Suman Shravan SS | Ilzaam | Chapter 1 Pg 3

Posted: 3 years ago

I L Z A A M


Suman was seated in the dark corridor, with incoherent voices echoing around her tired self. 

Suman Tiwari - accused.

The cannibal behind the white robes.

Mingled with terrorists?



Pulling through sleepless nights and a thousand accusations, she was here - alone and weary. The cell was dirty and smelly with just a beam of light jutting in through the ventilator on the top of the endless gray wall behind her bench.

She kept staring at the floor tiles and the stains on them, waiting for her interrogation.


Within minutes, a man in uniform appeared in front of her. He had a well maintained physique and had tough eyes, with hints of grey shining through his otherwise black hair.

He was followed by two officers from his team.


Suman rose and gave a befitting army salute to the Chief of Army Operations, Lieutenant General Rathore.


Her eyes though, were firmly fixed upon the Captain accompanying the old man.

He pulled a chair and sat, facing her.


"So, Ms. Tiwari. Is silence your final word? I believe you have nothing more to say than what you've already specified?"


"Yes sir!"


Her fierce cry resonated through the empty room. Her hopes were diminishing but her grit was deep rooted, as always.


"Then let us see you in court."

The General left, leaving behind Suman in the solitary company of Captain Shravan Malhotra, the officer in charge of the case.


He walked upto her slowly and remarked,

"Do you realise that the evidence is solid. Assuming in a rare possibility, even if you ain't guilty, you are certainly not innocent."


She nodded, looking right into his eyes.

"You'll soon get to know."

Was all she said.


Shravan smirked and walked away, disappearing into the dark. There was an audible creek of the rusty door followed by a bang. After that, silence.


...


"Captain Shravan, there's an urgent call for you." His secretary informed him.


He lifted the receiver on his table and introduced himself sternly.


"If your life is dear to you, drop the Tiwari-Razak case right now."


He smiled and cut the call, unaffected.


"Who was it?"

Asked Rathore, entering his cabin.


"Nothing Officer, just a trivial cross communication, perhaps."


"Oh well then. Let me give you this news. The girl refuses to open her mouth, so prepare her case file and keep me posted. I'm heading to the Shillong base camp for a supervisory visit."


"Yes sir, Jai Hind!"


Shravan smiled softly and curled his fists.

The day was finally here. The day he'd been waiting for.


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Hello folks!

Just got this idea today morning, when I was going through my old stories.

This will be extremely crisp and short.


The plot is set in an AU with the pre leap portion remaining the same. 

Also there would be some new characters and some old ones in new roles.


Do leave behind your thoughts about it!

Edited by Mannmohanaa - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

I N D E X


Prologue (above)


Chapter One

Edited by Mannmohanaa - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

You're here with a story🥳

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What a wonderful start!

The story seems so intriguing👏 the start itself is making me excited

Suman is accused and behind the bars it seems! But girl is bold and stable on her words

Shravan seems mysterious here

Can't wait for the next chapter but will wait patiently😆

Edited by Pranushka_723 - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Intriguing 

Can't wait to read more 

Posted: 3 years ago

Guys read again, made some changes.

How fast are y'all!🤣

Posted: 3 years ago

man! the plot is so cool... reminds me of a similar track of Sanjivini 2 (i don't remember the names or anything else, just a few promos) where a similar thing happened to the female lead.


tbh, anyone wonders why Shravan is so happy that Suman has gotten arrested!? 


do continue.. would love to read it 😊

Edited by SuVan_EDKV2 - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

OMG!

It's amazing!

Such a wonderful start!

Please update soon! Waiting!

Ah! The way you introduced Shravan and his aura 

Suman's innocence is partially proved in her fierce resolution...

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by MishtiNew


OMG!

It's amazing!

Such a wonderful start!

Please update soon! Waiting!

Ah! The way you introduced Shravan and his aura 

Suman's innocence is partially proved in her fierce resolution...

Yussss! Our Captain boy will rule.

Let's see how the case goes, mamlaa rhoda gadbad hai😆

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Prizi


Intriguing 

Can't wait to read more 

Thank you! <3



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