Geet get to know what maan mom thinking about her and she sending maan London in rehab but he is not school going boy he's business man how can his mom force him more over he is not addict bz in geet home he didn't get any drugs or etc and was behaving normally
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Part 45
G-I am a bad influence??? You had a gun!
Maan wanted to say, ‘well you had a chainsaw’ but doesn’t say anything
G-why weren’t you picking up my calls? I was so worried!
M-I don’t have my phone with me
Geet chup ho gai
She looks down
G- I didn’t know this would happen…I thought you need your family
M- You couldn’t even stand to be with me for even a week,huh?
G-That is so not true! You don’t get me! I…was afraid...I take relationships seriously...I take heartbreaks also seriously. I was saving my heart from a heartbreak…I thought about this logically
She shakes her head
G-This doesn’t make sense...at max we will date and break up after a while...
She sighs
G-You know naa, I am not at all good at moving on
She pauses for a moment for Maan to say something, when he doesn’t,she continues
G-Have you had any long-term relationship? Can you promise me any different?
Maan is silent
He truly doesn’t have answers to her questions
He doesn’t know if he can commit so much.
He doesn’t want to make false promises that I will marry you and all.
He hasn’t even had a serious relationship ever.
He doesn’t know if he is capable of it
He doesn’t want to coerce Geet into anything and then hurt her
He feels that she is right, that she deserves better
For future, he knows either he should better himself or forget about her
For now, he can’t promise on anything
G-You don’t have to answer
She mutters slowly sounding defeated
Tabhi Maan’s mom knocks at the door asking him to get ready for the flight
G-I’ll be outside. You get ready
He nods
She knows, maybe this is the last time she will be seeing him
Who toh London jaa raha hai. Ab kya pata mulaqaat hogi yaa nahi
She tiptoes and plants her lips on his giving him a warm deep and beautiful kiss that feels like a current flowing along her whole body
She comes into reality and realizes the kiss was in her imagination
In reality, she is standing like a statue without moving as if her legs have got stuck to the ground
Maan is looking at her with a perplexed expression
Geet drags her feet and pulls herself out of his room trying to hide her cocktail of emotions
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Geet makes her way out of his home
Geet Maan ke ghar se walk karke jaa rahi hoti hai main gate tak, toh dekhti hai Maan aur uske ghar wale car mein baith rahe hain
She silently witnesses Maan drive off in his car
It felt as if he took a part of her with him
She questions herself- Did she let him go?
But what was she supposed to do, kidnap him again?
She thinks kis haq se wo kuch kare.
Tab toh impulse involved tha...
Ab usko pata hi nahi kya involved hai
Maybe feelings…maybe ego
Geet ko pata bhi nahi London mein kahan jaa raha hai, kaunsa rehab
Will he be able to contact her?
Will he even contact her?
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
Geet ko be saath le jao London nein ache se neurologist ko dikhana iska dimak patha nahi kaha se yeh stupid ideas lekar aata hai. She did make a good point though like he has never been in a long term relationship and he knows he cant promise her because even he does not know, but I wonder if will actually make it on the plane and if he does will this distance benefit them.
Maan told what is going on in his life but he's not under age that his mom order him he running business and famus man she can't force him to go rehab if he not addict
But how geet now help him bz his mom not going to listen her suggestions
Your doubts will get clarified when you know more about Maan in the coming parts
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Part 44
Astounding update.... terrifically written
great that Geet decided to go to Maan's place
I do not get good vibes from his mom...
why was Maan staying in the guest room?
is his mom remarried?
so she is stunned seeing the grandeur of the house
the fact that he stayed at her place speaks volumes- Absolutely!
at least allowed in the room
she cannot help but notice how hot he looks
oh so Maan has taken his anger out on the furniture
seems like Geet wanted to impress Maan's mom-galat insaan ko impress karne ki koshish..lol
not surprising that Maan accuses Geet
so his mom is taking him to London and then to rehab
of cos she is upset hearting that he is going to London
liked that she is willing to speak to his mom
can Maan not go to rehab in India- ab India m toh ek toh Geet h (the bad influence), uske upar why London you will know in coming parts
as expected Maan's mom assumes Geet is to blame for Maan's condition
Gosh she thinks Geet is a gold digger
Geet's reaction hearing what his mom thinks is reasonable
does his mom not realise what her actions have done to Maan?
ha ha one has a gun and the other a chainsaw --hahahaha jodi made in weapon shop!
update soon
You will know more about Maan & his mom in coming parts
Geet get to know what maan mom thinking about her and she sending maan London in rehab but he is not school going boy he's business man how can his mom force him more over he is not addict bz in geet home he didn't get any drugs or etc and was behaving normally
good point...but pyaar dear....Maan loves his mom irrationally
Ohh maan going to London maan geet seperate 😞 geet also correct maan is not serious for her
Now what will happen how they will meet again