MiNeil new story "Embrace the Love" Epilogue on pg 111 - Page 2

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by mineilcoffee


How I wish ki HS aur babita alive hote. SRJ and HS ka bond dekhne me kitna maja aata. They both had complimented each other.

Ya i wanted to see that too.... I was not happy with hanita exit i was of the view that even if leap happened what was the point of ending hanita's role. Had they been alive it will be a lot of fun watching neil-hs bonding. Hs being protective towards mini and feeling jealous of daughter's boyfriend kinda thing😆

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by anjali0111


No yaha bhi teacher neil hi hoga as he is more mature and experienced khiladi🤣 while mini is just nausikhiya🤣


🤣You love this and so do we 🤣 

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by anjali0111


Ya i wanted to see that too.... I was not happy with hanita exit i was of the view that even if leap happened what was the point of ending hanita's role. Had they been alive it will be a lot of fun watching neil-hs bonding. Hs being protective towards mini and feeling jealous of daughter's boyfriend kinda thing😆

Yup it was unnecessary change. But atleast you keep them alive in your story. Explore the HS and SRJ bond in such a way that even CVS should feel regretted. 

Best of luck.

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by N_sharmaa



🤣You love this and so do we 🤣 

Yes I absolutely love this☺️😈🤣

Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by mineilcoffee


Yup it was unnecessary change. But atleast you keep them alive in your story. Explore the HS and SRJ bond in such a way that even CVS should feel regretted. 

Best of luck.

Sure will definitely try this

Even if not possible on this story will try to do that in other stories

Posted: 4 years ago

Anjali 🥳    naya  wala 

Thank you yaar ..🤗

Mera na dimaag kharab hogaya tha

But this made me smile 

actually entry ne  blush ☺️🤣

aur form mein aagayi🤣

That whole marriages blackmail

Yaar ye sach hai ..kahani ghar ghar ki 

sachi ghatna par adharit 

Upar se woh manglik wala ..marry to tree , bakwas baatien😈

I can so understand mini ka state yahan pe 

Mini ne photo dekha 🤣bandi bold hogayi🤣☺️

Sahi hai ..koi b iss 6.3 maal ko dekh kar hoga na ☺️

Aur delhi wala b hai ek teer se do nishane

Bandi smart hai 

Mini preeth kaure convo🤣sahi pehchana Mini ke iraade ko preeth ne 🤣

 Bandi pehli nazar mein hi out of control ho rahi hai 🤣

Pehle toh nahi nahi bola phir phisal gayi☺️🤣

Age gap accha laga 😉 

Mini kabh se wait kar rahi hai chand ka bechari🤣

Lekin chand ne late entry maari

Aur tum ne freeze kar diya screen ko😳

Ye accha nahi hai 💔

Jaldi update karo next part 

Edited by zalima - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by zalima


Anjali 🥳    naya  wala 

Thank you yaar ..🤗

Mera na dimaag kharab hogaya tha

But this made me smile 

actually entry ne  blush ☺️🤣

aur form mein aagayi🤣

That whole marriages blackmail

Yaar ye sach hai ..kahani ghar ghar ki 

sachi ghatna par adharit 

Upar se woh manglik wala ..marry to tree , bakwas baatien😈

I can so understand mini ka state yahan pe 

Mini ne photo dekha 🤣bandi bold hogayi🤣☺️

Sahi hai ..koi b iss 6.3 maal ko dekh kar hoga na ☺️

Aur delhi wala b hai ek teer se do nishane

Bandi smart hai 

Mini preeth kaure convo🤣sahi pehchana Mini ke iraade ko preeth ne 🤣

 Bandi pehli nazar mein hi out of control ho rahi hai 🤣

Pehle toh nahi nahi bola phir phisal gayi☺️🤣

Age gap accha laga 😉 

Mini kabh se wait kar rahi hai chand ka bechari🤣

Lekin chand ne late entry maari

Aur tum ne freeze kar diya screen ko😳

Ye accha nahi hai 💔

Jaldi update karo next part 

Mera bhi mood kharab tha isliye aaj likh mara maine bhi....mood bhi theek ho gaya🤣

Ya mini yaha shuru se fisal chuki hai neil pe🤣

Shadi ke liye blackmail and that manglik wala bhi kai bar suna dekha hai real world mein wahi se inspiration liya😆

Glad tumhe pasand aaya😳🤗

Posted: 4 years ago

Anjali Anjali... I love u 🤗 this is soooooooo awesome, I can imagine totally mini in this.. yaar I can't wait for next part. Plz plz plz update soon..

Whole day I was upset n finally I smiled reading it 

Posted: 4 years ago

anjali yaar... it's so amazing...new plot but very real... just in PB style.... 


Seeing mini fida on him it reminded me how Minni was impressed by his height in their first meet.... 


Please update fast.... 

Edited by Srilata.Mineil - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Oye hoyee anjali🤗

Dil khush kar dita yaara🤗❤️

Mini pehli Nazar mein neil pe fida haayyeee🔥😍😆

This start feels keep reading like this yrrr amazing 😍❤️

Please update ASAP❤️❤️

Edited by Sakshi2104 - 4 years ago

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