I dedicate this story to my dearest friend Piyali and TeluguChokri who wanted me to write a story on Harshad Chopra-Tejasswi.I dedicate this to my friend Piyali again for giving me the plot of the Punjabi movie Bambukat for writing this story.I have made lots of changes.Hope you don't mind.
Thank you Piyali for the beautiful edits.
Thank you Piyali for the cute banners too.
Two little girls are seen playing...
One girl was very fair.Her skin was shining like a marble.She was Nivedita.The other girl was dusky.She was Dhara.
Suddenly their mother Sharmishta called Dhara.
"Dhara...come inside".
Dhara went inside the house.
Sharmishta:How many times I told you not to play outside?If sun rays fall on you,you will become darker.You won't get any boy to get married.
Dhara's face became dull.
Dhara:Then what about Nivi di?
Sharmishta:Nivi is very fair.Just because she stands outside for some time her complexion won't change.But you will lose your complexion completely.So you don't play outside.
Dhara became upset.
Sharmishta:You come with me to the kitchen and learn cooking.At least seeing your cooking skill some one will marry you.
Dhara became dull.
She thought:When all the girls of my age are playing,I am learning cooking in the kitchen.Is everything because of my complexion?
Years passed ....
We can see Nivedita getting married to a rich man named Anupam.
Their parents Shekhar and Sharmishta are very happy.
Somebody told Sharmishta:You all are very lucky Sharmishta.Your eldest daughter got a handsome rich husband.
Sharmishta smiled:Our daughter Nivedita is so fair and beautiful that Anupam fell for her at first sight itself.
Anupam's mother Mohini was bathed with jewelry.
Mohini caressed Nivedita.
Mohini:We are the richest family in our area.Our son Anupam got the most beautiful ...the fairest girl in this village.We are proud of that.Nivedita may not be used to wearing jewelry like me.But I will make my daughter in law look like a Princess by making her wear the most expensive jewelry.
Nivedita smiled.Everyone got jealous of Nivedita while Shekhar,Sharmishta,their son Ronit and Dhara smiled.
Dhara:Nivi di is lucky to get Anupam Jiju.
(Thank you Piyali for giving me this picture).
Many boys came and saw Dhara.But they rejected her because of her skin colour.
Sharmishta got Dhara dressed up.
Sharmishta:You look nice.
Sharmishta hugged Dhara emotionally.
Sharmishta:I hope this boy likes you and does'nt reject you like other boys.
He is not a rich boy like Anupam.But he belongs to a nice middle class family like us.The boy runs a small grocery shop.But it is fine.
Dhara seemed to be disinterested as she had no hope as she was used to getting rejected by boys.
Finally the boy's family reached.
Sharmishta praised Dhara for her cooking skill in front of them.
The boy Gaurav looked at Dhara with a smile.Dhara was expressionless as she knew that she was going to be rejected by him also.
Sharmishta showed her actions to smile.Dhara smiled artificially.
She thought:This man is good looking and fair.So it's obvious that he wants a fair skinned girl.He will not like me for sure.
Suddenly Gaurav said:I liked the girl.
Dhara was shocked to the core.Sharmishta and Shekhar's happiness had no bounds.
The marriage got fixed.
Dhara was thinking of Gaurav.
Dhara:I can't believe that a handsome man like Gauravji is marrying me.But how?How did he like me?
Sharmishta:You are lucky that you are getting a handsome fair man as your husband.So always be well dressed.He should be impressed by your looks.
Dhara became dull:Is a girl identified only by her looks?
Sharmishta:Unfortunately in our orthodox narrow minded society fair skinned girls are on demand for marriage.
Dhara became upset.
Gaurav-Dhara sat on the mandap.
Gaurav could not take his eyes off her while she lowered her eye lashes to ignore him.
Seeing her not even looking at him he felt bad.
He thought:Why Dhara is not even looking at me?Does'nt she like me?
They started following all the wedding rituals.While taking saath phere Gaurav was losing his peace of mind thinking whether Dhara was married to him without her wish.
Suddenly he thought:No.I don't think.I am having unnecessary thoughts.I don't think Dhara's parents are strict enough to make her marry me forcefully.
He got some relief.
He tied the nuptial chain around her neck.
Then he applied vermilion on the parting of her hair.
Dhara was sitting in the bedroom.Gaurav entered the room.She got up from the bed.
Gaurav:Sit..sit.You don't need to get up when I come near you.
Dhara was silent.
Gaurav:You sit Dhara.
She sat on the bed.
Gaurav:I think you are tired.You rest.
Dhara:Ji..Can I ask you something?
Gaurav:Yes sure.
Dhara:Why did you marry me?
Gaurav:What does it mean?I did'nt understand.
Dhara:You are fair and handsome.You could have married a fair girl.Why did you marry me?
Gaurav:First of all skin colour is not important to me.I don't find anything wrong with your complexion.When I saw you itself I felt that you are very beautiful.
Dhara was stunned.
Dhara:You called me beautiful?You are making fun of me.
Gaurav:No,I am not making fun of you.
Dhara:No.You are making fun of me by your sarcastic comment on my looks.I know.
Dhara who was really hurt turned off her face.
Gaurav became dull.
He thought:Oh no.How will I make her understand that it was not a sarcastic comment,but I really meant that she is pretty?
Dhara impressed her parents in law with her cooking skill.
Gaurav was also impressed.
Gaurav:Your hands are magical.You cook so well.
Dhara:Since childhood I have been learning cooking.Because my mother said that since I am not fair,cooking is the only way to stay in my husband's heart.
(Thank you Piyali for giving me this picture).
Gaurav became dull.
He thought:Dhara is having inferiority complex as she has been tagged as a dusky girl by our stupid society.Poor girl.
They got their wedding album.
Dhara was going through the wedding photographs.Gaurav sat near her.
Gaurav:May I also?
Dhara gave him the album.
Gaurav:We will see this together.
He kept the album on both their laps.So they both could see the photographs comfortably.
Gaurav:In the wedding attire you looked like a Princess.
Dhara looked at him in disbelief.He was smiling.But she ignored it.
She thought:He keeps lying that I look pretty?Why?
Dhara was in the kitchen.Gaurav went near her.
Gaurav:Can I join you?
Dhara was shocked.
Dhara:But...you are a man.
Gaurav:I am not narrow minded to think that men will lose manliness if they cook.I enjoy cooking.
Dhara was surprised.
She thought:He is so different.
Gaurav:So can I join you?We will cook together.
Dhara smiled nodding.
They both started cooking together.
Unknowingly they started having fun in the kitchen.
Their friendship started that moment without their knowledge.
Days passed....
Gaurav gave her a saree.
Gaurav:I bought this saree for you.Sorry,I could not afford a silk saree.
Dhara smiled seeing the saree.
Dhara:You bought a saree for me with your hard earned money.That's more than enough for me.I never wish to wear costly sarees daily like Nivi di.I prefer simple clothes.This saree is very pretty.I loved it.
Gaurav smiled happily.
Gaurav:Can I see you in this saree?
She gave him a node with a smile.
Dhara wore the saree and came.Gaurav was mesmerized by her beauty.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe
Gaurav:You don't know how beautiful you are Dhara.
Dhara did not know how to react.
Dhara:But I...
Gaurav:I told you that skin colour does not define beauty.I don't believe that fair skinned girls are more beautiful.In my eyes you are more beautiful than anyone else.Trust me.
She started blushing.
Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi
He smiled seeing her blush.
Gaurav-Dhara went to the movie theatre and enjoyed watching a movie.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
They spent time on the beach.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe
Dhara was thinking of Gaurav and blushing.
Dhara wore a nice saree.She beautified her eyes with kohl.She wore a bindi and waited for Gaurav to come.
Gaurav came.She blushed seeing him.He noticed that Dhara has dressed up.
Ho tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke Dekhti hoon ab kayee Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Gaurav:You have dressed up so well.
She smiled.
He went near her and looked at her deeply.
Gaurav:You dressed up for me.Right?
She blushed and nodded her head.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe
Gaurav smiled:Why did you dress up for me?
She became shy.
Gaurav smiled.
Chahaton ka mazaa, faasalon mein nahin Aa chupa loon tumhe hauslon mein kahin
He cupped her face in his palms.
Gaurav:Can I tell you something?When I saw you for the first time itself I fell for you.It was love at first sight for me.
She was surprised.
Sab se upar likha, hai tere naam ko Khwaishon se jude silsilon mein kahin
Gaurav:I love you Dhara.
She felt goosebumps all over her body when he confessed his love.
Khwaishein milne ki tumse, khwaishein milne ki tumse Roz hoti hai nayi Mere dil ki jeet meri maat ban gayi Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Gaurav:Now tell me why you dressed up.
She was blushing to the core.
Dhara:Because I wanted to dress up for the man I love.
He was very happy.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe
Gaurav still asked "What do you mean?" though he understood what she meant to say to make her confess her love for him.
Dhara:I love you Gauravji.
His happiness had no limit.
Zindagi bewafa hai yeh maana magar Chod kar raah mein jaoge tum agar Cheen launga main aasman se tumhe Soona hoga na yeh, do dilon ka nagar
Dhara:After you entered my life,I feel complete.
Gaurav:I also feel complete with your entry in my life.
They shared a romantic smile.
Raunke hain dil ke dar pe, raunke hain dil ke dar pe Dhadkane hain surmayi Meri kismat bhi tumhari, saath ban gayi Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi
He scooped her in his arms and twirled around.
They had a romantic embrace.
Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke Dekhti hoon ab kayee Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Then they came closer closing the distance between them.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe(Once upon a time in Mumbai).
Gaurav-Dhara were having a happy married life.
Ronit's marriage got fixed with Shivani.
Gaurav-Dhara travelled to Dhara's place by a second hand bike.
The same time Anupam,Nivedita and family arrived there in a luxurious car.
The people around her were gossiping.
"The eldest daughter's husband has got a car.But the youngest daughter is coming by a normal bike.Shekhar and Sharmishta got a rich son in law as well as a middle class son in law".
Gaurav who overheard this became dull.
Nivedita and Dhara hugged each other happily.
Dhara:How are you di?
Nivedita:I am leading a luxurious life Dhara.I am really enjoying it.What about you Dhara?
Dhara:I am very happy Di.Both Gauravji and his parents are very loving.
Nivedita smiled:I am very happy for you.
They smiled.
Dhara and Gaurav gave him a show piece as a gift.
Ronit:Wow..it's beautiful.
Anupam and Nivedita gifted him a costly roller watch.
Ronit:Wow..I always wanted a watch like this.Thank you so much Nivi and jiju.
They smiled.
Mohini:You are my son Anupam's brother in law.We will give you the best.My husband Moloy and I are giving you a honeymoon ticket to Paris too.
Ronit and everyone else was surprised.
Ronit:Paris!I can't even dream of it.
Mohini:Start dreaming as it's going to be a reality now.
Ronit:Thank you so much.It is the best wedding gift I could get.
They all smiled.
Dhara smiled as her brother got what he wanted.But Gaurav looked dull.
Gaurav thought:Only expensive gifts have value.The gift which we gave Ronit with love has less value before Anupam's family's expensive gift.
He felt bad.Dhara who understood it held his hand.
Dhara:Don't take it into heart Gauravji.
He gave her a pale smile.
Dhara,Nivedita,Ronit were having a nice family time with their parents.
Everyone noticed that Nivedita was wearing costly decorated sarees and a lot of gold ornaments.
Somebody said:Nivedita...you re wearing so many costly ornaments.
Mohini:She has to wear them as she is our daughter in law.She is not less than a Queen.My son Anupam and I give her gold as gifts,not small gifts which middle class people give their daughter in law or wife.
Gaurav became really dull.
He thought:Indirectly Mohiniji was taunting me.But I don't care.
Some people were talking over there.
"Nivedita's husband and parents in law are giving her costly saree and ornaments.But Dhara's husband and family are giving her artificial ornaments.Poor Dhara!"
Gaurav who over heard this could not take it anymore.
Gaurav thought:Let others taunt me.But my Dhara is becoming small before others.I can't let it happen.She also deserves all this.I should also get her something expensive and she should be wearing it on Ronit's wedding.
Edited by jasminerahul - 3 years ago[QUOTE=jasminerahul]
I dedicate this story to my dearest friend Piyali and TeluguChokri who wanted me to write a story on Harshad Chopra-Tejasswi.I dedicate this to my friend Piyali again for giving me the plot of the Punjabi movie Bambukat for writing this story.I have made lots of changes.Hope you don't mind.
Thank you Piyali for the beautiful edits.
Thank you Piyali for the cute banners too.
🔴 Awww Thanks a lot for dedication, Don't say so much thank you na 😘
🔴Jasmine, these are the first one's I send you without our name 😅
Two little girls are seen playing...
One girl was very fair.Her skin was shining like a marble.She was Nivedita.The other girl was dusky.She was Dhara.
Suddenly their mother Sharmishta called Dhara.
"Dhara...come inside".
Dhara went inside the house.
Sharmishta:How many times I told you not to play outside?If sun rays fall on you,you will become darker.You won't get any boy to get married.
Dhara's face became dull.
Dhara:Then what about Nivi di?
🔴Awww, My poor Swettie
Sharmishta:Nivi is very fair.Just because she stands outside for some time her complexion won't change.But you will lose your complexion completely.So you don't play outside.
🔴I am so happy to see sharmishta as her mother, arey haan sach...She also played Harshad's Mom, Waoh and this little girl is cutie
Dhara became upset.
Sharmishta:You come with me to the kitchen and learn cooking.At least seeing your cooking skill some one will marry you.
Dhara became dull.
She thought:When all the girls of my age are playing,I am learning cooking in the kitchen.Is everything because of my complexion?
🔴 Poor Girl...😔
Years passed ....
We can see Nivedita getting married to a rich man named Anupam.
Their parents Shekhar and Sharmishta are very happy.
Somebody told Sharmishta:You all are very lucky Sharmishta.Your eldest daughter got a handsome rich husband.
Sharmishta smiled:Our daughter Nivedita is so fair and beautiful that Anupam fell for her at first sight itself.
Anupam's mother Mohini was bathed with jewelry
🔴Haha, Perfect words to describe her 🤣
Mohini caressed Nivedita.
Mohini:We are the richest family in our area.Our son Anupam got the most beautiful ...the fairest girl in this village.We are proud of that.Nivedita may not be used to wearing jewelry like me.But I will make my daughter in law look like a Princess by making her wear the most expensive jewelry.
🔴 Mohini is so obsessed with jewellery and fairness, chote se dialogue mein sirf inhi ki batei ki 🤪
Nivedita smiled.Everyone got jealous of Nivedita while Shekhar,Sharmishta,their son Ronit and Dhara smiled.
Dhara:Nivi di is lucky to get Anupam Jiju.
(Thank you Piyali for giving me this picture).
🔴 Bas no problem na jasmine, Itna thank you?
Many boys came and saw Dhara.But they rejected her because of her skin colour.
🔴Huh
Sharmishta got Dhara dressed up.
Sharmishta:You look nice.
Sharmishta hugged Dhara emotionally.
Sharmishta:I hope this boy likes you and does'nt reject you like other boys.
🔴 Is this Ragini she is hugging? I have never found Sharmishta-Ragu scenes even when I try hard for ff's
He is not a rich boy like Anupam.But he belongs to a nice middle class family like us.The boy runs a small grocery shop.But it is fine.
🔴 I like her sweet innocent care for Dhara and also understand why she feels the way she does, society 😒
Dhara seemed to be disinterested as she had no hope as she was used to getting rejected by boys.
Finally the boy's family reached.
Sharmishta praised Dhara for her cooking skill in front of them.
The boy Gaurav looked at Dhara with a smile.Dhara was expressionless as she knew that she was going to be rejected by him also.
Sharmishta showed her actions to smile.Dhara smiled artificially.
🔴 Awwwww, My laado😵( Will continue in next comment)
She thought:This man is good looking and fair.So it's obvious that he wants a fair skinned girl.He will not like me for sure.
Suddenly Gaurav said:I liked the girl.
Dhara was shocked to the core.Sharmishta and Shekhar's happiness had no bounds.
The marriage got fixed.
🔴Yippe...Wedding bells
Dhara was thinking of Gaurav.
Dhara:I can't believe that a handsome man like Gauravji is marrying me.But how?How did he like me?
Sharmishta:You are lucky that you are getting a handsome fair man as your husband.So always be well dressed.He should be impressed by your looks.
Dhara became dull:Is a girl identified only by her looks?
🔴Oh, Dhara might have just thought something good but Sharmishta's words again changed her thoughts😔 and her question is so valid infact for both genders though she is anyways beautiful 😍
Sharmishta:Unfortunately in our orthodox narrow minded society fair skinned girls are on demand for marriage.
🔴 So true for even today...On demand, the society really treats girls like objects and am happy Sharmishta understands this but of course, can't fight the society
Dhara became upset.
Gaurav-Dhara sat on the mandap.
🔴 Sachi kahun, This is my favourite edit( Stop being a parrot Piyali)
Gaurav could not take his eyes off her while she lowered her eye lashes to ignore him.
🔴Aise mat karo
Seeing her not even looking at him he felt bad.
He thought:Why Dhara is not even looking at me?Does'nt she like me?
🔴Awwww, My sweetheart
They started following all the wedding rituals.While taking saath phere Gaurav was losing his peace of mind thinking whether Dhara was married to him without her wish.
🔴 Awww, He is such a sweetheart, thinking about Dhara's welfare all along
Suddenly he thought:No.I don't think.I am having unnecessary thoughts.I don't think Dhara's parents are strict enough to make her marry me forcefully.
He got some relief.
🔴Finally and thankfully he didn't misunderstood anything, he to has to clear her misunderstandings
He tied the nuptial chain around her neck.
Then he applied vermilion on the parting of her hair.
Dhara was sitting in the bedroom.Gaurav entered the room.She got up from the bed.
Gaurav:Sit..sit.You don't need to get up when I come near you.
Dhara was silent.
Gaurav:You sit Dhara.
She sat on the bed.
Gaurav:I think you are tired.You rest.
Dhara:Ji..Can I ask you something?
Gaurav:Yes sure.
Dhara:Why did you marry me?
Gaurav:What does it mean?I did'nt understand.
Dhara:You are fair and handsome.You could have married a fair girl.Why did you marry me?
Gaurav:First of all skin colour is not important to me.I don't find anything wrong with your complexion.When I saw you itself I felt that you are very beautiful.
Dhara was stunned.
Dhara:You called me beautiful?You are making fun of me.
Gaurav:No.You are making fun of me by your sarcastic comment on my looks.I know.
Dhara who was really hurt turned off her face.
Gaurav became dull.
He thought:Oh no.How will I make her understand that it was not a sarcastic comment,but I really meant that she is pretty?
Dhara impressed her parents in law with her cooking skill.
Gaurav was also impressed.
Gaurav:Your hands are magical.You cook so well.
Dhara:Since childhood I have been learning cooking.Because my mother said that since I am not fair,cooking is the only way to stay in my husband's heart.
(Thank you Piyali for giving me this picture).
Gaurav became dull.
He thought:Dhara is having inferiority complex as she has been tagged as a dusky girl by our stupid society.Poor girl.
They got their wedding album.
Dhara was going through the wedding photographs.Gaurav sat near her.
Gaurav:May I also?
Dhara gave him the album.
Gaurav:We will see this together.
He kept the album on both their laps.So they both could see the photographs comfortably.
Gaurav:In the wedding attire you looked like a Princess.
Dhara looked at him in disbelief.He was smiling.But she ignored it.
She thought:He keeps lying that I look pretty?Why?
Dhara was in the kitchen.Gaurav went near her.
Gaurav:Can I join you?
Dhara was shocked.
Dhara:But...you are a man.
Gaurav:I am not narrow minded to think that men will lose manliness if they cook.I enjoy cooking.
Dhara was surprised.
She thought:He is so different.
Gaurav:So can I join you?We will cook together.
Dhara smiled nodding.
They both started cooking together.
Unknowingly they started having fun in the kitchen.
Their friendship started that moment without their knowledge.
Days passed....
Gaurav gave her a saree.
Gaurav:I bought this saree for you.Sorry,I could not afford a silk saree.
Dhara smiled seeing the saree.
Dhara:You bought a saree for me with your hard earned money.That's more than enough for me.I never wish to wear costly sarees daily like Nivi di.I prefer simple clothes.This saree is very pretty.I loved it.
Gaurav smiled happily.
Gaurav:Can I see you in this saree?
She gave him a node with a smile.
Dhara wore the saree and came.Gaurav was mesmerized by her beauty.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe
Gaurav:You don't know how beautiful you are Dhara.
Dhara did not know how to react.
Dhara:But I...
Gaurav:I told you that skin colour does not define beauty.I don't believe that fair skinned girls are more beautiful.In my eyes you are more beautiful than anyone else.Trust me.
She started blushing.
Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi
He smiled seeing her blush.
Gaurav-Dhara went to the movie theatre and enjoyed watching a movie.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
The spent time on the beach.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe
Dhara was thinking of Gaurav and blushing.
Dhara wore a nice saree.She beautified her eyes with kohl.She wore a bindi and waited for Gaurav to come.
Gaurav came.She blushed seeing him.He noticed that Dhara has dressed up.
Ho tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke Dekhti hoon ab kayee Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Gaurav:You have dressed up so well.
She smiled.
He went near her and looked at her deeply.
Gaurav:You dressed up for me.Right?
She blushed and nodded her head.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe
Gaurav smiled:Why did you dress up for me?
She became shy.
Gaurav smiled.
Chahaton ka mazaa, faasalon mein nahin Aa chupa loon tumhe hauslon mein kahin
He cupped her face in his palms.
Gaurav:Can I tell you something?When I saw you for the first time itself I fell for you.It was love at first sight for me.
She was surprised.
Sab se upar likha, hai tere naam ko Khwaishon se jude silsilon mein kahin
Gaurav:I love you Dhara.
She felt goosebumps all over her body when he confessed his love.
Khwaishein milne ki tumse, khwaishein milne ki tumse Roz hoti hai nayi Mere dil ki jeet meri maat ban gayi Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Gaurav:Now tell me why you dressed up.
She was blushing to the core.
Dhara:Because I wanted to dress up for the man I love.
He was very happy.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe
Gaurav still asked "What do you mean?" though he understood what she meant to say to make her confess her love for him.
Dhara:I love you Gauravji.
His happiness had no limit.
Zindagi bewafa hai yeh maana magar Chod kar raah mein jaoge tum agar Cheen launga main aasman se tumhe Soona hoga na yeh, do dilon ka nagar
Dhara:After you entered my life,I feel complete.
Gaurav:I also feel complete with your entry in my life.
They shared a romantic smile.
Raunke hain dil ke dar pe, raunke hain dil ke dar pe Dhadkane hain surmayi Meri kismat bhi tumhari, saath ban gayi Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi
He scooped her in his arms and twirled around.
They had a romantic embrace.
Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke Dekhti hoon ab kayee Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Then they came closer closing the distance between them.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe(Once upon a time in Mumbai).
Gaurav-Dhara were having a happy married life.
Edited by .Piyali.. - 3 years agoDhara was sitting in the bedroom.Gaurav entered the room.She got up from the bed.
Gaurav:Sit..sit.You don't need to get up when I come near you.
Dhara was silent.
Gaurav:You sit Dhara.
She sat on the bed.
Gaurav:I think you are tired.You rest.
Dhara:Ji..Can I ask you something?
Gaurav:Yes sure.
Dhara:Why did you marry me?
Gaurav:What does it mean?I did'nt understand.
Dhara:You are fair and handsome.You could have married a fair girl.Why did you marry me?
Gaurav:First of all skin colour is not important to me.I don't find anything wrong with your complexion.When I saw you itself I felt that you are very beautiful.
Dhara was stunned.
Dhara:You called me beautiful?You are making fun of me.
🔴Oh, No Dharu, You are beautiful
Gaurav:No.You are making fun of me by your sarcastic comment on my looks.I know.
🔴 Awww, No you are also handsome🤣
Dhara who was really hurt turned off her face.
Gaurav became dull.
He thought:Oh no.How will I make her understand that it was not a sarcastic comment,but I really meant that she is pretty?
🔴Jasmine, Is there some mistakr here? I guess you mentioned Gaurav's namr in Dhara's dialogur above
Dhara impressed her parents in law with her cooking skill.
Gaurav was also impressed.
Gaurav:Your hands are magical.You cook so well.
🔴Perfect Pic
Dhara:Since childhood I have been learning cooking.Because my mother said that since I am not fair,cooking is the only way to stay in my husband's heart.
🔴Awww my girl
(Thank you Piyali for giving me this picture).
🔴Bas, Now no more thank you's 😠....Please ( puppy eyes)
Gaurav became dull.
He thought:Dhara is having inferiority complex as she has been tagged as a dusky girl by our stupid society.Poor girl.
They got their wedding album.
Dhara was going through the wedding photographs.Gaurav sat near her.
Gaurav:May I also?
Dhara gave him the album.
Gaurav:We will see this together.
He kept the album on both their laps.So they both could see the photographs comfortably.
Gaurav:In the wedding attire you looked like a Princess.
Dhara looked at him in disbelief.He was smiling.But she ignored it.
She thought:He keeps lying that I look pretty?Why?
🔴Simple, He isn't lying sweetheart and Gaurav is truly Love 😍😍
Dhara was in the kitchen.Gaurav went near her.
Gaurav:Can I join you?
Dhara was shocked.
Dhara:But...you are a man.
Gaurav:I am not narrow minded to think that men will lose manliness if they cook.I enjoy cooking.
Dhara was surprised.
She thought:He is so different.
Gaurav:So can I join you?We will cook together.
Dhara smiled nodding.
They both started cooking together.
Unknowingly they started having fun in the kitchen.
Their friendship started that moment without their knowledge.
🔴Yippi, Finally friendship started, Gaurav is absolutely Love
Days passed....
Gaurav gave her a saree.
Gaurav:I bought this saree for you.Sorry,I could not afford a silk saree.
🔴Oho, Now you don't have an inferiority complex dude
Dhara smiled seeing the saree.
🔴First time, am so happy
Dhara:You bought a saree for me with your hard earned money.That's more than enough for me.I never wish to wear costly sarees daily like Nivi di.I prefer simple clothes.This saree is very pretty.I loved it.
🔴Such a sweet and simple dialogue but it is Love
Gaurav smiled happily.
🔴Perfect Pic
Gaurav:Can I see you in this saree?
She gave him a node with a smile.
Dhara wore the saree and came.Gaurav was mesmerized by her beauty.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe,
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe,
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe
Gaurav:You don't know how beautiful you are Dhara.
Dhara did not know how to react.
Dhara:But I...
Gaurav:I told you that skin colour does not define beauty.I don't believe that fair skinned girls are more beautiful.In my eyes you are more beautiful than anyone else.Trust me.
She started blushing.
🔴Awwwie 😍😍😌
Tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi
He smiled seeing her blush.
Gaurav-Dhara went to the movie theatre and enjoyed watching a movie.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe,
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumheThe spent time on the beach.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe,
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe
Dhara was thinking of Gaurav and blushing.
Dhara wore a nice saree.She beautified her eyes with kohl.She wore a bindi and waited for Gaurav to come.
Gaurav came.She blushed seeing him.He noticed that Dhara has dressed up.
Ho tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke
Dekhti hoon ab kayee
Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Gaurav:You have dressed up so well.
She smiled.
He went near her and looked at her deeply.
Gaurav:You dressed up for me.Right?
She blushed and nodded her head.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe,
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe,
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe
Gaurav smiled:Why did you dress up for me?
She became shy.
Gaurav smiled.
Chahaton ka mazaa, faasalon mein nahin
Aa chupa loon tumhe hauslon mein kahin
He cupped her face in his palms.
Gaurav:Can I tell you something?When I saw you for the first time itself I fell for you.It was love at first sight for me.
She was surprised.
🔴Awwwwwwwwwwwww
Sab se upar likha, hai tere naam ko
Khwaishon se jude silsilon mein kahin
Gaurav:I love you Dhara.
She felt goosebumps all over her body when he confessed his love.
Khwaishein milne ki tumse, khwaishein milne ki tumse
Roz hoti hai nayi
Mere dil ki jeet meri maat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Gaurav:Now tell me why you dressed up.
She was blushing to the core.
Dhara:Because I wanted to dress up for the man I love.
He was very happy.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe,
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe,
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe
Gaurav still asked "What do you mean?" though he understood what she meant to say to make her confess her love for him.
Dhara:I love you Gauravji.
His happiness had no limit.
Zindagi bewafa hai yeh maana magar
Chod kar raah mein jaoge tum agar
Cheen launga main aasman se tumhe
Soona hoga na yeh, do dilon ka nagar
Dhara:After you entered my life,I feel complete.
Gaurav:I also feel complete with your entry in my life.
They shared a romantic smile.
Raunke hain dil ke dar pe, raunke hain dil ke dar pe
Dhadkane hain surmayi
Meri kismat bhi tumhari, saath ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Ishq mazhab, ishq meri zaat ban gayi
He scooped her in his arms and twirled around.
They had a romantic embrace.
Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke
Dekhti hoon ab kayee
Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi
Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi
Then came closer closing the distance between them.
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe,
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe,
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe,
Honthon pe sajaya tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe
Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe,
Sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe(Once upon a time in Mumbai).
Gaurav-Dhara were having a happy married life.
🔴Finally par mujhe toh pata hai na storm ka😔
Ronit's marriage got fixed with Shivani.
Gaurav-Dhara travelled to Dhara's place by a second hand bike.
🔴Oh🤔
The same time Anupam,Nivedita and family arrived there in a luxurious car.
🔴Ohk😁
The people around her were gossiping.
"The eldest daughter's husband has got a car.But the youngest daughter is coming by a normal bike.Shekhar and Sharmishta got a rich son in law as well as a middle class son in law".
🔴Tumhe kya 😠
Gaurav who overheard this became dull.
🔴Awww, My poor Guy
Nivedita and Dhara hugged each other happily.
Dhara:How are you di?
Nivedita:I am leading a luxurious life Dhara.I am really enjoying it.What about you Dhara?
🔴Nivedita bhi na, Mohini influence coming
Dhara:I am very happy Di.Both Gauravji and his parents are very loving.
🔴Thats like my Dhara
Nivedita smiled:I am very happy for you.
They smiled.
Dhara and Gaurav gave him a show piece as a gift.
Ronit:Wow..it's beautiful.
Anupam and Nivedita gifted him a costly roller watch.
Ronit:Wow..I always wanted a watch like this.Thank you so much Nivi and jiju.
They smiled.
🔴Nice pic, which scene is it from?
Mohini:You are my son Anupam's brother in law.We will give you the best.My husband Moloy and I are giving you a honeymoon ticket to Paris too.
🔴Wha----t? Thats huge aunty
Ronit and everyone else was surprised.
Ronit:Paris!I can't even dream of it.
Mohini:Start dreaming as it's going to be a reality now.
Ronit:Thank you so much.It is the best wedding gift I could get.
They all smiled.
Dhara smiled as her brother got what he wanted.But Gaurav looked dull.
🔴Oops
Gaurav thought:Only expensive gifts have value.The gift which we gave Ronit with love has less value before Anupam's family's expensive gift.
🔴Yup, the times are such, money is valued more than emotions sadly
He felt bad.Dhara who understood it held his hand.
Dhara:Don't take it into heart Gauravji.
He gave her a pale smile.
Dhara,Nivedita,Ronit were having a nice family time with their parents.
Everyone noticed that Nivedita was wearing costly decorated sarees and a lot of gold ornaments.
Somebody said:Nivedita...you re wearing so many costly ornaments.
Mohini:She has to wear them as she is our daughter in law.She is not less than a Queen.My son Anupam and I give her gold as gifts,not small gifts which middle class people give their daughter in law or wife.
🔴Show off, Hatto na
Gaurav became really dull.
He thought:Indirectly Mohiniji was taunting me.But I don't care.
🔴Haina, Mujhe bhi laga, Bad aunty
Some people were talking over there.
"Nivedita's husband and parents in law are giving her costly saree and ornaments.But Dhara's husband and family are giving her artificial ornaments.Poor Dhara!"
🔴But Real Love and not like Mohini's artificial love so don't worry people, worry for yourself 😑
Gaurav who over heard this could not take it anymore.
Gaurav thought:Let others taunt me.But my Dhara is becoming small before others.I can't let it happen.She also deserves all this.I should also get her something expensive and she should be wearing it on Ronit's wedding.
🔴🙄 Abb mein kya bolun hehe
Amazing start jasmine, I sooo soo so enjoyed reading it...specially how Gaurav changed Dhara's mind slowly and steadily and made her believe he truly Loved her, also he is adorable...i just enjoyed his characte so much throughout the part, His thinking, behaviour...everything is love, he might be small in income but really huge in heart with acceptance of every beautiful ideology, I truly loved him and Dhara of course, Poor girl...had to go through mental agony throughout her childhood but am happy she finally got a husband like Gaurav...I loved all their scenes but the confession scene was beautiful...I loved all the dialogues so much, Their innocence, cuteness awww...I liked all supporting characters except Mohini of course, I already dislike her...aage to pata nahi kya ho hoga, Let wait and see, excited for next part, Thanks a lot lot lot for dedication 😘 and of course writing the story on the couple on my request
Thanks a lot 4 supporting me.
Yes by mistake I wrote the wrong name.Thank u 4 informing me.
I think AnuVi r smiling in the pic seeing Anupre.
I guess it's Swara with Sharmishta in the pic.
Amazing start jasmine, I sooo soo so enjoyed reading it...specially how Gaurav changed Dhara's mind slowly and steadily and made her believe he truly Loved her, also he is adorable...i just enjoyed his characte so much throughout the part, His thinking, behaviour...everything is love, he might be small in income but really huge in heart with acceptance of every beautiful ideology, I truly loved him and Dhara of course, Poor girl...had to go through mental agony throughout her childhood but am happy she finally got a husband like Gaurav...I loved all their scenes but the confession scene was beautiful...I loved all the dialogues so much, Their innocence, cuteness awww...I liked all supporting characters except Mohini of course, I already dislike her...aage to pata nahi kya ho hoga, Let wait and see, excited for next part, Thanks a lot lot lot for dedication 😘 and of course writing the story on the couple on my request
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