What If? - Two Shots on Nazar/PiyAnsh (Completed) - Page 2

This content was originally posted by: nushy1995

Itna jaldi pad bhi liya! 😲 😲 😲

Anyways, koi jaldi nahi hai review ki. Jake rest kar lo. 😊

Haan ji... Padh liya. Isme itna shock ya surprised hone wali kaun si baat hai? 😆

I am a very fast reader...

And finally ab jakar dimag kuch thanda hua to review bhi de diya... 

First of all, again as a broken tape recorder the same words: awesome as always!! 👏 👏 👏

Chalo, main bhi apni record baja hi deti hoon - Tareef Ke Liye Shukriya!!! 😎

Ansh returning home from office... Chalo, kuch kaam to kar raha hai banda!!

Aur nahi to Kya? Mera story hain. Muft ka khana nahi khilane wali main. 🤪

Absolutely loved how you described Ansh's feelings for Pia... Loved the way you described his love for her and about the first time he noticed her properly for the first time...

Thanks! 😳

Completely agree with Pia here... It's really fun to watch Ansh's scared expressions... 😆

😈 😈 😈

Seriously?? Ansh and that too the hypnotized one flashing all his 32 teeth???

Ye idea dimag main kahan se aaya behen? Haan... Smile kar to raha tha but 'flashing all his teeth' cracked me up!!!

Also, photographers the kya PL aur Ansh ki shaadi ke circus main???

Actually, the engagement ceremony had been quite a happy occasion for Gs. And there was a brief scene where Ansh was smiling with most of his teeth flashing. Besides everyone was hypnotized in the original wedding.

Engagement and Mehedi - both the functions went smoothly. So obviously, there must be photographers also.

This is the reason I specifically mentioned Engagement Ceremony. 😎 

32 teeth - creative liberty.

Piya was horribly heartbroken on that engagement ceremony, so added that part too. 😉

PS. "still give them minor hear attacks."

I have edited. Thanks for telling me. 😊

Haan ji... Padh liya. Isme itna shock ya surprised hone wali kaun si baat hai? 😆

I am a very fast reader...

Didn't expect you to be such a fast reader, so got shocked.😆

Chalo, main bhi apni record baja hi deti hoon - Tareef Ke Liye Shukriya!!! 😎

Most welcome... 🤗

Aur nahi to Kya? Mera story hain. Muft ka khana nahi khilane wali main. 🤪

Of course!! Muft ki rotiyan thode hi todega... 🤪

Thanks 😳

🤗 

Actually, the engagement ceremony had been quite a happy occasion for Gs. And there was a brief scene where Ansh was smiling with most of his teeth flashing. Besides everyone was hypnotized in the original wedding.

Engagement and Mehedi - both the functions went smoothly. So obviously, there must be photographers also.

This is the reason I specifically mentioned Engagement Ceremony. 😎 

I agree... The engagement ceremony was quite a happy occasion for the Gs. And yes, scene to tha where Ansh was actually smiling...

Original wedding main to sab ke sab hawa main latakte hue so rahe the...

Although, photographers kahin dikhe nahi... 😆

32 teeth - creative liberty.

Isiliye poocha tha... 😆

Piya was horribly heartbroken on that engagement ceremony, so added that part too. 😉

Yeah... Devdas part... 😉

I have edited. Thanks for telling me. 😊

🤗

This content was originally posted by: nushy1995

Haan ji... Padh liya. Isme itna shock ya surprised hone wali kaun si baat hai? 😆

I am a very fast reader...

Didn't expect you to be such a fast reader, so got shocked.😆

I can complete one novel within two to three hours... 

Baaki agar single chapter hai to kuch minutes main khatam ho jaata hai...

As Nikki, even am gonna say the same!

Super awesome, emotions, Pia annoyed, fighting and then enjoying it as everything was a prank. Fight and reasoning was good, along with last discussion, what if! 

PS: Appreciation to the fact that RiAd aren't included, cos different angles.

This content was originally posted by: Madhura..

As Nikki, even am gonna say the same!

Super awesome, emotions, Pia annoyed, fighting and then enjoying it as everything was a prank. Fight and reasoning was good, along with last discussion, what if! 

PS: Appreciation to the fact that RiAd aren't included, cos different angles.

I am glad that you liked it. 😊 

RiAd are important but not needed here, thankfully. It gets really hard to keep the balance between couple's POV and parents. BTW, I am open to suggestions. I want the second part to be as funny as I could write. If you have any suggestion, you can PM me. 😊

This content was originally posted by: nushy1995

I am glad that you liked it. 😊 

RiAd are important but not needed here, thankfully. It gets really hard to keep the balance between couple's POV and parents. BTW, I am open to suggestions. I want the second part to be as fun as I could write. If you have any suggestion, you can PM me. 😊

😃

Exactly! Well I have none, at the moment. But will share if I do. Am sure you will do full justice.

This content was originally posted by: Madhura..

😃

Exactly! Well I have none, at the moment. But will share if I do. Am sure you will do full justice.

Okay! Thanks! 😊

Chapter - 02

Nushy!!! That was AMMMAAAZINNNGGG!!! 👏 👏 👏

My first reaction: 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

You are simply awesome!!!    

Itna talent kahan chupa kar rakha tha behen??? Your sense of humour is almost infinite times better than mine...

The initial part where Pia was revealing her inner feelings made me emotional...

Uske baad, the chapter was simply hilarious to the core...

So, first and foremost, you pointed out the most logical thing... Why did Naman get all those goons in his wedding? Any normal person won't do that...

"Seriously!!! Now that I am trying to imagine you in the typical black shirt, laced with bullets and a scarf over your head, ready to pounce on your victim but with a knife and Jai Ho Maiya Ki!"

Hilarious!!! 🤣 🤣 🤣

You know, I was actually imagining Pia in a daku getup with black kurta and a belt of bullets... 

The Daku Rani Pia Devi just cracked me up... And I was laughing like a crazy person. Not to mention the Kancha Gang...

"At least Naman had some charm but all of your prospective brides were either hovering or were busy in eating tamarind or were suffering from self-obsession that would put Narcissus in complex.”

Gosh!!! What a description of Ansh's prospective brides...  🤣

“Why don’t we talk about Payal then? The one who came for Rishi but settled for a PUBG addicted Champu guy?” 

Champu guy!!!   

Thanks for this one...

The way you described how fate entwined Pia and Ansh was just fabulous!!! And yes, the points were absolutely correct too...

"But I can’t deny Bhaisasur was one hot Kali shakti. Did you see his abs?”

Definitely!!! Bhaisasur was one damn hot Kaali Shakti... Uff!!! His abs... And his hair!!   

Next, absolutely wonderful description of Ansh's harkatein... Bhaisasur ne to dhulai kar hi di... Kya pata koi aur bhi aakar behti Ganga main haath dho leta... 

And of course!!! How can we forget Mo's dance in her room... 

Fifty Shades of Pia... Not bad haan!!!

Now, to cut the long story short... I just loovveed it!!! ❤️ ❤️ ❤️

Nushy, you are the BEST!!! 

PS. Kahin kahin par words ke beech main spacing ka issue hai... And at some places, font main thoda issue hai...

Also, the name of the girl whom Pia latkofied from the balcony was Vidya, right??