein sunu
Saude main adhoore chunu
Muft ka hua ye faayda
Kyun khud ko main
Barbaad karoon
Fanaa hoke tunhse miloon
Ishq ka ajab hai qaayda
Teri raahon se jo
Guzri hain meri dagar
Main aage badh gaya hoon
Thoda hoke be fikar


in next 3 days,Anokhi took his accurate care.After 3 days Dr wss checking Shaurya. Anokhi ws not in room.

Dr- Great Mr.Sabarwal you have recovered much.Thodi kamjori hai but now I can assure within very less time you will be perfectly fine.

Shaurya- Thanks Dr.

Dr- Don't thank me,Karna hi hai toh apni patni ka kijiye.She has taken accurate care of you and it's just because of her care aap itne jaldi recover ho paaye hai.

Aur unhe thoda kam pareshaan kijiye.

Do you even have any idea kitni pareshaan thi wo aapki health o lekar.

Shaurya wents in deep thouht he takes some details from Dr about Anokhi's condition in last 4 days.




 

Jaane kaun hai tu meri

Main naa jaanu ye magar

Jahaan jaaun main

Karoon main wahaan

Tera hi zikar


He thinks to clear his misunderstanding but there Anokhi arrives with snacks after having tea and snacks she sees of Dr.

When Anokhi again comes in room Shaurya's mouth flew open in an O shape.She has wore kanchan's dark green Saree which was too low waist and it was exposing her naval to him.

But as Anokhi comes near him he closes his mouth.

Anokhi feeds him food.

 

Mujhe tu raazi lagti hai

Jeeti hui baazi lagti hai

Tabiyat taazi lagti hai

Ye tune kya kiya


Though he was having food with Anokhi his gaze was on her naval. He was trying to control his hormones. He wanted to eat her at the moment but he can not do anything as he was scared ki If Anokhi would take it as a wrong signal she would leave him immediately.


Kaho toh kis se marzi loon

Kaho toh kis ko arzi doon

Hansta ab thoda farzi hoon

Ye tune kya kiya

Main dil ka raaz kehta hoon

Ke jab jab saansein leta hoon


As Anokhi completes him feeding she asks.

Anokhi- Sir aapki family kab aa rahi hai?

Shaurya- 2 din baad.

Why?

Anokhi- Nothing , I was thinking ki now as you are feeling better so mujhe abb apne ghar jaana chahiye. So,can I?

her this sentence broke Shaurya's heart into million of pieces .

Shaurya- Why? Koi galati ho gayi kya mujhse? tumhe meri kisi baat ka bura laga?

Anokhi- No No sir aisi koi baat nahi hai.

Shaurya- Breathes hush!



Main dil ka raaz kehta hoon

Ke jab jab saansein leta hoon

Tera hi naam leta hoon

Ye tune kya kiya


Anoki- Sir but abb it's almost 5 days  pure ghar main sirf hum 2 on hai and exams bhi next week main hi hai.And abb aap theek bhi feel kar rahe hai. So,


Shaurya- though he wanted to stop her but kiss haq se rokta so he agrees.

He says

shaurya- Theek hai kal chali jaana waise bhi parso sab aa rahe hai. I will manage 1 day.

Anokhi- are nahi nahi sir,you don't need to manage main kal shaam ya raat ko chali jaungi and waise bhi parso subah aapki family aa rahi hai.


The whole night Shaurya didn't slept. he kept glancing her .... No matter how hard he wants to be infront of him so close to him. But he can't. he could have if he has married her, but deep down he knows neither Anokhi will agree to his family's condition nor his family will agree to Anokhi's terms.Hence, he hasn't yet confessed his feelings to her. She is still naive with his feelings.


Next day Anokhi  arranges his room tells him his routine,medicine and time . And asks him to have food which she had already prepared. At around 9 Anokhi starts to leave .he says he will drop her.

But Anokhi refuses she says she will go from cab but he insists. She explains him if he will drop him it can land her into trouble and it can lead her to  be homeless again and she again doesn't want to spend night in Police station.


So shaurya agrees and tells her he will drop her till lane only.To which Anokhi too was left with no option and has to agree.....


@ Night 


Anokhi was so exhausted from last night that sleep drove her within few minutes.

While here Shaurya had his dinner his medicines,still he couldn't sleep he was already missing her it was almost a week he has spend with her in his room and now it is tough for him to adjust.

he takes out his phone and scroolls from gallery he finds her photo which he has clicked chupke se.

It was of her in his T-shirt. he suddenly remembers.


he went in laundary takes his T- shirt out,he remembers Anokhi was about to washit but he refused he told her that his family members will think hafte ke ek bhi shirt nahi how's that possible so let it be ,and she agrees.

he smells the T-shirt ,kisses it and hugs it. he wents to sleep hugging his T-shirt.


Ishq ki saazishein

Ishq ki baaziyaan

Haara main khel ke

Do dilon ka juaa.


Note- Abb sade hue pyaaj and tamatar fek sakte ho. Ande nahi please........












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Posted: 3 years ago

Soooo cute update.

Shaurya to pura Romeo ban gaya pyar mein.

And cutie Anokhi was soo worried.

Please write more.

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Amazing ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ please continue your writing 

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Posted: 3 years ago

The Shakhi OS is very much touching.

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Originally posted by: RaarA

Soooo cute update.

Shaurya to pura Romeo ban gaya pyar mein.

And cutie Anokhi was soo worried.

Please write more.

๐Ÿ˜ณ I knew you are gonna be the first one to reply.....

Cute? Seriously?

@ bold OS thaa......

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Originally posted by: Simraf

Amazing ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ‘Œ please continue your writing 

Thankyou ! MY pleasure! you liked it...

Continueโ“

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Originally posted by: shiningstar7474

 So cute๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

Cute?

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Originally posted by: kavitha_r

The Shakhi OS is very much touching.

Thank you!

But would love which part touched you?

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Originally posted by: Gayatri9

Thankyou ! MY pleasure! you liked it...

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I mean write more os or ff