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PreRish: Moments P151 Just to say.. NOTE P153 new link! - Page 38

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Posted: 3 years ago

Just noticed we are on the 16th moment. 🥺

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: MR21

Prerna is successful in her first deal👍🏼

He arranged a party for her success. He knows how to encourage her.

He asked her to invite the guests according to her wish, not to overwhelm her.

She is learning too, as she is certain whom she needs to invite.

Her dream😡

She is admiring him

She is too shy to give him a compliment.

I agree, she should now call him Rishabh instead of Mr. Bajaj.

I want her not to call him Rishabh by the end of the evening to know his way.

Awesome update, continue soon.

Good morning - thank you for reading.. the dream is just a dream but it will help towards the next chapter. Wait and see if she does end up calling him Rishab or not.

Thanks stay safe and well. 

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: WaqtZaya

Such a beautiful update. The first thing I read in the morning. 

Thank you for spending your morning on this.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Same. 😆


I'll come up with my comments soon. 😳


Thank you for reading ! 


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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: jagrutid

Thank you for spending your morning on this.

the Amazon guy woke me up at 6😪 I checked IF and saw your update 

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Posted: 3 years ago


Thanks for coming back to read another.


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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Tvfanatic85

Beautiful Update. That is all that I have to say and I read this first thing in the morning. It just made my day.❤️

glad you liked it, thank you for spending your morning on it. Very kind words 


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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Discolights

Nice one again! Loved their little family celebration and their little talk to get her to call him Rishabh. Well written 👏

I have a doubt and a little thing didn't settle down with me. A little insight into your thought process would be great. 

Pati ke saamne ankhe uthayi nahin,  jukhayi jaati hai,maa ne sikhaya tha.” He admired the regard she gave him but he wasn’t going to let her hide behind that.

I thought this was a little contradictory because as a couple they have reached the highest level of intimacy..she is now also aware of the outside world winning a deal by herself as a CEO, which means she has seen world a lot more than before and learnt. I mean she is shy is totally relatable but this is being a bit too conservative. It felt a bit contradictory to me.. If you could help me understand your POV because it made me a bit disconnected with Prerna for the very first time in this entire series.

I am really sorry if I have crossed my line.. after thining a lot I decided to finally ask as this is one of my favourite series on PreRish 🤗

Hello thank you for reading, always lovely to hear from you. Yes so that was supposed to be Prernas excuse for shying away and being awkward I read it back this morning took it out as it doesn’t fit the lightness of that conversion at as they both help set up the table. of course you haven’t crossed any lines, always appreciated your kind words and the time you take out for this. 


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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Wistfulness

Just noticed we are on the 16th moment. 🥺

 
be alright I’ll just continue 


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Posted: 3 years ago

@ all who’ve already read moment 16 I’ve edited it a little towards the end.