ArHi || Boundless; (Of poets and poetry) - Page 5

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Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by Gurmeet4Drashti


Hello! 

This one is for you, 


ye aarzū bhī baḌī chiiz hai magar hamdam

visāl-e-yār faqat aarzū kī baat nahīñ


I’m Nida btw :) 


Thank you Nida!  I'm Ruchi :) 


Aarzu ki baat aapne chhedi toh... 


"Aarzu jin ki hai un ki anjuman tak aa gaye 

Nikhat-e-gul ke sahaare hum chaman tak aa gaye

- Suroor Barabankvi

Posted: 1 years ago

Very interesting, would love to read more. Thanks

Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by Whats-in-a-name



Thank you so much. You are most welcome to be a part of the mehfil. As Faiz himself would say-


kisī tarah to jame bazm mai-kade vaalo

nahīñ jo bāda-o-sāġhar to hāv-hū hī sahī


Or perhaps if Mirza Ghalib were here, he would say-


qafas udaas hai yaaro sabā se kuchh to kaho

kahīñ to behr-e-ḳhudā aaj zikr-e-yār chale


Thank you <3


Aap (dono) kya aaye ki rukhsat sab andhere ho gaye

Is qadar ghar (IF) mein kabhi bhi raushni dekhi na thi


~Hakeem Nasir

Posted: 1 years ago

I loved the first chapter.  Very interesting.  You joined IF to post this story!

I have a feeling you are not new to writing.  Are you an old writer who lost your credentials or are you a writer who wrote on a different platform?

I am just curious.

Your writing style and the plot of the story piqued my interest and I will be with you in this journey.

My knowledge in poetry is zero.

But I will try to read all the poetry flowing between you three.

Cheers.......

Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by Whats-in-a-name



And this was a trivia that I was unaware of. Beautiful. Reminds me of how Ghalib had agreed to trade his entire diwan in exchange for one sher of Momin Khan Momin -


tum mire paas hote ho goyā

jab koī dūsrā nahīñ hotā


How lovely the coincidence that you should quote gulon mein rang bhare at the same moment that I picked a sher from it to reply to @Arshi67. It is a beautiful, beautiful ghazal. Reminded me of another sher from the very same piece-


jo ham pe guzrī so guzrī magar shab-e-hijrāñ

hamāre ashk tirī āqibat sañvār chale

Okay I’m going to have a corny moment and just say waah waah!! 

If I was born in that era, I think I would probably end up selling my organs (after obviously trading all my material possessions) every time someone came up with something so beautiful. 


And this one is applicable for everyone who’s trying to get over their heartache while trying to make a living,


duniyā ne terī yaad se begāna kar diyā

tujh se bhī dil-fareb haiñ ġham rozgār ke

Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by Whats-in-a-name



I know what you mean. It's an exhilarating mixture of resignation, disillusionment, and heartbreak. 

Well, you just articulated everything so beautifully!! 

Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by Arshi67



Thank you Nida!  I'm Ruchi :) 


Aarzu ki baat aapne chhedi toh... 


"Aarzu jin ki hai un ki anjuman tak aa gaye 

Nikhat-e-gul ke sahaare hum chaman tak aa gaye

- Suroor Barabankvi

Hi Ruchi! :) 

Aapne baat par tawojo di toh... 


aarzū hai ki tū yahāñ aa.e

aur phir umr bhar na jaa.e kahīñ

-Nasir Kazmi 

Posted: 1 years ago

Originally posted by Arshi67



Thank you <3


Aap (dono) kya aaye ki rukhsat sab andhere ho gaye

Is qadar ghar (IF) mein kabhi bhi raushni dekhi na thi


~Hakeem Nasir


Zahe-naseeb! Shukriya!


And for you, and your delightful presence on this thread-


Woh aaye ghar mein hamare, Khuda ki qudrat hai,

Kabhi hum unko, kabhi apne ghar (thread) ko dekhte hain.


-Mirza Ghalib


<3

Edited by Whats-in-a-name - 1 years ago

Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon 


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