MayRa/ShivJen DT#71 "Aakhon mein Nami, Hansi Labon Par" - Page 4

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by tournesol


Amazing, apke shayari ne char chand laga diye πŸ‘

Thank you tiara...πŸ€—

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Shruthi18


Also their frustration also filled pages with our imaginationsπŸ˜†

Admiration aur frustration chupaye nahi chupta πŸ˜†

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by tournesol


Admiration aur frustration chupaye nahi chupta πŸ˜†

Woh toh haiπŸ˜†

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by tournesol


Admiration aur frustration chupaye nahi chupta πŸ˜†

aur imagination bhi...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†


Humne sirf qaside padhe the,

jo kisse bann gaye...

likhna chaahte the sirf ek panna,

par wohi panne aaj kitaab bann gaye,,,😎


waah kya likha hai maine....

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by dusk2dawn


Thank you tiara...πŸ€—

πŸ€— Missed your DT title shayaris

I literally tried to write 4 rhyming lines few days ago, ended up writing just plain prose πŸ˜†

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by dusk2dawn


aur imagination bhi...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†


Humne sirf qaside padhe the,

jo kisse bann gaye...

likhna chaahte the sirf ek panna,

par wohi panne aaj kitaab bann gaye,,,😎


waah kya likha hai maine....

Kya baat kya baat πŸ₯³πŸ‘

Aaj aap sirf shayara nahi, Ghalib ban gayi hai

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by dusk2dawn


aur imagination bhi...πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†


Humne sirf qaside padhe the,

jo kisse bann gaye...

likhna chaahte the sirf ek panna,

par wohi panne aaj kitaab bann gaye,,,😎


waah kya likha hai maine....

Arre wah ...aaj chauke se chakka lage raho ho aapπŸ˜ƒ

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by tournesol


πŸ€— Missed your DT title shayaris

I literally tried to write 4 rhyming lines few days ago, ended up writing just plain prose πŸ˜†

πŸ€—πŸ€—

I missed them too.. but damn this site and ads popping up n then all the frustration my brain was shut off completely..

@ last line.. Dw .. whenever you want to write something will help you with rhyming,,πŸ˜†

Posted: 3 years ago

Btw, the DT title is so apt once again. πŸ˜Š

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by tournesol


Btw, the DT title is so apt once again. πŸ˜Š

Yeah... My favo song❀️



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