This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 4

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by aparna3011


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congrats for new story Thanks

very interesting

geet is fighting with maan as he forcefully make her father to sell their land to him  


Thanks for liking keep reading & commenting

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by karamjeet


Mind-blowing start...

Totally loved it...

Geet is strong...

I hope in whole story her character will be strong...

Excited for next part...

Continue soon...

Thanks for the pm...


Thanks for liking the story. Yup Geet is strong and sassy and she will remain like that, I promise. Because thats what makes Geet

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 2

He gave her a deadly stare

 

He signs the paper and threw it on her face

 

But she noticed his hand wobble while he finished the last sign

 

She looks at him intently

 

G-Shit! he is having a concussion!

 

She shrieks as he is in verge of passing out

 

He finds himself getting blanked not before saying

 

M-yeh chehra yaad rakhna...

 

She thinks stupid....khud marr raha hai, phir bhi dhamki de raha hai

 

 She guides the driver to drive to her clinic...so she can give him a thorough check up if the concussion is something to be concerned about

 

She makes him rest in her clinic's bed, while pulling the curtains and darkening it


while herself goes to sit in her doctor's chair

 

She never realized when she dozed off

 

It was late in night around 3:30am... He gains his consciousness.... He felt his head heavy as soon as lifts it up to sit... 

 

M-Ahhhh......  Yeh main kahan aa gaya (while scanning the place all around in darkness as some room light is coming out of curtains)

 

He gets up with all his efforts and removes the curtains to step out...  As soon as he steps out, he finds a girl sleeping in her own world with her beautiful face half covered with her brown tresses...

 

He suddenly gets the urge to see her face. 

 

He feels this strange pull towards her

 

He touches her hair and places the strands to a side...  He was as if seeing an angel sleeping In front of him...  Her innocent face attracted him involuntarily

 

But soon he registers her face and recalls the incident that happened due to this face

 

He feels the fresh anger rising in him...

 

M- yeh to wohi ladki... Yahan.?? 

 

He moves his gaze to a name plate highlighting "Dr. Geet Handa"

 

 M-Doctor...??? 

 

He looked around and realize that he is in a clinic and bandage on his neck and forehead mean that he got treated in this clinic by her

 

He recalls he whole incident and anger rushes to his nerves

 

But suddenly his mind shifts to those legal papers…Where it should be...???

 

She gets up with a start sensing some movement around her

 

He went through her handbag but to his luck. He finds nothing except some emergency aid kits... He threw the bag in frustration and bangs his hand hard on the table on which her head was laying

 

She is startled seeing him

 

She frowns hard and gets up

 

M- Papers kahan hain...???

 

G-What? those are my papers! You imbecile! I saved your life and you! Niklo yahan se

 

She never realized in her adrenalin rush that he was so tall and towering over her so much

 

He moves forward and holds her by her arms

 

M- You saved my life, or you had tried to kill me...??

 

She tries to move back...she is scared now...but she would not show it

 

G-If I wanted to kill you, I had too many chances and I didn’t need to save you but still I did. But it seems it was a bad decision. Now leave my hand

 

 M- Oh sure! You are going to regret it

 

He moves forward and bends towards her little further

 

She closed her eyes in utmost fear

 

He could feel her heavy breaths & quick expansion and contraction of her chest due to succession of fear

 

She blurts out

 

G-You are crossing your limit!

 

 Maan abruptly moves back realizing the closeness

 

His mind was giving him the signals that this is nothing...  How can he feel this way?

 

G-Seriously just go!

 

She scrambles and hands over a tablet and a prescription

 

G-Have this for a day...2 times

 

He shoots her up with his eyes...  Holds the paper and squeezes it in no time

 

M- Main apna khayal rakhna janta hoon. Iske liye mujhe in dawaon ki zaroorat nahi. Haan, tum apna khayal zaroor rakhna

 

He says with a shameless smirk

 

She mimics him mockingly

 

G-Idiot!

 

He was about to step out of the room but stops hearing this

 

M- Excuse me...???

 

She didn’t realize he heard

 

G-What?

 

 M-What have you just said...??

 

She shrugs

 

He nods his head and leaves with a smile on her cute acting

 

She smiles happily ki bala talli aur itna bada kaam bhi hogaya

 

But Maan believes in Revenge is the dish best served cold


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Writer's Note: Thank you such an overwhelming response to the story. I am very very thankful to each one of you for the love. I wanted to start -Star commentor contest again but each of the comments were so good I was unable to decide a winner. So shout out to each one of you

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Beautiful update 

Oh wow Geet is Doctor nice 

Let's how maan will take his revenue 

Continue please 

Posted: 3 years ago

  Geet is a doctor she treated him but after getting his conscious he saw her sleeping his first reaction he found her beautiful but soon realize she's same girl whom make him sign paper he try to find them but Geet wakes up and both argue with each others Maan left thinking too meet her again bz he's not one to let go matters this easily

Posted: 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Sweet of geet to treat him but was that a mistake. Hmmm 

Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks for PM enjoyable update. Geet is dr. She treated him. He is ready for take revenge let's see how he is gona take it.. Waiting for further updates

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 2 

Wow geet is a Doctor ðŸ˜²

Love it ..... beauty & brains , not to mention courageous! 

Nice how she treated maan 

Maan was mesmerized by the sleeping beauty 

But then he remembers what she did ðŸ˜†

Loving their dialogues 💕 especially geet .... she is too funny !! 

Wondering maan ‘s next plan of action 

Thank you ðŸ¤—



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