Originally posted by: raji02Very well written.I loved it. Eagerly waiting for yhe next part.
Thank you dear. Will see if I can post today.
Originally posted by: anuleo09Damn! I thought chapter will be up till tomorrow, but I was desperate enough to check every hour and you just updated few mins ago. It was amazeballs, mind blowing. I so wanted Virat to realise things, break off with Pakhi and get to know the truth that what actually happened. And you exactly wrote that. Thank you for writing this story. Loved it to the core.
Thank you so much π
Originally posted by: AK_2010God! Reading Virat's pov is π
It is heart wrenching to read someone's regret and pain. I am really excited to read chapter 3 now π₯³
Thank you dear π
Will work on part 3 today
Wowwww lovely
The way you portrayed their emotions Is just fantasticβ€οΈ
I can't stop reading again n again !!!!
I hope jaldi donom mil jaaye
Please update soon
Originally posted by: MSgayatriLovely part!!! Please continue soon!!!
It was great to read an imagine virat telling off Pakhi.... She has quite become the makkhi ..... Buzzing around with constant taunts!!
How I wish the show does smthin like this soon..
Happy writing!!!
Makhi Didi πππ
Thank you π
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