FF: Broken I Ch 20 - Pg 147

Posted: 3 years ago

Considering Ridhima wants to reveal Ragini being alive to Kabir, had drafted this OS. Hope you guys like it


Ridhima wants to speak with someone about the doubts of Vansh being a criminal to someone. At this moment there is only one person who can understand her, yet she doesn't know whether she can or not. So she picks the phone and tries to call him. Kabir is on the other side doesn't lift the call. Ridhima tries again, now Kabir picks the call. But Ridhima sees Vansh, so to make Kabir understand why she called, Ridhima says, 'Ragini is alive' which leaves Kabir shocked. 


Kabir immediately calls Anupriya and what both don't know is Vansh left to the office while Ridhima leaves VR Mansion to speak with Kabir and gets shocked to see Anupriya with Kabir.


Kabir: Mom, Ridhima just called me. She said Ragini is alive.


Anurpiya: This girl is making you a fool to save Vansh. If Ragini was alive, why would Vansh do the shradh? 


Kabir: No, mom. Ridhima never lies about such things. I know her. If she is saying Ragini is not dead, then we need to find her and kill her. Therefore, we can put the murderer on Vansh.

 

Anupriya: Does Ridhima know where she is?


Kabir: No, mom. But looks like, Vansh is protecting her. To safeguard Ragini, he said she is dead! That says, even today Vansh loves her. What he doesn't know is Ridhima is also a pawn like Ragini. 


Ridhima is in shock after what she heard from Kabir. So, the secret child of Anupriya is her Kabir. Or say, the Kabir whom she trusted so much. Yes, she said she is not in love with Kabir. However, once she loved him. This mission and wherever she is today is because of this love. 


At this moment, Ridhima feels she can only trust Vansh and reaches to the VR Mansion. She gets to know Vansh is in the study and runs to meet him, then again she faces another shock. 


Angre: How is the planning going Bhai?


Vansh: Ridhima fell into our trap Angre


Angre: Such a fool she is! She is thinking you love her!


Vansh: Love and that orphan? Never. Since day one I know Ridhima is working with Kabir. Kabir never loved Ragini. He used her to take revenge on me. I love Ragini. Ragini is mentally unstable because she learned the truth of Kabir. Ragini should be my Queen, but I kept her in a shady room and portraying as dead because I want her to be alive and safe. When I got to know Kabir loves Ridhima, I felt I need her. I need to give the same pain. I felt Kabir would come to rescue Ridhima while I was playing her. But, Mrs D'Souza flopped everything and tried to kill me. That's when the whole plan changed. Ridhima is a girl who doesn't fall for money or luxuries. Being a waif,  she needs love. So Vansh has showered with love and care. See today, where she is! 


Angre: Amazing game Bhai.


Vansh: I told you Angre, to win something big we need to make the enemy feel like they are winning first. Art of war. Today, Ridhima trusts me. She loves me. She is protecting me from Kabir. Stupid girl! 


Angre: Until when you will be doing this?


Vansh: I need to see Kabir in tears. Looks like, Ridhima didn't break up with him. But, once she does, I will confront him and will put a check to Kabir and Ridhima. 


Angre: What are your plans for Ridhima bhai? 


Vansh: She will turn into another Ragini because of my betrayal. I hate cheaters and yet I'm cheating on her because she deserves it due to Kabir. 


Ridhima doesn't know what to do. She walks away from the VR Mansion. She has faced two biggest betrayals today. One has used her to satisfy his greed while the other is using her to complete his revenge. Ridhima laughs hysterically, while tears are pouring through her eyes. She never asked anything from God other than for a partner who can stand with her. With whom she can share her whole life. She knows, in life, one need to prepared for ups and downs, or it. Yet, she never thought she would be facing such betrayals. Does she even deserve this? First, her parents abandoned her. Why? She doesn't know. Now, she trusted both men. They played so well that she fell for both of them. 


At present, she doesn't know what her destination would be. Seeing the roadway, she remembered how she left at an orphanage. Maybe she belongs to this road. Maybe since the beginning, she is not fit to be part of any one's life or family. She is broken. No wings to fly. No tears left to cry. No smile on her face. She is a living person with no soul. 



Note - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=7#154696529

Chapter 1 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=10#154700411

Chapter 2 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=17#154721400

Chapter 3 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=26#154739158

Chapter 4 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=33#154763395

Chapter 5 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=38#154790539

Chapter 6 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=45#154819632

Chapter 7 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=50

Chapter 8 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=55#154867957

Chapter 9 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=60#154893098

Chapter 10 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=64#154917024

Chapter 11 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=74#154940404

Chapter 12 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=82#154962509

Chapter 13 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=88#154987719

Chapter 14 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=95

Chapter 15 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=103#155055297

Chapter 16 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=113#155079310

Chapter 17 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=125#155123052

Chapter 18 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=134#155165183

Chapter 19 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=140#155190122

Chapter 20 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5187277?pn=147#155206714



Thread 2 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5197552?ri=6&rv=6449

Thread 3 - https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5206973?ri=6&rv=6449

Edited by Abhyudaya - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

I need a continuation of this!

Please don't stop this here, please!!😳

Posted: 3 years ago

Amazing👏👏


Riddhu😭😭

Please continue this one

Grey riddhu darshan kra do please

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Gurikaur_ginni


Amazing👏👏


Riddhu😭😭

Please continue this one

Grey riddhu darshan kra do please


Exactly! Now that Riddhima knows about these two players, she should become the mastermind now and play both of them! Imagine Riddhima actually laying a love trap for Vansh and Vansh actually falling prey for that!

Posted: 3 years ago

Give us part 2 also mujhe dekhna hai vansh aur kabir kaise react karege riddhima ko itna broken dekh ke and try to show some that ki riddhima suicide kregi sab ke saamne aur riddhima kya feel kari hai kitna betray feel kri hai sab ke saamne ye riddhima bolegi plzz aisa kuch likhoge ise story ko continue karo na plzzz

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by dmegha



Exactly! Now that Riddhima knows about these two players, she should become the mastermind now and play both of them! Imagine Riddhima actually laying a love trap for Vansh and Vansh actually falling prey for that!

Sochkar maza aagya

Ek baari k liye toh riddhu vansh k sath khele

Endgame riansh bna dena fir😳

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Uttara98


Give us part 2 also mujhe dekhna hai vansh aur kabir kaise react karege riddhima ko itna broken dekh ke and try to show some that ki riddhima suicide kregi sab ke saamne aur riddhima kya feel kari hai kitna betray feel kri hai sab ke saamne ye riddhima bolegi plzz aisa kuch likhoge ise story ko continue karo na plzzz


I would like it if she uses this as an opportunity to change the game! Aise rone dhone se achha toh yahi hai that she traps them in her web of lies.

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by dmegha


I need a continuation of this!

Please don't stop this here, please!!😳


I will see how to take this forward dear. But, right at moment, it was a just a random thought on how Ridhima will react if she gets back to back betrayals. 

Posted: 3 years ago

This is Amazing, I think Riddu should destroy both these men who played her 


Please do continue



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