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Nice yaarloved it... Mayra first meet was osm... Liked rudra and prreti bonding.. Hope it doesn't get bad as ananya in show... Loved it... That mj is positive one.. But at end the mystery seeing whom Maya got shocked..
Nice yaarloved it... Mayra first meet was osm... Liked rudra and prreti bonding.. Hope it doesn't get bad as ananya in show... Loved it... That mj is positive one.. But at end the mystery seeing whom Maya got shocked..
I am really thankful to all of u 4 this lovely support
Maya parked the car to go somewhere.A man came in front of her.She was shocked to him.
Maya's lips shivered:Vikram!
Vikram smiled:Yes Maya baby.
Maya:You came to India.
Vikram:Yes,I travelled all over from London to India.That' why I am standing before you.
Maya:Why are you here?
Vikram:You know why I am here.Only for you Maya.
Maya:I warned you in London itself not to come after me.
Vikram:How can i not come?I love you.
Maya:Yours is not love,but only obsession.
Maya turned back to go.But Vikram held her hand:I won't let you go.You are mine.You come with me.
Maya:What kind of madness is this?I need to go.
Vikram:You can't go leaving m again Maya.You should come with me as you are only mine.
Suddenly Maya pushed him:Go to hell pycho.
She got inside the car and left.
Maya was disturbed because of Vikram.She was not able to focus on her work.
Maya:He is back.Why is he after me?
Rudra noticed it:What happened Maya?Is something bothering you?
Maya:No,nothing like that.you concentrate on your work.
Rudra:Ok.
The next day....
Somebody barged into Maya's cabin shocking her.
Maya was shocked:Vikram!
Vikram:I am back Maya baby.How did you think that when you drive me away I will leave you?I cannot leave you ever.
Maya:Get out Vikram.
Vikram:No way.
He came closer to Maya and leaned towards her.Suddenly somebody hit him from back.It was Rudra.
Rudra:How dare you touch her?
Maya was stunned.
Rudra punched him again and again.
Rudra:If you come again,I will break your bones.Understand?
Vikram nodded slowly.Rudra ordered the security men to kick him out and they did so.
Rudra saw Maya being scared.
Rudra looked at Maya:Maya,don't worry..that guy will not come again.
Maya burst into tears and embraced him.Rudra caressed her.
Rudra:Maya...don't be scared.He has gone.
Maya:He is mad Rudra.
Rudra:So he was the reason why you were looking dim since yesterday?
Maya was silent.
Rudra:Who is he?
Maya:Vikram.He studied with me in my college.
Flash back...
Vikram gave red roses to Maya.
Maya:Thank you Vikram.
Vikram cupped her face:These flowers are my sign of love.
Maya was shocked.She removed her hands from her face.
Maya:What?Love?
Vikram held her shoulder:Yes,I love you Maya.
Maya became upset.She removed his hands off her shoulders.
Maya:But Vikram...I have not seen you like that.I am not in love with you.I am sorry to hurt you.
Vikram:Please understand my love Maya.Love me Maya.
Maya:Vikram..love cannot be bought forcefully.Right?It should come out from her heart naturally.
Please try to understand.We will remain as good friends.
Suddenly Vikram embraced her from behind.
Vikram:Maya....
Maya was shocked:Vikram,what are you doing?I don't love you.Then why did you...?
Vikram:It's ok if you don't love me.But I love you like crazy.I want you.
Maya:Leave me Vikram.
Vikram:No,I will not leave you.You should be with me always.
He held her more closer to him.Maya kicked him on his stomach.She took a stick she saw near by and beat him with that.
Then she ran away.
Present....
Maya:Vikram kept following me madly.He started hurting the people who were closer tome as he was over possessive about me.Once he beat a boy brutally as he talked to me.
That boy had no bad intention.He just asked me to clear his doubt regarding studies.But Vikram did very bad to him and he got hospitalized.His parents revealed that he has mental problem.So I did not get him arrested.But shockingly he followed me till India.
Rudra:I have given him nice.He will not dare to come back again.So chill.Ok?
Maya smiled slowly.
A few more days passed.Maya was still worried.
Rudra:Maya...I told you that Vikram will not come back.Then why are you worried?
Maya:But if he comes back...?
Rudra:I told you,he will not come back.
Maya was silent.
Rudra:Guess simply consoling you will not work out.So....
Rudra started cracking stupid jokes to Maya.Maya started laughing.Rudra also laughed.
He was lost in her laughter.
Rudra:Your laughter is very cute.So keep smiling and laughing.It's good for health.
Maya smiled.
After the office time got over all of them went back home.Rudra remained in the office due to pending work.Maya also was there in the office to do her work.
After the work got over Rudra went out of the office.It started raining.
Rudra:Damn!I have to walk in the rain till the bus stop.
Suddenly somebody held umbrella above his head.
He looked at that person.
He could not believe his eyes.
Rudra:Maya!
Maya:I will hold Umbrella for you.
Rudra:But Maya..how can you..?You are my Boss.
Maya:If you can help me can't I help you?
He looked at her intensely.
Rudra:Thanks.
Maya:I will drop you home.
Rudra:No thanks.I will go by bus as usual.
Maya:Today I will drop you.
Rudra:But you are my Boss.
Maya:Yes,that's why.You have to obey me.It's my order.
Rudra:Ok..thanks.
Maya smirked.
They walked to the car under the umbrella which Maya was holding for both of them.
Rudra felt a strange sensation while walking under the umbrella with Maya.
Maya dropped him home.She talked to his parents for sometime and left.
Antara:Maya is so down to earth.
Rudra smiled:Yes Maa.She is very humble.
Days passed...
Rudra and Maya became good friends.
Maya was narrating something and Rudra was writing it down.
Suddenly his eyes fell on her ear.
Maya:Rudra,instead of concentrating on your work where are you concentrating?
Rudra:Maya,your earring is missing on one ear.
Maya touched her ears and realized that one earring is missing.
Maya:Oh no..i love this earring.
Maya and Rudra started searching for it on the floor.Rudra got the earring from the floor.
Rudra:Hey..I got it.
She smiled with relief seeing the earring in his hand.
He put the earring on her ear.
She smiled.
He made her stand before the mirror.
Rudra:See whether I put the earring properly on your ear.
She smiled at him:Perfect.
He smiled.
Another day...
After the meeting While Rudra,Maya and Preeti were coming out ,Rudra slipped and fell over Maya.Both fell down..Rudra was on top of Maya.They shared an eye lock.
Preeti was stunned to see them lost in each other.
She made a fake cough.Both Rudra and Maya came back to senses and got up from the floor.
Rudra:I am sorry.
Maya:It's ok.
Rudra was relieved.Preeti was staring at them.
Days passed again...
Maya and Rudra were in their office.
Maya:I heard that there is a Diwali party at home.
Rudra:Ya..actually it was Preeti's decision.
Maya:Are you not inviting me for the party?
Rudra:Preeti and I invited dadaji and Dadimaa.They said that they will bring you also for the party.That's why I did'nt invite you separately.
Maya came closer to Rudra making his heart beat fast:But I want separate invitation as I really want to attend your Diwali party.
Rudra was stunned.
Rudra:Sure Maya.You should also come for the Diwali party.
Maya smiled:Sure.
Diwali party at Rudra's house.
Mrityunjay-Antara welcomed Harshwardhan,Rajeshwari and Maya.
Rudra and Preeti went near Maya.
Rudra-Preeti:Hi Maya..Happy Diwali..
Maya:Happy diwali.
Preeti:Hope you are enjoying our Diwali party.
Maya:Yes...a lot.I really missed all this as I lived all through out in a foreign country.
Rudra:Since you are here now you can enjoy all Indian festivals.
Maya smiled.
Rudra-Preeti started dancing.
Aa ra ra ra ra ra oh mere sajna
Fatakda phoot ne wala hai de taali
Aayi hai diwali suno ji gharwaali
Aayi hai diwali suno ji gharwaali
Tere kangane ne dil dhadkaya hai
Lage sajna mera aa ra ra ra ra
Lage sajna mera aa ra ra ra ra
Lage sajna mera aaj paglaaya hai
Lage sajna mera aaj paglaaya hai
Aayi hai diwali suno ji gharwaali
Tere kangane ne dil dhadkaya hai
Aa ra ra ra ra ra sajna paglaaya hai
Aa ra ra ra ra ra sajna paglaaya hai
Rudra imagined dancing with Maya.
Tera singaar laga bahar aaya re
Aaya tujhpe hum ko pyaar
Mardo ka kya bedardo ka kya
Kya jaano tum kya hota hai pyaar
Kyon bhala hum kare tum pe aitbaar
Bhole hoton ki laali dole kaano ki baali
Teri chunri ne jalwa dikhaya hai
Lage sajna mera aa ra ra ra ra
Lage sajna mera aa ra ra ra ra
Lage sajna mera aaj paglaaya hai
Lage sajna mera aaj paglaaya hai
Charo taraf diye jal rahe
Dehko ji dekho yeh kya keh rahe
Kahin pe nigahein kahin pe nishana
Hum jaante hai yeh kissa purana
Na karo dillagi chhodo sataana
Tu yeh maane na maane hum hai tere dewaane
Dekho mausam mohabbat ka aaya hai
Lage sajna mera aa ra ra ra ra
Lage sajna mera aa ra ra ra ra
Lage sajna mera aaj paglaaya hai
Lage sajna mera aaj paglaaya hai
Yaaro meri maano miya biwi ke rishte ko jaano
Pyaaro oh mere pyaaro kya hai jeevan tum yeh pehchano
Chhodo chhodo chhodo takraar karlo karlo karlo pyaar
Oh chayi nakhrewali gharwaali hai gharwaali
Oh chayi nakhrewali gharwaali hai gharwaali
Sara sansaar is mein samaya hai
Lage sajna mera aa ra ra ra ra
Lage sajna mera aa ra ra ra ra
Lage sajna mera aaj paglaaya hai
Lage sajna mera aaj paglaaya hai
Aayi hai diwali suno ji gharwaali
Tere kangane ne dil dhadkaya hai
Aa ra ra ra ra ra sajna paglaaya hai
Aa ra ra ra ra ra sajna paglaaya hai.( Aamdani Atthanni Kharcha Rupaiya).
In Rudra's eyes Preeti was Maya.So mistaking her for Maya he pulled her closer.
Preeti:You stupid,I am Preeti.Not Maya.
Suddenly Rudra came back to senses and moved backward.He was embarrassed.
Rudra:I am sorry.
Preeti giggled:You thought that I am Maya.Right?
Rudra was stunned:How did you understand that I was imagining Maya?
Preeti:Since last few days I have been noticing your romance with Maya.
Rudra:No Preeti.You are misunderstanding us.I have feelings for Maya.But I don't think Maya has feelings for me.She is too good for me.
Preeti:You both are good for each other.So Instead of suppressing your feelings you pour out your feelings before Maya.
He smiled.He turned back.
He saw Maya chatting with his mother Antara.
Preeti:Guess Maya is really getting along with her future mother in law.
Rudra smiled.
Rudra-Maya were in a restaurant.
Maya:Rudra..why did you call me here?
Rudra:I wanted to talk to you personally.I felt that for that we need to be away from everyone ho knows us.
Maya:What do you want tell me hiding from others?
Rudra:Actually I don't know how to say that.I am a boring ordinary fellow.I don't know to say sweet filmy dialogues.So I will tell you openly.I love you Maya.
Maya was stunned.
Rudra:To be frank in the first sight itself I felt something special about you.You were wearing a mask.But I was drawn towards your eyes.I could'nt take my eyes off your eyes.As days passed I realized that I have fallen for you.
Maya was silent.
Rudra became nervous.
Rudra:Maya,are you angry with me now?
Maya:I am not angry with you Rudra.I really admire your straight forward nature.You expressed your feelings openly.I really liked it.
Rudra was very happy.He was relieved too.
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Another fabulous chapter... 👏 👏 👏
So, Vikram is as usual a psycho here but the difference is that he studies in the same college as Maya and has followed her from London to India...
Loved the medicine which Rudra gave him... 😆
Rudra imagining Maya dancing with him on Diwali party was too cute...
And Preeti has actually guessed that he has feelings for Maya... And she advised him to take the correct step... Thankfully she is not like Ananya here...
Loved how Rudra simply confessed his feelings for her without any filmy dialogues or some over dramatic talks...
Loved reading it... ❤️
Waiting for the next part...
Ohhh such a romantic episode.. Hope vikram doesn't comes back. In their life.. And liked how rudra thought prreti to be Maya 😂😂... But m happy how prreti motivates rudra to express.. Loved it... I hope Maya doesn't rejects him...
Vikram is very much disgusting. I wish Maya had told him is there any such rules that she should love that person back though she does not have those feelings for him. Sad that he came to her office but glad that Rudra hit him & kicked him out. Rudra imagining Preeti as Maya in the dance scene was romantic. Preeti motivating Rudra to confess his feelings for Maya, shows that she is a true friend. Rudra confessed his feelings to Maya. I loved Maya telling him that she liked his straightforward nature. Waiting for the next update.
Interesting update
Loved Myra's moments👏
Preeti is a good friend, she encouraged Rudra
Loved Rudra's confession, Maya liked his nature
Vikram is a creep, lets see what will he do
Waiting for next
Jasmine🤗, your narrative style, in fact, doubled the drama with commentary like pic sequences you added to it, without which no mise en scene would be possible, added wonderful effect to the story!
With a new angle, you started the story and taking it forward in an interestingly beautiful way. 😊 Read the two parts in one go.😊
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