MiNeil new story "Embrace the Love" Epilogue on pg 111 - Page 9

Originally posted by: Srilata.Mineil

Superb anjali...loved it.... 

I liked how u described Neil shock seeing Minni in suit.... 🤣

Thanks

Neil bechara apni hasi nahi rok pa raha tha😆

Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

Hayye firse jaldi khatam kar diya anjali!!!!!

But it was awesome 😍❤️

Naeembi neil ki side aacha laga ye dekhkar ❤️❤️

Please update ASAP ❤️

Thanks

Normal size update tha.....right point par khatam karna bhi jaruri tha nahi toh boring ho jata hai bahut lamba likh do toh......but i can understand abhi show nahi hai to you are missing mineil😒

Isliye aur jyada padhne ki ichha ho rahi hai

Naeem bi jo show mein kar rahi hai unpar frustration nikalne ke liye yaha unhe pehle hi neil ki side kar diya😆

Anjali🤗

HS abhi se possessive ,emtional ho raha hai 

Preethi ki bacchi pehli baar kuch shai bol rahi hai  lag raha hai

.mujhe b sahi word describe karne ko nahi mil raha abhi😈.ye banda...strange sound kar raha hai

Hmm...Anjali ...mystery rakha hai ..ya ..rakhna chah rahi ho kya ? 

So mini ..abhi flow mein haan bola..future ye hurt b kar sakta hai .. practical soch  ka hawa nikal ne wala hai dono ka 🤣

Nayeem b ko kya badla liye hai tu ne 

Maza aagaya 

Neil ka character practical tough wala hai ..

Experience se aisa hua hai.

Lekin Mini will bring other side of him out soon 

Mini in Punjabi salwar  ashnoor badi kush hogi. Dance b karne lage 

Sirf Neil hi nahi .main b shocked hogayiMini acting shy  soch b nahi sakti ye scene 

Lekin bandi phir se form mein aagayi 

Waah..Neil ko b yahi wali pasand b hai 

Saroj  ye character har chapter mein kamini hi hai ..

Mujhe Neil ka sheedi baat accha laga he cleared it all 

Hurt hai banda due to past .

Lekin future mein maa beta ka patch hoga ?

Maa ka b kuch story hai na ..reason she did this ?  

Shayad future mein Neil ko realise ho.. after realising love , relationship kya hota hai 😉

Mini ne neil ko support kiya 

Sahi hai 

Lekin kuch gadbad lag raha hai ..🤔

Dono strong act karte hai ..lekin ..andar hi andar emtional b hai actually. 

Dono ka clash hone ka high chances hai ..

Hurt b honge pucca 😈

Itni jaldi engagement ....?

Shaadi b fix 🤔

Anjali ..bahut ...acche se khel rahi ho .🤗

Maza aa raha hai actually 😈👏

Originally posted by: anjali0111

Thanks

Normal size update tha.....right point par khatam karna bhi jaruri tha nahi toh boring ho jata hai bahut lamba likh do toh......but i can understand abhi show nahi hai to you are missing mineil😒

Isliye aur jyada padhne ki ichha ho rahi hai

Naeem bi jo show mein kar rahi hai unpar frustration nikalne ke liye yaha unhe pehle hi neil ki side kar diya😆

Show mein bhi naeembi jaldi neil ke side hojae!!!!!

Waiting for your update ❤️

Originally posted by: zalima

Anjali🤗

HS abhi se possessive ,emtional ho raha hai  hoga kyu nahi after all uski ladli beti hai yaar😳

Preethi ki bacchi pehli baar kuch shai bol rahi hai  lag raha hai

.mujhe b sahi word describe karne ko nahi mil raha abhi😈.ye banda...strange sound kar raha hai

Hmm...Anjali ...mystery rakha hai ..ya ..rakhna chah rahi ho kya ?  jaldi hi sahi word milega mini ko use describe karne ke liye😆 tab tak 'sadu' se kaam chalao😆

So mini ..abhi flow mein haan bola..future ye hurt b kar sakta hai .. practical soch  ka hawa nikal ne wala hai dono ka 🤣 ye to samay hi batayega kiski hawa nikalti hai aur kiski hawa tight hoti hai🤣

Nayeem b ko kya badla liye hai tu ne 

Maza aagaya  yes naukrani🤣🤣😈

Neil ka character practical tough wala hai ..

Experience se aisa hua hai.

Lekin Mini will bring other side of him out soon 

Mini in Punjabi salwar  ashnoor badi kush hogi. Dance b karne lage 

Sirf Neil hi nahi .main b shocked hogayiMini acting shy  soch b nahi sakti ye scene 

Lekin bandi phir se form mein aagayi 

Waah..Neil ko b yahi wali pasand b hai 

Neil ko toh woh tez direct wali hi pasand hai🤣☺️

Saroj  ye har characcter har chapter mein kamini hi hai ..arrange marriage mein hote hi hai aise kuch log involve😆

Mujhe Neil ka sheedi baat accha laga he cleared it all 

Hurt hai banda due to past .

Lekin future mein maa beta ka patch hoga ?

Maa ka b kuch story hogi na ..reason she did this ? 

Every coin has two sides😉

Shayad future mein Neil ko realise ho.. after realising love , relationship kya hota hai 😉

Mini ne neil ko support kiya 

Sahi hai 

Lekin kuch gadbad lag raha hai ..🤔

Dono strong act karte hai ..lekin ..andar hi andar emtional b hai actually. Only mini acts here neil is really strong and opinionated😆

Dono ka clash hone ka high chances hai ..

Itni jaldi engagement ....?

Shaadi b fix 🤔 ya, yahi toh chahte the hs aur babita jald se jald shadi ho jaye mini ki waise bhi real story shadi ke baad ki hai how two totally different persons deal with each other and come together as husband and wife. Unki arrange marriage hai love marriage nahi. 

Anjali ..bahut ...acche se khel rahi ho .🤗

Maza aa raha hai actually 😈👏

Thanks🤗

Originally posted by: Sakshi2104

actually bahut miss kar rhi hu mineil ko😭

Show mein bhi naeembi jaldi neil ke side hojae!!!!!

Waiting for your update ❤️

Sab miss kat rahe hain mineil ko😭

Pata nahi ye 15 din aur kaise niklenge

Will try to update asap

Liberty of writer🤣Nayeem bhi deserve this.She irritated us a lot 🤣 I liked family conversation everything was clear.So now journey of MiNeil will start. This looks very interesting Anjali. Am eagerly looking forward for next .

Anjali...so Neil will have kind of grey shades here ? Nothing wrong. It will look realistic . I think you have worked on Neil's character more here 

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Liberty of writer🤣Nayeem bhi deserve this.She irritated us a lot 🤣 I liked family conversation everything was clear.So now journey of MiNeil will start. This looks very interesting Anjali. Am eagerly looking forward for next .

Yes naeem bi deserves this....neil ki sewa mein laga diya unhe yaha😈🤣🤣 kuch paap dhul jayenge unke🤣🤣

Neil jaisa bhi ho but he is not a cheater toh islye usne sabkuch clear kar diya

Yes their actual journey together is about to begin😳

Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Anjali...so Neil will have kind of grey shades here ? Nothing wrong. It will look realistic . I think you have worked on Neil's character more here 

Not grey shade exactly but lets say he is flawed he is not mahaan aatma he is just a normal human being.

Yes i have worked more on neil's character here. In previous ff it was more about mini so this time i thought to focus on neil.

Mini's. Character is not completely ignored but she is easy to interpret on the other hand neil is more layered.