Originally posted by: ashsamik😭😭😭
Please please please continue soon....😭
❤️💔 broke heart....
It was really nicely written...
I will try to. 😂
Thank you! ❤️
Originally posted by: ashsamik😭😭😭
Please please please continue soon....😭
❤️💔 broke heart....
It was really nicely written...
I will try to. 😂
Thank you! ❤️
Originally posted by: Tali_99You have gift of words. I was just so mesmerized by the story. Both parts so far have been heartbreaking 💔. I am feeling the pain Sai is going through. 👏 Bravo!! This is fantastic story. Awaiting to read more from you.❤️
Tali! 😎 Aw, thank you! I doubt it. But I shall take your word. ❤️
Do let me know how you like the story progression!
Thank you! ❤️
Originally posted by: anuleo09It breaks mt heart to see Sai like this, all delusional, not getting any guidance and all these mishappenings. And though, after this I am totally loving the story, how it's getting shaped up. Please continue soon. I don't know what else to say, it's soo overwhelming.
It does for me too! 💔 I hope she finds her happiness.
I will! Thank you for commenting! ❤️
Originally posted by: InfinitiesAbsolutely loving the story
It is very eccentric and intriguing at the same time. And your fluid writing style is the cherry on the cake. I like how you depicted the mental trauma Sai is facing. After losing the only people she called her family, losing her baby was the last straw.
Reyansh seems pretty decent IMO, the kinda guy Sai deserves. I am all in for a story where Sairat are not the endgame . But would like to see what caused Virat to drift away ....looks like he still cares about her.
Keep up the great work. You should definitely continue it and make it longer.
Bold: the same. I haven't gotten to that yet.
Thank you! ❤️ I shall continue working on it.
Again Reserving for Chapter 6 & 7!
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter
Originally posted by: emah04I read all 5 chapters in one go... wow...I am waiting for more... well written I just loved it
In one go... 😱
Thank you! ❤️
Unreserved my comment on Page 9.:)
Sorry I have literally written essay in the comment but there was just so much I was feeling and I needed to let it go out of my mind so I just typed whatever came in my mind and to think of it, I have not typed my comments about chapter 4 - 7 yet.🙈
I have read all the chapters many like really many-many times.🤭
Please update next chapters as soon as possible Kiara. Seriously can't wait to read what's going to happen next. Please update asap!🙈🤗
Sending you lots of love and hugs🤗
-Aashna
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