NOTE : While I'm writing my riansh SS (https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/154547058 this is the one I am talking about , check out) I always had another story running in my mind .let me say it's like a version two .but I selected the other story to be the main story of the ss and let this silde off . But after watching yesterday preview of vansh , Riddhima and Kabir running for ragini again this story of mine started running in my mind , so I thought of putting it here for you all .read it and comment your reviews .
Kise chunegi Riddhima ?
It starts with Riddhima and Kabir running to the place where ragini is kept in the car.
And vansh running to reach ragini .
Vansh reaches the place .
And notices Ragini sleeping .
When he takes off the blanket on her ,there is a doll instead of ragini .
From the backyard of the place
Kabir and Riddhima take ragini away .
They take ragini away to Kabir's place .
Riddhima thinking about vansh on she is gonna face him now .
Riddhima : Kabir mein ghar chalti hun . Tum ragini ko safe rakhna .
Kabir : (in mind ) chali jao mujhe waise bhi tikhna laga nah hai isko .
But Kabir to make Riddhima believe that he is genuine .
Kabir : Riddhima mein iss waqt tume waha pe jaane nahi de sakta .
Showing his frustration
Par kya karu mujhe uss vansh rai Singhania ko uss ke crimes ka jawab dena hai .
Ragini jaise aur innocent lives barbaad hone nahi dena hai vansh ke haatho .
Riddhima becomes emotional hearing about vansh being such a criminal
Riddhima : tum tik keh rahe ho Kabir .
Riddhima weeps bitterly .
Riddhima : aab mein chalti hun.
Riddhima realises
kabir Lekin agar vansh ko pata chal gaya mein he hun jo ragini ko le gayi tab woh mujhe reh ne nahi dega naah .
Uska phela shaq toh mujh par he jayega naah .
Kabir : nahi , Riddhima tum jao meine waha pe pura cover up kar diya ,kisko pata nahi chelega ki tum waha pe nahi thi.
Tume bas backdoor se jaana hai aur apne room mein bait jao . Kisi ko koi shaq nahi hoga .
Kabir remembers his plan
Kabir calls Anupriya and ask her to sit in Riddhima's room wearing her dress . Anupriya does that .
Riddhima : I hope tum ragini ko safe rakho sab se .
Kabir assures her .
Riddhima leaves
After riddhima leaving
Kabir : Yeh ladki kitni badi bewakoof hai . Easy peesy game .
Kabir laughs
Tabhi koi Kabir ke peeche se aata hai aur uske saar pe rod se vaar karta hai .
Aur Kabir usse mud ke dekhne ki koshish karta hai apne sar ko pakad ke.
Jab Kabir uss insaan ko dekh tha hai woh ek mask phena hua hai apne muh ke upar .
Aur woh behosh ho jata hai .
Woh insaan ragini ko leke chala jata hai .
Riddhima reaches her room with no problem .
Just then vansh reaches home
Vansh annoyed
Goes to his room
He sees Riddhima there .
And vansh is shocked
Vansh Riddhima ke pass jata hai
Vansh : waah Riddhima , waah tumhari himmat ki toh koi jawab nahi .
Riddhima looks at vansh with straight face .
Vansh : mujhe nahi laga tha ki tum mein itni himmat hogi , mujhe dhoka dekhe ragini ko baache ne ke baad tum phir mere pass aajao gi.
Riddhima : ek minute , tum unsuccessful hogaye apne joh bhi ragini murder plan mein ?
And for your kind information meine kuch bhi aisa nahi kiya joh tum aab bol rahe ho .
Shyaad bhagwan ne chaha ki ragini tumhare haath se bach jaye .
Waise bhi tumhare iss high security qaid se mein kaha jati.
Riddhima gives a totally annoyed look .
Riddhima leaves the room .
Vansh is in dilema wheather to trust Riddhima or not .
Vansh goes to Ishani , Ishani remembers watching Riddhima in her room , she tells him that woh poore time apne room mein thi .
Vansh calls somebody who is masked , and confirms Riddhima being in her room all the time .
Vansh : (in mind ) yeh kaise hosakta hai , Riddhima apne room mein thi poora waqt aur ragini waha se gayab . Par Riddhima ke alawa ragini ka secret aur kaun jaanta hai .
Kya koi aur toh nahi hai joh ragini ko aur sach ko mujhse door le jaana chahte ho.
Vansh : naaah !! Sweet heart tum shyaad nahi hosakte ho aur ho bhi sakte ho isiliye tum pe mere nazar hamesha rahegi.
Vansh leaves the corridor and entering the room .
He notices Riddhima speaking to someone in the phone .
Riddhima speaking to Kabir as he realises after waking up that somebody hit him and took ragini away .
Riddhima : kya tume usse ko diya ? Koi usko leke chala gaya .Kabir meine socha tha ragini tumhare saath safe rahegi . Tum ek cop ho isiliye tum bohat alert rahoge aur uska dhyaan rakoge lekin tum fail ho chuke ho . Usse vansh ke chungal se baacha ke rakh ne se.
Shyaad vansh ne pata kar liya aur ragini ko leke chala gaya .
Please Kabir ragini ko doondo .
Riddhima declines Kabir call .
Vansh is super angry listening to Riddhima .
He is about to confront her .
Just then Riddhima receives a call .
And vansh hides himself to listen to Riddhima's plan .
Riddhima picks up the call
Riddhima : hello , kya tumne ragini ko pahucha diya jaha pauhchana tha .
Other end : haan
Riddhima : very good . Aab khatam hojayega humara khel.
Riddhima cuts the call . And keeps her phone under the bed cot .
Vansh is really angry to know Riddhima is behind this and she was a spy .
Vansh : Riddhima Kabir ki spy baan ke aayi. Lekin uss ne usse dokha diya . Aur khud he ragini ko leke chali gayi .
Inn sab ka matlab kya ho sakta hai .
Mein yeh tumhare saath kabhi karna nahi chahta Lekin tumhare iss dokhe ne mujhe majboor kar diya yeh karne pe .
Vansh walks in to the room ,takes Riddhima's phone under the bed cot .
And opens her mobile , he notices Riddhima's picture on screen saver .
Riddhima is wearing a denim skirt and a cute black top .
Vansh opens the phone as it doesn't not have any password lock .
It's looks like Riddhima's own mobile which she is using for years .
He opens the call list and notes down the last dialed number .
Vansh leaves the room placing the phone in same place .
Riddhima comes out of the bathroom .
And takes the mobile under the cot and calls somebody .
Vansh on other hand traces the number location with the support of angre .
Vansh and angre leave to find out .
Riddhima notices that vansh not home and him leaving with angre.
She also leaves the home and drives her car which is parked near the vr mansion.
She reaches a dark and shady bungalow in the city .
Vansh and angre with two other men are in the same bungalow they notice Riddhima coming out of the car and hide.
Riddhima comes out of the car.
And enters the bungalow and goes into a room and changes her clothes into a LBD .
She comes out with ragini in wheel chair.
She takes ragini to the big mirror in the hall .
Vansh angre enter the bungalow while the other two stay out .
But are connected with the call.
Vansh and angre watch Riddhima coming down with ragini
Vansh notice Riddhima wearing a different than usual dress again.
Angre asks vansh
Angre : boss kya karna hai aab?
Vansh : kuch bhi nahi .
Vansh : (in mind ) mujhe Riddhima ka poora sach jaan naah hai . Though mein uske mooh se suna chahta tha .Lekin tum ne mujhe majboor kar dia hai Riddhima .
Riddhima after taking ragini to mirror .
She puts her shoulders around ragini .
And smiles
Ragini : ( scared ) tum kaun ho ? Aur chahti kya hon?
Riddhima : marne wale ko hamesha sach he baat te hai . isiliye mein sach bolungi tumhe.
Mein tumhari sautan hun aur mein tumhari jaan chahti hun.
Ragini gets scared
Vansh and angre are shocked with revelation
Angre : boss Riddhima bhabhi aapke liye ragini ko marne toh nahi layi . Kyunki unko lagta hai aap ragini ke saath involved ho .
Vansh still thinking .
Just then a person in middle age arrives at the place .
Riddhima opens a knife and holds it with an ease .
The person enters the hall and goes straight to ragini .
And hugs ragini tightly .
Riddhima walks to the hall with the knife .
Riddhima : mujhe kabhi nahi doond ne nahi aaye . Lekin , iss keliye tum bhagte bhagte aagaye .
Riddhima is enraged with anger.
Goes to ragini with the intent to kill her pointing a knife at her .
As she is going to kill her ragini tries to move a falls down and that person holds her from behind .
Riddhima : ( enraged )mein tumahre tukde tukde kardungi. Mein tumhe mardungi .
Vishwa sirf mera hai mera haq hai uspe . Sirf mein pyaar kar sakti hun usse .aur woh mujhse he pyaar kar sakta hai .
Mein tumhe mar dungi .
Vishwa who is holding her stops her from doing any attack .
Vishwa : riddhima , Riddhima stop it now .
And he throws the knife away from her hand .
Riddhima annoyed at him.
Riddhima : tum mujhe rok rahe ho usse baacha ne , mujhe .
Riddhima puts her hands on vishwa's face.
Tumhe pata hai naah mein tumse kitna pyaar karti hun.
Phir bhi tum uss ladki ke saath kya kar rahi ho .
Tumhare liye meine har maryada thod dia .
Mere bua se shaadi kiya tumne.
Phir bhi tumne mujhe itna pyaar diya ki mein tumhare pyaar mein akhir mein pad he gayi .
Tum mujhe iss ladki ke liye chod doge .
Vishwa infuriated
Vishwa : meine tumhe choda Riddhima , yaad karo Riddhima tum mujhe aachanak se chod kar chali gayi.
Aur dikhi bhi toh aaj dikhi .
Meine tumhe kaha kaha nahi doonda .
Riddhima : dada ji ne mujhe bahar bech diya ,unko pasand nahi hai ki mein tumse baat karu.
Phir bhi mein tumhari pata lagwane keliye .Kabir se dosti ki lekin mein usse khulke kuch bhi pooch nhai sakti kyunki dadu ke khabri har jagah thay .
Meine tume contact karne ki kitni try kiya tha pata hai .
Vishwa : phir bhi tumne vansh rai Singhania se shaadi kar li.
Riddhima : I am sorry , situation aisa hogaya ki mujhe usse shaadi kar na pada .mujhe tum tak jo pauhach naah tha .
I am sorry .
Riddhima cries
Vishwa : it's okay Riddhima .rona nahi .aur ragini toh mere beti hai . Woh tumahre aur mere beech mein kaise aa sakti hai.
Riddhima :( happy and smiles )woh humare beech mein nahi aa sakti , tum sirf mere ho , tum sirf mere ho ??
Riddhima becomes really happy .
Vansh and angre are shocked to see this development
Angre takes a quick , smart move and calls the other men and while Riddhima and vishwa are talking , he signals them to take ragini away to vansh's place .
Riddhima and vishwa turn to ragini and see her missing .
Vishwa is again frustrated to miss ragini.
Vishwa : ragini kaha gayi ?
Riddhima : pata nahi !
Vishwa : tumhe ragini kaha se mili .
Riddhima : ragini kisi ki qaid mein thi waha se laayi mein usse .
Vishwa : tum fikar mat karo bas tum mujhe details becho uss qaid karne wale ko aur mein ragini ko doond ke rahunga.
Vishwa leaves her in that dark and shady bunglow .
Vansh is very furious to know about Riddhima's dokha and is more frustrated to know Riddhima loves that person and he is ragini's father .
Vansh wants to confront Riddhima
But he sees Riddhima breaking down.
Riddhima sits on the floor and puts her both the palms on the face and cries relentlessly.
A person with a black mask on face comes down to Riddhima.
The person hugs Riddhima .
Person : riddh ..
Kya hogaya aab , I know yeh humara last chance tha ragini ki help se vishwa ke khilaf evidences tak pahuch ne ka ,jo barbaad ho chuka hai .
Lekin hum kuch naah kuch kar lengey Riddhima dont you worry .
Riddhima : sab kuch apne hisaab se tha aur mein sach ke bohat paas thi .Lekin kisi ne vishwa ko bol diya ki mein ragini ke saath hun aur mujhe yeh saara natak karna pada .aab mein kya karu rashmika.
Rashmika : tune jo kiya tik kiya. Baazi tere taraf palat di .
Riddhima : nahi , dadu mujhe yeh karne nahi dengey . Isiliye toh unhone mujhe bahaar bech diye kyun ki mein ek dangerous game khel rahi hun.
Woh kabhi nahi chahte thay ki mein vishwa ke pyaar ke peeche pagal wala plan move karu . isiliye un hone mujhe bahar bech diya .
Jab mujhe pata laga Kabir vishwa ke saath kaam karta hai.
Meine faida utaya uska (Kabir) baar baar mere peeche aana .
Lekin uss se koi faida nahi hua aur ulta woh mujhe use karne ki koshish kiya .
Jab mein vr mansion mein ragini ki statue dekha mein usse pehchan gayi , woh koi kaas thi vishwa ki . Pata nahi tha ki beti hai .
Aaj toh Ragini mere saath thi aur usse use kar ke evidence collect kar sakti hun ,aab woh mere saath nahi hai.
Aab mein kya karungi .kaise bachaungi apni family ko uss manipulating rakshas se .
Riddhima cries
Rashmika : chup ho jao Riddhima , humara mehnat zaaya nahi hoga .
Usse hum bahar phek rahenge.
Tumhare saath humare family ke saath kiya gaya har badtameezi ka hisaab lekar rahenge usi ki pyaar ke jaal mein .
Vansh comes up to them
Vansh bewildered
Riddhima sees infront of her vansh is standing .
She gets startled and worries .
And quickly realised vansh took ragini with him and might have heard everything .
Riddhima doesn't know what to say anymore .
Vansh : Riddhima mujhe sab kuch jaan naah hai .
Riddhima stares at vansh .
Riddhima : mein apne chal aur kahani sirf apne dil aur dimak mein rakh thi hun kisi se bhi share nahi karti .
Kyunki agar kisiko pata chal gaya toh mera game samjh jayega. Aur usse bigad dega .
It ends on Riddhima being adamant on not sharing anything with vansh .
And vansh worried about Riddhima's dangerous game plan .
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