Damsel in distress RiKara SS

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This SS is based on the malayalam film '22 Female Kottayam'.But changes r made.This is a bold theme.A bit too emotional.I don't know how people will accept it.

I dedicate this story to  adhiammululu who wanted a FF on the movie 22 Female Kottayam.

Part1

Omkara was laid on the bed in a hospital.Today is his last day in the hospital.But he was not happy,but sad that he has to leave the hospital.Because he cannot meet the nurse Gauri Sharma.His eyes waited for Gauri.Finally Gauri came.In the nurse’s attire she appeared to be a Angel with white wings.Pure beauty.Omkara forgot his pain for a moment when he saw her in front of him.

G:Hi Sir..

OMKARA:Hi nurse.

Gauri checked his BP.

G:Normal.Today is your last day.Right?The doctor will come after some time.Then you can leave.Happy?

OMKARA:To be frank I don’t feel like leaving this hospital.

G:Why?It’s strange.Usually everyone wants to leave the hospital as soon as possible.

OMKARA:But I am different.Because I liked this hospital atmosphere very much.I wish I could get admitted here again due to viral fever.

Gauri smiled.

G:Ok..then bye.

Gauri tried to walk out.

OMKARA:Nurse..

Gauri turned back.

OMKARA:I will miss not only this hospital,but also the people over here.Especially…

The head nurse came:Gauri…you are still here?Go to other patients also.

G:Ok.

Gauri ran out.

Omkara got irritated:Oh,I could’nt complete my sentence.

Omkara left the hospital without biding ‘good-bye’ to Gauri.So he was disappointed.

Gauri looked dull in her room.She shared her hostel room with Poonam;another nurse.

P:Gauri,why do you look upset?

G:Nothing like that.

P:You always talk to me about the patient Omkara.But today you did’nt say anything about him.

G:That chapter is closed.Omkara got discharged.

P:Oh!

Gauri thought:Lots of patients come and go.I am friendly with everyone.Then why I am sad when Omkara left?

After a few days…

Omkara went to a restaurant.He was surprised to see Gauri there with Poonam and guy.

Omkara rushed to her:Sister..

Gauri was surprised:Sir!

OMKARA:What a pleasant surprise!

G:Really.

P:Hi Omkara Sir..

OMKARA:Hi…

P:Meet my boy friend Agam.

Agam:Hi..

Omkara and Agam shook hands.

G:How are you sir?Are you taking care of your health?

OMKARA:Sister,don’t call me sir here.Please call me by my name.Omkara.

G:Ok.But you also stop calling me sister.Call me Gauri.

They both giggled.

G:Omkara,you also sit with us.

OMKARA:My pleasure.

Agam:Poonam…Can I have a drink?

P:Agam,in front of Omkara don’t try to be innocent.

Agam was embarrassed.

OMKARA:Agam,you can drink.I have no problem.Because I also drink.

Ag:Really?Then no tension.

Drinks were served.

Omkara,Poonam and Agam sipped drink.

Omkara looked at Gauri:Gauri,you…

G:Don’t be confused.I also drink.

OMKARA:Wow!Cool…Then I will serve you.

Omkara poured liquor in a glass for Gauri.

Omkara-Gauri:Cheers!

They drank.

Omkara and Gauri felt like laughing seeing Agam and Poonam being cozy in the drunken state.

G:Hey Poonam and Agam…this is a public place.

P:We don’t care.

Agam pulled poonam closer to him:You are so hot Poonam.

G:Shameless.

OMKARA:Gauri…I think we should keep in touch.

G:Why not?

OMKARA:Then I will give you my number.

Omkara and Gauri exchanged their numbers.

OMKARA:Usually people exchange numbers,but they forget to call each other in the busy schedule.I hope ours won’t be like that.

G:Sure.

OMKARA:I think I should leave now.I had fun time with you.

G:Same to you Omkara.Will you be able to drive alone?

OMKARA:Yes.Even when I am drunk I can drive.No problem.Even if due to carelessness I meet with an accident,I will be happy.Because If I get admitted in the hospital you will be there to look after me.

Gauri smiled.

G:But purposefully don’t try to meet with an accident.

They both laughed.

G:Anyways I have to drop Agam.In this state he can’t drive.This happens always.We go to restaurant.Have dinner.Then have a drink.Poonam and Agam have no control when it comes to drinking and then it’s my responsibility to drop him home.

They giggled.

After reaching home Omkara rang up Gauri.

G:Hi Omkara.

OMKARA:Hi..I just called you to remind you  to call me frequently.

Gauri smiled.

They kept calling each other.Then they started meeting up frequently.They became very good friends.

congrats on the SS! lovely update

Gauri is a nurse & Omkara is a patient in this part seems to be interesting. Omkara telling Gauri that he does not want to go seems that he has fallen in love with Gauri. Gauri feeling sad at Omkara's discharge reminded me of the Kyon ki movie in which Kareena reacted the same way when Salman Khan recovered. Prronima, Agam, Omkara, and Gauri's drink session is romantic. Rikara's phone number exchange was cute.

Their love story started in a hospital. Both were missing each other.

Congrats on the new ff

I read wrong that it's Omkara's last day in the world

anways, the moments were veey nice

continue soon

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Part 2
Omkara met Gauri.
She looked hot in her stylish attire.

He could'nt control himself.His eyes rolled over her.
G:Omkara...
Omkara came back to his senses. 
OMKARA:You look very beautiful in this dress.
G:Thank you Omkara.Actually this is the dress i bought with my first salary.So it's special to me.When ever I am happy I wear this.
OMKARA:Why are you happy today?
She smiled:Because you called me here.I felt happy when you called me.

OMKARA:Why?
G:I don't know.I feel happy with you.
He became happy.

OMKARA:Gauri...let me tell something about myself.I am Omkara Singh Oberoi.My father’s Oberoi Constructions was in a loss.So I left my family business and decided to work outside.Now I work in a bank.My family is running because of my salary.We are just middle class people now.But I have enough money to look after you.

Gauri stared at him:What do you mean?

OMKARA:I love you Gauri.

Gauri was very happy.Suddenly her face became dull.

G:I am Gauri Sharma.When I was small I lost my parents in an accident.My relatives also disowned me.I lived my life in an orphanage.I came here when I got a job in the hospital.Since then I am living in the hospital with Poonam.

Omkara held her hand:Gauri… I am staying alone in my apartment.Can you join me?Because I feel lonely.

She blushed.She nodded her head with a smile:Yes.

OMKARA:I am so happy Gauri.

Gauri caressed his face:I love you Omkara.

They shared a passionate eye lock.

Gauri packed her bags.Poonam looked upset.

P:I am happy that finally you got a company.Somebody who loves you very much.But still I am sad that you are leaving me.You are the only friend I have.

Gauri hugged her emotionally:Poonam,why are you sad?I am just leaving the hostel,not you.

Poonam smiled.

Gauri shifted to Omkara’s apartment.The flat was not neat.

G:What is this?What a mess!

Gauri cleaned the flat and arranged everything properly.

Omkara was impressed:Since you are a nurse you are very health conscious and hygenic.

She smiled.
He cupped her face in his hands:Gauri...this is our house.Our heaven.
She smiled.


Hmmm hmmmmm hmmmmm
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin, udhar nahin
Teri ore chale

They shared a sweet eye lock.

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin, udhar nahin
Teri ore chale
Mmmmm hey hey hey
Mmmmm ho ho ho….

He held her hand:Gauri,shall we dance?
She smiled.

They danced.


Zara der main yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi kahan kho gaya
Zara der main yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi kahan kho gaya
Bheed main logon ki woh hai wahan
Aur pyaar ke mele mein akela
Itna hoon main yahan

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin, udhar nahin
Teri ore chale
Mmmm..mmm..mmm..mmm…

They danced as if there was no tomorrow.

Gauri wore a night gown.Omkara could’nt take his eyes off her.

OMKARA:Gauri…you did’nt tell me where you are going to sleep.

G:I…

OMKARA:Actually you saw that there is only one bedroom here.So we both have to share the same room.

She became shy.He went towards her.She ran to the bedroom blushing.

He went near her passionately. 

 Shuru ho gayi kahani meri
Mere dil ne baat na maan meri

His limbs pampered her.

 Shuru ho gayi kahani meri
Mere dil ne baat na Omkarai meri
 Hadd se bhi aage yeh guzar hi gaya
Khud bhi pareshaan hua
Aur mujhko bhi yeh kar gaya

She tasted sweet like the honey in the flower .He became a butterfly and tasted the intoxicating honey.

 Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Idhar nahin, udhar nahin
Teri ore chale(Kites).

The next morning Gauri woke up from the bed blushing at her sleeping lover who gave her passionate love last night.

Gauri served the Breakfast to Om.

OMKARA:Gauri…You are too good at cooking.

G:Thank you Omkara.In the orphanage I got training for cooking.

OMKARA:Gauri…I am thinking of inviting my Boss Prakash sir here.He wanted to come here for a long time.I gave him different excuses to stop him from coming.Because if he comes here I have to give him food.I am not a good cook and I don’t want to spend money to buy food from hotels.

G:So stingy.

OMKARA:But now I can invite him with confidence as you are there to cook good food for him.

G:Ok.Tomorrow you can call him for dinner.Tomorrow I have no night duty.I will be free in the evening.So I can cook peacefully.

OMKARA:Done.

The next day…

Prakash came.

Omkara:Welcome Sir.

Prakash looked at Gauri:So this is your beloved Gauri?

Omkara and Gauri blushed.

P:Gauri…you know..Omkara is like a friend for me though he is of my son’s age.I have given him the freedom to say anything.And he always opens his mouth to praise you.He loves you a lot.

Gauri smiled:I know how much Omkara loves me.I understood the meaning of love from him.

Prakash smiled:You guys are lucky.Very few people get love.

G:Sir..your family?

Prakash’s face became dull.

P:I got married at a very young age.Within 2 years my wife died in an accident.After that I am single.

Gauri was shocked.She felt sad.

G:Sorry Sir.

P:It’s ok.By the way Gauri…did you recognize me?

Gauri got confused:What?

P:Don’t get tensed.I was once admitted in your hospital.You had taken injection for me.Here on my hand.

Gauri was surprised:Really?Sorry,I could’nt recall your face.

P:It’s ok.You are seeing so many patients.How can you remember everyone?

G:But you recognized me Sir.

P:Ya.That’s because even while taking the injection you were calm.

Gauri smiled.

OMKARA:That’s a very pleasant surprise.You knew my Gauri before.Anyways now you taste the dinner which she prepared.

Gauri served dinner.

They ate it.

P:Awesome preparation Gauri.Omkara is lucky.He can have good food daily.My servants are hopeless.But I adjust.

Gauri smiled simply.

Slowly slowly Prakash became a very good family friend of Omkara-Gauri.

Gauri respects him a lot as he is very simple,down to earth man though he is very rich.

excellent update. well written

hahaha mere dil ne baat omkarai meri

I liked the confession and the romantic moments

Don't know why but I m getting bad vibes from Prakash

Omkara admiring Gauri's beauty was passionate. Gauri sharing her feelings with Omkara & agreeing to stay with him in his house is romantic. But in practical life, when a guy and a girl stay together, advances will take place 95% of the time. In this ff, Rikara love is pure. Omkara enjoying Gauri's food & calling Prakash for dinner is sensational. Loved the friendship between Gauri & Poornima. Rikara-Prakash bonding was also sensational.