that was brilliant ashi
i loved how u described the scenic beauty in depth
enjoyed how u have given a clearcut picture of all sibling bonds
Mishti-Kunal tashion was spot on
Mishti- Abir scene was so soothing
waiting for more yaara..
@ ur ps -- anytime darl
now my ps -- aadhi neend mei likh rahi hoon..so ignore typos yaara ..(if any )Edited by Kendrix - 1 months ago
Oh this is the cutest! Imagining kids MishBir and KuKu! I loved the touch you have of the bond MishKu shared. They were actually thick as thieves until other situation ran their course!
Do you want to know a coincidence? I was thinking of doing a childhood Mishti story too? But a sad one! 😂🙈 I don’t know why man! I just keeping writing sad stories. I haven’t figured out the details yet so I don’t know if i will write but let’s see.
I loved the protective fierce Mishtu! Whether it was for Kuhu or ketki. Kunal as usual the annoying on at first and understanding one later 😂. and Abir is Abir!
Amazing details! What I loved is you didn’t waste time in adding any other unnecessary details. It was very crisp and to the point.
Waiting to read more from you!
This is very sweet, how children and adults act soo differently.
I love the way the story just flows smoothly and each person is introduce into the story.
The way you have written each character highlights the story especially all characters at the young age.
Please continue soon
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