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Junooniyat(Obsession)Prologue

This FF is the remake of my old 2012  FF with some changes. Earlier it was remade for other couples also.Now I am posting this FF on PreeRan-RishTa also with the title ‘Junoon’.But it is not exactly the same.Though the story is same,some scenes and dialogues are different.

Thanks to my dearest friend ashpat3 for making a sweet banner for this FF.

We all know that Omkara and Gauri are meant for each other.Shlok and Asha are also made for each other.

But what if Omkara falls in love with Gauri’s twin sister Asha and Gauri falls in love with Omkara’s elder brother Shlok?

How can Omkara and Gauri be meant for each other if Gauri is destined to marry Shlok?

Will Omkara realize that his true love is Gauri and not Asha?How will Shlok realize that it is Asha who is meant for him?

Will Gauri realize that her true love is Omkara and not Shlok?Will Omkara realize that Gauri is his true love and not Asha?

What will be destiny’s game to unite Omkara -Gauri and Shlok-Asha?

Tej Singh Oberoi and Jhanvi Singh Oberoi

The parents of Shlok and Omkara.
Shlok Singh Oberoi

The eldest son of Tej and Jhanvi.He is reserved in nature.

Omkara Singh Oberoi

The youngest son of Tej and Jhanvi.He is a very jovial fun loving extrovert guy.
Harshwardhan Sharma and Surbhi Sharma

The loving Parents  of the identical  twin sisters Gauri and Asha.

Gauri Sharma

A very quiet sweet girl.Quite traditional also.

Asha Sharma

A bold stylish fun loving extrovert girl.

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Lovely CS😳Banner is also nice😊Looking forward to the first chapter👍🏼

It will be a complicated situation getting the two couples swapped around.

Congrats on this FF! 

amazing prologue! 

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Junooniyat (Obsession) Part 1

Tej and Jhanvi call Shlok and Omkara to the drawing room.
Tej:We called you both to tell you an important thing.You guys are still playing.You both had enough.We have decided to get both of you married.

They are shocked.
SHLOK:Marriage?So soon?

OMKARA:Why in a hurry?

Tej:Hurry?You guys have reached the right age to get married.
OMKARA:Mom...please...
Jhanvi smiles.
JHANVI:Don't worry.If you both see the girls we have chosen,you both will be in a hurry to get married.
Omkara asked in a sarcastic manner:Why?Are they that beautiful?
JHANVI:Yes.I want both of you to get married to beautiful girls.One's wife should not be more beautiful than the other one's wife.So we have chosen twin sisters.
SHLOK:Twin sisters?
JHANVI:Ya.Gauri and Asha.Asha matches Omkara as they both are bubbly.Gauri is sweet and quiet like Shlok.
Jhanvi shows them the photograph of Gauri and Asha.Shlok and Omkara are truly impressed by the sisters.Jhanvi and Tej smiled seeing their facial expression.
Tej:Now what do you guys say?Ready for the marriage or not?

Shlok and Omkara blush:Ya..we are ready.

Tej-Jhanvi smile.

Shlok and Omkara go to see Asha and Gauri.Asha and Gauri come with tea and sweets.Shlok and Omkara can't take their eyes off their respective partners.

They go to 2 different rooms to talk.
Shlok and Gauri are so shy that they can't talk.Slowly Shlok looks at her with a soft smile.

She was looking down due to shyness and nervousness.

She looks at him shyly.They smile at each other.

Suddenly he notices her bare ear.

SHLOK:Your ear?You did’nt put earring on this ear?

She touches her ear:Oh..my earring is missing.

Shlok notices childish sorrow.

SHLOK:Don’t worry,you will get your earring back.

Suddenly he sees an earring lying on the floor.He takes it with a smile.She does’nt see it.Without thinking anything he puts the earring on her ear.For a moment she was numb.

She becomes shy.

Slowly a smile appeared on their faces.

Gauri:Thank you.

Shlok smiles:No mention.

She smiles softly.

Omkara is staring at Asha with a mischievous expression on his face.

Asha observes Omkara.

Asha:You always grow your hair like this?

OMKARA:Ya.Why?

Asha:Because you look like a crazy hippi with your long hair.
Omkara is embarassed.
Omkara:You find me crazy?
She chuckles extending her tongue to tease him..

Omkara is lost in her bubbly smile.He forgets his embarrassment and lets himself drown in her smile.

Their father Harshwardhan:Gauri….

 Their mother Surbhi:Gauri...did you like Shlok?

Gauri looks at Shlok with a smile.She is very shy.She nods her head.Shlok is very happy.
Harshwardhan:Asha..?
Asha:I liked Omkara.
Omkara is happy.
Harshwardhan:Did you guys like my daughters?
Omkara and Shlok smile.Harshwardhan is very happy.

Jhanvi:See…I knew that you both will like Gauri and Asha.

They all smile.

Gauro is in the temple worshiping God..Shlok stands near her without realizing that she is the one ho standing there..They don't see each other.

When Shlok turns his face he sees Gauri.He is surprised to see her near him.He feels very happy.

SHLOK:Hi Gauri.
Gauri is surprised to see him near her.
Gauri:You?I did'nt know that you are here.
Shlok smiles.
Shlok:Do you come here regularly?
Gauri:Yes.Goddess is my strength.
He smiles.

Shlok:God is my best well wisher.That’s why he gave me a lovely partner like you.

She blushes.
Gauri:I have to leave now.
Shlok:Ok.See you..we will be there on your birthday.We have been invited for your's and Asha's birthday party.
She smiles.

Omkara goes to a restaurant.There he is surprised to see Asha.He gets excited and sits near her.Asha is surprised to see him near her.

Asha:Omkara?How did you know that I am here?

Omkara:Do you think that I am following you?How will I know that you are here?It’s a pure coincidence that I also came to the same restaurant.Seeing you I thought I will sit near you and we will have a chat.What say?

Asha:Good.

Omkara:Ya.

Omkara called the waiter and ordered food.

Omkara:What about you?

Asha:No thanks.I already ordered.

Om:Ok.

The waiter brings the food and both Om and Asha get excited seeing the food.

They grab the food plate saying:Wow!

Suddenly they both look at each other.

Om:You also had the same reaction seeing the food.Same facial expression.

Asha:How come we both have the same reaction?

Om looks at her deeply:Because we both are alike.That’s why our parents decided to join us.

Asha smiles.

Gauri and Asha are in the room…
Asha:Gauri..did you really like that guy Shlok?
Gauri blushes:Yes.
Asha:Whom did you like?Omkara or Shlok?
Gauri:Why are you asking such a stupid question?Dad chose Shlok for me.So I did'nt even notice Omkara.
Asha:But i noticed both.Omkara is really crazy.But Shlok is mature.You are lucky to have Shlok.

Gauri:Sometimes you are really crazy.

That may be the reason why dad chose Omkara for you.

Asha is embarrassed:Gauriiii

Gauri giggles.Asha also laughs.

Shlok and Omkara go for the birthday party.
They are stunned to see Gauri and Asha in the same kind of dress.

Asha:How will you recognize who Asha and Gauri are?

Shlok and Omkara are confused.
Gauri and Asha smile seeing their condition.
Omkara whispers to Shlok's ears:I have an idea.You just say that their dressing is horrible.
SHLOK:What nonsense?How can i say that?They will be hurt.Not only that.Their dress is very beautiful.
Omkara:Just tell.Otherwise we won't be able to identify our partner.
SHLOK:Ok.But why me?Why can't you say that?
Omkara:You tell bro.
SHLOK:Ok.
Shlok's lips shiver.
SHLOK:Eh...eh...actually..actually..this dress does'nt suit you both.
Their face becomes dull.
Shlok regrets hurting them.
One among them gets angry:What?Our dress is not good?

Shlok never expected this outburst.He is embarrassed.
SHLOK:I'm sorry.

Omkara laughs.

OMKARA:Bro.That was just my trick to find out who Asha was..She is Asha.Only Asha can get angry hearing someone passing horrible comments on her dress.She is very conscious about her dressing as well as other’s dressing.

Asha is embarassed.

Gauri and Shlok giggle.
Asha:Omkara…you are too much.And you Shlok..you supported you funny brother Omkara?
Shlok and others just giggle.

Gauri and Asha cut the birthday cake and feed it to Harshwardhan and Surbhi.
Omkara goes near Asha.
OMKARA:I have to admit one thing.Even though you are talkative,spicy,short tempered and over smart you are interesting.

Asha smirks.She puts attitude and says:O really?But I find you boring.

Omkara is embarassed.:Me boring?Never.

Shlok tells Gauri:What I told is not true.Your dress is really beautiful.You look very pretty in this attire.

Gauri blushes.

Omkara is watching them with a smile.He looks at Asha.
OMKARA:Asha..Shlok and Gauri are a perfect pair.Right?
She  smiles.

The pairs got matched up based on similar personalities. But maybe opposites might attract?

This reminded me of ff similar to that of preeran. The couples are matched on similar qualities. I guess Rikara & ashlok will realize their true love & unite.

yes.the preeran ff has the same story.but the couples will have different scenes here. hope you noticed it.thanks

This content was originally posted by: vatika_r

This reminded me of ff similar to that of preeran. The couples are matched on similar qualities. I guess Rikara & ashlok will realize their true love & unite.

amazing update! nicely written 

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Junooniyat (Obsession) Part 2

Engagement function..

Shlok and Omkara came.Harshwardhan and Surbhi brought Gauri and Asha .

They exchange rings.

SHLOK:Gauri,I feel happy that you are my fiancee.Soon you are going to be my wife.I am so lucky to have you.

Gauri blushes.

Omkara:Asha..I am really excited.I am engaged.I never thought I would get engaged so soon.Very soon we will get married.

She giggles.

Asha:Omkara…you are talking as if engagement and wedding are all big adventures.

OMKARA:Getting a pretty girl as my wife is not lesser than an adventure.

She blushes.

OMKARA:I never thought that the bubbly naughty girl like you can blush.

Asha started kicking him in a funny manner.

They both laugh.

Harshwardhan:Though the engagement of both my daughters are on the same day,the wedding won't be on the same day.

All the faces become dull.

Harshwardhan:The astrologer said that Omkara and Asha's wedding should happen only later.

Surbhi:So Shlok and Gauri's wedding should be done first.

Omkara's face is dull.

Omkara whispers:Asha..i have to wait more to get you in my life.I can’t imagine it.

Asha:Why?

OMKARA:It's very  difficult to wait for you.

She smiles:Why is it difficult?

OMKARA:Because I don’t want to be away from you even for a moment.

She blushes.

Gauri looks dull.

Shlok:Why are you sad Gauri?

Gauri:I wanted mine and Asha's wedding to happen on the same time.But it's impossible.

Shlok:Don't worry.Very soon Asha will also be with you.Right?

She smiles.

Shlok:I feel you are still worried.But I promise... I will give you all happiness after marriage.
She smiles.
Shlok:  I heard that girls like shopping and outing the most.I will take you for both.
Gauri:To be frank I am not fond of shopping.
Shlok:Ok...then where do you like to go?I like going to Swimming pool.What about you?
Gauri:No swimming pool please.I can't swim properly though I went to swimming classes in childhood.I am scared.
Shlok:Then leave it.I will take you to other places and films.
She smiles.

Mehendi function….

Gauri came to do Mehendi.

Asha also sat near her.

Asha:Put mehendi for me also.

Mehendi lady:Ok.Whose name should I write on your palm?

Gauri blushes:Shlok.

Mehendi:So ‘S’.

Gauri:Write ‘O’ on her palm.

Mehendi lady:Ok ok.

She did mehendi design on Gauri’s palm.

Suddenly she thought:What was her fiance’s name?Oh no…I forgot.Ya..I think it starts with ‘O’.

She wrote ‘O’ on her palm which was unnoticed by Gauri.

Then she did mehendi design on Asha’s palm.

She thought:Her fiance’s name is Shlok I think.

She wrote ‘S’ on her palm.

Suddenly Asha saw ‘S’ on her palm.She is stunned.

Asha thinks:Oh no…what will others think?Anyways no one will notice my mehendi as I am not going to get married now.So leave it.

Gauri looks at her palm.But unfortunately she can’t find any letter on her palm.

Gauri:Where is ‘S’ on my palm?

Mehendi lady get shocked.

She thinks:Oh no.Names got exchanged.I wrote the wrong letter on her palm.If she finds it I will be blamed.It should not happen.

Mehendi lady:If you check properly you will see it.I am busy.Now I have to leave.

Gauri:Ok.Thanks.

The mehendi lady leaves in a hurry.Gauri keeps searching for the letter on her palm.But she failed and later she ignores it.

Sangeet function….

Shlok-Gauri dance romantically.

Yeh kya hua
Kuch pata na chala

Kyun haadsa ban gaya silsila

Tukdo mein tum the
Tukdo mein main bhi
Tukde bane toh hum bane

Yeh dil zindagi se
Khafa ho chala tha
Jisey phir se jeene ke
bahaane tum bane

Omkara imagines dancing with Asha.

Tanha safar ke mushkil dagar mein
Tum humsafar jo mil gaye
Hai zakhm saare sil gaye

Bikhre pade thhe bezaar lamhe
Kaanton ke jaise har jagah
Woh phool ban ke khil gaye

Sadko pe kitni shaamein guzari
Wohi raat hote aashiyane tum bane

Yeh kya hua
Kuch pata na chala(Broken But Beautiful).

Gauri-Asha dance together which is a delight to everyone.

 (Taka re taka re taka dhim taka taka taka dhim
 Taka re taka re taka dhim taka jhum) - (2)
 
 Kehta hai meraa yeh dil piya
 Koyee hai koyee hai hi nahee - (2)
 Saya hai tu chhaaya hu mai
 Tu na ho toh mai bhee nahee - (2)
 (Taka re taka re taka dhim taka taka taka dhim
 Taka re taka re taka dhim taka jhum) - (2)
 
 Chudee jo khanke toh kehte hai khan khan
 Ghungru jo chhanke toh kehte hai chhan chhan
 Khan khan ho ya phir chhan chhan ho
 Matlab inka hai jab tak ho do
 Mai bhee hu tab tak jab tak tum ho
 Jo sach hai woh tum man hi lo
 (Dhinak dhinak dhin dhin ni la la
 Na na re da ni na na re da ni dhina do) - (2)

 
 Subah ke pal ya shyam ke do, ek do sala ek hi hai
 Do aankhon se dekhe ham, phir bhee najara ek hi hai
 Dil hai do lekin sanam, pyar kee dhara ek hi hai
 Kehta hai meraa yeh dil piya, (koyee hai koyee hai hi nahee -2)
 (Taka re taka re taka dhim taka taka taka dhim
 Taka re taka re taka dhim taka jhum) - (2)
 
 Sunee kahanee hai yeh puranee, hanson kaa raja hanson kee ranee
 Phirte hain ek sang harpal hee, nain me jab ek nir bharaye
 Gudwa aankh dee nir bahayee, pyar kee ho mann me jhal khal bhee
 (Dhinak dhinak dhin dhin ni la la
 Na na re da ni na na re da ni dhina do) - (2)
 
 Kehne ko do jism sahee, lekin bas ek nam hain ham
 Kehne ko ham do sapne hee, lekin ek arman hain ham
 Itna pyar huwa kaise, sochke khud hairan hain ham
 Kehta hai meraa yeh dil piya
 (Sargam)
 Kehta hai meraa yeh dil piya
 (Sargam)
 Kehta hai meraa yeh dil piya
 (Sargam)
 Kehta hai meraa yeh dil piya
 Koyee hai koyee hai hee nahee - (2)
 Saya hai tu chhaya hu mai
 Tu na ho toh mai bhee nahee - (2)(Jeans).

Gauri wore a yellow outfit for the haldi ceremony.

Shlok-Gauri have haldi function in their respective home.

On the previous day of Shlok-Gauri’s wedding..Omkara throws a bachelor's party.Black is the colour of the party.All have worn black clothes.

All are having disco.

SHLOK:Omkara..what was the need of all these things?You know that I am not comfortable with partying.

OMKARA:Oh come on bro.Dance and have fun.This is the last chance.Once Gauri enters your life you won't be able to party like this.

SHLOK:That's ok.I will be happy if Gauri is against me partying as I hate partying.

Omkara laughs:Funny!

They are shocked to see Asha entering the hall in a black outfit.

OMKARA:You are Asha.Right?

Asha smiles:Ya.How did you recognize me?

Omkara:Because only you like partying.Gauri is not a party animal for sure.

Asha:Right.I called her here.But she was not interested.

Omkara:But how come you are here?This is bachelor's party and you are a girl.

Asha:Don't say that I am just a girl.

OMKARA:Ya…how could I forget that sometimes you are pretty much like boy.Sometimes I even doubt whether you are a boy or a girl.

Asha:Oh…just stop it Omkara.You are always teasing me.Look at Shlok.He is not teasing me.

Shlok smiles.

OMKARA:That is because you are Shlok’s sister in law.But you are my girl.

Asha:But Shlok does’nt tease Gauri.He respects Gauri.He does’nt make fun of her.I respect him for that.You learn manners from him.Don’t ridicule guests.

Omkara laughs off.

SHLOK:Omkara..Asha is right.You should not tease her like this.You are crossing the limit.

Omkara just smiles.

Asha:Shlok…thanks a lot for supporting me.Gauri is a lucky girl to get a man like you in her life.

Omkara and Shlok smile.

OMKARA:That means you are not lucky to have me?

Asha:Leave it Omkara.By the way..tell me..do you have any problem if i attend this party?I am bored of the traditional sangeet mehendi functions.I just want to have fun.That’s why I came here.

Omkara smiles:I have no problem dear.Infact I am happy that you are here.I wished you were here.Surprisingly you are in front of me.Like you even I am bored of these traditional functions.That’s why I conducted this party.

SHLOK:Asha is a perfect match for you.Both of you love partying.Carry on.

Asha:Hey Shlok..you also join us.

SHLOK:No..no..i don't know disco.

Asha:Join us.Automatically you will dance.

OMKARA:Asha is right bro.Come…dance..

Omkara and Asha pull Shlok.They push him to the dance floor.

They dance.

We all gettin' crazy
Ajj ki raat ki raat thodi amazing
Turn up the lights and the sound
Get aloud shout it out
Cause we all gettin' crazy

Mauka hai, mausam hai
Mehfil mein jawaniyan
Deewani dhadkan ki dhak dhak si kahaniya
Yeh raat hai do pal ki
Isey haathon se tu na jaane de
(tu na jaane de)

It's a real deal party with Kishore & RD sir
C'mon everybody say gilli gilli akhaa

Yeh jawaani hai deewani
Haah meri raani, ruk jaao raani
Dekh zara peeche mud ke
Chali kahaan aise ud ke, hey hey
Gilli gilli akhaa
Gilli gilli akhaa
Gilli gilli akhaa bili bili bili bili

We all gettin' crazy
Ajj ki raat ki raat thodi amazin'
Turn up the lights and the sound
Get aloud shout it out
Cause we all gettin' crazy
(Gilli gilli akhaa)

Baatein mulaqaatein karne ki shaam hai
Aise mein hai roothna deewano ka kaam hai
Hai dekho dekho tauba tauba
Aate yunhi jaate mujhe chhede shaam se
Kare tu yeh shararatein
Tera yehi to kaam hai

Yeh jawaani...
We all gettin' crazy
Hai Deewani
We all gettin' crazy

Yeh jawaani hai deewani
Haah meri raani, ruk jaao raani
Dekh zara peeche mud ke
Chali kahaan aise ud ke, hey hey
Gilli gilli akhaa
Gilli gilli akhaa
Gilli gilli akhaa bili bili bili...

Yeh jawaani hai deewani
Haah Haah meri raani, ruk jaao raani
Dekh zara peeche mud ke
Chali kahaan aise ud ke, hey hey!

hey hey! hey hey! hey hey

('STUDENT OF THE YEAR 2')

After the song gets over also Omkara does’nt  leave Asha.He keeps looking at her eyes.They share an eye lock.

Seeing them like that Shlok smiles and moves away.They break the eye lock.

OMKARA:How was the party?

Asha:Cool.After a long time i enjoyed a lot.I danced with full heart.It was a rocking party.

OMKARA:Asha..I really enjoyed dancing with you.I am so happy that will you be there with me to dance for  the rest of my life.

Asha smiles.