Story So Far - Page 3

Posted: 3 years ago

August 11th Update:


  • Godamvari continues to make a scene about Chahat running away, and Neel sleeping alone on the terrace. Jamuna goes with her to see if she's telling the truth.
  • Chahat comes, asking Godamvari what's wrong. She's shocked, while Jamuna is happy. Chahat covers up saying that Neel had told her how they get a really nice breeze on the terrace, and so they both came to sleep there last night.
  • Chahat feels a packet in the kurta that she's wearing, and thinks it's for Paan Masala. She's disgusted by this.
  • Jamuna advises Neel never to find fault in his wife's cooking, or she'll never let him forget the day.
  • Neel is about to drink tea when Chahat stops him, saying that he's forgetting something that he needs very desperately every morning. She gets up and hands him the packet. Neel freaks out seeing the condom, and hides it. Jamuna asks what it is, but Neel laughs it off. Chahat encourages him to tell everyone what it is. They all can help get rid of this bad habit.
  • Godamvari asks what the bad habit is. Neel gets up saying it's nothing, and hides the condom in his pockets. Chahat is still encouraging him to tell everyone what it is. It's okay even if everyone gets angry. He'll need the family's love and support to get rid of this bad habit. Neel says that he'll get rid of it on his own.
  • Chahat asks him what does he have a habit of eating. Neel thinks that Chahat thinks it's a tobacco packet. Jamuna shares his own experience of eating tobacco when he was younger and how Godamvari helped him get over it.
  • Chahat tells Jamuna not to worry, and she'll take it out. Chahat reaches out to grab for the packet and ends up tickling Neel. The packet flies and lands on Jamuna. Neel freaks out. Godamvari sees it and gets angry.
  • Neel asks Chahat what did she do. Jamuna tries to defend himself. Godamvari continues to scold him saying that if he was that in the mood, then why didn't he tell her in private? What was the need to show it off to everybody.
  • Jamuna says it's not his and throws it away. Godamvari takes Jamuna away.
  • Neel asks Chahat does she know what she did, and what was even in the packet? Chahat very proudly tells him that she knows there was Paan Masala in it. She knew it the moment she felt it in his pocket. She was just trying to bother him a little. Moreover, he should be thanking her for helping him get rid of his bad habit.
  • Neel asks her if she even bothered to open the packet and see what it was. He tells her that it was a condom. Chahat freaks out at first, and then asks what was it doing in his pocket. He tells her that he didn't put it there. Somebody must have kept it as a prank for their wedding night. Then, that same condom flew and fell on Jamuna's face. And that same packet flew and landed somewhere else.
  • Neel and Chahat freak out, and try to find the condom before anyone else does, or Vyasji will yell at them.
  • Alekh, who goes to feed seeds to the birds, sees the condom packet inside and wonders what it's doing there. Naveli sees Alekh with the packet and calls him over. She asks him what the hell is that and Alekh tells her it's not his. She gets upset with him and leaves.
  • Alekh throws the condom packet towards the birds. The packet flies and lands by Vyasji's feet.
  • Both Neel & Chahat are outside trying to find the condom. Chahat sees it by Vyasji's feet. Neel & Chahat both freak out, and wonder how they should retrieve it.
  • They both sneak up behind Vyasji while he's praying. Seeing his eyes open, they both sit down and put on a pious act. Neel touches Vyasji's feet, saying it's his and Chahat's first morning after marriage, so he thought he should take blessings from him. Neel takes the condom packet.
  • Vyasji comments on how Saraswati always wanted the distance between Neel and him to lessen. Now, that wish is being fulfilled by Chahat. He tells them both to get ready since Jamuna has called for a photographer. He tells Chahat to wear a saree for the photo. She says okay to him, but she internally worries because she doesn't know how to wear one.
  • Chahat feels lucky that she saw people putting the lanterns up in the sky or she would have spent the whole night trying to find her dad.
  • She starts worrying about the saree that she has to wear. In the bathroom, she wonders where her toothbrush went. Neel comes in polishing his shoes with her toothbrush. She gets angry at him. Neel tells him that's her punishment for constantly making him touch Vyasji's feet. She asks him what the problem is, since he's her dad. Neel tells her not to interfere between them.
  • Chahat tells him why should she use her finger, when she has Neel's toothbrush that she can use. They both fight over the toothbrush. Neel wins and puts the toothbrush in his mouth, and brushes his own teeth with it. He taunts her to use it, but Chahat tells him that she'll manage on her own.
  • Godamvari comes to give Chahat everything she needs to wear for the photoshoot. She tells Neel that she doesn't even know how to wear a saree. Neel asks her, and that's his problem because?
  • Chahat is trying to wear the saree but finds it difficult. The online tutorials that she was watching aren't helping her either.
  • She calls Naveli for help. She tries doing her makeup until Naveli arrives. She pokes herself in the eye. She keeps her eyes closed or her make up will get ruined because of all the tears.
  • Neel comes in, but because Chahat has her eyes closed, she thinks it's Naveli. She complains how her whole day has been going wrong as first she couldn't wear the saree right, and now the eyeliner is irritating her a lot.
  • Neel was about to choke Chahat with the saree, but when she asks to tie the hook to her blouse, he pauses seeing her bare back. He does so, whilst feeling physically attracted to her. Chahat, with her eyes still closed, gets up, showing her midriff to him, and asks to the saree now. He does so, again feeling attracted to her. Chahat continues to complain about the saree, and eyeliner, thinking it's Naveli.
  • Chahat, still thinking it's Naveli in front of her, says that she knows Naveli doesn't like talking about it, but could she please tell her what happened to Saraswati that night.
  • Chahat finally opens her eyes and sees Neel kneeling before her.
  • Precap: Jamuna tells Vyasji that the photographer wants to say something about Chahat. The photographer offers his condolences about Saraswati. He never thought Dr. Baig will turn out to be so monstrous. Just a few days ago he had gone to click their photographs for a family. Alekh asks the photographer if he has seen the Baig family. The photographer says that he has seen everyone and he can show it to them too. Vyasji says that he would like to see the photos. Neel & Chahat freak out.
Posted: 3 years ago

August 12th Update:


  • Chahat misunderstands Neel's intentions towards and accuses him of trying to take advantage of her
  • She starts screaming about there being a mouse in the room, and hits Neel with a cricket stick
  • Everyone gather around for the photo shoot.
  • Jamuna compliments Chahat for looking really beautiful. Neel is mesmerized, and remembers the times when they were physically close to one another.
  • The photographer offers his condolences for Saraswati. He mentions how he didn't know that that Dr. Baig would turn out to be so monstrous. Just one month ago, he had gone to click their photos since they were throwing a party for their daughter's return after becoming a doctor. Alekh asks if they can see the photos, the photographer agrees. Alekh is pleased, and says that if they can identify the family members, then it'll be easier for them to catch Dr. Baig. Even Vyasji says that he would like to see them.
  • The photographer brings up the photos on his laptop and shows it to them. Neel & Chahat are worried.
  • Vyasji tells Neel that he won't be able to see them, and asks Neel to see them instead. Neel sees a photo of Saraswati and gets sad. Alekh sees it too and puts on a crying act.
  • Chahat worries for Vyasji as he'll be crying alone. She also worries about Neel having the photos, and thinks that he might make posters of her other family members and plaster them all over the place.
  • Neel thinks of deleting all the photos of Chahat as there would be a problem if anyone at home saw them. Chahat takes the camera from Neel and starts deleting the photos. Neel tries to grab the camera, and Chahat gives it to him after deleting her family's photos. Neel gets angry at her.
  • Alekh asks the photographer if he had any other copies, but the photographer says no. Alekh gets mad at him saying that was their only chance of getting to the Baigs. The photographer tells him not to worry since he'll be able to identify the members by looking at them. Chahat gets tensed.
  • Ghazala is making money by selling the wooden handicrafts that Dr. Baig has been making. She sells one box to a mysterious man for three thousand rupees.
  • Jamuna comments on how the newspaper is filled with news about Corona.
  • Naveli asks Chahat what she did at night that made Neel's hips cramp up. Godamvari taunts Chahat about her feeling modest now, and not when she was openly romancing with Neel.
  • Vyasji asks if he got the photos, but Neel tells him no, since the photographer had accidentally deleted them. Despite being disappointed, Vyasji says that they should all look happy for the family photo.
  • Jamuna says they should all eat the warm samosas that Godamvari has made for them first.
  • Neel tells Chahat that she has to stay away from the photographer or he'll recognize her.
  • Vyasji is talking to Saraswati's photo and tells her how much he misses her.
  • Naveli complains about not seeing the photographer as she wanted to click some solo pics before the family one. Jamuna tells Naveli to go change her clothes, but Naveli takes offense to it. Jamuna is getting increasingly angry, when Chahat intervenes and gives her a dupatta to cover herself by. Naveli takes it and walks away.
  • Jamuna blesses Chahat for her taking care of the situation so well.
  • The photographer asks Jamuna to stand in the middle so that he can check the lighting. Jamuna brings Chahat instead. Chahat worries about being alone with the photographer when Neel comes and covers up for her saying that Chahat is camera shy; he'll stand instead. He dismisses her saying that Godamvari is calling for her in the kitchen.
  • Neel reminds her to stay away from the photographer as much as she can. She asks for how long since she'll have to face him eventually. Neel tells her that he'll think of something.
  • Godamvari is about to fall while carrying a tray of samosas, when Chahat helps her. Godamvari yells at her that she should have moved the wire in the first place. Vyasji intervenes saying that it would best for people to keep their heads on the ground whilst walking. If their heads are always up in the clouds, then surely they'll fall. Chahat tells Vyasji it's alright, and that she'll move the wires. She even apologizes to Godamvari, and explains that the wire belongs to the photographer. Godamvari is seething and asks if Chahat served everyone breakfast. Chahat is about to when Vyasji loudly asks Jamuna to tell Godamvari to serve everyone breakfast as the photographer will click Neel and Chahat's photos first. Godamvari leaves, and Vyasji tells Chahat to go as the photographer is waiting.
  • Jamuna is telling the photographer to make sure her photos come out really beautiful. Chahat covers her face with her dupatta. The photographer asks her to remove the dupatta, and Vyasji also tells her that there's no need for her to cover her face with the dupatta since it's not a part of the family's customs.
  • Precap: Chahat tells Neel that the photographer is showing Jamuna something regarding her. Jamuna tells Vyasji that the photographer wants to say something about Chahat.
Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks for the great detail update 


Neel is falling slowly but surely for Chahat 

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by pyar-ishk


Thanks for the great detail update 


Neel is falling slowly but surely for Chahat

You're most welcome! πŸ€—

I agree, but as of now it's mostly a physical attraction from his side. But at least it will assist him to soften up a little towards Chahat. 😳

Posted: 3 years ago

Thanks for the update! Who do you guys think the mystery man is?

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Janvi_Chahal


Thanks for the update! Who do you guys think the mystery man is?

No prob! πŸ€—

Part of me wants to say it's one of Neel's sources but I dunno. If it was, he surely would have been informed right away. Maybe it's one of Alekh's people?

Idk who else could be after the Baigs as badly as the Bhatt-Dhyanis. πŸ€”

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by asmaanixx


No prob! πŸ€—

Part of me wants to say it's one of Neel's sources but I dunno. If it was, he surely would have been informed right away. Maybe it's one of Alekh's people?

Idk who else could be after the Baigs as badly as the Bhatt-Dhyanis. πŸ€”

I’m also thinking it’s something to do with Neel but I feel it could also be someone totally new who would add a new twist to the story πŸ€·πŸ½β€β™€οΈ

Posted: 3 years ago

August 13th Update:


  • Neel puts a big bindi on Chahat's face so that the photographer won't recognize her that easily. They both get some candid photos done so that Chahat's face remains hidden. Vyasji asks them to get some normal photos taken as well so that they can be hung on the wall.
  • For their family photo, Chahat brings in Saraswati's photo frame so that the family feels more complete.
  • While Neel feels safe, Chahat tells him that they're not out of the woods yet, since the photographer keeps looking at her.
  • Jamuna tells Vyasji that the photographer wants to tell everyone something about Chahat. Jamuna further adds that the photographer would like Chahat to model for their factory's calendar. Vyasji gets mad and tells the photographer never to propose such an idea again.
  • Naveli gets mad because she's been wanting to be a model for years, and yet, everyone finds Chahat to be beautiful. She tells Godamvari never to choose a saree for Chahat again. Godamvari asks her not to be mad at her.
  • Neel tells Chahat, he doesn't know from what angle the photographer found her to be looking like a goddess. To him, she looks like the devil.
  • Vyasji brings Saraswati's photo, and tells Chahat that Saraswati was the only one who was able to understand him without him having to say anything. Today, only Chahat was able to see the pain he felt regarding the family photo today. He saw the way she made Naveli understand, and how despite Godamvari was wrong, Chahat showed her respect, and did what she asked.
  • He gives her his locket as a form of his blessing. When Chahat asks how can she, Vyasji asks if she's not a daughter of the house.
  • Chahat sees a mouse, and tells Neel that she told him there was one running around in the house. She chases the mouse and kills it with a stick.
  • Godamvari scolds her saying that she committed murder in a Brahmin's house. She tells her to carry Ganeshji's idol on her head, and walk around the house 100 times while chanting Ganeshji's mantra.
  • Vyasji stops Chahat saying that the hands that have just committed murder can't touch Ganeshji's idol. Instead, he tells her that she has to make kanti, and until she doesn't do so, she can't enter the house.
  • Godamvari tells Chahat to clean up her mess before she goes.
  • Neel taunts Chahat about how she lost all the goodwill that she had gained in front of Vyasji.
  • Ghazala comments about how she's doing her make up after a really long time, and it's all thanks to the box Dr. Baig had made. Dr. Baig comes asking for the box, and Ghazala tells him that she gave it away in charity. If he wants Chahat's soul to rest in peace, then he should make as many handicrafts as he can so that they can give it away to charity.
  • While throwing away the mouse, Chahat sees a bunch of trash outside. While throwing it away in the dustbin, she sees a letter addressed to Neel. Opening it, she sees a letter from Saraswati, and a rakhi inside. Chahat thinks Saraswati must have bought and written the letter before she had passed. She thinks she needs to send the letter to Neel right away.
  • Neel is telling Saraswati that he has brought Golu gifts.
  • Chahat tries to get Neel's attention but he keeps ignoring her.
  • Godamvari sees Chahat and comments on how city girls don't know anything these days, and hence why she went to go ask Neel for help.
  • Godamvari sees Vyasji purifying the whole house.
  • Godamvari calls Chahat, and asks her if she needs Neel's help to make the kanti. Chahat declines, and says that Vyasji has even forbidden her from entering the house. Godamvari tells her that it's not like Vyasji will come here; she can go. Trusting her, Chahat enters her room from the backdoor.
  • Chahat yells at Neel for ignoring her.
  • Vyasji comes into the room and asks Godamvari if Chahat has made the kanti. Godamvari asks the same from Chahat, and she's surprised.
  • Vyasji gets mad at Chahat for her disobedience. Godamvari pushes for Chahat to be punished. Jamuna declines saying that if Chahat has entered the home there has to be an important reason for it. He encourages her to speak up on it.
  • Chahat tells everyone that Saraswati had left Neel a letter but she may not have been able to mail it. She gives the letter to Neel. Neel opens the envelope and sees the rakhi.
  • He remembers a moment with Saraswati wherein she told him that she's alive in the thread that he wears around his wrist.
  • Chahat says that it's Rakshabandhan today, and Saraswati must have thought that even if Neel is in Delhi, he should get his rakhi. It's Saraswati's last rakhi to Neel.
  • Vyasji asks Chahat where she found the envelope, and she tells him it was amongst the trash.
  • Neel gets angry.
  • Precap: The same mysterious man who had bought the box from Ghazala, drops it off at the Bhatt-Dhyani's home. Chahat sees the man, goes outside, sees the box, and recognizes her father's handicraft. She thinks her dad sent her the box.
Edited by asmaanixx - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Janvi_Chahal


I’m also thinking it’s something to do with Neel but I feel it could also be someone totally new who would add a new twist to the story πŸ€·πŸ½β€β™€οΈ

You were right!

This mystery man seems to be completely new. If he was connected to Neel, he could have come directly into the home and told him about Rahil.

I wonder who it could be though. πŸ€”

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by asmaanixx


You were right!

This mystery man seems to be completely new. If he was connected to Neel, he could have come directly into the home and told him about Rahil.

I wonder who it could be though. πŸ€”

Haha yes! I can’t wait to see how things unfold now :)



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