This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 6

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Creampuff


Part 2 

Wow geet is a Doctor šŸ˜²

Love it ..... beauty & brains , not to mention courageous! Absolutely! sahi pakde hain! she is a complete package

Nice how she treated maan 

Maan was mesmerized by the sleeping beauty 

But then he remembers what she did šŸ˜† hehehehe sab yaad aa gaya, khubsurat chehre ke peeche kya kaand kiye hain

Loving their dialogues šŸ’• especially geet .... she is too funny !! Thank you so much, this means a lot. I made so much effort on Geet's dialogues to make her stand out n look sassyšŸ¤—

Wondering maan ā€˜s next plan of action Read on for that

Thank you šŸ¤— Thank you for commenting. Super-wonderful commentšŸ¤—

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by taahir004


Part 2 


Mind Blowing Update Thanks a lotšŸ˜ƒ


I'm really loving and admiring this strong Geet Yasssss!!! i am so glad

though she was scared at one point when Maan comes

standing very close to her , but she only shows him 

her confidence Yessss this scene showed even if she is vulnerable she will never show it. That's her one important trait. This was such an important takeaway. Thanks for reading between the lines ā¤ļø

so Geet is a Doctor and takes Maan to her clinic so she can treat him

wow just wow he was actually drawn to her innocence 

but realizing she is the same girl that made him sign the legal documents

and almost killed him he gets angry 

now Maan knows where she works and he will surely pay her a visit 

but I also think he wants his revenge from her 

its going to be interesting to see how both of them Yes read on for that

play at this revenge 


Thank you for the mind blowing comment. Loved it so muchImage

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by aparna3011


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geet treat maan as she is doctor

maan remember what geet done with him n decide to meet her again to take revenge from her 


Thanks for commentingšŸ˜Š

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by khwaishfan


thanks for the pm and for updating so soon!! Thanks for reading and commenting. That gives me motivation to write more


Part 2

Fabulous update.... superbly written šŸ˜ŠThanks a lot

Gosh first she injures him and then treats him hahahaha she is like that only. You will know more

at least he is Maan....

so Maan mesmerised by her beauty! šŸ˜‰Ab kyun naa ho

then recalls what she did! 

Enjoyed their banter. hahahah i am so glad. I love writing their banters

Geet assumes she bested him

but she should not underestimate him

wonder what Maan will do? Keep reading for that

update soon

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Charanjeetkaur


Very lovely update dear Thanks for liking it

Geet is doctor and treated maan wounds maan think abaut to take revenge with geet

Thanks for pm

Watting for update


Thanks for commenting

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by coderlady


There is the Maan and Geet version too. Nice.


Yup both Maan -Geet & Sujal -Kashish version

Posted: 3 years ago

Star Commentor Awards (For Part 2)ā­ļø


Winner: Taahir004


Runner ups: khwaishfan, creampuff


Congratulations to the winner and the runner-upsšŸ‘smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32smiley32

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Part 3

 

He nods his head and leaves with a smile on her cute acting

 

She smiles happily ki bala talli aur itna bada kaam bhi hogaya

 

But Maan believes in Revenge is the dish best served cold

 

+++++++++++++

 

Weekend hai toh Geet is with her medical college friends and all...shopping etc

 

Sab khaa piike shopping karke busy se mall se nikal rahehain

 

Sab chit chat karte hua jaa rahe hain

 

Saamne baadi si gaadi rukti hai

 

All are in awe ki kitni mast car hai

 

Nikalte hain Maan ji...apne full tashan and style mein.....shades pehenke and sab awe ki kya handsome banda hai

 

Geet is also looking dumb founded

 

He walks over to Geet and says ā€˜Hi Geetā€™

 

She is little unsure but replies back

 

Sab dost log jaan gaye ki ye Geet ko jaanta hai...hye!

 

Before Geet could realize, he swoops down and plants a kiss on her lips making sure all the traffic cams and cctvs get a good look

 

A nice aaram se wala smooch

 

After he is done, he calmly puts back the noodle strap of her dress back to its place which had fallen from her shoulder during the kiss and whispers in her ears

 

M- Revenge is best served cold dear

 

Baaki ko lag raha hai ki kaan mein kuch seductively bol raha hai

 

Geet ke hosh hi udd gaye the...  Wo to samajh hi nahi paa rhi thi ki kya hua hai abhi abhi 


Her mind takes time to register his words

 

She was shocked with the sudden kiss...she was more shocked by the fact that she responded to the kiss

 

She is pink as a peach

 

But before she could respond or do anything, he is gone

 

She thinks to herself, this is not over yet

 

Maan ka plan was ki ye bandi middle class type hai...aur unn logon ke liye apni izzat and aan etc are most important... ab Geet ki aisi image kharab kar dunga toh she will be devasted. Girgirate hue aayegi sorry bolne

 

Shock toh tab laga jab Maan was with his Japanese delegates

 

Geet appears out of nowhere

 

She bows to the delegates

 

Pulls Maan down and pushes him to the wall and kisses him thoroughly on the lips, whispering

 

G-Check & mate

 

She leaves after saying ā€œarigato gozaimasuā€ (Thank you) tot he Japanese delegates

 

Ab round 2

 

Geet kind of is prepared

 

But is wondering which moment will Maan choose

 

Geet ki family doesn't live with her.So Maan ne socha toh infront of her patients

 

Geet ke nurse ne roka par Geet said

 

G-Aane do aane do

 

Geet ne jaldi se patient ko thermometer lagaya

 

G- Haan chalo. 1.5 minute

 

She says to Maan

 

She says to the patient

 

G- Donā€™t move please

 

Maan ne faltu ka Tashan dikhake bola ki

 

M- How are you, sweetheart?

 

G- I am great, baby.... doll

 

She answers with a smirk

 

Geet ko samajh nahi aa raha...ye bhola hai ki idiot...baaki toh intelligent types ka aura hai iska

 

Maan jaate hue kehta hai...

 

M- This is my tomorrow's schedule, if you are wondering

 

Geet replies casually...

 

G- Whatsapp me

 

The 4th kiss was uneventful...and didn't seem like a challenge to either of them

 

++++++++++++

 

Kuch dino baad valentineā€™s day tha

 

Maan was on a date with a girl

 

Wo bandi model types, khub Maan ko impress karna chaahe addaon seā€¦bimbo type bhi....and wo boring salad khaane wali

 

Maan is getting bored with her chatter par kya kare

 

Sarr hila raha hai aur idhar udhar dekh raha hai

 

Nazar padti hai Geet pe...jo akeli restaurant mein baith mazze se fondue aur chocolate brownie khaa rahai hai

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

He thought he could one up her. But she showed him she is no less. She gives it all back.



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