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Lovely update .

Looks amazing with pics .

Waiting eagerly for Raman's entry .

Thanks for pm

Awesome update 

Beautifully penned down 

Waiting for the raman entry

Loved it 

Thanks for the pm 

Nice update 

Continue soon 

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Nice updt di..

U write it normally. 

Thanx for the pm

Updt soon

Beautiful updt

Cont soon

Awesome update 

Loved it 

Pls update soon 

beautiful start.. ad write without pov... feel aati hai padhne m

O I love POV style .

It expresses the feelings perfectly .Especially with respect to someone else present at the same place .

Not sure if any other writer here has used that format .

Loved the first part .

Pl continue soon .

Lovely part di, I loved the way you l explained Ishika's Lifestyle...and also the pics were beautiful...So its her birthday, Is a party going to follow by any chance given she is a big star? Also, I loved that she had two seperate sweet simple birthdays with her parents and love too, Also the pics were beautiful...Waiting for next given it was so small 😒

Also, You can write in any style that you like 😃

Beautiful and Feisty Start

Ishika Kapoor is a actress and is in love with Shivaay

she does have everything of the very best 

anxiously waiting for Raman and Ishita's entry 

yes POV style is good for me