Star Commentor Award (Part 13)
Winner: khwaishfan
Runner-ups: ferdouz, Creampuff,
Special Mention: akkub.92
EarlyBird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): sanityinfinite,Alamelu, NeenaDd
Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 👏
Note:
Let’s continue the guessing game &song game to double the fun
Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right
Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai
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Part 14
User-MSK123: Wanna meet for a drink? (As app was location based so they knew ki other person is nearby)
She replied
User-girl123: No, I am driving
User-MSK123: Coffee?
Geet typed: “some other time...” Then erased the message
And replied a ‘OK’
Friends peeked into her screen and exclaimed ki –‘OMG! He invited you for coffee in this super fancy place...!’
G-I said ok to him. So, I guess I am going
Friends ne gossip ke khaatir bol dia ki- ‘Acha chal phir ja’
Friends bhi Geet ko fancy 5* hotel ke darwaaze tak chod kar aaye
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Maan also doesn’t know whether he feels disappointed or happy ki this girl agreed to meet
She had seemed different... but then…well.....the whole idea was to hook up… so maybe this is good only, right?
He thinks to himself
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Geet pochonchi andar and looked around
She saw a guy’s broad back sitting at table near window
She reaches him
G-MSK?
Maan turns at the voice
M- ha...I
TUM!!!
Both of them yelp with surprise
M- girl123??!!
G - MSK123??!! What the heck is MSK?! So misleading
M-Hah!! Girl 123 isn’t?? MSK – Maan Singh Khurana - MSK. get it?
G - Huh... how many MSK will be there, how will I know? What's up with your lame ass misleading DP huh?
Maan looks ki kya DP lagai thi
then smirks and then starts laughing
G-Gadha!
M-That's your lame ass car and your lame ass photography
(Piyush ki wedding pe jaane ke time pe Geet ne kaha ki tumhara camera acha hai phone ka main isse photo lungi. Toh photo Maan ki gallery meinpadi thi)
Geet feels like she has lost or is on verge of losing this round.....
G - Huh whatever…
M - Coffee?
She sits down looking outside the window
Maan orders coffee for her
She glares at him ki mere wala preference order karo coffee ka, kya gadhon ki tarah order kar rahe ho; as due to their pervious Piyush’s wedding road trip Maan has got to know her exact preference for coffee and would mock her - “one part milk, half part sugar, one-fourth part coffee and stir it very well and heat it again after stirring” every time she would order coffee during the trip
M- You do know this app is to hook up right or are you that naive?
G - order coffee properly first!
He rolls his eyes
M - Then shall I tell them to send the coffee up to my room?
She narrows her eyes but answers flatly
G- I told you I am driving later. So, what if it's hook up app? Can't I refuse the hook up after meeting him?
M- if you are refusing then I should cancel the coffee... As you say “why waste money”
G - Ufff chalo chalo room mei chalo. Mera friend urologist hai I can video call him and have him look at your problem.
She says loud enough for the waiter to hear
Maan has faced enough embarrassing scenes now. This much is nothing now
M - You can say you wanna see me naked, no need for excuses.
He turns to the waiter
M- Waiter, get a coffee with one part milk, half part sugar, one-fourth part coffee and stir it very well and heat it again after stirring and send to room xyz along with some drinks and snacks
Maan gets up ki chalo
Geet looks at him ...ki how come he is..Uh…
G - You know I was kidding right... I really need to get back ... I am on duty tomorrow 5 am...
M- Don't worry we can finish few rounds by that time
She fake laughs
G-Hahaha…very funny!... Maan... Tum kab se yahan baith kar pi rahe ho... you are drunk talking a lot!!!
M-Around 1-2 hrs….Don't know. Maybe I am drunk why don't you escort me to my room and put me into bed?
Geet looks hard at Maan ki how drunk is he? How much is he still playing around? How much is he drunk talking?
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years ago
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