My pulavs On Miniel - Write ups Pt 5 on Pg 7

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Posted: 10 days ago

Hey mineilians... I will be posting my pulavs here.... Happy reading... smiley27


My other write ups... 


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153100342


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153077897


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153074079


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153013353


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/153030918


Mineilians here we go.... smiley27


It was 6 am when Minni woke up and saw the clock... For her surprise Neil was still sleeping on her lap and she was there in his room.... She remembered the last night....how sad he was and the pain he has gone through these many years.... Just by a flase allegation....she couldn't stop the fresh tears coming from her eyes... All she did was making him sleep comfortably and just vanished out of his room and was crying uncontrollably thinking of his pain.....Rani's voice made her conscious..... She composed her self and went upstairs to see Rani and arya to argue on the breakfast..... 

R. Kudiye.... Tujhe na kuch bhi banake do tune to nakhre dikhane HI hai.... 

A. Rani didi aisa breakfast koi khata hai kya... 

R. Ha Ha aaj kal Neil Bhaiyya ka banaya hua khake na tu meinu aise bol rahi hai..... 

Arya was making faces to eat the breakfast....

M. Kya Ho raha hai... Aap dono kyun jhagad rage hai... 

R. Dekho na Didi ae kudi meinu roz tang karti hai.... Ek minute aap neeche se kaise aa rahe Ho... Hume laga ki aap so rahi hai... 

Minni was thinking of an excuse... 

M. Haa wo kuch nahi thoda walk Katie aayi hun.... Arya yeh sab kya hai.. Khao jaldi.... 

A. No veer balika mujhe nahi khana... Poha... Yuck.... 

M. Arya.... 

A. Mujhe na methi ke parathe khane hai... 

M. Abhi kaise banenge... Neil utha nahi hai air Rani di ko kaam hai... Aaj ke Lite khalo... 


Arya was about to say something but then a voice made her happy... It was Neil her genie... 

N. Good morning... 

A. Neil.... (she went and hugged him)  Good morning... 

M. Good morning... Tum itni jaldi uth gYe... 

Neil understood what she meant... She knows that he cried all night and he needs rest but he is there.... 

N. Haa wo head ache ho raha to o thought to have a tea.... Rani chai banado... 

R. Haa Bhaiyya abhi lati hun... 

Arya came to Minni and asked... 

A. Ise kya hua itna sad kyun lag raha hai... 

Minni knows what happened but she can't say to arya... But she planned something to cheer him up... 

M. Neil Oberoi...chai peene ke baad methi ke parathe bana dena... 

N. Haa... Kya... 

M. Kyun bhool Gaye kya that it's ur tenant duty to prepare breakfast.... 

N. No... But Rani ne banaya hai na... 

A. Haa boring as poha... But we want parathe... 

N. But choti madam phir poha waste ho jayegaa na... 

M. Nahi hoga... Hum dono Kha lenge bit we want paratha... Mein fresh hoke aati hun... Tab tak ban Jana chahiye... 

N. Yeh acha hai mujhe head ache hai chai peeke rest Karo bolne ke Baja mujhse kaam kara rahe Ho... 

M. Sar me dard hai Neil oberoi koi labor pain nahi ki kuch na kar sako... Come on chai peeke get to work.... 

Saying that Minni left to freshen up and even Atta went to her room to get her bag... Neil was now frustrated... Seeing Neil like this minni was smiling.... She wanted to distract him from his pain at least for sometime tats why she asked him cook bcoz cooking is therapy for him... releases his stress... 

N. Chalo Neil oberoi madams ka hukum sar aakhon per... 

R. Bhaiyya bura mat maana inka... We dono aapka dhyan bhatkane ke liye kar rahi hai... 

N. Jaanta hun rani... In dono ke natak meim... I am lucky ki mean in dono se Mila jo mere baare itna sochti hai... Warna itne saal to akele HI jhela hai... In dono apne saath dekhta hun na to lagta hai aur kuch nahi chahiye mujhe apni zindagi mean.... Inke orders follow karne padenge na.. 

He started his work while smiling at their antics to. Make him smile.... Minni also heard what Rani and Neil with a smile.... 


Ho gaya pulav... Hope u all like it.... Iska continuation bhi hai dimag me but Will write later.... 

Edited by Srilata.Mineil - 2 days ago
Posted: 10 days ago

Okay guys kalke pulav ka continuation hai yeh.... 

Minni came out of the room, ready to have the parathas by her personal chef... 

M. Wow chef, u r so fast.... 

N. What.... 

M. In cooking....kyun tumne kya socha.. 

N. Ah.. Kuch nahi... Aur waise bhi boss ka order hai to follow karna padega na.... 

M. Hmm... Impressive Neil oberoi... Ab serve bhi karo... Chutanki aa jao... Ur breakfast is ready... 

A. Haa veer balika aai... 

Neil serves the breakfast to the sisters.. And was about to leave but was stopped by arya... 

A. Kaha ja rahe Ho Neil... Aao tum bhi khao humare saath... 

N. Nahi choti madam mean baad mean Kha lunga... 

A. Aate Ho ya mean chod doon... 

M. Neil... Please join us... 

N. OK. 

The trio starts their breakfast and was enjoying it... Just then the bell rangs....

M. Rani di... darwaza kholdo... Preet aur bobby honge... 

R. Haa... 

Rani goes to open the door... 

R. Neil bhayya aapke liye hai koi..

N. Mere lie.... 

The trio walks to the balcony and sees and the get the surprise... It's none other than isha... 

N. Isha.. 

I. Hey Neil. Oberoi... 

Neil asks Minni to make arya to leave for school...  as she shouldn't witness all this... And the take atta and come down.... 

M. Chutanki Hogaya na aapka breakfast... Aap ab niklo for school..u will get late.... 

A. Veer balika... Aaj nahi jaati na... Will spend time with my genie... 

N. Choti Madam...aaj mujhe thoda kaam hai... So will spend on Sunday... Pakka.... OK... 

A. OK then... 

M. Rani di.. Arya ke leke jayiye...bus nikal jayegi.... 

Isha who witnessed all this was getting irritated as Neil whom she wanted to be alone has a family now who takes care of him and who wants him... 

N. Kyun aai Ho yaha.... I asked for a. Week time right.... 

I. Oho Neil... Itna gussa... See I have been called by someone... 

She was seeing Minni as if she have called her... 

N. Stop it isha mini me nahi bulaya hai tumhe... 

I. Meine kab bola HI Minni ne bulaya hai... 

N. To phir... Kisne.... 

I. Someone called naem bi... I guess... 

M&N. What..... 

To be continued... 

So that's it for today... Hope u like it... Agar acha nahi lage to u can throw chappals.... smiley36

Posted: 10 days ago

Originally posted by porankisrilata


Okay guys kalke pulav ka continuation hai yeh.... 

Minni came out of the room, ready to have the parathas by her personal chef... 

M. Wow chef, u r so fast.... 

N. What.... 

M. In cooking....kyun tumne kya socha.. 

N. Ah.. Kuch nahi... Aur waise bhi boss ka order hai to follow karna padega na.... 

M. Hmm... Impressive Neil oberoi... Ab serve bhi karo... Chutanki aa jao... Ur breakfast is ready... 

A. Haa veer balika aai... 

Neil serves the breakfast to the sisters.. And was about to leave but was stopped by arya... 

A. Kaha ja rahe Ho Neil... Aao tum bhi khao humare saath... 

N. Nahi choti madam mean baad mean Kha lunga... 

A. Aate Ho ya mean chod doon... 

M. Neil... Please join us... 

N. OK. 

The trio starts their breakfast and was enjoying it... Just then the bell rangs....

M. Rani di... darwaza kholdo... Preet aur bobby honge... 

R. Haa... 

Rani goes to open the door... 

R. Neil bhayya aapke liye hai koi..

N. Mere lie.... 

The trio walks to the balcony and sees and the get the surprise... It's none other than isha... 

N. Isha.. 

I. Hey Neil. Oberoi... 

Neil asks Minni to make arya to leave for school...  as she shouldn't witness all this... And the take atta and come down.... 

M. Chutanki Hogaya na aapka breakfast... Aap ab niklo for school..u will get late.... 

A. Veer balika... Aaj nahi jaati na... Will spend time with my genie... 

N. Choti Madam...aaj mujhe thoda kaam hai... So will spend on Sunday... Pakka.... OK... 

A. OK then... 

M. Rani di.. Arya ke leke jayiye...bus nikal jayegi.... 

Isha who witnessed all this was getting irritated as Neil whom she wanted to be alone has a family now who takes care of him and who wants him... 

N. Kyun aai Ho yaha.... I asked for a. Week time right.... 

I. Oho Neil... Itna gussa... See I have been called by someone... 

She was seeing Minni as if she have called her... 

N. Stop it isha mini me nahi bulaya hai tumhe... 

I. Meine kab bola HI Minni ne bulaya hai... 

N. To phir... Kisne.... 

I. Someone called naem bi... I guess... 

M&N. What..... 

To be continued... 

So that's it for today... Hope u like it... Agar acha nahi lage to u can throw chappals.... smiley36

Vo ghar pe aai 

Restorent bach gaya smiley36


Aage kya hua 

Posted: 10 days ago

badhiya ji badhiya

new thread

ye achha kiya kabhi kabhi Dt mein koi koi write up miss bhi ho jata tha

Posted: 10 days ago

Yummy .. 

Posted: 10 days ago

Originally posted by Sushdvj


Vo ghar pe aai 

Restorent bach gaya smiley36


Aage kya hua 


HS ki haveli hai... Aayi hai to muh ki khake jayegi.... smiley36

Posted: 10 days ago

Originally posted by anjali0111


badhiya ji badhiya

new thread

ye achha kiya kabhi kabhi Dt mein koi koi write up miss bhi ho jata tha


yeah that's why I thought of making a new thread... smiley31


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