Aashiq...The Lover...RiKara SS

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Dedicated to 

ADHIAMMULULU

who wants me to write a RiKara SS on the tamil movie Sachein.

St.Peter's college...

A car reached the College compound.A stylish girl came out of the car.

All the boys were flattered.They could not take their eyes off her.She was none other than Gauri.

Gauri was enjoying their attention.


Ishq Jaise Hai Ek Aandhi, Ishq Hai Ek Toofaan
Ishq Ke Aage Bebas Hai, Duniya Mein Har Insaa
Ishq Mein Sab Deewane Hain, Ishq Mein Sab Hairaan
Ishq Mein Sab Kuchh Mushkil Hai, Ishq Mein Sab Aasaan
Dekho Pyare, Ye Nazare, Ye Deewane, Ye Parvane
Hai Ishq Mein Kaise Gum
( Tumse Milke Dil Ka Hai Jo Hal Kya Kahein
Ho Gaya Hai Kaisa Ye Kamaal Kya Kahein )...(2)

Dil To Hai Ek Raahi Jaana, Dil Ki Tum Manzil Ho
Dil To Hai Ek Kashti Jaana, Jiska Tum Saahil Ho
Dil Na Phir Kuchh Maange Jaana, Tum Agar Haasil Ho
Dil To Hai Mera Tanha Jaana, Aao Tum Mahfil Ho
Ishq Se Hain Saari Khushiyan, Ishq Se Barbaadi


Ishq Hai Paabandi Lekin, Ishq Hi Aazaadi
Ishq Ki Duniya Mein Yaaron Khwaboon Ki Aabaadi
Kho Gaya Wo Jisko Manzil Ishq Ne Dikhladi
Dekho Pyare, Ye Nazaare, Ye Deewane, Ye Parvaane
Hai Ishq Mein Kaise Gum
( Tumse Milke Dil Ka Hai Jo Haal Kya Kahein


Ho Gaya Hai Kaisa Ye Kamaal Kyaa Kahein )...(2)

Tumko Pooja Hai, Tumhari Hi Ibaadat Ki Hai
Hamne Jab Ki Hai To Phir Aise Mohabbat Ki Hai...(2)
Dil Mera Paagal Hai Jaana, Isko Tum Bahla Do
Dil Mein Kyun Halchal Hai Jaana, Mujhko Tum Samjha Do
Mahkaa Jo Aanchal Hai Jaana, Isko Tum Lahra Do
Roop Jo Baadal Hai Jaana, Mujhpe Tum Barsa Do Jaana Le Ke Aaya Hai Tera Ye Deewana
Jaana Tujhpe Mit Jaayega Tera Ye Parwana


Jaana Mere Dil Mein Kya Hai, Tune Ye Na Jaana
Jaana Tujhko Yaad Aayega Mera Ye Afsana
Dekho Pyare, Ye Nazare, Ye Deewane, Ye Parwane
Hai Ishq Mein Kaise Gum
( Tumse Milke Dil Ka Hai Jo Haal Kya Kahein


Ho Gaya Hai Kaisa Ye Kamaal Kya Kahein )...(2)(Main hoon na).

A boy wet near Gauri.

Gauri looked at him:What?

He was silent.

Gauri:Ajay!

Ajay stammered:I..I...

Gauri:Without wasting my time say fast.

Ajay:Gauri,I love you.

Rudra and Raju were watching them.

Raju:Will Gauri accept Ajay?Then my hope to be in this college will break.

Rudra:Why should she accept you when there is a handsome guy like me?

Raju:Self praising!I am handsome than you.Everyone says that I look younger than my age.

Rudra:Really?

Rudra started laughing.

Rudra and Ajay started arguing.

Gauri stared at Ajay:Ajay..look...we are not even friends.We have talked to each other.But we don't know much about each other.Then why do you accept me to accept your proposal?

Ajay:When I saw you for the first time itself I fell for you.

Gauri:I don't believe in love at first sight.A boy and a girl should know each other well.Then what happens is love.But unfortunately that is not there between us.So my answer is no.Bye...

Gauri walked away while Ajay was burning in anger.

Rudra and Raju were relieved.

Raju said in excitement:Gauri rejected Ajay.

Rudra:What a wonderful scene!

They hugged each other happily.

A cool boy was walking on the road humming a song and enjoying the scenery.He is none other than Omkara. Suddenly it started raining.

Om:Oh...

Omkara saw a tree.He ran towards the tree ad stood under it.

Suddenly his eyes fell on an Angelic beauty who was enjoying in rain.

She was Gauri.She was dancing in the rain.His face blossomed seeing her.

Naa Re Naa Re, Naa Re Naa Re
Naa Re Naa Re, Naa Re Naa Re
Barso Re, Megha Megha Barso Re


Megha Megha Barso Re, Megha Barso
Meetha Hai Kosaa Hai, Baarish Ka Bosa Hai
Kosaa Hai, Kosaa Hai, Barrishon Ka Bosa Hai
Jal Jal Jal Jal Jal Jal Jal Thal Jal Thal
Chal Chal Chal Chal Chal Chal Chal Chal
Chal Chal Behta Chal
Geeli Geeli Geeli Ha, Ha Ha Ha Ha



Geeli Geeli Maati, Geeli Maati Ke
Chal Gharonge Bimaayenge Re
Hari Bhari Ambi Ambi Ki Daali
Mil Ke Joole Jhulaayenge Re Oh
Dhan Baiju Gai Ne, Hal Jote Sabne
Bailon Ki Ganti Baji, Aur Taal Lage Bharne
Re Tair Ki Chali Main Toh Paar Chali
Paar Wale Parle Kinaar Chali Re Megha
Naa Re Naa Re, Naa Re Naa Re
Naa Re Naa Re, Naa Re Naa Re


Tu Tu Turu, Tu Tu Turu, Tu Tu Turu
Kaali Kaali Raaten, Kaali Raaton Mein
Yeh Badarvaa Baras Jaayega
Gali Gali Mujh Ko, Megha Doondega
Aur Garaj Ke Palat Jaayega
Ghar Aangaan Angana, Aur Paani Ka Jharna
Bhool Na Jaana Mujhe, Poochenge Varna
Re Beh Ke Chali, Main Toh Beh Ke Chali
Re Kehthi Chali, Main Toh Keh Ke Chali
Re Megha
Naa Re Naa Re, Naa Re Naa Re


Naa Re Naa Re, Naa Re Naa Re(Guru)

Omkara entered the college.

Om:Cool...

Rudra and Raju saw him.

Raju:Are you new admission?

Om:Yes.My name is Omkara.

Raju:Hi Omkara.

Om:Hi...are you the Watch man of this college?

Rudra burst into laughter while Raju got embarrassed.

Raju:I am a student here.

Omkara was stunned:Student?

Rudra:He has been in this college since last 10 years.

Omkara was stunned:10 years?

Rudra:Yes.He joins for degree.But he does'nt write the exam.After 3 years he joins another group for degree.But he skips his exams.

Omkara and Rudra were laughing.

Raju:You are wrong Rudra.In between I had written some exams though I did'nt pass.

Om and Rudra laughed again.

Om:You are really interesting.What's your name?

Raju:I have the most modern name.Raju.

Om:Your Name is good.But modern....?Your name reminds me of 70;80's movies.

Raju frowned.

Rudra:By the way I am Rudra.

Om:Hi...

Rudra:I am going.I have to submit my assignment.

Rudra went away.

Raju:By the way Omkara,do you have any girl friend?

Om remembered Gauri dancing in rain.

Suddenly Om's eyes fell on Gauri who came out of the car with her bag.

Om:She is so beautiful!

Raju:You mean your girl friend is very beautiful?No way?No one can be as beautiful as Gauri.She is the college beauty.

Om:No one can be as beautiful as her.

Raju:No..Gauri is the best.

Unknowingly Omkara walked towards Gauri.Seeing Gauri even Raju walked towards her.

Om:Hi..I am Omkara.

Gauri said in an attitude:O I see!

Raju:This is the college beauty Gauri.

Omkara was surprised:You were talking to me about her?

Raju:Yes.

Om smiled.

Raju:Gauri is the most beautiful girl in our college.No one can defeat Gauri in beauty.

Gauri smiled like a victorious Queen.

Raju:All the college boys are mad for her.But we dpn't know which boy will be lucky enough to be the Prince of her hearts.

Gauri smirked.

Om:Raju....I think because of your age you are losing your eye sight also.From which angle does she look that beautiful for you?

Gauri was shocked.

Om:Gauri looks nice.But not good enough to win the title of the College beauty.An average beauty.

Sorry Gauri..I am straight forward.

Gauri was stunned and shattered.

Omkara was the first person who did not praise her beauty,he is the only person who called her an average looking girl.Gauri's frustration could not be explained.

Raju opened his mouth in O shape.

Raju thought:How could Omkara not see her beauty?In a way it's good.I don't have any competition with him to win Gauri's heart.

Gauri started throwing show pieces at home.She started throwing cushions too.Her parents Shakti and Pinky were stunned.

Pinky:Oh my Mata!Why are you so angry Gauri?

Gauri:How dare he?

Shakti:Who?

Gauri:Omkara.

Shakti:Did he misbehave with you?I will call the police.

Gauri:No use dad.Police won't catch such useless guys.

Shakti:What are you saying Gauri?How can police ignore such boys?

Pinky:First tell us what he did.

Gauri:He said that I am not beautiful enough to be praised by others.

Shakti-Pinky were stunned:What?

Gauri:Yes dad and mom.Till now everyone has only praised my beauty.But he insulted my looks.

Gauri walked to her room angrily.Shakti and Pinky laughed.

Pinky:For the first time someone had the guts to break our daughter's arrogance.

Shakti:He is super smart.

Pinky:Ya.

Raju to Om:You know..when I see Gauri my heart beats fast.I love her.We make a perfect match.Right?

Omkara and Rudra felt like laughing.

Rudra:The weirdest pair.

Raju:You stop it.You are jealous.

Rudra:Jealous of you?Very funny.

Raju:I don't care.Om..since you are not interested in Gauri,can you do a favour for me?Can you please convey a message to her on my behalf?

Om:Sure.What's the message?

Raju told him something.

Omkara walked towards Gauri.

Om:Gauri,I want to tell you something.

Gauri asked him rudely:What do you want to tell me?

Om:You are very beautiful...I have not seen a beauty like you..

Gauri's smile which was lost when Omkara said that she is not that pretty came back to her face.She smiled from the bottom of her heart.

Gauri felt that she was flying in the sky.

Gauri:Oh...earlier you told me that I am not that beautiful.Now you are saying that I am a beauty.Finally you spoke the truth.

Om:You are mistaken.These are not my words.These are said by my friend Raju.He told me to say this to you on his behalf.

Gauri:What?

Om:Well...I did'nt finish it.He said more for you.He said your face is bright like an orange,hair is beautiful like chord...

Gauri:Orange..chord?

Om:Wait..I did'nt finish it..your teeth are beautiful like white rice and your hands are lovely like canes.

Gauri could not tolerate it anymore:Enough.Show me who Raju is.

Om:Sure.

Omkara brought Gauri to meet Raju.

Om:This is my dear friend Raju who said those romantic words to you.

Gauri looked at him weirdly.

Gauri:Really?You compared me to orange..white rice etc?

Raju blushed:Yes..This is my love for you.

Gauri:Stop it.Love...my foot!I you were not this college's student I would have called you uncle.

Raju was embarrassed.

Gauri:Don't come to me with these crazy so called romantic lines.I will not leave you.Understand?

Raju was sweating:Ok.

Gauri walked away angrily.Omkara and Rudra were laughing at Raju.

Raju:My love story became tragic like 'Titanic'.

Rudra:Don't compare your flop one sided love story with a classic hit like Titanic.By the way since you are deleted from the list let me try my luck.Gauri cannot reject me.

Om and Raju stared at Rudra.

Rudra went near Gauri.

Rudra was holding a glass of protein shake in his hand:Gauri...I bought this protein shake from the canteen.

Gauri:So what should I do?

Rudra:Nothing.I brought this to you to let you know that the secret of my good looks is Protein shake.

Gauri:But I am not interested to know your secrets.

Rudra was embarrassed.

Rudra:Gauri,will you be with me to share my protein shake forever?

Gauri:I hate protein shake.I can't even take a sip of it.Then how can drink this forever?Well...why should I drink your protein shake?I am not interested to take your share.

Rudra was embarrassed.He kept the protein shake on the table.

Rudra:Then leave it.I will bring something else to share it with you.

Gauri:Why are you adamant about sharing your things with me?Did I ever ask you to share anything with me?

Rudra:No.

Gauri:Then why?Please don't try to irritate me by sharing your protein shake or orange juice with me.

Gauri walked away.

Rudra cried in a childish manner while Omkara and Raju who were watching this and laughing came towards Rudra.They could not stop laughing.

Raju:You were so proud and over confident that Gauri will accept you.See now what happened.

Rudra:But I will not waste time.I will find another girl.

Omkara:Good.You should be like this.Gauri does'nt suit you.You will get a better girl who loves protein shake.She will drink protein shake with you forever.

Rudra blushed.

Raju:I have also taken a decision.This time I will pass all my exams and get married to the girl chosen by my mother.

Om:Good.Your mother will choose the best girl for you.

Raju smiled.

Omkara went to a house.

Omkara:Hello darling....

A girl came out of her room.Seeing her Omkara became so happy that he hugged her.

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Gauri is too proud for her own good. She is rude to everyone.

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Congrats on the RiKara SS.

wonderful update 

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Congratulations on your new RiKara SS

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Part 1 


Why is Gauri so rude to everybody 

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Gauri's entry was superb

Gauri rejected Ajay

Raju and Rudra's argument 😝

Surprised to see Johnny Lever

He's my favorite comedian

Rain scene was nice

Omkara called Raju watchman 😃

Omkara broke Gauri's pride 😄

Raju and Rudra failed in confession 😄

Nice decisions by everyone 😄

Funny ff, update soon

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Thank u friends


Aashiq...The Lover... Part 2

I dedicate this chapter to my dearest friend RehanaSiraj for suggesting Amala Paul opposite Rudra.

Omkara went to a house.

Omkara:Hello darling....

A girl came out of her room.Seeing her Omkara became so happy that he hugged her.

Omkara:Hello Jugnu...

Jugnu:Hello Om bhaiyya...

Jugnu was a 8 year old girl who was very close to Omkara.Jugnu's parents Archit and Pranati came and greeted Omkara.

Jugnu:How is your college life?

Om:Superb.I got some funny friends.

Jugnu:Is there any funny girl friend?

Gauri's face came into his mind.

Om giggled:Of course yes.There is a funny girl named Gauri.

Jugnu:Name is good.I want to meet her.

Om:One day I will bring her here.

Jugnu:Wow!I can't wait to meet her.

Om:Tell..how is your life?

Jugnu:It's boring without you.

Pranati:Jugnu always wants you near her.She does'nt need us.

Archit:Jugnu...finally your Om bhaiyya is here to remove your boredom.

Jugnu:Ya.

Om caressed her:I am here.So nothing is boring anymore.We will play together.

Jugnu:Wow.

Omkara and Jugnu played many games together.Archit and Pranati smiled.

Rudra was climbing stairs fast.He bumped into a girl.

Rudra:Oh I am sorry.

That girl raised her eye brows and looked at him:Rudra!

Rudra was surprised:How do you know my name?

She smiled:Who does'nt know you?You are so popular in the gym.

Rudra got flattered by her compliment.

Rudra:You have seen me in the gym?

She:Yes.I see you daily there.You look like a film actor.How well you maintain your figure!

Rudra felt that he was on cloud nine.

Rudra:So you like going to gym?

She:Yes.

Rudra thought:My dream was to go to the gym with my girl friend.

Rudra:Your name?

She:Vaiga.

Rudra:Lovely name.I have never heard such a sweet name before.

She blushed:Really?

Rudra:Ya...It sounds so sweet to the ears like your sweet voice.Just like the sound we hear while pouring protein shake to the glass.

She blushed:You made my day.

He smiled.

Jeene laga hoon, pehle se zyada

Pehle se zyada, tumpe marne laga hoon

Rudra's mind told him:Rudra..I think she is the one for you.

Rudra slipped and Vaiga caught him.

Rudra felt goosebumps all over his body.They shared a sweet eye lock.Both were blushing.

Main mera dil aur tum ho yahaan

Phir kyun ho palkein jhukaye wahaan

Tum sa haseen pehle dekha nahin

Tum is.sey pehle thhe jaane kahaan

Vaiga patted his cheek cutely:Bye bye Rudra.

Rudra was lost in her.

Jeene laga hoon pehle se zyada

Pehle se zyada tumpe marne laga...

hmmmmm... ho.(Ramaiya Vastavaiya).

Gauri was surrounded by some goons.

Gauri:Why are you all here?Why are you guys after me?

Ajay and another guy came out of the jeep.

Gauri was shocked.

That guy:I am Kali.Ajay's brother.How dare you reject my brother?

Gauri:It's not anything daring.I don't love him.So I rejected him.

Kali:You hurt my brother by rejecting him.So we are going to kidnap you and get you married to Ajay.

Gauri was shocked.

She looked at Ajay:Ajay..are you mad?

Ajay smirked.

The goons tried to pull her to the jeep.Suddenly Omkara came from behind and beat the goons.He punched all of them.

The police came and arrested Kali and goons.

The inspector:Wow..Kali is a wanted Don of the city.Since I caught him I will get promotion.

Om smiled.They carried away Kali and the goons.Ajay came upset:Bhaiyya!

Om punched Ajay and said:If you trouble Gauri again you will also be arrested.Understand?

Ajay ran away due to fear.

Gauri looked at Omkara:Thank you Omkara.

Om smiled.

Gauri:In movies the hero saves the heroine from the goons and the heroine falls in love with the hero.But don't think that I will be like that.

Om:Means?

Gauri:Don't think that I fell in love with you as you saved me.I will not melt just because you saved me.It's not easy to impress Gauri Sharma.

Omkara started laughing.

Om:Why should I expect you to melt or get attracted towards me when I will get the college beauty for myself?

Gauri:What?Who is that college beauty who will be your girl friend?

Om:She is somewhere here.I am waiting to see her.

Gauri:What's your imagination about your college beauty?

Om:I will explain as I have a clear imagination about my college beauty.She should not be short like rats.She should be very tall.

Gauri was shocked.

She thought:Oh my God!I am so tiny.I am too short.I am not at all tall.

Om:She should have long hair like Rapunzel.

Gauri caressed her hair with pity and thought:My hair is so short.

Om:She should be intelligent.

Gauri:These are your demands?Stupid.Any short girl can wear high heeled shoes to look tall.Any girl with short hair can use hair extensions to have long hair.

Om:Yes..possible.But that's artificiality.I want height and hair to be natural.

Gauri thought:Oh no...

Om:But whatever..even if height and hair can be fixed what about intelligence?It can be fixed only by God in our brain.Only some are blessed with that.The others are exactly like you in intelligence.

Gauri:What?You mean I am not intelligent?I am a fool?

Om smirked:I did'nt say that.You judged yourself like that and called yourself a fool.

Omkara walked away smiling.Gauri got irritated.

Gauri:This guy...

She gritted her teeth in anger.

After some days....

Gauri was in the canteen.

Gauri:Where is Omkara?Usually he comes after me to irritate me.

She saw Rudra and Raju coming to the canteen.Gauri went near them.Rudra and Raju got scared thinking that Gauri will shout at them.

Raju imagined Gauri going to slap him.Suddenly he jerked.

Raju:Don't do ..don't do.

I promise that I will not dare to propose you.I will never even dream to praise your beautiful features.I swear..your teeth are not like white rice and your hands are not like canes.Your face is not an orange and your hair is not like cord.

Gauri murmured in irritation:Mad!

Rudra imagined Gauri pouring protein shake on his face harshly.

He got up with a jerk.

Rudra:I promise..I will not even think of sharing my protein shake with you.

Gauri lost her control and yelled at them:Stop it.I don't have to time to waste listening to your crazy talk.2 maddies.

Raju-Rudra looked at each other:Maddies?

Gauri:Yes..2 mad boys.

Raju-Rudra opened their mouth in O shape:You called us mad?

Gauri:Yes,I can call mad people only Maddies.Right?Do you guys have any problem with that?

Rudra-Raju pouted like kids:No.

Gauri smirked:Good.

Where is your crazy friend Omkara?

Raju:He did not come to college.

Gauri:Why?

Rudra:No idea.

Gauri thought:Who cares?

Gauri mobile phone rang.Gauri attended the call hiding somewhere as mobile phones are not allowed in college.

It was Pinky:Gauri...your dad met with an accident.Come to City hospital.

Gauri got shocked.

Gauri:Dad!

She walked out of the canteen in a hurry.

She drove her car to the hospital.

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Om's words are having an effect on her.

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Rudra and Vaigha jodi is awesome

Who plays Vaigha?

Om got the goons arrested

Gauri is having an affect of Om's words on her

RuJuRi scene was funny

I hope everything is well n good with Gauri's dad

update soon

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Thanks a lot.

I am happy that at least u appreciated Rudra Vaiga pair as all others want rumya or ruvya.

Vaiga is played by the actress Amala Paul


Originally posted by: salley145

Rudra and Vaigha jodi is awesome

Who plays Vaigha?

Om got the goons arrested

Gauri is having an affect of Om's words on her

RuJuRi scene was funny

I hope everything is well n good with Gauri's dad

update soon