Originally posted by: MimzyWoah.....I am reading this just now...everyone read this before me😲
This is so amazing.....Ashi👏......You are becoming my favourite writer with the way you connect me to the characters. And you keep me hooked.
The recording was a brilliant idea.....it was my fav Abir moment, the moment I fell in love with his character. ❤️You just reminded me of something precious and using that to show the mirror to Abir is brilliant. I so want the recording to be used this way in the show.
The second part is just as amazing,BM's POV was too good. Her pain and the loss she experienced and the way Mishti became the balm to her wounds is beautifully written.......I can't express how much happy you made me while reading this.❤️
This is such a crisp, clean story.....Keep writing more........I am now hooked. ❤️
Thank you so much Mini! 🤗
That's so sweet of you. 😳
Yeah, that's one of my favourite scenes too. That scene just made me fall in love with the character. ❤️ Very rarely do we get to see such a feminist male lead. However he has faltered from the path due to all the stress that he is going through, and it's completely understandable. He's also a human after all. But what I want is for him to realize his folly on his own, without any external influence. That's why I used his own words to enlighten him. I'm disappointed that CVs never used that recording. It's so beautiful.
At first I thought to limit this story to just MishBir, but when I started writing I just had to include BM's P.O.V. We always see how BM &BP became Mishti's anchor and support system; how they brought her out of her sorrow. I just wanted to explore the other side of the relationship too. How Mishti became their anchor; how she became their daughter and how she brought happiness to them.
Thank you once again for the kind words, Mini. ❤️ I'm working on the next part. Will update as soon as I finish it.
comment:
p_commentcount