Kumkum Bhagya

Kumkum Bhagya: Bhagya ke Daage (chapter 18 updated)

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Kumkum Bhagya: Bhagya ke Daage


Kumkum Bhagya: a story of abhi and pragya who were separated after their daughter kiara died from falling of the cliff. They went in separate ways taking one of the twin daughters prachi with pragya and rhea with abhi. But the destiny had other plans. 20years later, there daughters came in front of each othr. Pragya-rhea and abhi-prachi bonded well unaware of their relations.

Ranbir had fallen in love with prachi while rhea had fallen in love with him. Supporting each other and covering many journeys, ranbir and prachi become best friends but ranbir fall in the trap of maya played by rhea. prachi in order to help ranbir played a fake drama of supporting maya but when prachi changed her statement, ranbir started hating her.

with growing tension between pranbir, will they get united

in the daughters hatred for each other will fade away abhi-pragya eternal love??



Note:-

1# Guys i have recently started focusing on other couples from the show. so if you are looking for abhigya parts. i have started them recently and you will find them at the end.


2# No negative comments are allowed to spread against pranbir or any other couple. i will delete them.




Part 1,2,3 and 4:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5160665

Part 5:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5160665?pn=3

Part 6:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5160665?pn=4

Part 7 and 8:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5160665?pn=5

Part 9:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5160665?pn=6

Part 10:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5160665?pn=7

Part 11,12,13, and 14:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5160665?pn=8

Abhigya Special Part 1:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5160665?pn=8

Abhigya special Part 2 and 3:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5160665?pn=9

New Characters and part 18:- https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/5160665?pn=10




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Pranbir Nafrati Ishq - 1


As ranbir walked through the corridors of college,, he was no more of happy, naughty boy but angry young man,,his thoughts were only filled with prachi thoughts and her betrayer,,whenever he see her,, his heart break and his anger increases,, aryan always tries to cheer him,, he always wore his glasses


aryan:- yaar ranbir mat soch uske baare mein,, hum sab hai na tere saath,, kam se kam smile toh kar de,, kab tak aise rahe ga tu

ranbir:- (wiping his tears) tu nahi samjega,, jab bhi aakhen band karta hoon uska dhoka yaar aata hai mujhe,, kyu kia usne mere saath aisa,,

aryan:- i know you are hurt bro but kab tak ye sab sochta rahega,, you have to move on bro,, she does not deserve your love,, usne jo kia na uske baad toh bilkul bhi nahi,,

ranbir:- (stiffs) tu sahi keh raha hai,, i have to move on,, mai prachi ko hamesha ke liye bhool jaoga,, voh meri life mein ab kuch matter nahi karegi,,


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On the other side,, prachi was desperately finding ranbir,, she cannot bear his hate anymore,, it was killing her,, whenever she was in trouble, he was always there by her side and now when he is against her,, it was breaking her and when she found him,, she heard this


"mai prachi ko hamesha ke liye bhool jaoga,, voh meri life mein ab kuch matter nahi karegi,, "


her heart ache listening this,, tears were flowing through her eyes and she ran from there to the store room,, she broke down in tears and was continously crying,,


prachi:- ranbr please meri baat toh suno,, i know tum bahut hurt ho par mai tumari hate nahi seh sakti,, i really wish ki tum pehle jaise ban jao,, tum flirt, irritiating jaise bhi the waise hi ban jao bas mujhe hate mat karo,, i miss you,, i miss you a lot


she remembered her moments with ranbir,, his teasing, smile, laugh, everything,, she really missed that ranbir who was naughty from outside but sincere from inside,, she missed when he showed himself as a badboy but goodboy from inside,, he always done something to irritiate her but now she wanted him to irritiate her,, she fear of losing him,her support system,, her friend who knew her more than she knew herself


she cried continously ,,she wanted him back,, she wanted him to be his usual self naughty and chirpy,, she sat there for hours,, when she saw the time,, she realised everyone had left the college,, she gather her things and started to leave only to find the door locked,, her fear fear autmatically rised up,,


(a/n:- guys in my story prachi is claustrophobia)


prachi:- koi hai,, plzzz help mai yaha band hogi hoon,, (she banged on the door)


she was getting scared second by second and started banging on door,,


prachi:- (scared) help plzzzz help,, kya karo mai,, plzzz god help me,, (she started breathing heavily) mai kya karu abhi tak toh sab college se nikal gaye hoge,, haa sahana ko call karti hoon,,


she took her phone and called sahana but she didn't picked up,, she called multiple times but no answer came,, she was very afraid now,, her phone battery was very low and she knew who was her only hope,, HIM

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Pranbir Nafrati ishq - 2


Ranbir was driving home when his phone started to ring, he saw prachi's call and his anger😑😑 immediately increased,,he didn't wanted to talk to her,, her betrayer come in front of eyes so he ignored her calls and headed home but why was his heart beating so fast,, he was fear but why would he fear,, it was like someone close to him was in danger,, his phone was keep on ringing so out of frustation he picked up,,


ranbir:- (angrily)😑😑 kya hai prachi,,

prachi:- (breathing heavily) ra..ranbir 

ranbir instantly stopped the car,, his fear increased a lot,, what happened to her,, is she safe were the only thoughts running in his mind,,

ranbir:- (worried) prachi kya hua tum haaff kyu rahi hoon,,

prachi:- (struggling to speak) ranbir mai mai

ranbir:- prachi aaram se,, bolo kya hua,,

prachi:- ranbir mai store room band ho gayi hoon,, plzz help,, bahut darr lagg.....

phone call cutted,,

ranbir:- prachi prachi,,

ranbir again called but her phone was switched off,, he wasted no time and hurriedly drove back to college,, he only wanted her to be safe,, though he was angry at her,, he really loved her,, he cannot let her die,, he hurriedly went to college and ran towards the store room only to find prachi unconscious,, he immediately went to prachi and hold her

ranbir:- (teary) πŸ˜­πŸ˜­prachi utto,, kya hua tumhe,, tum javab kyu nahi de rahi hai,, please utto

his heart was beating very fast,, no he couldn't lose,, this can't happen,, she was not breathing but he was continously trying,,

ranbir:- (in a broken voice)😭😭 prachi please, please mujhe chor ke mat jao,, i can't live without you,, bahut pyaar karta hoon tumse,, tum bhale saath nahi thi mere,, par tab bhi tumhe dekh kar mann bhar jata tha mera lekin tum nahi hogi toh mai bhi nahi jee paoga,, please laut aao please,,

ranbir look at her face,, and started to give her CPR,, and to his relief,, she started breathing,, he picked her up and rushed to the hospital,, doctors informed him she was alright,, she just needs a little rest,, and she can go home now,, ranbir was finally relieved to know that she was okay,, he dropped her home after filling the papers,, whole journey was silent,, neither he nor she said anything,,

ranbir:- (calmy) tumara ghar aa gaya,, jao jake aaram karo

prachi:- ra

ranbir:- jao,,

though she wanted to talk to him, she knew he would not listen so she got out of the car and started walking,, ranbir saw that she forgot her medcines so he got out of the car and called her

ranbir:- prachi,,

she turned back in hope that maybe he will now talk to her but her hopes were shattered when he gave the medicines and starts heading to his car,, tears😭😭 again started to flow and she decided to try one more time,,

prachi:- (teary eyes) πŸ˜­πŸ˜­ranbir please meri baat suno please,,

he stopped in his tracks,, and closed his eyes,, her memories started to come in front of his eyes, their meeting, fighting, love and her betrayer,, he turned around with teary eyes,,

ranbir:- (with hurt) πŸ˜­πŸ˜­sunne ko raha hi kya hai prachi,, jo sunna tha woh toh sunn chuka hoon,,

prachi:- (trying to make him understand) ranbir tum galat samaj rahe ho,,

he grab her and pinned her to wall,, 

ranbir:- (shouts) mai galat samaj raha hoon ha,, sach toh ye hai prachi ki tum mujhe kabhi samaj hi nahi payi ho,, har baar tum mujhe galat samja, har baar,, pehle flirt, badtameez, aur ab molestor,, you know what prachi,, maine hi bahut badi galti kar di badal ke,, bad boy se good boy banne ki galti,, tumse dosti karne ki galti,, jaanti ho mai bad boy hi thik tha,, itna dard toh nahi hota na,, lekin in sab mein na sabse badi galti kya ki maine,, tumse pyaar karne ki,,

she loocked in his eyes with shock,, he loved her,,

ranbir:- haa prachi pyaar karne laga tha tumse,, tumse juri har chezz acchi lagne lagi thi,, tumse jagarna, tumhe dekhna, tumse baatein karna sab kuchh aur ye jo feeling hai na,, maine aaj tak feel nahi ki thi,, har baar tumara saath deta tha,, mujhe laga tha ki hum acche dost ban gaye ho ge par tumne mera barosa todd dia,, i was so much hurt jab mujhe pata chala tum mere against ho,, jab mujh pe case laga jaanti ho mujhe iss case se zyada ye jaana tha ki tum mere saath ho ki nahi,, jab office mein tumne mere liye staff ko sunaya,, i felt special par mujhe nahi pata tha ki tum mujhe pe eshaan kar rahi ho bas,,

she shook her head,,

ranbir:- lekin sach toh ye ki tum mujhepe kabhi barosa kari nahi payi thi aur ab mere dil mein tumare liye sirf nafrat hai prachi,, i hate you,, mai tumse sabse zyada nafrat karta hoon,, aur hamara rista aaj se katam ho gaya hai,,😑😑

he left her and went back,, she also went back home,, she didn't told anyone about today and went straight her room,, and broke down,, she wanted to tell him the truth but he wouldd never listen and his hate was killing her,,

on the other side,, ranbir parked his car on road and sat on car bonnet and started drinking,,

ranbir:- kyu prachi kyu mera barosa thoda tumne kyu,,

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Pranbir Nafrati Ishq - 3


prachi was walking on the road,, it's been one week since their encountor and his confession,, Never in her dreams, she taught ranbir will love her,, but now she was confused of her own feeling, i mean she did consider him as a good friend,, but she never notice him before but now she started noticing him,, his talks, teasing, singing, fighting, everything mattered to her,, he was always a fun loving, naughty guy but know he was only a angry guy,, he stopped laughing,,

Did he really loved her that much that she affects him this much,,

but today, she was happy,, she finally got the proof she needed to save ranbir and now everything will change back to normal BUT she didn't know what she will say to his confession,, he is a good guy, no i mean irritiating, stupid, flirt, but a little bit good or more than little bit ,ughh she didn't know, he sometimes was her good friend but sometimes stupid,, she had this unknown feeling whenever she with him but only with him,, she never felt that way,, it felt special,, she didn't know what she felt but she knew who to ask, her mother,, she walked towards her home when she saw pragya at the other side of the road but as soon as she started to move, a van out of nowhere came and kidnapped her

pragya:- (shouts) prachi (but the van was gone already)

sahana:- (who came out hearing her shout) maasi kya kyu aap chillai kyu, aur prachi kya hua prachi ko,,

pragya:- (teary eyes) prachi ko kuchh logo ne agwa kar liya hai

sahana:- (worried) lekin kisne,,

pragya:- voh mujhe nahi pata,, tum abhi ghar pe ruko,, mai police station jaati hoon,,

sahana:- maasi mai bhi aaungi

pragya:- (interuppting) nahi tum sarita ji ka kayal rakhna,, mai jaati hoon,,

she immediately went to police station while sahana went inside,, she was roaming here and there praying for prachi safety,,

sahana:- kya karu maasi ne toh ghar par rukhne ko kaha hai par,, haa mehra sir ko call karti hoon,,

she called abhi but he was in a meeting so he didn't picked up,,

sahana:- sir phone nahi utta rahe ab kya karu,, haa ranbir,,

she immediately called him,,

ranbir was in his room lying on bed trying to sleep but sleep was no where to come,, his taughts were only filled with prachi when his started to ring,, he saw sahana call,, though he is angry on prachi but he didn't had any grudge against sahana,,

ranbir:- haa sahana (he heard her crying and knew something was wrong) kya hua sahana tum ro kyu rahi ho,,

sahana:- ranbir voh prachi ko kisi ne kidnap kar lia hai,,

he immediately get up,,

ranbir:- (tensed) kya prachi ko kidnap,, par kab aur kese,,

sahana:- (crying) ghar ke bahar se abhi,,

ranbir:- mai bas abhi aa raha hoon ok,,

he cut the call and immediately went to prachi's house,, he had to save her,, but who would kidnap her,, where is she now,, he in no time reached prachi's home and hurriedly went inside and saw sahana roaming here and there,, as soon as she saw him, she hugged him

ranbir:- sahana kuchh pata chala

sahana:- nahi maasi abhi police station gayi hai aur sarita dadi abhi bahar gayi hai,,

ranbir:- mujhe ye batao hua kya,,

sahana:- maine maasi ki chiik suni aur bahar gayi,, unho ne bataya ki ek van se kisi ne prachi ko agwa kar liya hai,,

ranbir:- accha tum yahi ruko mai ja ke dekhta hoon,,

he went outside and started looking around when his eyes caught an earring lying on road,, he picked it up and saw it was prachi's ,, it was the one he gifted her,,

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ranbir and prachi went to the shop to buy a gift for his friend,, he didn't knew what to buy so he asked prachi for help and surprisingly, she was ready to help him,, they went and started to look for a gift,,

prachi:- waise ye tumari kaun si nayi girlfriend hai,,

ranbir:- girlfriend,, ye mai apni girlfriend ke liye nahi le raha,, aur ab meri koi girlfriend nahi hai,,

she started laughing,,

prachi:- dekho plzz aisa mazak mat karo,, tum keh rahe tumari girlfriend nahi hai,, har din tumari koi nayi gf banti rehti hai aur tum bol rahe ho ki tumari koi gf nahi hai,,

ranbir:- voh sab na pehle tha,, ab mai badal chuka hoon,, aur yeh gift chintu ke liye hai mera best friend,, uska birthday hai,,

prachi:- par mai tumare iss friend ke baare mein nahi jaanti,, kaun hai ye

ranbir:- ruko

he showed her a picture ,, there was a boy standing next to ranbir,,

prachi:- ye hai kaun,, mai tumare ghar mein toh dekha nahi,,

ranbir:- prachi ye orphanage mein rehta hai,, mai aur chief har mahine waha jaate hai aur donation dete hai aur bacho ke saath khelte hai,, chief waha apne gaane sunate hai aur mai unko football khelna sikhata hoon,, par ye chintu mera best friend hai,, usse bhi mere tarah footballer banna hai,, tum ek baar isse milogi na tum bhi iski best friend ban jao gi,,

she was admiring him,, he looked at her smiling at him,,

prachi:- (smilingy) tumhe pata hai,, tum dil ke bahot acche ho,,

ranbir:- thank you,,

prachi:- chalo gift karide hai aur haa mai bhi chalogi tumare saath,,

he smiled brightly,, they together find the good gift and he saw prachi trying an ear ring,, they were looking very beautiful on her but when she saw the price, her face become sad and she left from there,, he taught to buy it for her,, as they exited the place,,

ranbir:- prachi (she turned)

he showed her the ear rings,, and her face immediately glow up,,

prachi:- par ranbir ye kyu,,

ranbir:- ab lelo waise bhi payment kar chuka hoon,, wapas nahi de sakta,,

she happily took it like a kid and wear it,, she hugged him out of excitement

prachi:- (happily) thank you so much ranbir,,

she realised what she just did,, so she backed up,, and started looking here and there,,

ranbir:- (smiling like an idiot) hame chalne chahiye

prachi:- haa

they both went back,,

Flashback ends

he came out of his flashback and started to focus,, he looked around and to his luck,, there was a cctv camera on a lightpole,, he immediately called sahana and she came running,,

(a/n: guys i don't know anything about cctv lightpole so i just assumed)

ranbir:- (pointing towards cctv) sahana tumhe pata hai ye cctv ki footage kaha jati hai,,

sahana:- haa chalo,,

they both went to the location where they saw the footage,, they saw the van which kidnapped prachi,, sahana looked closely,, there was some unique symbol on the back

sahana:- ranbir yeh ghadi toh sanju ke pita ki hai,, unki ki gaadi mein esha nisaan tha,,

ranbir:- sahana tum abhi ghar jao,, mai prachi ko doodne jaata hoon,,

sahana:- (immediately) nahi mai bhi chalogi

ranbir:- sahana abhi tum ghar jao aur aunty ka wait karo plzzz,,

sahana:- par

ranbir:- (interrupting) mai vaada karta hoon mai prachi ko safely le aaoga,,

sahana went home while ranbir started to search for prachi,, he had his chief's friend monish number who was good at tracking,, so he called him,,

monish:- haa ranbir kaise ho

ranbir:- monish uncle mujhe aapki ki bahut zarori help chahiye,,

monish:- haa bolo

ranbir:- mai aapko ke gaadi ka number bheja hai,, ja aap mujhe plzz bata iski location bata sakte hai,,

monish:- kya par ranbir mai esha nahi kar sakta,,

ranbir:- plzz uncle plzz,, mai toh aapka sweet sa ranbir hona,, aap mere liye itna bhi nahi kar sakte,, bhool gaye humare saath bitay waqt,, (fake crying) jab mai aapki birthday parties mein aata tha,, aapke saath kitne din bitai,, mujhe toh lagta hai ab aap mujhe yaad bhi nahi karte,, bas yahi tak tha hamara rista,,

monish:- accha thik hai,, dono abhi aur tum ek jaise ho,, (starts searching) ranbir ye van hoshiarpur ke ek purane godaam mein par tumhe kyu ye jaana hai,, ranbir ranbir,, kaam katam aur phone kaat dia,,

ranbir started to head towards hoshiarpur,, he taught to inform abhi and pragya,, so he called his chief,,

abhi:- haa ranbir kaise ho,,

ranbir:- chief ek muskil ho gayi hai,,

abhi:- ek muskil toh mere saamne thi,, tera baap,, poori meeting boring thi (he yawns)

ranbir:- chief prachi ko sanju ne kidnap kar lia hai,,

abhi:- (tensed) kya prachi,, par kab

ranbir:- kuchh do ghante pehle,, chief maine aapko uss jagah ki location send kar di hai aur mai abhi wahi ja raha hoon,,

abhi:- ranbir prachi ne jo kia

ranbir:- (interrupting) chief prachi ne jo kia voh kia par aaj bhi voh meri life mein utna hi matter karti hai jitna pehle karti thi,, usse meri madad chahiye aur mai karuga,,

abhi sensed his immensed love for prachi

abhi:- thik hai tu vaha pohac mai bhi nikalta hoon,,

he ended the call,, and called pragya,,

ranbir:- aunty mai janta hoon prachi ke baare mein,,

pragya:- ranbir kuch pata nahi chal raha hai,,

ranbir:- aunty mujhe pata hai prachi kaha hai,, mai voh location aapko send kar di hai,, mai bhi vahi jaa raha hoon,,

pragya:- thank you so much ranbir,, tum waha pocho mai police ko leke aati hoon,, aur tum bhi apna kayal rakna

he cutted the and speeded the car,,

ranbir:- chahe tumse mai kitna bhi gussa kar lo par sach toh yahi hai prachi,, mai tumse bahot pyaar karta hoon,, aur sayad karta rahoga,,

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Pranbir Nafrati Ishq - 4


prachi found herself in a room tied up to a chair,, where is she,, how she end up here,, it took some time to realise that she had been kidnapped,, she looked around to see a unique symbol,, she heard some footsteps and saw the door opened,, it took a while to finally recognise him,, sanju,, he kidnapped her,, he came towards her and stand in front of her,,

prachi:- (trying to free herself) jaane do mujhe sanju,, kyu baand kar rakkha hai tumne mujhe,, 

sanju:- prachi prachi prachi (he took a chair and sat in front of her) voh kya hai na ki mai tumse bahut pyaar karta hoon par tumne hi aaj tak mere pyaar ki kadar nahi ki,, mujhe tappad mara (he touched his cheek),, meri bejati ki,, mera pyaar tukraya,, toh mujhe ye karna hi para,, tumse shaadi karne ke liye,, tumne hi mujhe ye karne ke liye majboor kia hai,,

No she will not marry him,, 

prachi:- pagal ho gaye ho tum sanju,, ye pyaar nahi pagalpan hai tumara,, nahi karogi mai tumse shaadi kabhi nahi,, HELPPPPP (she shouted)

he smiled evily and caressed her face while she jerks it,, his anger increases,,

sanju:- (he stood up and shouted) chillao aur chillao lekin yaha tumari help ke liye koi nahi aane wala,, (he comes close to her and spook dangerously) aur mere pyaar ko tum pyaar kahu ya pagalpan,, shaadi toh tumhe mujhse karni hi paregi hai,, 

prachi:- (teary eyed) kyu kar rahe ho tum ye sanju,, jaane do mujhe (she started crying)

sanju:- (consoling) prachi dekho plzz ro mat,, kal hi toh hamari shaadi hai,, ab agar tum eshe rogi toh kaise kaam chalega,, 

prachi:- (teary) ranbir

she remembered how ranbir always protected her from dangers,, sanju's blood boiled listening his name,,

sanju:- (angrily) prachi koi nahi aane wala yaha,, kya lagta hai tumhe ki har baar ki tarah ranbir tumhe bacha lega toh aisa nahi hoga, nahi bacha payega voh tumhe, koi nahi jaanta tum yaha hoon,, kaise doondege voh tumhe bolo,,

he is wrong,, ranbir always helped her and will surely help her now too,,

prachi:- nahi voh aayege,, mujhe pata hai,, ranbir mujhe doond lega,,

hearing his name continously, his blood boiled more,,

sanju:- (angry) ranbir ranbir RANBIR (he picked up the vase kept on a box and throw it on the floor breaking it into pieces,, prachi shrieked hearing it break,, he grabbed her shoulders tightly) kyu har baar sirf ranbir,, voh nafrat karta hai tumse (she looked at him) kyu aisa lagta hai prachi ki tumare itna bura karne ke baad bhi voh tumhe bacane aayega,, KYU (he shouted) itna sab hone ke baad bhi tumhe sirf ussi ki kyu yaad aa rahi hai,, voh nahi aane vala,,kuch nahi maanta voh tumhe ab,, koi nahi aane wala tumhe bacane,, (he left from there)

he was right,,  he hated her,, she remembered his words (i hate you,, mai tumse sabse zyada nafrat karta hoon,, aur hamara rista aaj se katam ho gaya hai,,) why would he come now to save her,,

prachi:- (teary eyed) haa,, kyu bacai ga voh mujhe ab,, uske liye toh maine usse dhoka dia hai,, uska pyaar toh ab nafrat bann gaya hai,, (she started crying)

she missed him, she missed him a lot,, she remembered how he always saved her, even before when sanju kidnapped her, it was ranbir who came first to save her,, she remembered how he was always there for, how they used to fight, tease each other, his anger and at last she remembered his confession,, but now even he will not save her,, she felt helpless,, she wished that ranbir was here,, Even in danger,, whenever he was around,, she always felt safe,, she was missing him and prayed that somehow he come,,

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on the other side,, ranbir was driving his car for hours,, each second was killing him,, he wanted to reach there in no time but this goddamm car was taking hours,,

ranbir:- ughhhh (he banged on the steering wheel) pata nahi aur kitna time lagega vaha pohacne mein,, pata nahi prachi kaisi hogi,, voh kitna dukhi hogi (tears found their way to his eyes but he wiped it) nahi ranbir,, kuch nahi hoga prachi ko,, mai hone nahi doga kuchh,, please god please prachi ko safe rakhna,, mai nahi reh sakta uske bina,,

it was quite suprising that ranbir never believed on god but now when his love prachi was in danger,, he prayed to god for her safety,, he knew he truly loved to great extents,,

on the way,, it suddenly started raining and he remembered how much she loved rain,,


flashback

ranbir had again dropped prachi at home,, it was like his usual routine,, as pragya know his love so with her help,, he always picked up prachi for college,, then drop her at home and again pick her up for office and again drop her at home,, it was like he would do anything to spend time with her even for fights,, he always loved his lecturi, who always give him lectures but now he would even love to listen her lectures,, It was sure that he is going mad in love,, like who loves even fighting,, but he always enjoyed it,, while for prachi,, though not admited but her heart know how much she loved fighting with him,, when he was not flirting,, she knew how good he was,, now these days, she was even jealous with sahana who always stick around with ranbir though she always said in mind she does not want ranbir to effect sahana in any way,, whenever sahana tries to talk to ranbir,, prachi will always either remind sahana to do house work or get busy with ranbir for office work,, not only this but even in office also,, she always did something so ranbir could not talk to any female employes,, mostly all the work related with ranbir,, she only handled and if any employe come to give him a file and started talking with him,, she always knocked on the door before any long conversation get start,, she always told him to be more mature but her heart know how much she loved his immature nature,,

ranbir:- (smilingy) lo tumara ghar aa gaya,,

prachi:- thank you (getting out) driver (she closed the door and started laughing)

she always loved to annoy him calling him driver,, his reaction was always worth watching, he got out

ranbir:- (irritately) prachi,, mai driver nahi ho (though he loved her,, he was always annoyed at this name while she started laughing at his expressions)

it suddenly started raining and prachi like a child ran and spread her arms to feel the water droplets on her face,, it was refressing,, ranbir was mesmerized seeing her like a child,, he kept watching her till he couldn't hold anymore and walked towards her,, prachi saw him coming towards her and a naughty idea came in her mind, she sprinkled some water on his face,, he got annyoyed but still smiling kept coming close to her while she warned him not to,, she started to run but she slipped but before she could land on the road, ranbir pulled her that they were dangerously close to each other,, they both were so lost in each other eyes that their heart took over each other,,

BAARISH

Half Girlfriend


Chehre mein tere
Khud ko main dhoondhun

(water droplets glowing her face,

His hands reached her waist pulling her more closer)

Aankhon ke darmiyaan

Tu ab hai iss tarah

Khwabon ko bhi jagah na mile

(her eyes intimating the deep love,

Stepping more closer to him,

Recalling the time they spent)


Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani
Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhoondhe

(the rain warming their feelings,

As they dance to its melodious tunes,

Losing themselves in each other,

Making their way to their hearts)

Yeh milne ki khwahish

Yeh khwahish puraani

Ho poori tujhi se

Meri yeh kahaani

(Feeling their love,

Opening up more,

Falling for each other more,

Completing their story)


Hawaaon se tera pata poochta hoon
Ab toh aaja tu kahin se

(blowing winds warming her heart,

Expressing her deep love)

Parindon ki tarah yeh dil hai safar mein

Tu mila de zindagi se

(crossing the hurdles,

Expressing his deep love)


Bas itni ilteja

Tu aake ik dafa

Jo dil ne na kahaa

Jaan le...

(forgetting her worries,

Crossing the way,

Through her heart,

In his love)


Yeh mausam ki baarish
Yeh baarish ka paani
Yeh paani ki boondein
Tujhe hi toh dhoondhe

(the rain warming their feelings,

As they dance to its melodious tunes,

Losing themselves in each other,

Making their way to their hearts)

Yeh milne ki khwahish

Yeh khwahish purani

Ho poori tujhi se

Meri yeh kahaani

(Feeling their love,

Opening up more,

Falling for each other more,

Completing their story)


they were so close to each other, their faces were closed, he cupped her face but they were interuppted by a loud sound and immediately grew apart,, they both were so awkward to even look in each other eyes,, ranbir was happy that he also have effect on prachi while was confused why did she dance so closely with ranbir,, ranbir decided to go home,,

ranbir:- (awkwardly) uhhh bye prachi,, (saying this he ran and immediately left)

Flashback ends


he smiled at that memory,, they spent so much time together,, but now he missed her, he missed talking to her, he missed their bickering, her lectures, her smile, laugh, her everything,, After her betrayel,, everything changed,, there was only sadness, hurt and anger, but even then also, he knew he will always love her and it was killing him to be away from her,, he always miss her,, giving him lectures fighting,, he missed loving her,, he wanted things to get back again,, he wish that they can be once like that again,, he wiped his tears and saw that he had reached the warehouse,, it was an old warehouse,,

ranbir:- prachi zaror andar hogi,,

he go in front of the warehouse and saw it locked and it looked like its been abandoned for years,,he looked around and saw a pani puri at a side of the road,, he went over there,,

ranbir:- bhaiya ye godaam mein taala kyu laga hai,,

panipuri wala:- are ye godaam saalo se band para hai,,

his heart dropped hearing this and fear took over,,

ranbir:- aap sach bol rahe hai,,

pani puri wale:- haa bhaiya,,

Bad taughts start invading his mind,, he feared that if prachi is not here then where will he find her,, with a heavy heart, ranbir then also decided to check the warehouse,, he looked around and climbed through the window,, pani puri wale bhaiya was right,, it looked liked it was abandoned,, this increased his fear but kidnappers do use abandoned warehouse,, with this he started to search the warehouse,, he searched every room but each one grew his fear,, he was already so scared now,, he was losing hope,, even after searching, he couldn't find her,, he fall to his knees and cried bitterly

ranbir:- (teary eyed) kaha ho tum prachi,, i can't lose you,,

he could imagine how prachi would be,, scared, alone,, tears were continously coming out,, he was now so scared for her,, he didn't have any clue where to find her,, this separation was breaking his heart badly,, he closed his eyes and remembered her,, he stood up and taught to once again look for any clues,, maybe something can help him find her,,

JUDAAI

Badlapur

(special thanks to Nandani25 for writing this song part)

   

Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
(Ranbir ransacked every nook and corner of the warehouse)
Ranjhan mileya naa ye...
(His all efforts proved to be futile as there was not not a single trace of her)
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
(Out of his mind with worry, Ranbir sank down to his knees)
Laqeeran vich likh di judaai
(He could not hold back the tears anymore as they cascaded down his cheeks)


Kho gaya, gum ho gaya
(Getting to his feet gingerly, he trudged out of the warehouse on unsteady legs)
Waqt se churaya tha jo
(All the sweet memories, her chiming laughter, began to torment him as he continued on his way)
Apna banaya tha..
(He recalled the moment when he had seen love in her eyes for him)
Ho tera, woh mera
(He continued on his way like a delirious person, not knowing where he was going)
Saath nibhaaya tha jo
(He stumbled and toppled down on the ground)
Apna banaya tha..
("Prachi!" Ranbir's scream resonated in the desolate road)


Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
(With a start, Prachi woke up from her stupor)
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
(Feverishly, she looked around in search of a particular face.)
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
(Dejected, she squeezed her eyes shut as the disappointment was almost beyond endurance)
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni (x2)
(Why did she feel as if he had called her name?)


Aisa bhi kya milna, saath hoke tanha
(She remembered the first time they met)
Aisi kyun sazaa humne hai paayi, Ranjhana ve
(Reminiscences of their bickering over trifles brought a smile on her lips as well as tears to her eyes)
Phir se mujhe jeena, tujhpe hai marna
(In those moments she relieved the past when she was happy though she didn't realize it)
Phir se dil ne di hai ye duhaai, Saajnaa ve
(Her heart knew how much she was missing him)
Laqeeron pe likh di kyun judaai..
(How true were the words that distance makes the heart grow fonder, Prachi thought as she tried to choke back the tears)


Gair sa hua khud se bhi, na koi mera
(Separation from her had made him detached from himself and the world at large too, Ranbir thought)
Dard se karle chal yaari, dil ye keh raha
(It started to drizzle out of the blue as if even the sky was pouring out its pain)
Kholun jo baahein, bas gham ye simat rahe hain
(He raised his face towards the sky, welcoming the droplets of water on his face)
Aankhon ke aage lamhe ye kyun ghat rahe hain
(His tears were flowing freely along with the tears of nature)
Jaane kaise koi sehta Judaaiyaan.
(The excruciating anguish was too much for Prachi to keep it locked up within herself)


Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
(A whimper of pain left her involuntarily accompanied by a fresh round of tears)
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
(Even amidst her predicaments the only thing she could wonder was whether she would be able to see him again)
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
(She prayed silently to the Almighty for just a single glimpse of him
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni (x2)
(He was now soaked to the skin as the drizzle had transformed into a downpour)


Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
(Uncaring of his own condition, he could only pray to the Almighty to grant him the sole wish of finding her and ensuring her safety)
Ranjhan mileya naa ye...
(They both prayed almost the same thing at the same time)
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
("I love you, Prachi" Ranbir smiled through his tears)
Lakeeran vich likh di judaai
("I...I love you too, Ranbir" Prachi wept some more)



this was a really long one,, 

Special thanks to Nandani25 for writing judai song part,,

guys do tell how is the story so far,,

Edited by Aman120 - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Can't wait for Ranbir to know the truth that Prachi never betrayed himπŸ˜’

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Originally posted by: taarey25

Amazing fb continue please wanting to know what happens next 


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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice

The story has drama, suspense and emotions.

Very good.

You just need a little help with editing and you will be just fine.