CYCMD Entry: It’s called heartbreak

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Posted: 2 months ago

It’s called heartbreak


Love he swore to me; he whispered my name at the first light of sunrise; he felt my breath on his skin, and he danced with me, barefoot in a rainy night. He promised me the sun and the moon and it didn't matter to me: all I wanted was him, his love, my name on his lips, his breath against my skin. But his words were made of smoke, written in the wind; carved in the sand, waiting for a tide that would come to take them away, towards other distant shores. And the melody we had danced on died, leaving behind the aftermath of the hurricane named Declan Chesterfield.


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Secret hurts. The unspoken truth pains. Yet it is so easy to lie. Lying is effortless, whether it be by words, by actions, or by body language. Indeed, the bigger the lie, the easier it is to pronounce it; just add a few letter, change the tone of voice. A single tale, a single word is enough to create havoc. However, when you remove the veil from a lie, it is not as sweet as a chocolate truffle. It’s taste like six words: Vanessa Larson, I love you not.

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Edited by WildestDreams - 2 months ago
Posted: 2 months ago

Amazing piece to read smiley42

I love how you play with words (would love to learn that from you!) smiley9

Beautifully written. smiley20


Love, 

Shiri smiley27

Posted: 2 months ago

Originally posted by ShiriFictionPen


Amazing piece to read smiley42

I love how you play with words (would love to learn that from you!) smiley9

Beautifully written. smiley20


Love, 

Shiri smiley27


Hey Shiri,


thanks a lot for the beautiful words!smiley9

Believe me, this is the first time I wrote something after....literally years!smiley36 I don’t what you’d learn from mesmiley17

Posted: 2 months ago

Parm smiley31

I'm not going to lie but this was def one of my favourite entries smiley43 The blurb was just so intense and you have such a beautiful way with words. It draws you in and wants to keep reading. 


But his words were made of smoke, written in the wind; carved in the sand, waiting for a tide that would come to take them away, towards other distant shores. 


^^Damn, it makes you feel so many emotions and sucks you right in. I'd love to read more angst from you, I'm a sucker for them smiley36


Zoah x

Posted: 2 months ago

Wow..it’s excellent. So very intense. I think I got your first paragraph mashed with my mine in the  second round.

Posted: 2 months ago

smiley22 OMG that entry was yours smiley43 I totally agree with Zo on this. It was quite intense. I want you to continue this one 😍

Posted: 2 months ago

Thank you my ladies, Zo, Mumma and Nidziesmiley27


@Nidzie: You believe my offspring (smiley2) will let me sit in front of lappy for an hour to let me write something more than a drabble?!smiley36 Answer is a big fat NO smiley37 


I will try my best to write something angsty to make you and Zo happy. It may take timesmiley24

Posted: 2 months ago

Parm!!!smiley27 I just loved this drabble. You're so brilliant with wordssmiley10

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