This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 88

Posted: 3 years ago

Mind blowing update. Keep up the good work.

Posted: 3 years ago

 Geet get to know what maan mom thinking about her and she sending maan London in rehab but he is not school going boy he's business man how can his mom force him more over he is not addict bz in geet home he didn't get any drugs or etc and was behaving normally 

Posted: 3 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 44)

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Part 45

 

G-I am a bad influence??? You had a gun!

 

Maan wanted to say, ‘well you had a chainsaw’ but doesn’t say anything

 

G-why weren’t you picking up my calls? I was so worried!

 

M-I don’t have my phone with me

 

Geet chup ho gai

 

She looks down

 

G- I didn’t know this would happen…I thought you need your family

 

M- You couldn’t even stand to be with me for even a week,huh?

 

G-That is so not true! You don’t get me! I…was afraid...I take relationships seriously...I take heartbreaks also seriously. I was saving my heart from a heartbreak…I thought about this logically

 

She shakes her head

 

G-This doesn’t make sense...at max we will date and break up after a while...

 

She sighs

 

G-You know naa, I am not at all good at moving on

 

She pauses for a moment for Maan to say something, when he doesn’t,she continues

 

G-Have you had any long-term relationship? Can you promise me any different?

 

Maan is silent

 

He truly doesn’t have answers to her questions

 

He doesn’t know if he can commit so much.

 

He doesn’t want to make false promises that I will marry you and all.

 

He hasn’t even had a serious relationship ever.

 

He doesn’t know if he is capable of it

 

He doesn’t want to coerce Geet into anything and then hurt her

 

He feels that she is right, that she deserves better

 

For future, he knows either he should better himself or forget about her

 

For now, he can’t promise on anything

 

G-You don’t have to answer

 

She mutters slowly sounding defeated

 

Tabhi Maan’s mom knocks at the door asking him to get ready for the flight

 

G-I’ll be outside. You get ready

 

He nods

 

She knows, maybe this is the last time she will be seeing him

 

Who toh London jaa raha hai. Ab kya pata mulaqaat hogi yaa nahi

 

She tiptoes and plants her lips on his giving him a warm deep and beautiful kiss that feels like a current flowing along her whole body

 

She comes into reality and realizes the kiss was in her imagination

 

In reality, she is standing like a statue without moving as if her legs have got stuck to the ground

 

Maan is looking at her with a perplexed expression

 

Geet drags her feet and pulls herself out of his room trying to hide her cocktail of emotions

 

++++++++

 

Geet makes her way out of his home

 

Geet Maan ke ghar se walk karke jaa rahi hoti hai main gate tak, toh dekhti hai Maan aur uske ghar wale car mein baith rahe hain

 

She silently witnesses Maan drive off in his car

 

It felt as if he took a part of her with him

 

She questions herself- Did she let him go?

 

But what was she supposed to do, kidnap him again?

 

She thinks kis haq se wo kuch kare.

 

Tab toh impulse involved tha...

 

Ab usko pata hi nahi kya involved hai

 

Maybe feelings…maybe ego

 

Geet ko pata bhi nahi London mein kahan jaa raha hai, kaunsa rehab

 

Will he be able to contact her?

 

Will he even contact her?

 

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Geet ko be saath le jao London nein ache se neurologist ko dikhana iska dimak patha nahi kaha se yeh stupid ideas lekar aata hai. She did make a good point though like he has never been in a long term relationship and he knows he cant promise her because even he does not know, but I wonder if will actually make it on the plane and if he does will this distance benefit them.

Posted: 3 years ago

Well, he does run a company but his business is spread across the world and you will know more about him in coming parts

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by sanum23


 Maan told what is going on in his life but he's not under age that his mom order him he running business and famus man she can't force him to go rehab if he not addict 

 But how geet now help him bz his mom not going to listen her suggestions 


Your doubts will get clarified when you know more about Maan in the coming parts

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by khwaishfan


thanks for the pm

Congrats to the winners for Part 43


Part 44

Astounding update.... terrifically written

great that Geet decided to go to Maan's place

I do not get good vibes from his mom...

why was Maan staying in the guest room?

is his mom remarried?

so she is stunned seeing the grandeur of the house

the fact that he stayed at her place speaks volumes- Absolutely!

at least allowed in the room

she cannot help but notice how hot he looks 

oh so Maan has taken his anger out on the furniture 

seems like Geet wanted to impress Maan's mom-galat insaan ko impress karne ki koshish..lol

not surprising that Maan accuses Geet

so his mom is taking him to London and then to rehab

of cos she is upset hearting that he is going to London 

liked that she is willing to speak to his mom

can Maan not go to rehab in India- ab India m toh ek toh Geet h (the bad influence), uske upar why London you will know in coming parts

as expected Maan's mom assumes Geet is to blame for Maan's condition

Gosh she thinks Geet is a gold digger

Geet's reaction hearing what his mom thinks is reasonable

does his mom not realise what her actions have done to Maan?

ha ha one has a gun and the other a chainsaw --hahahaha jodi made in weapon shop!

update soon


You will know more about Maan & his mom in coming parts

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by sanum23


 Geet get to know what maan mom thinking about her and she sending maan London in rehab but he is not school going boy he's business man how can his mom force him more over he is not addict bz in geet home he didn't get any drugs or etc and was behaving normally 


good point...but pyaar dear....Maan loves his mom irrationally

Posted: 3 years ago

Ohh maan going to London maan geet seperate 😞 geet also correct maan is not serious for her 

Now what will happen how they will meet again



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