Part 5
S- Toh tumhe dukh nahi iss baat ka..???
He was in awe seeing her calmness
K-Kiss baat ka dukh?
S- That he cheated on you
He was shocked now seeing her with so much involved in her doing and eating
K-Dukh aur gussa tha...uspe nahi khud pe...ki made the wrong decision... I trusted a wrong person...wo bevkuf banata raha main banti rahi
S- Tumne kabhi approach karne ki koshish nahi ki..?
K- Usko? Pagal hoon kya...I have too much pride
Sujal thinks to himself- wohi to torna hai Kashish… Aur main wohi todunga
K- Par full stalk karti hoo main social media pe
Sujal laughs at this-
S- Acha. Toh kaun hai woh...?? Main bhi toh dekhun
Kashish aalti paalti maarke baithti hai
K- Apna phone nikalo...tumhare se stalk karte hain
S- Kya...??? Acha yeh lo
K-Arre kholke do social media
S- Huuuhh!!! Kya hoga tumhara…Ye lo…aur ye mujhe do. Kitna khaaogi!!
He snatches her ice cream and takes a scope
She searches and shows the profile
S- Piyush Raheja...????? Tum iske saath...??
K- Tum isko jaante ho?
S- Haan!!! Mera classmate tha aur rival bhi. Kaafi kuch saha hai iski or iske papa ki wajah se maine or mumma ne... aur koi nahi mila tumhe...?? He is a Casanova... Larkiyon ko use kar ke hi aaj paisa banayehain iss ne
K- Tum jhooth bol rahe ho! Ye mere school mein tha...iske school mein ajeeb se baal the.... I mean that's what he told me
S- Aur mere college mein tha... And what more he told you...?
K- Ki wo college ka topper tha
S- Liar!!! And how did you fall for him...??? Kab tak raha ye sab...?
She frowns at his intrusive tone. She folds her arms
K-Tumhe kya karna hai?
S- Acha theek hai…. mat batao... (Puts the spoon in her mouth) is sunday free ho.???
She is taken aback
K-Kya? Kyun?
She blurts removing the spoon
S- Kyun ki main free hon!! To socha kahin bahar chalte hain…Movie..??
She widens her eyes
K-Tumhari wo item kahan gai…aaj wali date?
S- Forget her... WoH bas waise hi peechey padi thi!! Toh... Before sunrise ki tickets book kara loon..??
Sujal says trying to suppress his laughter seeing her face
K-Bakwas mat karo! Tum uske peeche padhe ho... you were going to be lucky tonight naa
She says nudging him playfully and gets off the car bonnet with a jump
S- Ab kahan chali..? Jawab to do!!!
K-Yahin hoon. Cab book kar rahi hoon
He gets off the bonnet too and whispers in her ear
S- Well…I think I am lucky tonight
Kashish to thandi padh gai hearing him...she moves back few steps as her cheeks acquire color
K- I will book a cab. I should leave
S- Jab mere saath aayi ho toh chodunga bhi main hi. You don't have to go in taxi. Waise bhi, raatkaafi hogayi hai
K- I am used to night shifts
He opens the car door for her
She raises an eyebrow
K-Are you ok?
S- Get used to this too, raat ko kabhi bhi free ho shift seto mujhe bula liya karo…ab itna bhi busy nahi hoon main
K-What??? Seriously you are creeping me out now. Are you ok?
S- ammmm... Nahi bass kisi jungli billi ne kaat lia tha…
He touches his neck to show the scar deliberately where she hurt him last time
She gives a formal smile
K-I will make sure I keep killing you in my life goal
Sujal steps forward
So close to her that he is just a few inches apart
They can feel each other’s warm breath...
She almost forgets to breath being so close to his warm yet imposing body
S-For that my sweetheart, you have to be with me for lifetime…
he whispers in a seductive voice
She almost loses a heartbeat and quickly moves away
K-I think your date mixed something in your drink
S- Or may be my date has better taste of this ice-cream
He says wiping ice cream from her upper lip with his thumb and places it in her mouth
She is frozen at her place white as sheet
She berates herself in her mind. she knew this was a bad decision, but still she had to come with him alone
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years agoPart 4
Loved this part and the moments between Sujal and Kashish. Its nice to see that they are open with each other, i can sense that they are comfortable together the way they were speaking to one another. Love how Sujal ditched his date and was happily sharing her food as though they are a couple. Im glad to see a strong character in Kashish, she is not fazed and has gotten over her previous break up
Part 5
Awesome part, was fantastic. The beginning part worries me a little, i wonder what Sujal has going on in his mind. He wants to break her and her pride down. Seems like this is going to get messy. But loved the ending the little romantic moments and the closeness they share. Kashish is definitely affected by him and his closeness. Waiting to see what more this night unfolds. Will Sujal get lucky tonight? 😆😆 do continue soon waiting for the next part. keep up the great work!!
Note: Thanks to Kahishdabest for dil khush kar dene wala comment😃
Part 6
S- Or may be my date has better taste of this ice-cream
He says wiping ice cream from her upper lip with his thumb and places it in her mouth
She is frozen at her place white as sheet
She berates herself in her mind. she knew this was a bad decision, but still she had to come with him alone
S- Chalein...?
She moves away agitatedly
K-No No No. You are a creep...I am not coming with you. Never!
She starts to book her cab while walking to a well-lit area
He follows her
S- Kahan jaa rahi ho? Waise, tumhare ex ki shaadi hai in a few weeks, mujhe invitation bhi aaya hai. Chaaho toh you can come as my plus one
Kashish ke kaan khade ho jaate hain. But she curbs her curiosity
K-Not interested! You are creeping me out with your ice cream feeding and what not
She thinks of it as some sexual innuendo
S- Arrey aise kaise cheap? Ice cream maine tumhe hi to hi khilai hai... Khud to nahi khai....
He says this with a fit of a laughter
She stops shocked at his laughter
K-Why are you laughing?
S- Well.. Tumhari shakal dekh ke... Bhoot dekh liya hai kya..??? Hahhaha... Shakal dekho apni hahaha... Seriously..?? Tum darr rahi ho..???
She tries to normalize....will she even admit ki wo darr rahi hai
K- Mujhe! Mujhe tumhari ice cream khaani bhi nahi....ewww gross
She looks away.....continuing to walk
K- Tum! Tummm ice cream apni date ko khilao...haan usko hi...uska atitude dekha hai...."look at me! I have boobs!"
She rolls her eyes
S- Well she has!!! Didn't she...??
She gives an angry smile
K-Really? Breaking news Sujal- everybody has!
She is just too on your face about it
K- Do you realize how much silicon she has in those?
She shrugs
K-Khair mujhe kya
S- What... How do you know...???? Mere itne kareeb thi but I didn't realize...
K-Hello...I am the doctor here. Tumhe waise bhi kahan kuch pata lagna hai, tumhe ghurne se fursat thi?
S- Ohh someone has noticed this too!! I think kahin se jalne ki bu rahi hai...
K-Whatttt??? Main kyun jalun usse?? I am just saying as a doctor aur log toh notice karenge hi...aise openly ghurna band karo phir
She mimics her...
K-O sorry Sujal...napkin gir gaya....
She acts by picking up an imaginary napkin and does an over the top mimic
Sujal bursts into a laughter at her mimicry
K-I tell you; she wants your money!
S- I know that she wants my money. Tabhi iss time main tumhare saath hoon yahan aur chahta hoon ki yeh raat kabhi khatam naa ho
She gives him a dead pan look
K-Seriously, what do you want? s*x?
Sujal raise an eyebrow
S- Uske liye brothels hain I guess
He says giving her a convincing look
K- Maine sex kaha STD nahi. You just get STDs in brothel
She sighs
K-Then what do you want?
S- Nothing.... Bass tumhara saath... It's just that ki it feels like it's me... Mujhe dikhawa nahi karna padta jo main saara din duniya ke samne karta hoon.. Tumnahi samjhogi. Ab chalein? Thand baadh rahi hai…aur raat bhi
K- Lets make this clear. You say you don’t want anythingf rom me...bass "saath" really? Am I supposed to believe this? After kissing me 4 times for revenge you want saath? No, you want revenge. I know it.This is some kind of plan of yours, Sujal Garewal
Sujal thinks for awhile ki how she gets to read him this perfectly... But yeah... He is THE Sujal Garewal... How can he put his feet back?
S- Ohh you got me...
He Smirks
S-I kissed you because tumne bhi koi acha nahi kiya tha uss din... Main chahta to tumhe pata bhi na chalta aur tum log kahan ke kahan gayab ho jaate... Lekin I appreciated your efforts for your family... Lekin hisaab toh brabar karna tha naa.. I think it was not harmful for you... Maybe you enjoyed... (he winks)
She gasps with shock
K-You are gross! You assaulted me...am I supposed to enjoy an assault? I should have filed a complaint for molestation. You just ruined it with your last line
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 3 years agoPart 7
S-I kissed you because tumne bhi koi acha nahi kiya tha ussdin... Mai chahta to tumhe pata bhi nachalta aur tum log kahan ke kahan gayab ho jaate... Lekin I appreciated your efforts for your family... Lekin hisaab toh barabar karna tha naa.. I think it was not harmful for you... Maybe you enjoyed... (he winks)
She gasps with shock
K-You are gross! You assaulted me...am I supposed to enjoy an assault? I should have filed a complaint for molestation. You just ruined it with your last line
S- Isse humor kehte hain... Come on Kashish... Thodi toh akal use karo... Haina akal ya Piyush woh bhi le gaya...?
She goes and sits inside the car but on the driver's seat
S- What.??? Move in
K-No. I am driving. Sit
S- I can't trust a woman with driving
K-Whattttt????? you misogynic a-hole!! I hate you so much. What was I thinking coming here with you? You deserve that gold digger!
S- Whatever... Move in... Weekend pe din ke time chala lena
K-Fine! Drive...you had alcohol in your system that's why I offered. Anyways, my cab will be here in 5 min
She moves out banging his car door hard
S- Fine... Ye lo.
He tosses the car keys towards her
She is not talking to him anymore
She starts walking towards the road
This was clearly a bad decision, she thinks.
Everything to do with Sujal is a bad decision
Why does she trust and like all these untrustworthy men?
She seriously questions her own decision power
S- Kashish maine kaha na gadhi mein betho... I can't send you in any cab at this time...
Sujal has concern in his voice...
She is not listening to him
She walks towards the cab as the cab arrives
Sujal stands there still
S- Toh tum nahi aa rahi...???
She doesn’t answer him and goes and sits inside the cab
She is thinking to herself, I am a strong independent woman, I don’t need any man
Sujal sits in his car too and follows the cab
She doesn’t notice that
But Maan ko kya pata cab wala sahi leke jaa raha hai ki nahi, he doesn’t know her address even
Kashish bhi chaalak hai, usne carpool liya hai
As valentine’s day hai to saath mein ek aur couple hai
Geet goes and sits beside the driver
Driver starts driving
After a while the driver speaks up
Driver-Madam, ye car mein jo hain wo aapke saath the naa. Wo humein follow kyun kar rahe hain?
Kashish frowns ki kya and looks back to realize Sujal’s car following them
The other couple squeak ki- oh wow...your boyfriend is so romantic.... tumne toh mere liye aisa kabhi nahi kiya, jaanu
Kashish rolls her eyes
K- Just ignore him, bhaiya...nautanki kahin ka
Kashish feels he is a misogynistic creep like Piyush and she has no interest in doing the same mistake again
Sujal who was following the cab gets a call on his cell phone
S- Ghar ke number se call...???
He picks up
S-Hello!!
Servant - Sujal baba!! Jaldi se ghar aiye
Mama- Ramdin kaka... Kya hua hai...?? Pareshan kyun hain...???
Kaka- Sujal baba... Malkin behosh ho gayi hain... Jaldi aiye…
Sujal gets a shock of his life
S- Main abhi aata hun…Doctor ko phone kia...??
Kaka- Nahi baba... Mujhe to kuch samajh nahi aa raha...
S- Acha aap mumma ke saath rahiye. Mai doctor ko leke aata hun
He hangs up the call and speeds up his pace to overtake Kashish's cab
He stops in front of the cab and rushes to the front seat.
He unlocks the door...
S- Kashish... Please mere saath chalo mere ghar
He sounds so tensed and frightened
K-What...kyun?
Maan- Mumma.... Wo. Wo behosh… Please chalo...
Holds her hand and drags her to his car