looks interesting, but is Khushi 3 years elder to Arnav........... also, kinda hard to believe that a 33 year old Khushi is still unmarried despite being a village girl......
looks interesting, but is Khushi 3 years elder to Arnav........... also, kinda hard to believe that a 33 year old Khushi is still unmarried despite being a village girl......
Originally posted by: Arshi67Le haathon mein lafzon ki mala
Dheeme se di dastak kalpanaon ne jab
Dil se mere nikla sirf unka naam
Woh jo hai ishq ke har rang mein rangein
Ubharti bhor woh Dhalti shaam woh
Raat ki gehraayi woh Din ki roshni woh
Usse βBaakiβ kahoon ya Mukammal kahoon
Hai toh har saans mein basse wohβ¦
Looking forward to reading another story written by you, Rose <3
Ruchi, youβre simply mind blowing..your poetry takes my heart away. Such beautiful words.
Thanks so much for sharing your feelings.
Welcome back Rose
Nice seeing another interesting story from you
Loved the character sketch.
Amazing Start. Already Khushi who is short-tempered, never had a good start with Arnav. Nice seeing the roles reversing where Arnav is mature in his thinking and friendly with people while Khushi who likes to keep to herself and short-tempered.
Looking forward to reading this.
Eager for the next one
Thanks for the PM
I missed reading your stories. Loved this update.
Welcome back Rose. How can I miss your story? I am in for the ride.
So Dil ka doctor and a girl who is good at heart have collided. Now the universe will conspire against them to keep bringing them together.
Ghuchchi ko maro goli Arnav babuwa, tell Khushi about the bhurji you made out of her eggs.
Arnav was supposed to return to his hometown to take care of the people here. Has he returned for good?
Waiting to see her short temper and his not so bad temper to meet and melt.
Ammaji sounds like a south Indian villain. But, hoping that she is just hard on the surface and soft in the heart just like a coconut.
Take care and stay safe!
Cheers.......
Yahaan bhi Shairee,Ruchi..Originally posted by: Arshi67Le haathon mein lafzon ki mala
Dheeme se di dastak kalpanaon ne jab
Dil se mere nikla sirf unka naam
Woh jo hai ishq ke har rang mein rangein
Ubharti bhor woh Dhalti shaam woh
Raat ki gehraayi woh Din ki roshni woh
Usse βBaakiβ kahoon ya Mukammal kahoon
Hai toh har saans mein basse wohβ¦
Looking forward to reading another story written by you, Rose <3
just loved this 'Aazad "piece of poetry ..
Originally posted by: Savera84Welcome back Rose. How can I miss your story? I am in for the ride.
So Dil ka doctor and a girl who is good at heart have collided. Now the universe will conspire against them to keep bringing them together.
Ghuchchi ko maro goli Arnav babuwa, tell Khushi about the bhurji you made out of her eggs.
Arnav was supposed to return to his hometown to take care of the people here. Has he returned for good?
Waiting to see her short temper and his not so bad temper to meet and melt.
Ammji sounds like a south Indian villain. But, hoping that she is just hard on the surface and soft in the heart just like a coconut.
Take care and stay safe!
Cheers.......
Dil ka doctor v-s good at heart..
Ghuchchi-bhurji..
not so bad temper-short temper..
Wah Raji ...
When will u start ur own fiction??
bolo bolo..
Thank you, Fauzia, for always being so generous about my thoughts <3
Ab tum ho hi itni lajawab tou tareef tou kerni ho gi naa..
Interesting concept.... Dil ka doctor ohhhooooo........and i like gucchi and bhurjiiii......love to read it... Plz PM when u updateee
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