MiNeil FF "Dangerous Game" updated Epilogue on 08.09.20 pg 94 - Page 3

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: zalima

Aagaya...

Aagaya ...

🥳


Dekho wo aa gaya...🤣


Mera sexy don  ka description mast tha ☺️

Khatranak don lag raha hai ye aadmi ☺️☺️

Aur lag raha hai MiNeil ka love  yahan dangerous Ishq hone wala hai☺️

Ye wale MiNeil sab se wildest honge☺️

Humesha ki tarah maine imagine kar liya SouNoor ko .


Dangerous hai ye neil😈 dangerous aadmi belives in dangerous ishq😆☺️

Mini ka entry ..accha tha 

Abhi toh bas description hai abhi hero heroine ki entry hui kaha hai...wait karo abhi toh

Hanuman uncle ko b build up de diya tune yahan🤣

Haan ye role important tha toh who better than hanuman singh for police wala's role aur yaha to maine promotion bhi diya hai🤣

Aur sab se best tha nayeem bhi🤣🤣

ROFL🤣

Poora  badla leni hai 🤣

She deserves it😈

Pata hai ..jab..Nayeem ka part padh rahi thi ..maine wish kiya ..hope paan wali habit ho yahan.. character ko suit karega ..aur tu ne  usse rakha 😉


Soch ke dekha toh laga wo bilkul fit rahegi lady godmother types ke role mein paan chabate hue🤣

Naeem bi ko gundi bana diya🤣

Perfectly suit ho raha hai NB ko character🤣



Bobby 🤣 ye kya police hai kya ?

Plz yaar ..ek twist laao ...and he must be side kick of Neil 🤣🤣 

Preeth b police hai kya ? 🤪

Yaar.....yahan bobby and preeth ko pair up kar plz 🤣🤣 


Bobby and preet police hi rahenge haan lekin maine bhi socha tha ki unke pair up kar deti hoon yaha pe🤣

Neil ka side kick hai par koi aur😉

Mini ko yahan soft discription mila hai ...

Lekin I hope woh wild ho😉

Dono wild Dangerous jodi ho .😈

Mini ka description abhi pura kaha hua hai....abhi continue hoga agle part mein....uska character mix type rahega...thanda garam...palti maarta rahega situation ke hisaab se🤣


Aur haan....no sad , tragic ending🤣


Meri stories mein tragic end....kabhi ho hi nahi sakta🤣 I believe in that dialogue - hamari filmo ki tarah hamari life mein bhi end mein sab theek ho hi jata hai agar kuch theek na ho toh wo end nahi....picture abhi baki hai mere dost😆😎

Maine padha ..kuch convo doosre thread mein..ye ishqzaade wala ending jaisa baat ho rahi thi ..🤣 aisa na kar re


Nahi wo toh mineil ke characters ko baat thi bas ki waise tashan wale characters hone chaiye


Mere Neil ko ..end tak kamina hi rahena do ..

He should win ...

Once a kamina always a kamina😎😈

Aur ek aur twist toh nahi hai end mein ...ye Don Neil kahi spy toh nahi hoga na end mein ? ? Mera undercover agent ? ☺️☺️


Bas ab ek story mei ek hi character rehne do

Spy wale ke liye dusri story likhenge😆

Waise b aaj kal banda spy wale series dekh kar raha hai☺️ toh yahan koi twist ho...aur banda spy ho end mein yahan ☺️


Kuch b ho ..mujhe pata hai ..tu justice kargi 

🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Very nice .All characters are set .Looking forward for next .Neil and Mini's meet 

Thanks

Mineil meet might take time

Dont know...have not started working on next part

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

OMG... Neil oneroi the most wanted criminal.... Don... King.... Kya description tha anjali..... 

Thanks

He is dangerous don here not any sedha saada insaan😎😈

Preet and Bobby are police.... 

Yes i know its funny but think them as a comic cops🤣


Nayeembi..... 🤣🤣🤣

Naeem bi ke liye mera pyar itni jaldi khatam nahi hoga🤣


Mini khurana the ex girlfriend or Neil oberoi.... Looks interesting.... 


Aisa lag raha tha that I am watching and don movie..... 


Awww glad you liked it

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Hannie_Fan

Nayembi🤣🤣

Preet Bobby Police🤣

Mini Neil ki ex girlfriend is interesting 

Superb

Thanks

Naeem bi lady don with paan chewing habit🤣

Preet bobby comic cops🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushi1311

Wowww!! Awesome..

Mini is Neil's ex ....

N maybe the reason why he turned don😝

Don Neil😍..

Preet n bobby 😂😂

Loved it..

Continue soon...

Nd do keep it a ff😉

Thanks

Mini is ex...there is more explanation to it...will write it in next part

No neil uski wajah se don nahi bana😆

Neil started pretty early😆

It will be ss or ff....kuch parts likhne ke baad hi pata chal payega

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111




Dangerous hai ye neilsmiley15 dangerous aadmi belives in dangerous ishqsmiley36smiley43

Am loving it ☺️

Kabh se wait tha iss ka ☺️

Dangerous game is about to begin ☺️



Abhi toh bas description hai abhi hero heroine ki entry hui kaha hai...wait karo abhi toh

I can sense you 😈



Soch ke dekha toh laga wo bilkul fit rahegi lady godmother types ke role mein paan chabate huesmiley37

Naeem bi ko gundi bana diyasmiley37


Perfect hai 🤣 

Pan ke saath aur accha lagega 🤣

Image

Lekin ye NB  bahut powerful nahi honi chahiye kamini😈

Apna banda best hai 

Neil ke saamne  NB bheegi billi honi chahiye🤣


Bobby and preet police hi rahenge haan lekin maine bhi socha tha ki unke pair up kar deti hoon yaha pesmiley37

Kar kar🤣 mujhe iss ka kabh se wait tha 🤣

Show maine b mujhe  lag raha tha humesha ..ye dono jodi mein acche lagenge than sibblings🤣 comedy b toh chahiye na🤣




Neil ka side kick hai par koi aursmiley2

Kaun ? Kahi twist mein  end mein Hanuman uncle toh nahi ?🤣 

ya doodh wala  ko b tum ne yahan promotion diya hai? As side kick ?🤣

Ya phir Mini khud toh nahi ? Choti don of Neil  🤣


Mini ka description abhi pura kaha hua hai....abhi continue hoga agle part mein....uska character mix type rahega...thanda garam...palti maarta rahega situation ke hisaab sesmiley37

🤣 kuch b ho strong rahe ..woh filmy wala melt honi wali nahi chahiye  character .

Takkar ki ho 

Don Neil ki gf, pyaar hai .. kuch toh unique , special honi chahiye...that he fell for her😉



Meri stories mein tragic end....kabhi ho hi nahi saktasmiley37 I believe in that dialogue - hamari filmo ki tarah hamari life mein bhi end mein sab theek ho hi jata hai agar kuch theek na ho toh wo end nahi....picture abhi baki hai mere dostsmiley36smiley16


Yes. Ditto feeling🤗


Once a kamina always a kaminasmiley16smiley15

Maha kamina +++ plz ☺️☺️😈😎




Bas ab ek story mei ek hi character rehne do

Spy wale ke liye dusri


Intezaar rahega iss ka bhi



My answers in blue 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Thanks

Mineil meet might take time

Dont know...have not started working on next part

Individual character development is also important. Will wait for MiNeil meet 😉

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Krithzz

Individual character development is also important. Will wait for MiNeil meet 😉

I will start writing today

Try to finish it in one sitting

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Thanks

Mini is ex...there is more explanation to it...will write it in next part

No neil uski wajah se don nahi bana😆

Neil started pretty early😆

It will be ss or ff....kuch parts likhne ke baad hi pata chal payega

ohh...

Now with this you have made me more impatient...😅

Will Minni bring him back on right track..?Or will it have some tragic ending (happy hi rakhna yaar😛)..

Is Minni upto some revenge?..

But jo bhi ho ultimately Mineil won't be able to resist each other😉

Can't wait for their  meet..

I guess that's one of your speciality...you have given so much of scope to the story...and that's now makes it impossible to wait for the next update 😁..

Looking forward for the next.❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushi1311

ohh...

Now with this you have made me more impatient...😅

Will Minni bring him back on right track..?Or will it have some tragic ending (happy hi rakhna yaar😛)..

Is Minni upto some revenge?..

But jo bhi ho ultimately Mineil won't be able to resist each other😉

Can't wait for their  meet..

I guess that's one of your speciality...you have given so much of scope to the story...and that's now makes it impossible to wait for the next update 😁..

Looking forward for the next.❤️


Aww thanks😳🤗

But sometimes i really am scared itna build kar diya ab story pasand aaye sabko....khoda pahad nikla chuha wala case na ho jaye🤣