Tujhko Shiddat Se Chahun (Chapter 5 - Page 4) - Page 4

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by GBSC


Nice update.

Is raman a fatherless person ?

Toshiji too seems to be a silent person .Not loud mouthed as in yhm .

Don’t they have any relatives other than themselves ?

Seems strange .

Raman as such has got everything the way he had wanted so far .

Was it love at first sight ?

This too seems odd .

Or did he know about viswa’s family before itself ?

The story seems to have too few characters.

What about servants in the house/ mansion?

Perhaps their gossip .

Pl continue soon.

Thanks for your early update .


Raman's father died two years ago and since then he's been made the MD of the company which seems like a big burden to him. As for Toshi ji, she realises that her son is a young man who has taken over from his father's responsibility of the care of the house and treats him with a lot of love. That's because she knows that Raman could've chosen his own happiness, by neglecting the business but he chose to dedicate his life to the growth of the company. 


Yes, it's love at first sight for Raman towards Ishita but Ishita despises him for snatching away her happiness and also taking advantage of her father's social status. 


It's just that Raman became selfish for himself and wanted Ishita in his life feeling she could bring calmness to his life.


It's about how his stupidity costs him heavily.


I don't have excess characters in the story because it doesn't go with the flow of my narrative.

Posted: 3 years ago

chapter - 4&5

both r nice

ishra got married

raman was thinking of his own happiness only 

but soon realized his mistake

& decided to give enough time to ishita to adjust with him

ishita didn't affected by his any gestures

she is on revenge mood only

very interesting

updt soon

Posted: 3 years ago

Waitingfor the new part

Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update. Thanks

Posted: 3 years ago

A very nice update please update next part soon to know how will Raman win Ishita’s heart 

Posted: 3 years ago

all the parts are nice....and read it a go

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by -RKB-


all the parts are nice....and read it a go


Means a lot to me. Thank you so much. ❤️

Posted: 3 years ago

Nice, hope ishita is not too bitter but understands raman n make him realise his mistake 



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