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Maine pyar kiya hai..SamAina PraNushka SS

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Maine pyar kiya hai...I've fallen in love Part 1

 


Dedicated to @PraNushka_SamAina_who wants me to write a story on SamAina and PraNushka.This SS is based on the  movie Maine pyar kiya.This is the remakeof my old SS with a few changes.

Thanks to my dear friend Ashini Patel for the cute banner.

Maheshwari Mansion....

Vivek,his wife Vishaka,their eldest son Rajeev and his wife Ahana are sitting in the dining room to have food.
Vivek:Anand had rung me up.
Vishaka:Your best friend Anand?
Vivek:Yes.
Vishaka:It's been years since we saw them.
Vivek:Yes.Since we were in Dubai for many years we could'nt meet them for a long time.
Rajeev:In childhood Anand uncle's daughter Naina used to be Sameer's best friend.
Vishaka:Yes.They were inseparable.
Vivek:Now Naina got admission in the medical college.
Vishaka was surprised:Here?
Vivek:Yes.
Vishaka:She was always a brilliant student.
Vivek:So Anand wants Naina to stay here instead of staying in a hostel.
Vishaka was surprised:Really?So Naina will be staying here?

Vivek:But I am hesitant to let her stay here.How can I let a grown up girl stay here?

Vishaka:Anand wants Naina to stay here as he feels that she will be more secure and safer with you than in the hostel.Then why should you hesitate?We will protect her.


Vivek:But still...
Ahana:Please say yes papa.I also will get a company here.

 Rajeev:After all she is your best friend's daughter.Let her stay here dad.


Vivek:I don't know..something is pulling me back.
Vishaka:Please let her stay here.
Vivek:Ok.
They all smiled.

 




Anand,his wife Bela and the youngest daughter Preeti reached the Maheshwari Mansion.
The Maheshwaris welcomed them.Anand hugged Vivek happily.
Vishaka:Naina....Preeti...you both have grown up now.
Naina and Preeti touched her feet.They touched Vivek's feet also.They blessed them.
Vishaka:Naina..you can consider this as your own home.


Naina smiled.
Anand:I knew it.That's why I decided to make her stay here.No one can look after our Naina like you all.
Rajeev introduced Ahana to them.
Bela:Rajeev still looks the same.Where is the naughty chirpy boy Sameer?
Vivek:He has gone abroad for his stage show.He is a rock star now.He is on great demand.He goes to different places for shows.

Anand:I feel very happy for him.It's unfortunate that we could'nt see him today.But the next time we will see him.

A small boy came with a pigeon on his shoulder.

He:Welcome home Naina aunty...

Naina caressed his face:Thank you beta.What's your name?

He:Saaransh.


Naina:Such a cute name.
Ahana:He is our son.


Everyone smiled.
The pigeon flew towards Naina and sat on her shoulder.Naina was surprised.Slowly she caressed it.
Saaransh:That means my Pigeon Sweetu is friends with you.So you are also my friend Naina aunty.
Naina hugged him:Of course..you are my friend Saaransh.

They all smiled.
After some time Anand,Bela and Preeti got ready to go back.
Anand:I know that you will be happy here.Still feeling sad to be away from you.
Bela:Take care Naina.

Naina:Don't worry.I will take care of myself.

Preeti:Will miss you Naina.

Naina became upset.

Naina:Me too.

Naina hugged them.

They had a family hug.


They waved hands at each other painfully.

Naina was made comfortable by Vishaka,Rajeev,Ahana and Saaransh.They became her friends soon.
But Vivek was always busy with his business.

 

 

 

 

 

Ahana was getting ready in front of the mirror.Rajeev was gazing her admiring her beauty.Ahana noticed it as she saw his reflection on the mirror.

Ahana:Why are you staring at me?After these many years of marriage also you can’t take our eyes off your beautiful wife?

Rajeev:What nonsense!I was checking why you are taking this much time to get ready.We are just going to the temple.But you are dressing up  and applying make up as if we are going for a party.

Ahana got irritated.

Ahana:Hello…I have not applied make up.I am wearing a simple saree also.Why are you saying that I am dressing up too much?

What is my fault if if I look beautiful without make up also?

Rajeev:You are doing self praising.

Ahana got irritated:I am not doing self praising,but I am saying the truth.Earlier you used to talk a lot about my beauty.But now you are only teasing me.

Rajeev smiled.

He looked at her:Chill my wife.I was just making fun of you.

He pulled her closer and said:You are a natural beauty.In fact the most beautiful woman in this world.

She blushed:Finally you said the truth after many lies.

They both laughed.

 



Naina joined the college.


Naina saw Vishaka arranging a room.
Naina:Aunty..I will help you.

Vishaka:No need Naina.



Naina:It's ok aunty.I will help you.
Vishaka:Everything is already done Naina.Sameer is coming back today.That's why I arranged his room.
Naina:Really?
Vishaka:Yes.He was your best friend in childhood.Right?
Naina smiled:Yes.

After some time...

Sameer returned home.He hugged Vishaka,Vivek,Rajeev,Ahana and Saaransh.
Vivek:How was the stay there?



Sameer:Cool.
Vishaka:How was the show beta?
Sameer:Since I have your blessings the show rocked.
Ahana:Congrats Sameer.
Sameer distributed the things he brought from abroad.
Saaransh:I got a new friend chachu.
Sameer:Really?Who is your new friend?
Ahana:You guess.
Sameer:How can I guess bhabhi?
Rajeev:You remember your childhood friend Naina?
Sameer:Anand uncle and Bela aunty's daughter Naina?
Rajeev:Yes.She got admission in the medical college.So she is staying here.



Sameer could not believe it.

Sameer:Here?
Vishaka:Yes.She will be staying here until she finishes her studies.



Sameer was surprised.
Sameer:Where is she?
Saaransh:I will show you Naina aunty's room.



Sameer:Ok.But let me freshen up first.
Saaransh whispered in his ears:Good idea.Take a nice shower.Dress up well and apply the best perfume.You are going to meet Naina aunty.First impression is the best impression.
Sameer smiled:Naughty boy.If you are like this now how will you be when you are in college?
Saaransh:I will rock.
They giggled.
Ahana:What's the secret conversation between uncle and nephew?
Saaransh:Secrets are secrets.
Sameer:Yes Bhabhi.
Ahana:What a bonding!
They laughed.




 Sameer freshened up and came out of the room.Suddenly he bumped into someone.
It was Naina.She was about to fall down,but he caught her.They shared a sweet eye lock.
They both stood properly breaking the eye lock.
Sameer:Naina?
Naina smiled:Yes.Sameer?
Sameer smiled:Yes.I can't believe that it's you.
Naina:But I have seen you on TV.After all you are a celebrity.
He smiled:Can I ask you something?
Naina:Yes..ask.


Sameer:Did you ever remember our childhood days?
Naina:I could never forget those days.Those days are ever green memories for me.Sameer:So you used to remember me?
She smiled:Yes.
His face blossomed.
Sameer:Even I could never forget the days which I spent with you.Sometimes I even longed to see you.My wish is fulfilled now.You are in front of me now..in my house.
She was surprised.
They chatted a lot.
Naina:I have heard your songs a lot.But not directly.But now I would like to hear your song directly.Can you please sing a song for me?
Sameer:How can I refuse it when my dearest friend ask for something?
Naina was surprised:Dearest friend?
Sameer:Yes.Why are you surprised about that?Just now only we discussed about our childhood days.We are friends from childhood days.So you are my dearest friend.Right?
She smiled.



Sameer took her to his music room.He started singing using the musical instruments.


Yeh Un Dino Ki Baat Hai
Jab Ishq Sachcha Huaa Karta Thaa
Yeh Un Dino Ki Baat Hai
Jab Ishq Mein Padnaa
Achchaa Huaa Kartaa Tha
Rahi Man Rahi Man Yeh Preet Re
Jaane Naa Maane Ye Reet Re

Yeh Un Dino Ki Baat Hai
Jab Ishq Sachcha Huaa Karta Thaa
Yeh Un Dino Ki Baat Hai
Jab Ishq Mein Padnaa
Achchaa Huaa Kartaa Tha
Rahi Man Rahi Man Yeh Preet Re
Jaane Naa Maane Ye Reet Re



Yeh Un Dino Ki Baat Hai



Kyu Chupke Se Tujhe
Mudkar Aksar Dekh Lu
Kyu Tere Kareeb Mein Hi
Ab To Main Rahoon
Tujh Se Milke Bichad Jaanaa
Buraa Lagtaa Hai
Kyu Khush Ho Jati Ho Jab Kabhi
Tu Hastaa Hai Tu Hastaa Hai

Yeh Un Dino Ki Baat Hai
Jab Ishq Mein Padnaa
Achchaa Huaa Kartaa Thaa
Rahi Man Rahi Man Yeh Preet Re
Jaane Naa Maane Ye Reet Re
Rahi Man Rahi Man Yeh Preet Re
Jaane Naa Maane Ye Reet Re(YUDKBH).

 


Naina was lost in his beautiful song.
Naina:Thank you very much for giving me these beautiful musical moments Sameer.I loved it.



Sameer smiled:There is one more surprise.A small surprise.
Naina:What's that?

Sameer:Why are you in a hurry?Wait.

She smiled.

Sameer took her to his room.He gave her a chocolate from the chocolate box.

She was surprised.

Sameer:I bought this when I went abroad.This is for you.Take all the chocolates from this box.



Naina:Wow.Thank you Sameer.
Sameer:Again thank you?There is no thank you in friendship.
She smiled:Sorry.
Sameer:There is no friendship and sorry in friendship.
She smiled.

A stylish girl entered the Maheshwari Mansion.Seeing Sameer  she embraced him.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Loved the episode. Pranushka scenes were so cute and here they are Rajeev and Ahana. Nice... Loved when Naina got lost in Sameer's song.... 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Why is Vivek so worried about Naina staying with them?

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Posted: 3 years ago

Saaransh advising Sameer about first impressions. So cute.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Both remember their old friendship with the same fondness.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Who is this other girl? How close is she to Sameer?

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Posted: 3 years ago

This version of MPK reminded me of my version. Vivek & Anand are friends, yet Vivek agreed to keep Naina on family's insistence. Loved the bonding between Vishaka, Naina, Rahana, & Saaransh. Loved the pigeon scene between Saaransh & Naina. Sameer being a rockstar is quite surprising. Naina helping Vishaka to set Sameer's room is cute. Samaina's scenes, dialogues, & chocolate scenes are romantic. I guess the stylish girl who embarrassed Sameer is Sunaina.

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Posted: 3 years ago

hi thanks for the pm,

congrats on the new story

Part 1

superb update 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Congratulations on your new SS


Part 1


Fascinating Start


with a Fantastic Song choice 

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Thank u so much friends



Maine pyar kiya hai...I've fallen in love Part 2

 

A stylish girl entered the Maheshwari Mansion.Seeing Sameer she embraced him.
She:I missed you Sameer.

Sameer moved away from her.

Sameer:Sunaina...We met a a few days back.Then why are you missing me so much?
Sunaina:Oh come on Sameer...you know that it's difficult to spend even a day without seeing you.
Sameer became dull.

She gave him red roses and said:This is for you.

Sameer took them from her without any interest.




Rajeev,Ahana and Naina reached that room.
Sunaina held his hand:Sameer..let us go for a movie..then beach....then disco.
Sameer:Actually I am busy.I need to rehearse for my next show.So you better find someone else.Bye.
Sameer walked out.Sunaina became dull.Rajeev and Ahana smirked.
Sunaina saw them and noticed Naina.
Sunaina:Who is this?
Naina:I am Naina.
Rajeev:She is dad's friend's daughter.
Ahana:She is studying in the medical college and will be staying here to study.
Sunaina was shocked:What?
Ahana smirked:Yes.
Sunaina thought:It means for 5 or 6 years she will stay here?Will she conquer Sameer's heart?No..never!Sameer can't choose this behenji over me.
Naina:Are you Sameer's friend?Sit.I will bring coffee for you.
Sunaina replied rudely:No need.
Sunaina just walked out.
Naina became dull.


Rajeev:Don't mind her rude behaviour.She is like this only.
Ahana:Sunaina is after Sameer.But he is least interested in her.He always finds a reason to be away from her.




Naina smiled.



Naina went to the garden.She was surprised to see Sameer there.
Naina:You are still here?You told Sunaina that you are going for rehearsal.
Sameer:I just reached yesterday.I need rest too.So there is no rehearsal scheduled today.I lied to her to avoid her.So that I don't have to go with her for cinema,disco and stuffs.So boring to be with her.Actually I had'nt gone out.I was hiding behind the house to escape from Sunaina.
Naina:What?
They both laughed a lot.



Tum ladki ho, main ladka hun
Tum aayi to sach kehta hun
Aaya mausam dosti ka

Ke aaya mausam dosti ka

Main ladki hun, tum ladke ho
Yun lagta hai jab milte ho
Aaya mausam dosti ka
Ke aaya mausam dosti ka


(MPK).


Rajeev and Ahana went to a theatre to watch a movie.

They were laughing at the comedy scenes.

Slowly they looked at each other.

Rajeev:Are you reminded of anything?

Ahana smiled:What?

Rajeev:Don’t tell me that you don’t remember anything.

Ahana blushed:I am reminded of our honeymoon period.

Rajeev blushed:Me too.

During our honeymoon phase we went to a movie theatre.

She smiled remembering that moment.

 

Flash back…

 

Rajeev and Ahana were enjoying the movie in the theatre during the honeymoon period.

Slowly Rajeev looked at Ahana and whispered:Ahana…come closer to me.

Ahana:It’s a public place.

Rajeev:So what?Should we sit leaving a long distance between us?We are newly married.We have the right to romance in the dark theatre.

Ahana became shy:Rajeev!

He held her hand and she sat closer to him leaving no distance between them.

They got cozy with each other with a sweet romantic feeling in darkness.

While others were busy watching the movie they were romancing.

 

Present….

Ahana:I still feel shy when I think of our theatre romance.What if the lights were switched on and others saw us?

Rajeev:But no one saw us.Then why are you thinking too much about it?

She smiled.

Rajeev:Shall we recreate our theatre romance here?

Ahana became shy.

Ahana:Stop it Rajeev.We are not a newly married.

Rajeev:Then we will get married again.So that we will be a newly married couple again.

They both giggled.

 

 


Naina was getting ragged by some notorious seniors in her college.She was in tears.
Suddenly a boy came and stopped them..
He:Are you guys not ashamed of torturing an innocent new comer like this?
The others:But...
He:Get lost.
They just walked away in fear.
Naina and that boy looked at each other.