Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Pranushka_723


Beautiful soulful poems Vyapti!❤️

Great work!👍🏼

Beauty is a masterpiece👏

Will love to read more!

Well said Pranushka,  Vyapti, are you listening? We'd love to read more. ❤️

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Viswasruti


Well said Pranushka,  Vyapti, are you listening? We'd love to read more. ❤️

As you command, my psycreatist!

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Pranushka_723


Beautiful soulful poems Vyapti!❤️

Great work!👍🏼

Beauty is a masterpiece👏

Will love to read more!

Thank you.😍

Posted: 3 years ago

Savitri


“But you promised otherwise.”

You startled
You looked embarrassed
Like a child
Whose lie has been caught.
Or was that embarrassment
A result of
An acquaintance
Behaving like a wife?
Our literature is full of
Blushing women.
Does a guy
Blush too?

Is she a child?
You thought.
You smiled and explained
The meaning.
May I dare to think
That at that moment
You fell in love
With that innocence?
The innocence
That was exploited
Ridiculed
Awed
But never loved.
The innocence
That the sea of self hatred
Could not wash away.

That innocence is
Priceless to you.
So it is priceless
To me too.

Edited by vyapti - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Heart


That night

I was in pain

I wanted to feel your presence

The presence of peace.

So I crossed a step

I looked at you.

 

Like a insect

To a flame

I get attracted to pain.

 

I could not see

The affection

The fulfilment

The longing

In your eyes.

 

I could only see

The pain written there.

 

Am I the cause of his pain?

Perhaps.

Perhaps he has chosen sainthood

But his compassion

Does not let him tell it.

That conflict has done this to him.

 

I have no right to ask him anything.

But the selfish soul that I am

I hate to be the instrument

Of someone’s pain.

 

I asked about your well being.

You listened

But remained silent.

I was lulled to thoughts

To sleep

To dream

Late past midnight.

 

When the dawn

Began playing its flute

I was jerked into awareness.

How?

In a half dreamlike state

You and my former

My love

Became one.

 

I thought

May be the happenings

Of that day

Were not coincidence.

 

Thank you

For being with me

Thank you

For standing by me.

 

And now I am saying

Thank you

For being true

To yourself.

 

Posted: 3 years ago

Vyapti... you simply played with words... swayed in thoughts .... swing in your emotions... a vast display of deprivations in life's defining moments, you are an amazing writer.🤗🤗🤗

I admire you for this artistic announcement of your immense talent!! 

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Viswasruti


Vyapti... you simply played with words... swayed in thoughts .... swing in your emotions... a vast display of deprivations in life's defining moments, you are an amazing writer.🤗🤗🤗

I admire you for this artistic announcement of your immense talent!! 

Did not get this part, Madhuri.

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Viswasruti

Vyapti... you simply played with words... swayed in thoughts .... swing in your emotions... a vast display of deprivations in life's defining moments, you are an amazing writer.smiley31smiley31smiley31

I admire you for this artistic announcement of your immense talent!! 

_____  

Did not get this part, Madhuri.

__________  

After reading these lines, I felt like that, ....

That conflict has done this to him.

 

I have no right to ask him anything.

But the selfish soul that I am

I hate to be the instrument

Of someone’s pain.

 

I asked about your well being.

You listened

But remained silent.

Posted: 3 years ago

Such a soulful poem...love the way you use the right words and create this beauties❤️  it's not anything less than magic!

It carries a sense of sereneness...👏

Amazing work dear!

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Pranushka_723


Such a soulful poem...love the way you use the right words and create this beautiessmiley27  it's not anything less than magic!smiley42

It carries a sense of sereneness...smiley32

Amazing work dear!


Thank you.


Incidentally, the name of the person to whom this poem is dedicated to can be translated as "serene". 

Edited by vyapti - 3 years ago

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