Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

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hey friends.. hope all doing fine.. stay safe & take care❀️

it's been long.. i was itching to post this concept on MG..πŸ˜›  thought to start it now.. since i couldn't think of other stories than this at the moment.. πŸ˜† 

prologue is below.. do let me know how do you guys like it.. then only proceeds further with 1st chappy.. πŸ˜›

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Prologue




She stood numb...devastated , seems have left thinking about her own life..as the man standing before her filled her partition carelessly ..

Geet looked at him and was ready to cry anytime but control herself as that stubborn she was..

What are you doing, bete?? You are not in your senses right now.. the lady who has just barge inside , shook her hard trying to put some senses in her ..but she was not ready to budge today like always.. she was stubborn and glue to her decision.

Asked him to put wedding chain on me.. she said in flat tone.


So here is it guys.. it's only trailer...smiley2 

Do let me know hows it... What do you think... waiting for your comments..smiley17

After lots of comments only I will post 1st Chappy...smiley2 




INDEX


CHAPTER1

CHAPTER 2

CHAPTER 3

CHAPTER 4

CHAPTER 5

CHAPTER 6

CHAPTER 7

CHAPTER 8

CHAPTER 9

CHAPTER 10

CHAPTER 11

CHAPTER 12

CHAPTER 13

CHAPTER 14

CHAPTER 15

CHAPTER 16

CHAPTER 17

CHAPTER 18

CHAPTER 19

CHAPTER 20

CHAPTER 21

CHAPTER 22

CHAPTER 23






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Edited by Mg13 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Congratulations for new story nice prologue 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice another story.. not getting much time but definitely catching up many chapters at once.. even waiting for Maid’s upcoming chapters. So this was interesting, wondering if Geet or Maan either of them likes the other. It looks like an unwanted marriage happening. Waiting for next

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Posted: 3 years ago

Congrats on the new FF

lovely banner....

captivating prologue 

so they are married....

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congrats for new story

interesting

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Congratulations for new story

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Posted: 3 years ago

Congrats for new maaneet story 

Nice prologue 

Waiting for next update 

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Yay ek aur story.... πŸ‘πŸ˜‹ congrats Di hopefully you'll shine bright like always.... Waiting for what this story is about... 

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Posted: 3 years ago

New story... 

Sounds interesting... 

Prologue... 

Maan is that person  who filled her partition... ?


Geet asking him to put wedding chain? 

What's going on? 

Update soon...