She kissed him. Don't know if he was in his senses enough to know.
She kissed him. Don't know if he was in his senses enough to know.
thanks for the pm
Part 17
Fascinating update........ beautifully written
Maan is full of himself even though he is drunk
great that she got the people at the bar to help her
Maan is giving her a hard time
oh no Geet's colleague sees her with mind and assumes she is with Maan
I am sure Geet will be the talk of the hospital
finally Geet manages to take Maan to the room
liked that Geet is really taking care of him
ha ha she was right that only a wife or gf would do that
so what is she?
of cos Maan stops her from leaving
sad seeing Maan like this
oh so his mom has someone in her life?
feeling for Maan.....
adore when he put his head on her lap and she caresses his hair
Gosh she kissed him twice.... on the cheek and then the lips
seems like her feelings towards him are changing...
I guess Maan will not remember what happened
update soon
Star Commentor Award (Part 17)
Winner: Creampuff⭐️
Runner-ups: Khwaishfan
Special Mention: Coderlady, Alamelu,
Early BirdAward (For readers having first 3 comments): sanum23, Alamelu, maangeetgmmg
Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 👏
Special Announcement:
I had this great idea. I was thinking of calling very special guest for the interview. Please add your questions with your comments too or ask them separately. Our very own Maan & Geet are coming for the interview. Ask them anything you want. They will answer you guys on anything and everything. For reference please see the posts under this part replying khwaishfan and creampuff, the reply section got hijacked my Maan & Geet. So be ready with the questions
Note:
Let’s continue the guessing game & song game to double the fun
Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right
Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai
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Part 18
She watches him passing out
G- Good night.
She plants a light kiss on his cheek
Geet looks at him intently for few minutes while he was sleeping
She leans forward and kisses him lightly on the lip
Ab Maan lag hi itna cute raha tha sote huye
She records a video on her phone and sends to Maan ki ye ye hua...isliye he is in the hotel room...Geet usko leke aayi...now she is leaving coz she has 5 am shift. And remember to drink water
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Ab Geet ki shift khatam ho gai.
She couldn't concentrate on her work
She just wondering ki Maan utha ki nahi
10 am uski shift khatam hui
Geet ne socha hospital toh pass hi hai hotel ke
Gai toh dekha Maan ki car abhi bhi khadi hai
She goes towards the room
Geet ne room ki bell bajai
Maan had just stepped out of a steaming bath
He is in a bathrobe where deep V of skin showing in front...hint of pecs can be seen
He opens the door
Geet ke saamne wet dishelved bathrobe wala Maan
She freezed in the moment gasping for air
He is practically naked...she thinks...then she realizes what she is doing
G- emmm...emm...I came to check how you are doing....emm...clearly not a good time...I will go
M - Disappointed?
He says with his sideways smug smirk
G-Huh?
She raises her eyebrow
M- That I am awake, and you can't take advantage of me anymore
G-HUH?
She frowns
M- No need to pretend, I remember last night perfectly well
Geet slams the door close and walks away
G- Gadha! Idiot! Fool!
She muttering to herself
G- Ek thanks bhi nahi bol sakta ye...aur main hi hoon ki chintaa se mare jaa rahi hoon
He would have thanked her if he would have remembered the correct things
After he got up he remembered the night in bits and pieces like:
· Ki Geet ko harass kiya manager ne
· There was some talk about his weight….he wonders did Geet say something in lines of that she likes to feel his weight on her (like they are on bed and Geet is under him and she likes it kind of weight) or did he imagine her saying this.... But there definitely was some weight talk...what else could it have been if not this?... Maan feels happy
He is very confused as to where they are at in this relationship....
He also remembers she groped his ass…..there was something about the keys
But keys toh front desk pe bhi thi…that means she really wanted to touch me that’s why she touched my ass so intimately
Maan ko toh ab pakka bharosa hai ki last night Geet openly groped his ass in public..
He also vaguely remembers she said ‘F*ck you!’
He takes it as a compliment
What Maan remembers after waking up is not the innocent cheek pulling part but Geet taking advantage of his drunk state
He is in a totally confused state about Geet
He knows he can't order her around and he doesn't just play around with her
Is he ready to think about commitment coz that is where it will go if he tries to pursue this?
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Udhar Geet is berating herself in her mind while going back home
G- Why was I worrying about a jerk like him again? You stupid, Geet!
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The annoying harassing manager from last night got fined for his behavior with VVIP guest
The guest being Geet...
Maan made sure the manager got punished for harassing Geet
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Since aaj shift mein bhi Geet khoyi khoyi si thi toh rumors toh hospital mein aag ki tarah phail gaye
Geet ko dekh ke sabko yakeen ho gaya ki rumors sahi bhi hain
Originally posted by: CreampuffPart 17
Mind-blowing update !!!!!
Geet kisses maan NOT ONCE BUT TWICE!!!!💕❤️♥️ & on the lips !!! 😃🥳
Excuse me while I do the happy dance
Ok ok I will calm down 😆
I totally love how playful & silly 😜 drunk maan is ........ I know it is not sensible to over drink but it shows a different more vulnerable side to his rigid tough exterior..... there is certainly more depth than what he shows ...
....... curious to know what man he was talking about & how it relates to his mother ??? If I remember correctly his father passed away when he was young
Liked how geet took care of maan like a friend or perspective girlfriend 😉
Her allowing maan to lay in her lap while she listened to his drunk jibberish & calmly reassured him was superb
There definitely are some hidden feelings buried in our feisty gal .......
But my absolute favourite part of the update was that it was sealed with a kiss 😘 !!!!!
Thanks for the award & congrats to all the winners !
Thank you so much for the update
yayyyy happy dance!!! every kiss also makes me do happy dance
Definition of happy dance: Happy dance is a ritualistic dance that every reader and writer of fic has to do if the mail characters kiss. Happy dance denotes the purity of craziness🤪
Yeah its not sensible to over drink....blah blah who cares....drunk Maan is adorbs!!!
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Geet frowning at readers and writer drooling over drunk Maan
G-People are drooling at drunk you, Maan
M-well...
G-Get my chainsaw
Geet orders blankly with determination in her eyes
Maan starts to grab his helmet
Originally posted by: khwaishfanthanks for the pm
Part 17
Fascinating update........ beautifully written
Maan is full of himself even though he is drunk
great that she got the people at the bar to help her
Maan is giving her a hard time
oh no Geet's colleague sees her with mind and assumes she is with Maan
I am sure Geet will be the talk of the hospital
finally Geet manages to take Maan to the room
liked that Geet is really taking care of him
ha ha she was right that only a wife or gf would do that
so what is she? hahhaha good question...lets ask Geet
of cos Maan stops her from leaving
sad seeing Maan like this
oh so his mom has someone in her life?
feeling for Maan.....
adore when he put his head on her lap and she caresses his hair
Gosh she kissed him twice.... on the cheek and then the lips
seems like her feelings towards him are changing...
I guess Maan will not remember what happened
update soon
khwaishfan asks Geet
khwaishfan: what are you Maan's Wife or GF?
Geet looks at khwaishfan with stoic expression
Geet: I am his most frightening nightmare! I am his death!!!
Gives out a maniac laugh
Maan rolls his eyes from behind
Maan: She is my friend. Thank you, khwaishfan
Part 17 &18
Talli Maan is really a dangerous Maan so next time reminding Geet to say a big no to talli Maan he's really hard to handle. And Geet getting caught red handed by a colleague is really bad and woh bhi agar woh colleague gossips ki dhukan hai toh badi problem hai.... And a little bit sweet and shy moments here and there was so cute... I'm confirming that Geet phigal rahi hai aur Maan is opening up to Geet a little about his sadness. Geet's presence of mind is really incredible I like that she recorded a video of why Maan is where he was when he woke up.... And the worst thing is that pure hospital me Geet ki bare me wrong information pahel gayi sirf aur sirf woh stupid Reena ki wajai se... And lastly Maan bhi na pagal hai kyun sata rahe Geet ko and naraz ho ke chali gayi na and she's degrading herself. Quick Maan ab sochna bandh karo apni ass ki aur jaa Geet ke pas woh naraz hai....omg phir se judai..... Somewhat cute update Di.... 🤗
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Only maan can think like that😂,he is completely on another side,His conclusions to each thing he remember is 😂
Ohh poor geet helped maan and he behave like this and now rumours in hospital how geet will handle all this waiting to see
Seriously. Complete change of understanding from bits and pieces. One track mind for sure lol. poor geet. Here she wanted to see if he was okay and hears crap from him
good that he punished the manager gur harassing geet though
but now geet will have to face office rumors. Not that she would care but still it is annoying
Nice
Geet concern about Maan so went to check after her shift get over Maan have already punish manager fr his behavior
Maan talk made Geet angry she left but how Geet handle office rumors
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