This is not Love- MG (Part 59, Page 149) ||Thread I - Page 2

Posted: 3 years ago

Captivating Start 


Maan had forced and bought over a building 

but unfortunately for him

as time he meets the daughter and I think its Geet

who has already a legal document for Maan to sign over

the building once again 

and I liked that she is bold and brave too 

but seems like Maan is going to faint now 


will be waiting for the next update to see what happens

Posted: 3 years ago

Congratulations on new story. Maan showed as a pure businessman asking someone to sign and Geet made a total surprising entry. wow expecting a lot of twist and turns ahead. Waiting for you to give another part before maan faints on geet now...

Posted: 3 years ago

Nice concept

Geet step was awesome waiting to see what maan will do update soon

Posted: 3 years ago

Congratulations for new story. Seems interesting. Love the way Geet stands Infront of arrogant Maan.

Posted: 3 years ago

hi there. how are you?

congrats on the new story! 

thanks for the pm 

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 1

Incredible update......

Maan is indeed ruthless and arrogant....

but now has met his match in Geet....

loved how she tricked and turned the tables on him! 

she made him helpless....

She is courageous......

seems like she is a doctor?

update soon

Posted: 3 years ago

 Congrats fr new story 

  Maan is arrogant rich and knows how to turn the table to his favor 

 Geet too fearless girl and knows how to snatch her rights

 She don't know whom she messing but both stubborn  

 

Posted: 3 years ago

Wonderful starting dear

Maan force geet father to sign the paper

At the end geet forced maan to sign the paper but maan going to Faint

Thanks for pm

Watting for update

Posted: 3 years ago

1

congrats for new story

very interesting

geet is fighting with maan as he forcefully make her father to sell their land to him  

Posted: 3 years ago

Mind-blowing start...

Totally loved it...

Geet is strong...

I hope in whole story her character will be strong...

Excited for next part...

Continue soon...

Thanks for the pm...



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