Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 13

🤣🤣🤣jitna dur jao utna pas honge yeh dono bohot hi complicated hai dono ki hal. Yeh Geet ki friends bhi na kis jungle se aaye hai pata nahi hamesa Geet ko chidathi hai. Ab yeh dono anjane me dating app me ek duser ko dhundliya indono ki door toh kismat ne bandhliya ab dur nahi bhaag sakta pata nahi jab dono ki meeting hoga toh kya reaction hogi... 😛yeh padh kar mujhe yeh song dimag me aayi hai.... mere saaye hai saath me yaara jis jagah tum ho-hate story 3.... Classy update Di loved it and thanks for the pm and award.... 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 13

Fantabulous update..... wonderfully written

great that Geet is enjoying with her friends

smart Geet chose dare...... 

Geet's friends assume that there is something between Maan......

of cos Maan controls himself from calling Geet

they can never be apart from each other....

Gosh they connect on a dating app unaware that they are talking to each other....

ha ha MSK123 and user-girl123..... well they do have some things in common

Maan does not waste time and invited her for coffee

I guess they  will meet for coffee? 

update soon 

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Posted: 3 years ago

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maan n geet decide not to cross pat with each other but destiny uniting them 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh wow they’re destined to meet so the destiny is apparently conspiring to make them meet. Are they gonna hook up since they’re a bit drunk?

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Posted: 3 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 13)

Winner:  khwaishfan

Runner-ups:   ferdouz, Creampuff,

Special Mention: akkub.92

EarlyBird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): sanityinfinite,Alamelu, NeenaDd

 

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Let’s continue the guessing game &song game to double the fun

 

Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right 

 

Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai

 

 

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Part 14

 

User-MSK123: Wanna meet for a drink? (As app was location based so they knew ki other person is nearby)

 

She replied

 

User-girl123: No, I am driving

 

User-MSK123: Coffee?

 

Geet typed: “some other time...” Then erased the message

 

And replied a ‘OK’

 

Friends peeked into her screen and exclaimed ki –‘OMG! He invited you for coffee in this super fancy place...!’

 

G-I said ok to him. So, I guess I am going

 

Friends ne gossip ke khaatir bol dia ki- ‘Acha chal phir ja’

 

Friends bhi Geet ko fancy 5* hotel ke darwaaze tak chod kar aaye

 

+++++++++

 

Maan also doesn’t know whether he feels disappointed or happy ki this girl agreed to meet

 

She had seemed different... but then…well.....the whole idea was to hook up… so maybe this is good only, right?

 

He thinks to himself

 

+++++++

 

Geet pochonchi andar and looked around

 

She saw a guy’s broad back sitting at table near window

 

She reaches him

 

G-MSK?

 

Maan turns at the voice

 

M- ha...I

 

TUM!!!

 

Both of them yelp with surprise

 

M- girl123??!!

 

G - MSK123??!! What the heck is MSK?! So misleading

 

M-Hah!! Girl 123 isn’t?? MSK – Maan Singh Khurana - MSK. get it?

 

G - Huh... how many MSK will be there, how will I know? What's up with your lame ass misleading DP huh?

 

Maan looks ki kya DP lagai thi

 

then smirks and then starts laughing

 

G-Gadha!

 

M-That's your lame ass car and your lame ass photography

 

(Piyush ki wedding pe jaane ke time pe Geet ne kaha ki tumhara camera acha hai phone ka main isse photo lungi. Toh photo Maan ki gallery meinpadi thi)

 

Geet feels like she has lost or is on verge of losing this round.....

 

G - Huh whatever…

 

M - Coffee?

 

She sits down looking outside the window

 

Maan orders coffee for her

 

She glares at him ki mere wala preference order karo coffee ka, kya gadhon ki tarah order kar rahe ho; as due to their pervious Piyush’s wedding road trip Maan has got to know her exact preference for coffee and would mock her - “one part milk, half part sugar, one-fourth part coffee and stir it very well and heat it again after stirring” every time she would order coffee during the trip

 

M- You do know this app is to hook up right or are you that naive?


G - order coffee properly first!

 

He rolls his eyes

 

M - Then shall I tell them to send the coffee up to my room?

 

She narrows her eyes but answers flatly

 

G- I told you I am driving later. So, what if it's hook up app? Can't I refuse the hook up after meeting him?

 

M- if you are refusing then I should cancel the coffee... As you say “why waste money”

 

G - Ufff chalo chalo room mei chalo. Mera friend urologist hai I can video call him and have him look at your problem.

 

She says loud enough for the waiter to hear

 

Maan has faced enough embarrassing scenes now. This much is nothing now

 

M - You can say you wanna see me naked, no need for excuses.

 

He turns to the waiter

 

M- Waiter, get a coffee with one part milk, half part sugar, one-fourth part coffee and stir it very well and heat it again after stirring and send to room xyz along with some drinks and snacks

 

Maan gets up ki chalo

 

Geet looks at him ...ki how come he is..Uh…

 

G - You know I was kidding right... I really need to get back ... I am on duty tomorrow 5 am...

 

M- Don't worry we can finish few rounds by that time

 

She fake laughs

 

G-Hahaha…very funny!... Maan... Tum kab se yahan baith kar pi rahe ho... you are drunk talking a lot!!!

 

M-Around 1-2 hrs….Don't know. Maybe I am drunk why don't you escort me to my room and put me into bed?


Geet looks hard at Maan ki how drunk is he? How much is he still playing around? How much is he drunk talking?

 

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 12 

Omg what a superb part 👍🏼

They have tried parting ways but fate has something else in store for our psychotic duo. 😆

Of course our gal geet would be having fun with the girls 

But truth or dare sounds very risqué knowing geet 

So the girls even think something is going on b/n maan & geet ...... smart friends 

Of course the dating app has secretly connected these two & they are hitting it off 

MSK123 🤣🤣🤣...... i’m Sorry but the username was too funny but totally appropriate!! 

Maan invited for coffee but you left us hanging di .......... 

I can’t wait to find out if they meet...... 

Thank you for the back to back updates 

& Happy New year to you as well !! 


They saw Maan kiss her very publicly naa so the friends know about Maan

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Originally posted by: anmirza

Oh wow they’re destined to meet so the destiny is apparently conspiring to make them meet. Are they gonna hook up since they’re a bit drunk?


I dont think Geet is drunk

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 14 

Hilarious update 🤣🤣

So MSK123 & Girl123 meet !!! 🤣🤣

I would have liked to have seen their expressions 😃

Their mini - argument about their user names was funny 

However the part about maan posting a picture of geet’s car as his profile pic & she didn’t realize was hilarious 🤣

Interesting how maan knows exactly how geet likes her coffee her special way ..... he is paying attention 😉

But why is maan in a rush to get geet into his room ....... does he still want to hook up even though he realizes his date is geet ??? Or is he drunk ??? Or is he playing with her ??? 

Curious to know where this is headed.... 

By the way I LOVED geet’s comeback about the urologist checking out maan , I was doubled up laughing !!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣👏👏👏

Thank you so much for the update & the good laugh !! 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update

Dialogue were superb

Waiting to see what happens next how there love story move further update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Creampuff

Part 14 

Hilarious update 🤣🤣 Thanks

So MSK123 & Girl123 meet !!! 🤣🤣

I would have liked to have seen their expressions 😃 Heehehhee I am sure the expressions were of a mixture of surprise, shock, disbelieve, betrayal and yet relief

Their mini - argument about their user names was funny 

However the part about maan posting a picture of geet’s car as his profile pic & she didn’t realize was hilarious 🤣 I cant blame her, uske friends ki chapar-chapar ke beech kahin bhi dhyaan dena mushkil hai

Interesting how maan knows exactly how geet likes her coffee her special way ..... he is paying attention 😉 ahaan...yessss...

But why is maan in a rush to get geet into his room ....... does he still want to hook up even though he realizes his date is geet ??? Or is he drunk ??? Or is he playing with her ???  uske liye next part hai naa

Curious to know where this is headed.... 

By the way I LOVED geet’s comeback about the urologist checking out maan , I was doubled up laughing !!! 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣👏👏👏 hehehhee yeah that's my fav line too

Thank you so much for the update & the good laugh !!