REVENGE- Thread II (Part-B10 Page 55) : Update!!! - Page 6

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 79

hate this Akhil and Antara...

now Geet believed what they said and thinks that Maan used her.

what will Maan do?

update soon 

Posted: 3 years ago

Hogaya syapa.... Aur Geet bohot hurt feel karti iss Antara aur Akhil Geet ko neecha dhikane ka koi mauka nahi choda. 

Btw Maan itna laparwa kaise ho sakta zarur koi aur bhi baat hoga na Di...? 

Akhir daal me kuch kaale ya daal makani me kuch safed...? Hopefully Maan is safe aur Geet would understand the situation. But Di kuch bhi ho jaye pls Maan aur Geet ko alag mat karo pls pls pls it a request. ðŸ˜­

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 79 


Awesome and Emotional 


Both Ahkil and Antara now show Geet 

Maan's true identity 

Geet feels used and betrayed 

while the polices has arrested Maan 


wonder now what will happen

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by UmaDevi97


Hogaya syapa.... Aur Geet bohot hurt feel karti iss Antara aur Akhil Geet ko neecha dhikane ka koi mauka nahi choda. 

Btw Maan itna laparwa kaise ho sakta zarur koi aur bhi baat hoga na Di...? 

Akhir daal me kuch kaale ya daal makani me kuch safed...? Hopefully Maan is safe aur Geet would understand the situation. But Di kuch bhi ho jaye pls Maan aur Geet ko alag mat karo pls pls pls it a request. ðŸ˜­

Akhir daal me kuch kaale ya daal makani me kuch safed...?😂😂 this was so funny

Posted: 3 years ago

Yaar Nilanjana yeh kya kiya? ðŸ˜­

So Antara and Akhil have outsmarted Maan! But weren’t there problems between Akhil and Antara?

I don’t think that Maan will stay locked up for long as he’ll be using his sources too but I do feel bad for Geet. He really hope that Maan’s able to explain everything to her before she suffers from a break down!

Posted: 3 years ago

 They arrested maan and Aakhil and Antara trying to show geet down she's hurt not from their words but knowing Maan hide truth from her hope Geet understand  Maan and info his lawyer

Posted: 3 years ago

 

Part 80

 

Akhil- Kya hua, inspector?

 

Inspector- Sab ho gaya hai, sir. He is under arrest.Uska phone bho confiscate kar liya hai jisse apne lawyer ko bhi call naa kar paaye bail ke liye

 

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Geet rushes to the ladies room, trying to calm herself

 

But breaks down once she is away from people

 

She looks at her face in the mirror

 

She feels so stupid!

 

So so stupid!

 

She believed him!

 

She remembers the time when she first met him

 

She tightens her fist and shuts her eyes

 

The moments are pricking her like thorns

 

She remembers the time she bought a shirt for him

 

‘Stupid!’ she thinks shutting her eyes tighter

 

She opens her eyes to look at herself

 

She is unable to meet her own eyes

 

She had made a fool of herself

 

He had so easily played with her

 

‘Stupid!’ she thinks aloud slapping herself on the cheek

 

She remembers the time she got movie tickets for her and he didn’t show up

 

‘Stupid!’ She slaps her other cheek

 

She remembers their kiss

 

She slaps herself hard

 

As she remembers each of her moments with Maan, she keeps slapping herself

 

As if her physical pain will compensate for her inner pain

 

Her whole face is red and swollen but she is still slapping herself to teach herself a lesson

 

She feels like a child who had lost everything

 

Who had lost hopes.

 

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Maan in the police station was arguing with the inspector to let him make one single call

 

But all his pleading were going into deaf ears

 

Since morning, it had been evening now

 

He had also lost hope

 

If he can’t call his family or lawyer, then he would have to stay in here as long as Akhil wishes

 

Akhil had trapped him well, he thinks

 

It was all over for his Revenge now

 

He lost and Akhil won

 

++++++++

 

It was mid-night

 

Maan had dozed off while sitting inside the jail cell

 

When he heard the door of the cell open

 

He stands up to look at the inspector

 

Inspector- You can go now. Aapki bail ho gai hai

 

Maan frowns

 

M-Kisne?

 

Inspector shrugs

 

Inspector- Anonymous

 

As he steps out of the police station

 

A kid appears from nowhere and hands over a key into Maan’s hand and disappears into thin air

 

Maan looks at the key and there is name of a hotel and room number on the key chain


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Posted: 3 years ago

Hi thanks for update

Geet is feel fool herself,maan ko bail kisne di ?

Suspense badha diya .maan is not a weak person.surely he plan something and take his revenge and get bake his love

Edited by mkd.70 - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Part 80 


Awesome and Emotional 


Geet feels that Maan played with her feelings 

and she feels that she was just stupid 

it was so sad seeing her slapping herself 

but her pain within will be deep because she believed Maan

Maan on the other hand could not get one single chance

to make a phone call 

but later at night an inspector tells him that he is out on bail

I'm not if it is Geet or Akhil's plan to trap Maan

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 80

of cos Geet feels like a fool.

hate that she slapped herself.

at least Maan is on bail.

hope he sets things right

update soon



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