Suvan FF: Advices and Apologies *Chpt 11 (Pg.18)|Updt 20/07 *COMPLETED - Page 7

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Bacillusbadius


Read chapter 3 now

It's nice Bucky👍🏼

Aww

Shravan watched medical videos 🤣

Bunty & Shravan's bond❤️

Shravan is so funny - I will need one bottle of blood after donating one🤣

So they will hatch a plan faking medical condition to escape blood donation 😆

Later half was emotional 

Aww Shravan cares for Suman❤️

Vijay also admire their friendship 😊

Ending was interesting

Kanchan😃

Thanks for update 


Thank you for your lovely words Bhagu!❤️🤗 

I try keeping the characters as near as I can to their sketches on the show! Your detailings on the parts you liked really help me as an author!👍🏼

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Bacillusbadius


Read chapter 4 now

It's so cute

Aww!

Kanchan is best❤️

Loved the bonding of KanVan

Shravan climbed even ladder for Suman

He lost in her and felt bad for her condition ❤️

Aww

Suman was waiting for him 

Their interwined fingers ❤️

Excited for next chapter 

Thanks for update 


Aww thanks Bhagu! Thanks in taking out the time to drop by as well as to comment on the chapter in a separate post!🤗 The writer in me is dancing with joy here


P.S The next chapter (Chpt 5) is up. In fact right after your comment😆 Can't wait for your review😃

Posted: 3 years ago

I'm totally in love with your writing Bucky! Your writing style is really gripping and forces me to read the whole update in one go being focused and sometimes I like something so much that I even tend to read some lines twice😊Awesome update, eagerly waiting for another one!

Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update Bucky👍🏼

Aww

Kanchan is so cute❤️

Loved the bonding of KanMan

Suman is Suman

she is sick, still wanted to go to school

Family members 😆

Kanchan teased her😆

And told Shravan visited her❤️, but Suman was more worried for him

But she deliberately stressed the exact words and they were incomplete 😆

Devika and her fake concern 🤣

Khurana's opinion changing towards Shravan👍🏼

Aww

Shravan took all notes for 'his buddy'👏

Suman's health deteriorated! 😔

Shravan is so worried 😳

Hope SuVan will meet

Excited for next chapter (Take your own time)

Thanks for update 

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Vageeshwarics


I'm totally in love with your writing Bucky! Your writing style is really gripping and forces me to read the whole update in one go being focused and sometimes I like something so much that I even tend to read some lines twice😊Awesome update, eagerly waiting for another one!


Aww thank you so much Vagee!❤️

You've made my day with your lovely comment! I'm grinning like a goofball now😳

Edited by Bucky - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Bacillusbadius


Awesome update Bucky👍🏼

Aww

Kanchan is so cute❤️

Loved the bonding of KanMan

Suman is Suman

she is sick, still wanted to go to school

Family members 😆

Kanchan teased her😆

And told Shravan visited her❤️, but Suman was more worried for him

But she deliberately stressed the exact words and they were incomplete 😆

Devika and her fake concern 🤣

Khurana's opinion changing towards Shravan👍🏼

Aww

Shravan took all notes for 'his buddy'👏

Suman's health deteriorated! 😔

Shravan is so worried 😳

Hope SuVan will meet

Excited for next chapter (Take your own time)

Thanks for update 


Thank you Bhagu! Glad you liked it🤗

Yes planning on Suvan to have a proper conversation in the next😉

Thanks for being so considerate and patient in spite of me taking eons to update. Really appreciate it

Edited by Bucky - 3 years ago
Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Bucky



Aww thank you so much Vagee!❤️

You've made my day with your lovely comment! I'm grinning like a goofball now😳

You totally deserve it Bucky!😊

Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by Vageeshwarics


You totally deserve it Bucky!😊


Thanks Vagee!🤗

You guys honestly inspire me to work harder🤗

Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update, Bucky! Loved how Suman was worried about Shravan even though she's really sick. Kancha, the cupid...she truly is the best! Can't wait for the next update. I hope Suman is alright! I love the way you write, Bucky!! I really enjoy your stories

Posted: 3 years ago

Awesome update. Loved how Suman worried for Shravan when Kanchan told her about sneaking Shravan at night. Also Shravan took notes only for Suman. Hope suman is alright. 



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