rishbala ff ex lovers part 5 on 23rd march

Posted: 4 years ago

Ex lovers
Promo:-
Madhubala:maa,papa ye sab kya hai aap log mujhe emotional backmail kar ke le aaye.
Padmini:beta hum tumhara acha chate hai.
Madhu:mere shaadi kar ke aap logo kya acha hoga..

a guy entering the restaurant with his father.it is none other than Rishabh urf rk..

Rk:papa, yeh aap Kaha mujhe pasa Rahe Hain jante hai na hum ki Shaadi Nahi Karne arre main kudh Aapne 3 dosto ke Shaadi torde aur aap yahan humare Shaadi Karwa Rahe Hain..
Mohan:rishu tu chal..
Ladki bohat ache hai tujhe bohat ache page gye.wo rahe .
Malik:ye dekho woh agaye

Madhubala and rk see each other..
Rk:tum..
Madhu :tum..
kk:namaste bhaisahab..

Rk:kya iss se rishte..
Madhu:kya isse rishte.
Rk:aapna line bolo mera copy mat karo..
Madhu:copy woh bhi tumhare..come on..

they are quarrels with each other and the parents keep watching without understand anything...

Madhubala took her parents and Rk take mohan.
Then at their house,
(I engage their together)

Mohan:rishu,yeh sab ka tha....
Woh ladki aur malikji ka soche gya.

Madhubala:maa ao nahi jante usse.
Rk:aap nahi jante papa.

Mohan:toh mujhe batao.
Padmini:ka baat hai..

Rk:she was my girlfriend..
Madhu:i date him.

Posted: 4 years ago

Congrats for new story

Good prologue

waiting for the updates

Posted: 4 years ago

Ex lovers

part 1:-

a girl with her parents sitting at a 

restaurant. 

Madhubala:maa,papa ye sab kya hai aap log mujhe emotional backmail kar ke le aaye.

(Maa,papa what is this,why are you backmailing me emotionally)

padmini:beta hum tumhara acha chate hai. 

(Dear,we want your best)

Madhu:mere shaadi kar ke aap logo kya acha hoga..

(What is best in my marriage for you guys)

Malik:beta ab tum 26 ke ho gaye ho aur hum chate hai ke tum aapne kaam ke saath saath aapne married life jeo..

(Dear now you are 26,we want you to settle your marriage life with your works too)

padmini:aur tere saare friends ke shaadi ho gaye hai..

(And your all friends got married)

Madhu:kaha sabke shaadi hui hai abhi netra aur pia ke shaadi thode na hui hain. 

(Where is my all friends got married,netra and pia both are still unmarried)

Padmini:netra ke kal engagement hai..

aur pia ke shaadi..

(Netra is engaged and pia too thinking to get married)

Madhu:aap log toh yese behave kar rahe hai jaise main 26 ke 46 ki ho gaye ho..

(Why you guys doing this with me, I'm 26 not 46)

padmini:life mein life partner ke jarurat hote hai..

aur hum tujhe abhi shaadi karne ko thode na bol rahe hai pehli tu ladke se mil ke baat karle phir shaadi ka shoch na. 

(You really Will need a life partner in one point of time,we are not telling you get married now but at least give try)

Madhu:okay maa...

a guy entering the restaurant with his father.it is none other than rishabh khundra urf rk

Rk:papa,yeh aap Kaha mujhe pasa Rahe Hain jante hai na hum ki Shaadi Nahi Karne arre main kudh Aapne 3 dosto ke Shaadi torde aur aap yahan humare Shaadi Karwa Rahe Hain..

(Papa,where are you draging me, you know that I don't want to get married

I just broke marriage of my 3 friends and you are getting me married)

Mohan: rishu, you just go.

Ladki bohat ache hai tujhe bohat ache page gye.wo rahe .

(The girl is very beautiful you will like her)

Malik:ye dekho woh agaye

(See,they came)

Rk and madhusee each  other..

Rk: you

Madhu : you

Malik:namaste bhaisahab..

Mohan:nameste..

padmini: Madhu,ye Mohan ji hai aur ye inka beta hum Rishabh se he tumhare rishte ke baat ki hai...

(Madhu be is mr.mohan and we want his son Rishabh to get married with you.)

Rk:kya iss se rishte..

Madhu:kya isse rishte.

Rk:aapna line bolo mera copy mat karo..

(You tell your lines Don't copy my lines

Madhu:copy woh bhi tumhare..come on..

(Copy that's too from yours come on)

Rk:papa,hum iss ladki se shaadi karbhi nahi karenga..

(Papa, I'm not getting married with this girl

Madhu:tum kya main kabhi bhi tumse shaadi nahi karne wale..

papa aap ko purai desh main yehe ladka mila..

(What you are not getting married with me, I'm not getting married with you.and papa you got this boy in whole country)

Rk:aur papa aapko bhi pure india mein he mile.

(and papa you too got this girl in whole India)

Madhu:ab kon copy kar raha hain..

(Now who is copying whom)

Rk:oh shut up.. duniya ko akre ladko bhi hoge na toh bhi main tumse kabhi shaadi nahi karne wala ho..

(Oh shut up..if you are last girl in this earth then also i won't marry you)

Madhu:tum jaise ladke ke saath kon ladki shaadi karege..

(Who will marry you boy like you

Rk:oh madam line lage hui hain humare peche ladkoyun ki ..

(Oh hello madam,there is big line of girl

Madhu:nonsense..

Rk and Madhu are quarrels with each other and the parents keep watching without understand anything...

Madhu:ma papa chale yahan se...

(Ma,papa let's go)

Rk:arre pehle jo order kiya hai uska bill de do kabhi toh bill dena shikho..

bauji chalein..

(Arre first pay the bill of your order.

Let's go papa

Rk leaves with his father .and madhu with her parents leaves. 

at madhu room,

Madhu doing her work on laptop and talking to her mother. Rk also talking with Mohan in his room.

both are talking ftom respetive place 

(i engage their scene together )

padmini:baat kya hai tu yese uss ladki ke saath jaani duman jaose kyu lar rahe the.

(What is the matter? why you started qurrell with the guy like he is your arch enemy)

Madhu:maa woh ladka thik nahi hai..

(Maa,that guy is not right)

Rk:kya papa humne thik nahi ki..

arre aap jante nahi hai uss ladki kon.

(What i did wrong, you don't know the girl)

Padmini:tu kase jante hai Rishabh.

(How you know Rishabh)

Madhu get nervous. 

Madhu:maa,i date him..

Rk:haan woh mere ex girlfriend hai..

(Yes,he was my ex girlfriend)

precap:flashbacks.

Posted: 4 years ago

Good update

loved it

thanks for the update

Posted: 4 years ago

They used to date but now don't want to see each other. what happened?

Posted: 4 years ago

part 2:-

flashback,

Rk and madhu standing seeing each other. 

Rk give madhu red roses.

Rk:happy valentine day my jaan..

Madhu:kya rk n red roses..

Rk:han valentine day pe toh sab red roses he dete hai naa..

Madhu:sab dete hai toh kta tum bhi doge mujhe laga tha ye humare pehla valentine hai tum bihat special feel karwao gye...

paar tum toh jao..

Madhu leaves and rk call after her.

at park,

Madhu is waiting for rk but he did come..

Rk:sorry sorry..

Madhu:kya sorry rk..

Rk:arre raste pe trafic tha toh main kya karta...

Madhu:main toh aaye ho raste se wahan se toh koi traffic nahi hai..

Rk:arre tum aaye ho south se aur main aaye ho north se toh..

pagal kahe ke..

Madhu:ek min tumne mujhe pagal kaha..

Rk:oh sorry...

Madhu:how dare you.. I'm never gonna talk to you.

next scene,

Rk and madhu sitting on the car. Madhu serve pasta to rk 

Madhu:khake bolo toh kaisa hai..

Rk taste it and spit it out. 

Rk:chi kis guztak ne yeh khana banaya hai agar mere samne agaye na toh uska main court Marseille Kar do..

Rk end his talk and see madhu's angry glace and understand who is the cook.

Next scene,

Rk singing song with aweful voice in park.everybody in the park get disturb but only one person was smile but his smile was fake.

Madhu:Rangeela re, rangeela re

Rangeela re tere rang mein yun ranga hai mera mann

Chhaliya re na bujhe hai kisi jal se yeh jalan

Ho, rangeela re..

Madhu finish her song and smilingly look at rk who clap for her.

And other people feel pity on him.

At restaurants,

Rk:aaj toh madhu mujhe bohat buk h lage hu Hain..

Rk have food in aweful manner and really speadly.madhu get annoyed but can't say anything just smiling fakely.

At shopping mall,

Madhu: rk,bolo naa konsa dress loon red ya black.

Rk:black..

Madhu:chi disgusting bohat karab Pasand hai tumhare main toh ye red hi lunge...

Rk didn't understand anything.if red was good why she was asking.

At restaurants,

Rk is having food in aweful manner madhu get annoyed but can't say anything because of her love just faked a smile.

At garage,

Rk:thik hai aap abhi ye kis Tarah thik Karwa degeye hum kal paise de denge...

Mere paise kam hai aaj.

Madhu: rk, car ki shiling thik Karwa Doon.

Mere pass pause hai main de detection ho.

Rk:iss ke koi jarurat Nahi Hain.

Hum aapne chize ke ache se samhal sakte Hain.

Madhubala feel bad with rk behaviour but don't say anything.

At valentine's Day,

Madhu make cake for rk and thinking to give him a surprise by going on his office.

Rk went to the office and find rk resigned the job...

Rk and madhu are talking.

Madhu:rk, Tumne job kyu Chor de jante ho kitne bade salary the..

Magar tum khud Chor Dita kya problem the.

Rk: problem the kyu ki main Kisi ke under kaam Nahi Karna tumhare Tarah

Madhu:what do you mean by mere tarah..

Rk main Apne job ko Pasand karte ho Kabhi karte hoon.

Rk:same mujhe woh job Nahi Pasand the...

Madhu:duniya main log bohat Sare kaam karte hai Jo unhe Pasand Nahi hai magar phir BHI woh karte Hain..

Tum me ye kya Kiya jante ho Maine socha that ke aab Jake main tumhe Aapne Aapne parents se milwa Yun magar no..

Actually ab tum mujhe mein interested he Nahi ho...

Rk:what do you mean by interested Nahi hoon.

Yaar I love you Madhu

Madhu:I love you too..magar ab tumhare I love you na I love you jaisa Nahi Raha .

Rk:what..

I love you I love you jaisa Nahi Raha.

Madhu:Haan kyu ki ab tum mujhe pyaar Nahi karte..

Rk:arre pyaar karta hoon she Galti ho Gaye Hain...

Madhu:Haan iss liye tum sheena ke Saath gumte hoon shopping mall mein coffee shop pe..

That time,

Sheena close his eyes from behind.

Sheena: guess who...

Rk:sheena..

Madhu give angry galce.

Sheena:arre wah rk tumhe Mera touch itne ache se pata hai oh I'm sorry tum dunno sayad baat Kar Raha ho .phir milenge bye rk.

Sheena leave.

Rk:woh haar Baar yese hi milte hai .

Madhu:lekin tum toh Uske touch mins mein pechan jaate hoon naa.

Madhu angerily leave from there.

Rk:main bhi naa ek number kya supid hoon.

Madhu come from behind and close his eyes.

Rk get irrited thinking it must be sheena so he shout on her.

Rk:yaar sheena just leave me alone.

Rk turn and find madhu who giving angry glance to her.

tmrk:ab tumhe saare touch sheena ke nahi lagte.

Madhu leaves rk go after her.

next scene,

Madhu:acha agar tum galat nahi ho toh darr kyu rahe hoon

Rk:arre agar main double date kar raha hota naa toh bhi nahi darte jitna tumhare sawalo se darte hui.

Madhu start crying and leaves from there.

next scene,

Madhu:agar main itne he problem karte hoon toh chor kyu nahi dete hoon mujhe....

Rk:haan chalo chor dia..

Madhu : itna asan hai tumhare liye mujhe chorna..

tumne toh kabhi mujhse pyaar hi nahi kiya..

Rk:aur tum bhi sayad nahi..

Rk leaves madhu look on tearly.

flashback ends. 

Madhu and rk both remembers past.and angerily shit the laptop. 

Madhu:moti budhi..

Rk :pagal ladki..

precap:again meeting of madhu and madhu, its totally funny. 

Posted: 4 years ago

Awesome update

loved it

they're poles apart but tried to adjust with each other after some time they broke up,

waiting for their meet

thanks for the update

Posted: 4 years ago

They were never on the same page before, hence the breakup. Will they do better this time around?

Posted: 4 years ago

part 3

Madhu and rk both come to balcony in their respective places. 

Rk and madhu look at the moon and remember their past.

Rk and madhu sitting near the bonfire. 

Rk hold guitar and singing a song for her. Madhu place her head on his shoulder. 

Rk:Mm hm hm, mm hm hm hm hm

Mm hm hm hm hm, mm mm mm mm mm mm mm

Dil ko tumse pyaar hua, pehli baar hua

Tumse pyaar hua

Main bhi aashiq yaar hua, pehli baar hua

Tumse pyaar hua

Chhaayi hai betaabi

Meri jaan, kaho main kya karoon

Madhu:kitna acha gaate ho tum.

bas dil karta hai tumhare saath saath mein bhi gao..

Rk:waise ek chiz notive ki hai..

Madhu:kya..

Rk:ek chand asamaan mein hai ek mere saath hain. 

Rk smiles and hide herself in his embrace. 

Rk:jante hoon bihaan tumhare bahoon mein mujhe sab se sada sukun milta hain..

ache tumhe kaha milta hai sukun.

Madhu:pata nahi..

Madhu hoped that he will answer like same but no.

flashback end. 

Madhu and rk both feel emotional after remembering their love. 

then both remembers the quarrel. 

flashback, 

Madhu:kya bihaan log toh aapne girlfriend ki liye chand taare tor ke laate hai tum mere liye itna nahi kar sakte.

Rk:maine koi rocket rent pe nahi lia jo jab chaha space pe nikal lo aur mujhe koi esa premi batao jo sach mein chand taare tor ke laya..

Madhu:toh main konsa chand taare tor le aane ko bol rahe hoon. 

flashback ends. 

Rk and madhu both get sad and come back to the room. 

(they are in different places i enact thier scene together.).

Madhu see a baclert and remembers how rk gift it to her. 

flashback, 

Rk make madhu wear the baclert who appreciates his choice. they look so happy. 

flashback ends. 

Madhu take the baclert and getting sad  .

Teri meri aankhon ne

Milke jo khwaab bune

Woh bade pyare thhe

Teri meri paaon chale

Milke ke do pairon tale

Taare hi taare thhe

Saari baatein mujhe yaad hain

Woh chand raatein mujhe yaad hain

at rk place, 

he also feeling sad he take out his Rolex watch which is given by madhu

Mujhe bhi tere haathon ki narmiyan yaad hain

Woh maasoom pyari si besharmiyan yaad hain

Yaad hai sab mujhe yaad hai

Saari baatein mujhe yaad hain

Yaad hai sab mujhe yaad hai

Saari baatein mujhe yaad hain

Madhu:aaj tumhe bohat dinno baat dekh ke tumhe bihaan acha laga.

aur bhi jada handsome ho gaye ho. 

bihaan:aaj tumhe dekh ke bohat acha laga.

Padmini come to madhu and said that they have to go to attend a party and ask madhu to get ready. 

Madhu feels fishy.

2 months later, 

at restaurant, 

Rk is near the counter and heard a familiar sound he turn and find madhu sitting near to him with a boy.

Rk see this and sit infront of their table. Madhu surprised to see him.

Madhu turned to the boy who us dhruv ranjan.

her family wants her to marry him. 

Rk understand this and take out his phone to make disturbed to madhu

Madhu talking to dhruv while giving glace to rk

Madhu:arre kya hua dhruv tum kuch bol nahi rahe ho. 

Rk replied to madhu while act like he is talking on phone. 

Rj:arre main kaise kuch bolo tumse nazar he nahi hatt rahe hai. 

kya lag rahe ho tum. main toh tumhe aanke far far ke tumhe dekh rahe hoon. 

Madhu give glace. 

dhruv:arre main kya bolo tumhe he bolo.

Madhu talk more sweetly to dhruv to make rk see her.

Madhu:you know what jab maine tumhe pehli baar dekha tabhi main tume pasand karne lage.

woh uss din woh party main. 

dhruv:really toh yeh baad uss din he bol dete. 

Madhu:kaise kehte uss din pehli baar mile the.

Rk:ab bolo na bolo bolo..

Madhubala giving angry glace to rk who enjoys to irritate her.

Madhu:waise late ho gaye tum aane mein. 

Rk:arre baat maat karo uss baremein. kitna traffic ho gaya hain .

move he nahi kar sakte.

now dhruv also noticed rk.

Dhruv:haan raste mein bohat traffic tha.

Madhu:is okey i can understand. 

Rk:haan ab toh tum sab samjhte hoon na,sab kuch,pehli kitna samjha ta tha magar tum kaha sunte the.

lekin ab sab samjhte hoon. 

Rk mimics like madhu

Rk:aur ab "i can understand "

dhruv turn to madhu

dhruv:aap hum logo se kuch keh rahe hai. 

Rk:aap ko yesa kyu laga main toh aapne ek more than friend se baat kar raha hoon. a beautiful girl. 

im so excited you guys carry on. 

dhruv talk to madhu

and rk keep replying to her making madhubala irritated. 

and finally madhubala  give up.

Madhu come to rk

Madhu:hello is excuse me. aap se baat kar rahe hoon. 

Rk on phone:baby ek min ek aurat baat karna chate hai.

Madhu get more angry hearing 'aurat'

Madhu:kya hai ye sab main kab se dekh rahe hoon aap yahan bath ke mujhe dekh rahe hai.

hum logo ke baat sun rahe hoon mujhe counter de rahe hai kyu.

Rk:hello madam yeh aap ka bol rahe hain.

main aapne more than a friend se baat kar rahe hoon.a beautiful girl.

Madhu:arre rakhe ye aapne beautiful girl aapne pas.

manager come to them.

manager:ma'am any problem. 

Madhu:manager see this man.

sitting here. don't order anything. 

manager:ma'am he is the owner of this restaurant. 

Madhu:what owner. 

manager:yes..

Rk:and maam you were hearing my talks.

yeh koi sharifon ke level pe aayta hai.

Main aapne kuch bohat kar rahe tha the girl whom i interested and you.

Madhu giving angry glace to rk

Precap: don't know.

Posted: 4 years ago

Was she trying to make him jealous? Maybe she went too far.



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