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Suvan Drabble/Short Poem: I Shall Never Tell

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Posted: 3 years ago


Drabble: I Shall Never Tell


Hello guys, penning down a drabble/small poem showcasing the different ways in which Shravan and Suman feel/see love. I imagined it could be an after-leap moment where both of them are reminiscing their affection and end up dying a little inside.

So the poem is two ways. The first half is through Shravan's perspective and the latter through Suman's.

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I Shall Never Tell


Shravan


I shall never tell I know;


That you hate when you can’t control things,

whilst the paper bears your sombre scribbles.


That it bothers you,

when someone tags you cute and not empowering.


That you wish to scurry for once,

instead declare to hurdle.


That you think of giving in to the shackles that come with being resilient,

yet break them anyway.


That you want to lash out,

but instead choose to suppress in a fist.


That you want to cry your eyes out,

when all you could do is pat them dry.


That sometimes you would  like to opt out of the brave,

and live a little.


That it breaks your heart,

to stand up with the right over wight.


That you elect to bask in the pain,

rather than watch others in.


But I know that these things make you YOU


You taught me to love.

But I shall never tell you that,

For I fear I may lose you.


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Suman


I shall never tell;


That my life becomes chaotic with you,

yet brings peace in it.


That when I close my eyes to your presence,

the same pair scans for you in your striking absence.


That I feel privileged,

to have someone painting smiles on a rainy day.


That when you lovingly offer a place in your heart,

allotting a bigger one for me, my soul surrenders.


That I feel protected,

for you to have my back and stand with the right.


That I am comforted,

when you offer your shoulder to rest upon.


That I feel weak when I’m not around you.


That you can’t win over my heart,

cause it’s already been done a thousand.


You taught me to live.

But I shall never tell you that,

For I fear I may lose myself to you.


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A/N : This piece of poetry/drabble was  inspired from Zindagi Gulzar Hai (That's one of my favorite dramas of all time. You should totally check it out if you haven't already) I felt Suman and  Shravan are similar to those characters in some ways too.

Anyhoo wrote this in the wee hours, so I hope it isn't sloppy. I was going to brainstorm on it for a while more  but then decided against it before another 'writer winter' set in!😆

I hope you enjoy it!

Edited by Bucky - 3 years ago


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Posted: 3 years ago

Yeh bahut na insaafi hain...

hum to bas kahani mein simit reh jaate hain ...

ap to mashaallah jise chute hain kohinoor banake dete hain


BTW Zindagi Gulzar hain is one of my favorite too..seen it quite a few times.

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Posted: 3 years ago

great work & i have also seen zindagi gulzar h ...its a great show & suvan were relatable too

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This content was originally posted by: sambag

Yeh bahut na insaafi hain...

hum to bas kahani mein simit reh jaate hain ...

ap to mashaallah jise chute hain kohinoor banake dete hain


BTW Zindagi Gulzar hain is one of my favorite too..seen it quite a few times.


Thank you so much Sam! I look forward to your reviews with bated breath and you never fail to take my breath away with such kind words! I'm brimming with joy.🤗

This comment honestly made my day and I'm gonna be grinning like an idiot for the entirety of it.


Zindagi Gulzar Hai manages to soothe and amaze me every single time I rewatch. One of the finest dramas out there!😃

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This content was originally posted by: Meena_J

great work & i have also seen zindagi gulzar h ...its a great show & suvan were relatable too


Thanks a ton Meena!🤗

Thanks for taking out the time to reply to my works! 🤗

Agreed, ZGH would easily be included in my top 5 dramas of all time👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice Poem/drabble Bucky

You have described SuVan's POV correctly 

Thanks for writing 


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This content was originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Nice Poem/drabble Bucky

You have described SuVan's POV correctly 

Thanks for writing 



Thank you Bhagu!👍🏼 

Glad you liked it🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Amazing work Babu!❤️

It's very artistic! Gonna read this again!😳

Your choice of words is amazing!👍🏼

Suvan's thoughts have been very well covered! I love it!❤️

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This content was originally posted by: Pranushka_723

Amazing work Babu!❤️

It's very artistic! Gonna read this again!😳

Your choice of words is amazing!👍🏼

Suvan's thoughts have been very well covered! I love it!❤️


Awww thank you Babu!❤️🤗

Your words truly mean a lot!🤗

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This content was originally posted by: Bucky


Awww thank you Babu!❤️🤗

Your words truly mean a lot!🤗

You're welcome!

The pleasure is all mine😳

BTW read on Sam's post that you are going to post an OS🥳

Can't wait for it