Main tujhme apni jaan rakh doon,st 5 on pg 28,teaser on 31,11/1

cutieruhi thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 8 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 4 years ago

Another ts,with closed thread.


MAIN TUJHME APNI JAAN RAKH DOON


PROLOGUE

Ishita was taking the tea and snacks to their room happily, excited to tell him the biggest news of their life but got confused seeing the room locked. She start knocking the door but no-one opened the door. She heard some noise and saw from the side window and got shocked seeing the scene inside. Raman was trying to hang himself. The tray fell off her hand and she start banging on the door with all her might crying. 


Ishita -raman raman open the door, please open the door. U can't do this to me, please u can't go leaving me alone. Koi problem hai toh we will sort it out. But please don't do this, please raman please. She was crying and screaming loudly making Raman think again on his decision. He get off the chair and went to open the door as he can't hear her scream out of horror to loose him. 


He opened the door and she hugged him tight crying. He too cried hugging her tight, both cried for long and then she said -kya hua jaan, what u r doing, why u r doing ,aisa kya ho gaya that u were about to end ur life. 


Raman -i don't know how to tell u, pata nahi tum mera vishwas karogi bhi yaa nahi. He said with moist eyes. 


Ishita cupped his face and said -i will trust u, u just tell me. 


Raman -u know Shagun, mere MD ashok khanna ki wife.


Ishita nodded in yes. 


Raman -from last month she was pestering me to have physical relationship with her. Kyunki uske aur sir ke beech achche relation nahi hai. I was just avoiding but yesterday, when I went to their house, she seduced me. I slapped her back, and in return of her insult, she accused me today, that I raped, 


Ishita -her. 


Raman nodded in no and said -their six years old daughter ria.he said making ishita shocked to no end. 


That's all for now, enjoy and do comment and hit like. Will wait for it. 


Ps-it it loosely based on movie, aitraaz. 

Edited by cutieruhi - 3 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

220

Views

17074

Users

45

Likes

945

Frequent Posters

cutieruhi thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 8 Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 4 years ago

Index

*******


SHOT 1

SHOT 2

SHOT 3

SHOT 4

SHOT 5

Edited by cutieruhi - 3 years ago
ishrarudi06 thumbnail
Anniversary 6 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 0 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome starting

Plz plz continue soon

sunshinejo thumbnail
Anniversary 8 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Interesting prologue 

Update soon 

Kavya_P thumbnail
Anniversary 8 Thumbnail Group Promotion 7 Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 4 years ago

Congrats for new story Di 


Interesting prologue Di 

Disgusting shagun

Update soon Di 

Thanks for Pm Di 

Sorry for the late reply Di 

cooldilkaur thumbnail
Anniversary 8 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome prologue di

Lets see what happens next 

Ty 4 d pm too

omsai24 thumbnail
Anniversary 9 Thumbnail Group Promotion 3 Thumbnail Visit Streak 30 0 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Very interesting

Eagerly waiting for update

Thanks for the pm

divancute thumbnail
Anniversary 6 Thumbnail Group Promotion 5 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Congratulations for the new story di

Nice prologue

Thanx for the pm

Continue soon

viena_dubal thumbnail
Anniversary 6 Thumbnail Group Promotion 4 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Nice prolouge 

Pls start this story soon

Sravanthix thumbnail
Group Promotion 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 4 years ago

Congratulations on new story!

Interesting prologue. 

This Shagun is disgustingšŸ˜”

Do continue soon

Thanks for the PMā¤