P&P Part II - Page 3

Posted: 3 years ago

Love & Laissez Faire

Viveka will not be the first girl tolerating a mother in law who throws taunts left and right. It will get worse when Lekha enters the picture. will Raanav put his mother in her place?

Posted: 3 years ago

Its your life too… BTW… your Mom wants whats best for u”

“So what I want doesn’t matter?” he asked slowly




It would probably help if his mother realizes that his wishes matter too.Shr need not see Viveka the same way as Satyen does. She could respect her own son’s feelings. Live and let live.

Posted: 3 years ago

Waiting for update Nisha. Hope we will get one today .

Posted: 3 years ago

Hello Nisha

One of my friend suggested this story and I am so glad she did.


I loved this Pride and Prejudice with a nice desi twist.


Once I had read "Only a strong man can appreciate a stronger woman", it is so true in case of Raanav and Viveka.

Their love story was so cute, so romantic and absolutely like a fairy tale.


What is in store for this lovely couple next? 

On one hand Viveka will have a tough time from Smriti. On the other hand, was Raanav responsible for Inder breaking up with Naina? If so, Viveka will not take it lightly.

Will Abhishek create problems if and when he comes to know about Viveka getting engaged to Raanav?


I loved Anubha's and Akash's love, understanding and they being for each other in every way.

I am not able to decide if Akash-Anubha is my favorite couple or Raanav-Viveka!


Amazing story!!!

Posted: 3 years ago

Too” & “Also”

Smrita’s reaction was already shaking her up severely

She had forgotten Abhishek’s text

At home in bed… just before rolling over and sleeping when she checked texts for the last time

She remembered

“Apna body show kar re” he had said as a follow up to sending “bande ka body dekh”

“Are you serious?” she asked Abhishek in response to his text of  when she scrolled through her phone and saw his photo though fully clothed left nothing to imagination

The hairs on her back of her neck rose

Within minutes “Kyon?” he asked

“Did you even read your text under your picture?” she sat up

“Oh TU? “Umm.. you also send na I will look at urs too” he sent a wink “I can see” implying PLURAL

He had seen others? 

“ALSO” “What do u mean?” she sat up in horror, the conversation she had overheard at Kirori Mal college, Raanav’s intense hatred, the way he had hung out with 18 year olds at Harshu’s engagement, his constant deflection from wanting to have any serious conversation, his constant need to  put a polite distance whenever she met him on campus, but the exact opposite of almost climbing and straddling her when he saw her alone… she cringed and shook

It ALL made sense

“Hey Bhagwan…” she cursed “Uffff” she tried not to cry, as she was overcome with humiliation

She did not get a good feeling about it

“I mean…”

He was coming up with an answer

He COULD have said “Maine bhi bheja TU BHI bhej de”

But the pause made her heart sink like a ship filled with rocks

She almost felt nauseous

“You were hoping to send it to someone else?

He called her

“It was a joke”

“NO it was not…” she hissed through grit teeth

“Kya hua rey tujhe?” he questioned

“OMG… “Uffff… OMG… Were did you send, did u intend to send it to someone else?”

“You are crazy” he lied

“She sighed and laid back down

“We need to stop seeing each other”

“Ek dumb mistake ki wajah se?”

“”I don’t even know what you are saying”

Her skin was on fire… she felt she would blow up into a million fiery pieces

She quickly stepped out into the living room, Naina was snoring she didn’t want her up

Akash could be heard in the bedroom watching something

She let herself out into the living room balcony

“I am SO disappointed” she tried to keep it under control

“I am not sure tujhe kya hua hai… kal baat karenge”

“DO NOT send pictures of yourself. I am not going to text you anymore”

“Arey… hua kya dude”

She had almost gotten close to a s—ual predator!!

She could feel her arms shaking, as her heart rate increased in shame and remorse. The embarrassment, and disgrace she felt was indescribable

She sat on the couch and cried softly

“Grossss” she covered her glasses covered eyes and wept

Posted: 3 years ago

He is so crude. 🤢

How did she like him in the first place I'm wondering now

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by canapoem


Hello Nisha

One of my friend suggested this story and I am so glad she did.


I loved this Pride and Prejudice with a nice desi twist.


Once I had read "Only a strong man can appreciate a stronger woman", it is so true in case of Raanav and Viveka.

Their love story was so cute, so romantic and absolutely like a fairy tale.


What is in store for this lovely couple next? 

On one hand Viveka will have a tough time from Smriti. On the other hand, was Raanav responsible for Inder breaking up with Naina? If so, Viveka will not take it lightly.

Will Abhishek create problems if and when he comes to know about Viveka getting engaged to Raanav?


I loved Anubha's and Akash's love, understanding and they being for each other in every way.

I am not able to decide if Akash-Anubha is my favorite couple or Raanav-Viveka!


Amazing story!!!

Awww

Thanks so much

Posted: 3 years ago

Also, I'm so sick of these ads. This page is definitely getting a lot of traffic

Posted: 3 years ago

Its weekend .. can we get two updates nisha .... long ones ✍️✍️✍️✍️

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by modernfamily


Also, I'm so sick of these ads. This page is definitely getting a lot of traffic

Oh really?

Hmm... ads are the paparazzi of the India Forums world I guess

Haha🤣

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