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Posted: 1 months ago

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Posted: 1 months ago

Originally posted by Alexia_Wilson


Hi dear no need to thank me

You are such a great poetess the appreciation came by itself

Yup dear I am an Indian though my name sounds foreignsmiley36

You can call me Alexia Dismiley1

Must say for free verse you are pretty good at it

Free verse is tad bit harder than rhythm in terms of meaning

But you nailed it, so good job there

Do write more like this

I have an sister in IF who is 15 she also writes like you but in rhyme

Maybe you guys can know eachother

Sure I am eager to know about her. You can PM me about her. smiley2

Posted: 1 months ago

A dance of darkness or fright?

I dance in silent darkness of night

Singing to the shadows of fright

Passing those valleys of arch

Laying on grounds so dark

I cry myself to sleepless dreams

And listen to a victim's screams

Reminding me of my times of innocence

Before which I was pure in a sense

What was the fault done by me

Which he could but I couldnt see

He tortured my conscience insane

Ignoring brutally my pleads in vain

Posted: 1 months ago

Originally posted by Alexia_Wilson


A dance of darkness or fright?

I dance in silent darkness of night

Singing to the shadows of fright

Passing those valleys of arch

Laying on grounds so dark

I cry myself to sleepless dreams

And listen to a victim's screams

Reminding me of my times of innocence

Before which I was pure in a sense

What was the fault done by me

Which he could but I couldnt see

He tortured my conscience insane

Ignoring brutally my pleads in vain

Really hitting straight to the heart... 

Literally there is a urgent need to change people's mentality, not only in India but all over the wo World. 

TBH when I got to know these type of incidents in my early teen days, my soul really got frightened. I cuss these people. 

It's a great piecesmiley32

Posted: 1 months ago

Originally posted by Vermilion


Really hitting straight to the heart... 

Literally there is a urgent need to change people's mentality, not only in India but all over the wo World. 

TBH when I got to know these type of incidents in my early teen days, my soul really got frightened. I cuss these people. 

It's a great piecesmiley32

Thanks my dear

IKR this world needs to change its perspective for that a difference should be made

never get scared because these hounds will feed on your fear

And yes mention the user dont qoute much if its and image or video. If its write up its ok

Posted: 1 months ago

                           CURSE OF BEAUTY 


A little hazel in her eyes .

Black kohl in her whirlpool deep eyes .

Dew on her lips .

A curve in her face .

Long eye lashes with nature's way .

All face crowned with goddess of beauty .

Beautiful in her way  , she is .

Beautiful in people ways , she is .

She is just a girl , blessed with eminence .

But she is cursed with a blessing. 

Her only scream is why she is Beautiful .

When she becomes a exception .

When she is a prize .

When she was just impressed by people, 

Not befriended .

She gets frightened when people take care of her. 

She gets frightened when she knows ,

That she is alone in a crowd. 

Everyone wants her. 

She get scared what if her beauty is ,

Just a lust for some. 

She get scared when every touch she felt become strange. 

She get scared when gazing turn into staring. 

She get frightened when flirting turn into stalking. 

She hates her beauty. 

She got scared what if she was unable to identify true colours of others .

She get frightened when the city in which she born feels creepy. 

She gets frightened when even her so called brothers becomes her harasser. 

She gets frightened when there is no safety for her. 

She cried in a corner,  she can't even pray as there are million prays like her are unheard. 

She holds herself everytime. 

She got imprisoned in herself only. 

Her truth, her innocence is captured in cages. 

Even god is not able to save her. 

Her screams will remain Ambrose ,

In the depths of universe. 

When her roc get shuttled

In darkness of hell. 

She can't smile now. 

She was burned to death 

By demons of humanity. 

She will search for a way to 

Save others. 

But her attempts will go unheralded.

Her screams will gather one day 

, either this humanity will destroy 

Or all the offenders will burn in fire of her ire ( anger) 


By Neera 



Posted: 1 months ago

Such an agony filled poem my dear

I am shocked you are 16 and so well versed

Loved every part of it and got heartbroken

But I must say its really great

Posted: 1 months ago

The main purpose of the consciousness behind any act of creation is the desire to share, seeking an emotional bonding with the appreciator! 

The greatness of an artist or a writer does not depend on what he has in common with other artists and writers, but on what he has peculiar to herself! How can I express my happiness in mere words while walking through all these emotionally connected pages?!  I felt like... I want to make a garland to adorn these artists, started plucking stars from the moonlit night's bright sky from my window to make it, embedded with a few cherishing smiles as the colorful flowers there, but ... but, from where I'll get that sweet fragrance? Here I got, the friendly quivers are providing that sweet scent, without the thread how can I make a garland, stand still amidst a heap of happiness, now I got the idea, the breath is providing that neverending thread .... wait... wait a minute, let me run from page to page to count my treasure,Oops, I lost myself somewhere in this ecstasy!! 

Happy, really very happy for this treasure trove Billicat. For the first time, we are interacting here.smiley31 Great Idea.smiley32

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