Part 2
Wow geet is a Doctor š²
Love it ..... beauty & brains , not to mention courageous! Absolutely! sahi pakde hain! she is a complete package
Nice how she treated maan
Maan was mesmerized by the sleeping beauty
But then he remembers what she did š hehehehe sab yaad aa gaya, khubsurat chehre ke peeche kya kaand kiye hain
Loving their dialogues š especially geet .... she is too funny !! Thank you so much, this means a lot. I made so much effort on Geet's dialogues to make her stand out n look sassyš¤
Wondering maan ās next plan of action Read on for that
Thank you š¤ Thank you for commenting. Super-wonderful commentš¤
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Mind Blowing Update Thanks a lotš
I'm really loving and admiring this strong Geet Yasssss!!! i am so glad
though she was scared at one point when Maan comes
standing very close to her , but she only shows him
her confidence Yessss this scene showed even if she is vulnerable she will never show it. That's her one important trait. This was such an important takeaway. Thanks for reading between the lines ā¤ļø
so Geet is a Doctor and takes Maan to her clinic so she can treat him
wow just wow he was actually drawn to her innocence
but realizing she is the same girl that made him sign the legal documents
and almost killed him he gets angry
now Maan knows where she works and he will surely pay her a visit
but I also think he wants his revenge from her
its going to be interesting to see how both of them Yes read on for that
play at this revenge
Thank you for the mind blowing comment. Loved it so much
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geet treat maan as she is doctor
maan remember what geet done with him n decide to meet her again to take revenge from her
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thanks for the pm and for updating so soon!! Thanks for reading and commenting. That gives me motivation to write more
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Fabulous update.... superbly written šThanks a lot
Gosh first she injures him and then treats him hahahaha she is like that only. You will know more
at least he is Maan....
so Maan mesmerised by her beauty! šAb kyun naa ho
then recalls what she did!
Enjoyed their banter. hahahah i am so glad. I love writing their banters
Geet assumes she bested him
but she should not underestimate him
wonder what Maan will do? Keep reading for that
update soon
Very lovely update dear Thanks for liking it
Geet is doctor and treated maan wounds maan think abaut to take revenge with geet
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Watting for update
Thanks for commenting
Yup both Maan -Geet & Sujal -Kashish version
Star Commentor Awards (For Part 2)āļø
Winner: Taahir004
Runner ups: khwaishfan, creampuff
Congratulations to the winner and the runner-upsš
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He nods his head and leaves with a smile on her cute acting
She smiles happily ki bala talli aur itna bada kaam bhi hogaya
But Maan believes in Revenge is the dish best served cold
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Weekend hai toh Geet is with her medical college friends and all...shopping etc
Sab khaa piike shopping karke busy se mall se nikal rahehain
Sab chit chat karte hua jaa rahe hain
Saamne baadi si gaadi rukti hai
All are in awe ki kitni mast car hai
Nikalte hain Maan ji...apne full tashan and style mein.....shades pehenke and sab awe ki kya handsome banda hai
Geet is also looking dumb founded
He walks over to Geet and says āHi Geetā
She is little unsure but replies back
Sab dost log jaan gaye ki ye Geet ko jaanta hai...hye!
Before Geet could realize, he swoops down and plants a kiss on her lips making sure all the traffic cams and cctvs get a good look
A nice aaram se wala smooch
After he is done, he calmly puts back the noodle strap of her dress back to its place which had fallen from her shoulder during the kiss and whispers in her ears
M- Revenge is best served cold dear
Baaki ko lag raha hai ki kaan mein kuch seductively bol raha hai
Geet ke hosh hi udd gaye the... Wo to samajh hi nahi paa rhi thi ki kya hua hai abhi abhi
Her mind takes time to register his words
She was shocked with the sudden kiss...she was more shocked by the fact that she responded to the kiss
She is pink as a peach
But before she could respond or do anything, he is gone
She thinks to herself, this is not over yet
Maan ka plan was ki ye bandi middle class type hai...aur unn logon ke liye apni izzat and aan etc are most important... ab Geet ki aisi image kharab kar dunga toh she will be devasted. Girgirate hue aayegi sorry bolne
Shock toh tab laga jab Maan was with his Japanese delegates
Geet appears out of nowhere
She bows to the delegates
Pulls Maan down and pushes him to the wall and kisses him thoroughly on the lips, whispering
G-Check & mate
She leaves after saying āarigato gozaimasuā (Thank you) tot he Japanese delegates
Ab round 2
Geet kind of is prepared
But is wondering which moment will Maan choose
Geet ki family doesn't live with her.So Maan ne socha toh infront of her patients
Geet ke nurse ne roka par Geet said
G-Aane do aane do
Geet ne jaldi se patient ko thermometer lagaya
G- Haan chalo. 1.5 minute
She says to Maan
She says to the patient
G- Donāt move please
Maan ne faltu ka Tashan dikhake bola ki
M- How are you, sweetheart?
G- I am great, baby.... doll
She answers with a smirk
Geet ko samajh nahi aa raha...ye bhola hai ki idiot...baaki toh intelligent types ka aura hai iska
Maan jaate hue kehta hai...
M- This is my tomorrow's schedule, if you are wondering
Geet replies casually...
G- Whatsapp me
The 4th kiss was uneventful...and didn't seem like a challenge to either of them
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Kuch dino baad valentineās day tha
Maan was on a date with a girl
Wo bandi model types, khub Maan ko impress karna chaahe addaon seā¦bimbo type bhi....and wo boring salad khaane wali
Maan is getting bored with her chatter par kya kare
Sarr hila raha hai aur idhar udhar dekh raha hai
Nazar padti hai Geet pe...jo akeli restaurant mein baith mazze se fondue aur chocolate brownie khaa rahai hai
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago