Suvan OS: The Night is Still Young - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: alina.b


@Bold Really??? 😲 I thought people would get mad at me for writing a 50 page essay describing every little step 😆 But, I'm glad you liked it!! ❤️🤗 Ch. 8 for Thousand Years is in the works lol I've just been feeling so lazy and unmotivated because we don't have our daily dose of Suvan 😭


Will be waiting for it

Me too missing SuVan and the show😭

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Posted: 4 years ago

Itss so beautiful os 👏

fun, romance, cuteness everything is so perfect... loved it ❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago

@alina though the OS is long it is beautiful and we all love long OS. As for the details, they help us picturize it and make your writing more graceful. 

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Posted: 4 years ago
Originally posted by: TearDrop50

Itss so beautiful os 👏

fun, romance, cuteness everything is so perfect... loved it ❤️❤️❤️


Aww thank you! I was hoping to balance all those elements and make it light-hearted. I usually struggle writing teenage type stories but I enjoyed writing this one! 


Originally posted by: Pranushka_723

@alina though the OS is long it is beautiful and we all love long OS. As for the details, they help us picturize it and make your writing more graceful. 


Thanks!! But then it takes forever to edit 😆 By that time, I've already read my own story like 15 times and get bored of it lol 

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: alina.b


Thanks!! But then it takes forever to edit 😆 By that time, I've already read my own story like 15 times and get bored of it lol 

Ikr. Reading your own story again and again is no fun.


I even hate rechecking my paper😆

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Posted: 4 years ago
Originally posted by: Pranushka_723

Ikr. Reading your own story again and again is no fun.


I even hate rechecking my paper😆


But I check it anyways because I tend to be a perfectionist sometimes and hate making mistakes 😆 also it wouldn't be fair to you guys to read something that hasn't even been edited. 


Originally posted by: Veenapain

Wonderful os


Thank you Veena! ❤️ Missing your daily updates of precaps! I would always watch them in office since I don't watch the episode until later. I don't know when we will get our show back 😭

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: alina.b


But I check it anyways because I tend to be a perfectionist sometimes and hate making mistakes 😆 also it wouldn't be fair to you guys to read something that hasn't even been edited. 



I am not a perfectionist and am lazy as hell.

I do prefer re-reading my chapters but it is a tiresome task.

Yes, giving the readers an unedited part will be unfair.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Aww! So cute

Title is nice

Beautiful piece of writing 

SuVan dating from 3 months ❤️

Loved the detailing of happenings at night club

Suman is sweet heart, she is trying to adjust with his lifestyle ❤️

Aww! Shravan is madly in love with her and protects her at every moment 

SuVan dance

That stupid Nia- She gave her punch even though Suman was not comfortable 

Shravan is gentleman and changed person

he took care of her❤️

Drunk Suman is so cute

her talks, crying, demanding ice-cream 😆❤️

Loved how she poured her insecurities but he assured

Next day morning was hilarious

Devraj scolding😆

Kavita's trust and teasing 

Ending was beautiful 

Heartfelt conversation between SuVan where they talked about insecurities and how they will choose each other always even though they have thousands of options because they want to be with each other throughout their life because their love is pure and they have good future ❤️❤️

Again bike ride on Bhopal's streets

perfect ending 👍🏼

P. S. SuVanTy are ❤️

Thanks for writing this beautiful OS 👍🏼

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

Aww! So cute

Title is nice

I realized that I tend to name all my stories after song 😆

Beautiful piece of writing 

SuVan dating from 3 months ❤️

If Covid-19 hadn't happened...Suvan would've been in the dating phase right now 😭

Loved the detailing of happenings at night club

Suman is sweet heart, she is trying to adjust with his lifestyle ❤️

Aww! Shravan is madly in love with her and protects her at every moment 

I would love to see a protective Shravan but not possessive or controlling

SuVan dance

I want to see Suvan dancing sequence too...I hope you're listening CVs!!!

That stupid Nia- She gave her punch even though Suman was not comfortable 

Shravan is gentleman and changed person

Even now, Shravan isn't cheap...he never tries to get into Suman's personal space and respects boundaries...he's mischievous but he's not a MCP. We need more ML like this on ITV

he took care of her❤️

Drunk Suman is so cute

her talks, crying, demanding ice-cream 😆❤️

Loved how she poured her insecurities but he assured

Next day morning was hilarious

Devraj scolding😆

Kavita's trust and teasing 

Ending was beautiful 

Heartfelt conversation between SuVan where they talked about insecurities and how they will choose each other always even though they have thousands of options because they want to be with each other throughout their life because their love is pure and they have good future ❤️❤️

I hope they have deep conversations in the show too where they discuss their insecurities and fears. 

Again bike ride on Bhopal's streets

perfect ending 👍🏼

P. S. SuVanTy are ❤️

Thanks for writing this beautiful OS 👍🏼

Aww...thank you for reading  & commenting, Bhagu! I'm glad you liked it!


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