Akshan ff:tum ko paaya part 11 23/7/2020 updated - Page 3

Posted: 3 years ago

hi dear update was good. but it was so short one.plz give long update na. ok stay safe.

Posted: 3 years ago

Nice 

But it too short 

Update soon 

Posted: 3 years ago

Nice  update next part soon

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 9

Guddan was crying continuously she felt like she has no one in this world to love her 

Aj came home

Dadi:lalla tu agaya

Aj:ma guddan kahan hai

Dadi:apni kamre par hai rorahi hogi ithna datta hai tu us bechari ko ab ja he mafi puch 

Aj goes to upstairs 

He opened the saw guddan lying on bed 

Aj goes towards her 

Aj:guddan I am sorry patha nahi kya hua tha muje I am really sorry galthi hogaya 

But guddan didn’t respond 

Aj :kuch tho bolo muj par chillauo galthi hogaya mujse 

But he didn’t respond he make her turn towards him 

He gets shocked blood in her hand he hold her hand one knife is lying there 

Aj:guddannnn yeh kya kiya tumne he hold her hand and warp a towel around her waist 

Aj scream maaa....

Dadi and others came running 

Dadi:kya hua lalla but she gets shocked to saw vision infrond of her 

Durga:yeh kya kiya isne ...,

Dadi:kishore Doctor ko phone karo 

Doctor came there after sometime 

Aj:Doctor guddan kaise hai???

Doctor:zyada bada chot nahi tho gehri nahi thi isliye gabrane ki zaroorath nahi vo teek hai mei ne da ayi diya hai ab sorahi hai

Everyone sign in relief 

Dadi:khana ji ka lack lack Shula hai 

Saru:yeh sab kya hai aj me ek bar datta tho suicide karne gaya 

Lakshmi:vahi thi agar aisa karna hothi tho hum sab kithni bar suicide karthi 

Durga:chup raho 

Aj look at them 

Dadi:lalla hum tumara gussa janthi hai par guddan aisa nahi nadan hai bachi hai use is duniya mei koyi nahi hai tumare Siwa shyd tum use dur jaugi yeh soch kar yeh kadam udaya hoga 

Aj:maa mere aisa koyi irada nahi thi patha nahi kya hogaya tha muje is vakth or mei kabhi nahi socha guddan aisa kuch karugi 

Dadi:chalo ab jo hogaya uske bare mei bolkar kya fayda par abse  use hurt math karo or yeh hameesha yaad rakna usne apna sab kuch tumari vajah se koya  hai ab use kush rakna tumara responsibility hai

Aj:mei sab samjathi hu ma 

Dadi:chalo use samjauo jauo Ab tu bhi sojauo kal bath karthe hai

Aj goes to his room saw guddan sleeping he sit beside her he hold her hand which is injured 

Aj softy kiss her wound 

Aj:kudh ko kabhi hurt math karna tumara choti si chot bhi muje dard dethi hai apne apko chot dene ki bare mei socha bhi kaise tu mije datt thi mujse gussa krathi par ye tumne kya kiya aisa saza math do muje 

He also sleep beside her holding her hand 

Bahus where chating 

Saru:bahuth sha Thur hai vo guddan kithna hum socha use bada shathir hai vo 

Lakshmi:vo tho sach hai ab tho aj use kuch nahi bolugi 

Durga:sahi kaha tumlog yeh sab udo natak h hoga varna kon aisa kartha hai 

Saru:ab aj use kuch nahi bolugi na use dattugi ulta hame use kuch kiya tho hum par badakugi 

Lakshmi:yes aj bahuth dar gaya hai ajj kya patha vo fir se aisa kuch kare agar aj datta tho 

Durga:mei jaise socha vaise bewakoof nahi hai vo emotional black mail kar kar vo aj ko pasaugi 

Lakshmi:pasaugi nahi aj this pas China hai uski chal mei 

Saru:mei tho kehthi us din door nahi jis aj antra maji ka jagah ise dugi 

Durga:hmm tu teek kehrahi hai aisa hi chala tho antra maji aj ki zindagi sr nikal kar fekugi 

Lakshmi:sab kehthi hai is guddan sr kuch nahi hops the hai par mei tho kehthi jo 15 saal mei koyi nahi karvaya vo yeh karugi 

Durga:kya???

Lakshmi:AJ KI ZINDAGI SE ANTRA MAJI KO NIKALNA.......,

Posted: 3 years ago

Continue with romantic part please 

Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update

Continue soon

Posted: 3 years ago

yes continue soon with romantic part plz.waiting be safe.

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 10

At mid night guddan’s sleep get broke she woke up she saw aj near her she try to move akshat get up 

Aj:Guddan kya hua tu teek hai 

Guddan:hum teek hai jindal saab 

Aj:yeh Kya Kiya Guddan tumne kuch hona this tho mera kya hothi he cup her face tears rolling from guddan’s eyes 

Guddan:muje laga ap muje chod kar cahli gayi 

Akshat hug her he protectively wrap her in his emabarsss

Aj:aisa din kabhi nahi augi guddan tumara jindal saab hameesha tumara saath hogi tu this janthi huna apni jindal saab ka gussa 

Guddan:hm

Aj:fir aisa kyun kiya 

Guddan didn’t say anything 

Akshat hold her hand which have injured he 

Aj:bahuth dard horahi hogina 

Guddu:hm bahuth 

One long tear escape from his eyes he kiss her wound 

Aj:abhi bhi dard hai 

Guddan:ap mere saath hai tho koyi dard hame nahi chugi 

Aj hug her make her lay on bed aj try to get up Guddan hold his hand 

Jindal saab muje ap chahiye meri samne 

Akshat kiss her forehead tightly hold hug her th u sleep like that 

Next morning Guddan woke up she saw aj aranged food for her he smiles 

Guddan:good morning 

Akshat:good morning 

He make her get up 

Guddan:hame wash room jana hai 

Aj take her to wash room 

Akshat put her in bathtub 

Guddan:jindal saab mei kudh karugi 

Aj:nahi tumari hath mei dard hogi mei karugi 

She make he take bath and make her wear her dress dadi and bahu’s came to his room 

They get shocked to see akshat try to make guddan comb her hair 

Dadi smiles:va lalla tune tho sab seek liya 

Guddu smiles akshat try to go 

Guddan:mera makeup bhi Latina jindal saab Bahu’s get shock aj make her ready perfectly 

Dadi:aj tho bahuth pyaari lagarahi hai meri guddu’s 

Guddu smiles 

Guddu:jindal saab ab ap jayiye office keliye late hogi maji muje khana dugi 

Aj:par...

Dadi:tu ja lalla mei huna aj goes from there 

Dadi giving food to guddan 

Dadi:muje bulathi meri bachi ya apni bahuon ko bulathi madad keliye akele akele kyun sab kiya chot laga haina tume 

Guddu:nahi maji vo tho jindal saab kiya na sab mei me kuch kam nahi kiya muje nahaya dressing karvaya hair bhi banaya but she stop when she understood what she tell dadi try to cover her smile 

Bahu’s gets shocked aj????

Guddu:hmm dadi khana bahuth tasty hai apne banaya 

Dadi:nahi tumari jindal saab. E 

Guddan:dadi muje dard horahi hai mei toda sothi hu she act like sleeping dadi smiles and goes from there 

At outside 

Lakshmi:hu yeh mei kya suna aj or uske beech...

Saru:ab kuch nahi hosaktha Durga di jaldi hamareliye choti devar ya nanad augi...uska intzar karo 

Lakshmi:hu bagwaan kaise samaj ko muh dikaugi hum 

Durga:chup bait tum dono dimak math khayo 

Saru:Durga di aj or Guddan ke beech physical relationship zaroor hai ab hum unhe alag Nahi Kar paugi 

Durga:nahi aisa hone nahi desaktha hum kuch karna hoga 

Posted: 3 years ago

Part 11

At night aj came home he saw Guddan watching tv in hall she smiles at her he sit beside her 

Guddan:jindal saab ap agaya 

He happily hug aj 

Dadi and bahu’s saw this bahu’s get angry dadi get happy 

Aj:kaisa hu tum ab 

Guddan:teek hu 

Aj saw her her messed up after all she is Guddan 😉

Aj:yeh kya Hal banakar rakha hai apne apko cheeshe mei dekh 

Guddan:vo mei tv dekrahi thina 

Aj:tho??

Guddan:aise hi ptha nahi kaise hua 

Aj smiles at her antics he make hair perfectly adjust 

Guddan smiles put her head on his shoulder 

Aj:kya dekrahi hu 

Guddan:film

Aj:oh

Guddan:apko patha hai is movie bilcul hamari life jaisa hai 

Aj:aisa kya hai 

Guddan:hero ki pehle shadi hua tha uski pehli pathni margaya vo bhi apko tharah pehli pathni ko bahuth pyaar karthi hai fir vo dusari shadi ki undono ke beech pyaar hone vale thi ajanak pehle pathni agaya .......she pause.....Aj just look at her guddu tightly hug Aj 

Dadi and bahu’s listening their talk 

Aj:fir Kay hua movie mei 

Guddu:vo apni pehle pathni ke saath chali gaya dusari pathni ko chod kar 

Aj:vo use bahuth pyaar karthi hoga isliye uske saath gaya hoga 

Guddu:tho kya ap bhi hame chodkar jaugi agar antra ji vapas agaya tho???????

He qustion shock everyone Aj was staring her

Aj understand her heart 

Aj:Guddan marne vala kabhi vapas nahi atha vo sab sirf film mei hotha hai asal mei aisa kabhi nahi hoga 

Guddan:suppose aisa hogaya tho ap hame chodugi kya??

Aj:Guddan kyun tum ithna sochthi hu kuch bhi hojaye mei tumara hath nahi chodugi 

Guddan:sach 

Aj:sachi 

Guddan innocently ask pinky promise 

Aj smiles at her pinky promise 

Dadi goes from there smiling 

Dadi:yeh gudiya bina pagal hai ......

Lakshmi:Durga ab kya sun na baki reh gaya antra maji we zyada Aj ise man rahi hai ab 

Saru:yeh sab kya hai Durga di Aj aisa kaise badal use milkar kuch maheene hua hai saloon pehle pyaar Aj bulgaya 

Durga:muje iuch samjmei nahi arahi hai Aj ise ithna importance kyun derahi hai 

Lakshmi:vahitho antra maji ko bulgaya kya Aj???

Durga:patha nahi aisa bhi hosaktha hai curse vo kuch galath na kare isliye aj us de pyaar de bath kar rahi hai uski dare bath manrahi hai 

Saru:muje aisa nahi lagtha 

Lakshmi:muje tho lagtha hai Aj ko use pyaar hogaya 

Durga:shut up aisa nahi hoga 

At akshan’s room 

Guddan is making a drawing 

Aj:yeh kya hai 

Guddu:Kuch Nahi aise hi bana rahi hai 

Akshat smiles 

Guddan:jindal saab mei apki god mei sar rak sakthi hu 

Aj:kyun nahi 

He make her lay on his lap

Aj:kya hua 

Guddu:Jindal Saab ap bahuth achi hu saber achi meri kithni care karthi hu ap 

Aj smiles 

Guddu:Jindal Saab yeh dekiye meri drawing 

Aj look at that yeh kya hai 

Guddu:hum app or hamara baby 

Aj look at her shockingly 

Guddu:Jindal Saab hamari bhi was ek Guaita hona chahiye haina 

Aj didn’t say anything she ask one more time 

Aj:kyun nahi bilcul Guddan ki tharah 

She smiles 

Guddu:Jindal Saab par muje ap jaisa baby cahhiye 

Aj :kyun??

Guddu:kyuki muje ap pasand hai 

Aj smiles he make her sleep

Akshat:kya mei sahi kar rahi hu ?guddan mere saath ek jindagi chahthi hai kya mei use vo depaugi kya aisa hopayega??vo jo kushi chahthi hai kya mei use de payega..............



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