MishBir OS: Tender Buds of Affection

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Posted: 1 months ago

Nice one kunal is angry chokro as usual and abir full of compassion.

Posted: 1 months ago

that was brilliant ashismiley32

i loved how u described the scenic beauty in depth smiley27

enjoyed how u have given a clearcut picture of all sibling bonds smiley1

Mishti-Kunal tashion was spot onsmiley40

Mishti- Abir scene was so soothing smiley42

waiting for more yaara..


@ ur ps -- anytime darl smiley9

now my ps -- aadhi neend mei likh rahi hoon..so ignore typos yaara smiley36..(if any smiley2)

Edited by Kendrix - 1 months ago
Posted: 1 months ago

Originally posted by lovelycolour


Nice one kunal is angry chokro as usual and abir full of compassion.

Thanks dear! smiley9

Posted: 1 months ago

Its superb ashi. Loved every bit of it smiley27

I loved the badass mishti n compassionate abir

Eagerly waiting for the next part to see how mishbir become friends smiley1

Posted: 1 months ago

Asshhuuuuu!!! 😘😘😘


Oh this is the cutest! Imagining kids MishBir and KuKu! I loved the touch you have of the bond MishKu shared. They were actually thick as thieves until other situation ran their course!


Do you want to know a coincidence? I was thinking of doing a childhood Mishti story too? But a sad one! 😂🙈 I don’t know why man! I just keeping writing sad stories. I haven’t figured out the details yet so I don’t know if i will write but let’s see.


I loved the protective fierce Mishtu! Whether it was for Kuhu or ketki. Kunal as usual the annoying on at first and understanding one later 😂. and Abir is Abir! 


Amazing details! What I loved is you didn’t waste time in adding any other unnecessary details. It was very crisp and to the point.


Waiting to read more from you!


Regards,


Posted: 1 months ago

This is very sweet, how children and adults act soo differently.

I love the way the story just flows smoothly and each person is introduce into the story.

The way you have written each character highlights the story especially all characters at the young age.

Please continue soon smiley42

Posted: 1 months ago

Wow! Little Mishti is sooooooo cute.

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