Dil ibadat kar raha hai VaNi TS

Posted: 3 years ago

Dil ibadat kar raha hai...My heart is praying... Part 1


Dedicated to Shesha who suggested the theme of a baby left in the Singhania Mansion and Veeranshu trying to hide it from Bani.I added Both VaNi and AbhiYa in this TS as the song Dil Ibadat was the main song for both VaNi and AbhiYa in their shows Naagin5 and PKEK.So I feel that this song connects both the couples.




 Veeranshu and Bani exchanged rings in their engagement ceremony.Everyone clapped their hands.

 Veeranshu’s elder brother Abhay imagined putting ring on his beloved Piya’s finger.

Veeranshu and Bani swayed to music.


(Dil ibaadat, kar raha hai, dhadkane meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil lagi hai yahi dhun
Zindagi ki shaakh se lun, kuch haseen pal main chun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil lagi hai yahi dhun) * 2


Jo bhi jitne pal jeeyu, unhe tere sang jeeyu
Jo bhi kal ho ab mera, usse tere sang jeeyu
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon, unhe tere sang bharoon
Chaahe jo ho raasta, usse tere sang chaloon
Dil ibaadat, kar raha hai, dhadkane meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil lagi hai yahi dhun

Mujhko de tu mit jaane, ab khud se dil mil jaane
Kyun hai yeh itna faasla
Lamhe yeh phir na aane, inko tu na de jaane
Tu mujhpe khud ko de luta




 Abhay imagined dancing with his love Piya.

Tujhe tujhse tod loon, kahin khud se jod loon
Mere jismo jaan pe aa, teri khushbu odh loon
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon, unhe tere sang bharoon
Chaahe jo ho raasta, usse tere sang chaloon
Dil ibaadat, kar raha hai, dhadkane meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil lagi hai yahi dhun


Baahon mein de bas jaane, seene mein de chup jaane
Tujh bhin main jaaoon toh kahaan
Tujhse hai mujhko paane, yaadon ke woh nazraane
Ik jinpe hak ho bas mera



Teri yaadein mein rahoon, tere khwaabon mein jagoon
Mujhe dhoonde jab koi, teri aankhon mein miloon
Jo bhi saansein main bharoon, unhe tere sang bharoon
Chaahe jo ho raasta, usse tere sang chaloon
Dil ibaadat, kar raha hai, dhadkane meri sun
Tujhko main kar loon haasil lagi hai yahi dhun
(Na na nana naa na na na naa na naa, na na na) * 2(Tum mile).


 

After the function 

 

Veeranshu was thinking of Bani and smiling.

Abhay came near him.

Abhay:You are thinking of Bani?

Veeranshu blushed.

Veer:How did you know that bhai?

Abhay:I have also gone through the same phase.So I also know that.

You are lucky that your love won.Dad approved of your relationship.

Veer:Yes.I am lucky.I fell in love with Bani without knowing how rich she was.Luckily she is rich.Otherwise dad would have opposed my relationship with Bani.But even if dad had opposed our relationship,I would not have sacrificed my love like you bhai.You should not have sacrificed your love.

Abhay:I have not sacrificed my love.Still I am waiting to be with Piya.But I want to marry Piya with my dads permission.Otherwise after marriage also he will not let us live in peace.

Veer:How do you still hope that dad will conduct your wedding with Piya one day?

Abhay:I feel like that.

Veer:Dad can never change bhai.If you want Piya to be with you,you need to fight for yourself.

Abhay:Dad may not change.But circumstance can change.I am hoping for that.Fingers crossed.My heart is always praying for my union with Piya.



Veer:Let God hear your heart's prayer.

Abhay smiled.


The next day…

 

Veeranshu and Bani went on a long drive.

Veer:This is our first date after engagement.

Bani:Now going on a long drive with my fiancé is an exciting experience.

Veer:Of course Sweet heart.This is a different feeling as now you are my fiancée.

They smiled.

They took a selfie.

They uploaded it on instagram with the title 'My first date with my fiance/Fiancee'.

Then Veeranshu dropped Bani at her house.

Bani:I wish the drive had’nt got over.I really enjoyed a lot with you.

Veer:Don’t worry sweet heart.Only for a few more days.After that we will be always going for a romantic drive.

She smiled:Bye.

Veer:Bye.

Veeranshu came back home.

Abhay:How was your long drive with Bani?

Veer:It was very sweet.We did’nt want it to get over.

Abhay smiled.

He remembered his long car drive with Piya.

 

Flash back…

 

Piya was resting her head on Abhay’s chest while he was driving.

Abhay:What is this Piya?I am driving.

Piya:So what?My place is always here…in your heart.I won’t move away from here.

Abhay smiled.

 

Present….

 

Abhay said in his mind:Still you reside here Piya.

Veer:By the way bhai..I am planning to propose Bani before our marriage.

Abhay:That’s cool.Make it beautiful.That’ s beautiful moment.

Veer:Yes.I am really excited for that moment.

Abhay:All the best Veer.Rock on.

Veer:Sure bhai.



 

Abhay remembered giving a red rose to Piya and confessing his love.

Abhay:I really love you Piya.

Piya:I love you too Abhay.

 

Present…

 

Veer:First I am planning to arrange a dinner with her favourite dishes and champagne. Then I will propose to her.

Abhay smiled.

He remembered taking Piya to her favourite restaurant as a surprise.

 

Flash back…

 

Candle light dinner with wine was arranged on the table.

Piya:You are the best Abhay.I never expected this surprise.Thank you so much for makig this evening special for me.

Abhay smiled.

 

Present….

 

Veer took Bani to the farm house.Bani was surprised to see the placed arranged with lights.

Bani:Wow!

Veer caressed her face:There is one more surprise sweet heart.

Bani was excited:Wow!Again a surprise!



He held her hand and led her to the table.

Bani:Oh my God!My favourite food items and champagne. I just love it Veeranshu.

He smiled.

They sat and fed food to each other.They sipped the glass of champagne together.

After dinner he pulled her closer and slid a ring on her finger.

She looked at the ring in surprise.

To her surprise,there was a picture of Veer and Bani in the ring.

Bani:Veeranshu…this is a big surprise.Very beautiful.

Veer held her hand close to his chest:Will you marry Bani?

Bani:What a question Veeranshu?Our marriage is fixed.

Veer:Still I wanted to propose you and I did it.Now it’s your turn.


He knelt down before her.

Veer:Bani...will you be my wife till eternity?

She smiled:Yes dear.I want to live with you forever as your wife.

They embraced each other happily.

He took a red rose in his mouth and caressed Bani with it.She was blushing.


They got lost in romance.

 











After few days

 

Veeranshu-Abhays father Balwant had gone out.Abhay and Veeranshu were alone at home.

Suddenly they heard a babys cry.They opened the door to see from where the babys cry is coming.They were shocked to see a baby at the veranda.

Posted: 3 years ago

Is it abhay and piya's baby ? 

Bani and veer were cute  😍 

Posted: 3 years ago

Happy New Year

thanks for the pm

Part 1

terrific update 

Posted: 3 years ago

Very nice waiting for what will happen next..

Posted: 3 years ago

Great Story. 

Veer And Bani Scenes Were Great.

Loved Abhay And Piya Scenes Too.

Posted: 3 years ago

Congratulations on your new TS 


Part 1 


Interesting Part 

Posted: 3 years ago

Vani engagement & dance scenes are romantic. Abhay loves Piya but wants his dad's permission to marry her. The Abya FB scenes are romantic. Vani's long drive & candlelight proposal scenes are similar to Abya's scenes.

Posted: 3 years ago

Thank u very much friends

Dil ibadat kar raha hai...My heart is praying... Part 2

 Thanks to my dearest friend Ashini Patel for this beautiful banner.


Abhay and Veeranshu were alone at home.

Suddenly they heard a babys cry.They opened the door to see from where the babys cry is coming.They were shocked to see a crying baby at the veranda.

Veer:A baby is lying here.Who kept the baby here?

Abhay:There is a note near the baby.

Suddenly Veranshu noticed a piece of paper near the baby.He took the paper and read it.

Veer:This is your baby.Being a father take up your daughters responsibility and you look after the baby.

Veer-Abhay were shocked.

Veer:What the hell!How is it possible?

Abhay:Its dam confusing.

Veer:Lets see who kept the baby here.

Veeranshu and Abhay ran out and checked if anyone was going out of their compound.They found no one.

Abhay:Guess that person has already left.

Veer:Damn it!Why did he put the baby in our house?

Abhay:I think he kept the baby here by mistake.He must have meant another house.

Veer:Ya..possible.But how will we find out the real father of this baby?For that we need to find out the person who left the baby here.But nowohI am going crazy.

The baby was crying.

Abhay:Let us take the baby inside.Otherwise the neighbours will hear the voice and raise questions.

Veer:You are right.The neighbours are waiting to find a reason to defame us.

Abhay and Veeranshu entered the house with the baby.

The baby was crying.

Veer:Oh nohow will we stop this baby from crying?

Abhay:May be a lullaby can calm down the baby.

Veer:But none of us knows to sing.Then how?

Abhay opened the laptop,took youtube and played a lullaby.

Slowly the baby stopped crying and smiled.


Veer:What a relief.

Suddenly they heard the door bell ringing.

Veer:Oh no..who has come?

Abhay:I will check.

Abhay tried to see the person through the door hole.It was Bani.

Abhay:Its Bani.

Veer:Oh no.If Bani sees us with the baby she will misunderstand us.

Abhay:I will hide the baby.You go open the door.

Abhay took the baby inside the room.Veer opened the door.

Bani:Hi darling!

Veer gave a pale smile:Hi sweet heart.Why are you here?

(Credit for this edit goes to the real editor)


Bani got inside.

She touched his face romantically and said:Did you forget that you only called me here saying that Balwant uncle wont be here today so we can romance peacefully.

Veer thought:Oh my God!I myself dug my own grave.If I knew that the baby would be here today I would not have called Bani here.

Bani tried to get cozy with Veeranshu.

Veer:Hey Sweet heartI was wrong.Dad can come here at any time.So you better leave.Otherwise dad will not spare us.

Bani:Come on Veeranshuuncle wont come so soon.I had called him to make sure that he wont be here.

Veer was stunned.

Bani:So the whole day I will be with you here.

Veeranshu was stunned.

Bani:I guess Abhay is here.Let us go to your room.

Veer thought:If Abhay bhai has taken the baby to my room,Bani will see the baby.Oh no..

Veer:We will go to the terrace.

Bani:Not terrace baby.People will see us.

Veer:But.

Bani:Come baby.we will watch a romantic movie in your room.

Bani grabbed his hand and walked to his room.

Veeranshu was tensed.

But he was relieved as Abhay and the baby were not there.

 

Veeranshu and Bani started watching a romantic movie together.While Bani was enjoying the movie in his arms he was not able to enjoy it because of the fear of getting caught by Bani.

Veer thought:If TV volume is high Bani wont hear the baby's voice even if the baby cries.

Veer:Baniincrease the volume.

Bani:Why Veeranshu?

Veer:Watching the movie in high volume is fun.

Bani:But its not good for our ears Veeranshu.So l am not increasing the volume.

Veer thought:Oh no..

Suddenly they heard the babys voice.

Bani:A babys voice!

Veer got tensed:No Bani.You are mistaken.

Again they heard the babys voice.

Bani:No.Its a babys voice.But why is the babys voice heard here?Is there any baby here?

Veer:No.How can a baby be here Bani.We dont have babies yet.Right?

Bani:Then how?

Veer:May be Abhay bhai is watching a movie in his room and the baby voice is heard from his TV.

Bani:Oh!But it sounds so natural.

Suddenly they heard the baby crying.

Bani was shocked:No,this is a real babys voice.I am sure that a baby is here.

Veeranshu became nervous.

He thought:What will I do now?

Bani ran out of the room in search of the baby while Veer followed her.

Veer:Banistop there.

Edited by jasminerahul - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

thank you for the pm

captivating update 

Posted: 3 years ago

Interesting. Will Bani See The Baby?

Whose Baby Is It?



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