Hi guys
I'm not so good writer
But I got a thought
Im so interested to write
Wanna know ur views on this
If u all r ok with concept
I will move further
First of all this is abt meenu story
I don't know bt I feel I'm the first one.who is going to write back story for meenu
I always feel meenu is so egoistic person n she became like that becz of her ego n also failed marriage
And I didnt find any other way to redeam her
So I'm gonna bring a person in meenu life..
Like meenu ki dulha😆
..no chappals plz
If u don't wanna imagine rupal as meenu plz suggest me some others in that place
And coming to concept
It's based on before leap track
Meenu black mail abir to leave misthi
Abir cancel marriage
Misthi go to London
After 1 year
Abir will tell to meenu that he is going to London for ngo work purpose
Meenu gets tensed
As she know that misthi will be in london only
She don't want to loose abir
She decides to accompany abir along with kuku
Abir and meenu goes to meet the abir partner
Meenu get shock after.seeing that person
Who is he?
How msihbir reunite?
Wat about kuku?
And how is relation between parul n Kunal
For all these questions
Plz comment so that I will continue
#title yet to decide
Plz give suggestions for that too
Edited by vardhinirosid - 4 years agoThank you guys for likes
Please don't mind I am not so good writer
So please forgive me for any mistakes
Here is there first part
Abir: maa what are you saying
Meenu: ha abir I said the fact which was hidden from years from you n Kunal
Kuna is illegitimate son of mehul kapadia and parul
Kunal Meri sautan ka beta
Abir is shocked
He can't able to believe
Tear scrolled from his eyes
Abir: maa plz say this is lie.you are just saying lie to separate me with misthi
Plz maa..plz
Meenu: abir this is the truth.
Abir turned to parul who is sobbing silent
Abir: maasi ..plz tell me this is not truth.
Plz maasi
He said holding her shoulder both sides
Meenu: abir truth will be always truth..It can't be changed
Meenu signed parul to accept the truth in front of abir
Parul closed her eyes with pain
Parul: ha abir beta. Kunal is not ur own brother. He is son of me n mehul
Abir shattered
He felt like some earth quake under his feet.
Meenu: abir I'm sure now u believe..and yes think wat ever u want..u may feel it as dhamki ya black mail ya order wat ever
But one thing is sure..if u won't break ur ristha with misthi then ur relation with Kunal also break. I will disclose this truth to Kunal and I will throw him out.
Abir: maa what are you talking maa..Kunal love u lot maa. He will be shattered how can u do this to him
Meenu: yes I know..I know he will be broken after knowing this truth..I don't want to see him in that state. But at same time I don't want my family to b broken because of misthi. I'm doing this for my family. If u don't want to see Kunal in broken state u have to accept my condition
Break ur relation with misthi
Abir: maa
He abt to say something
Meenu signed him to stop by showing her hand
Meenu: abir don't waste ur time by arguing with me..my decision will not change any cost..now u have only one option to choose..misthi ya Kunal
It's ur choice whom to choose
Abir looked at parul
She folded her hands before abir
Parul: please abir beta..my son will be shattered..please do some thing..I can't see him in pain
Abir hold her hands
Abir: I too can't see him in pain maasi..no matter what..he is my own brother..mere nanko hai woh .hamesha rahega
meenu: Abir let's go..maheswaris are on the way..we have to reach home at time..and u have to tell ur decision to misthi
Meenu about to go towards car
Abir: maa u both go..I will come later
Meenu: no..u have to come..I know if I leave u .u will plan some thing
Abir: maa it's not like that..I just need some time n space.
Meenu about to say some thing
Parul: Ben baa..it's his life's difficult decision. At least we have to give some time to digest the fact we told to him..please Ben ba let's go..he will come later
Meenu to herself: there will be no signals in this area.
so there is no chance for him to contact misthi..and he can't go to maheswaris house as they are about to reach rajvansh sadan..there is no need to worry
Meenu agreed
Meenu and parul left
Abir sat down
After some time
Maheswaris and Rv's waiting for abir
Misthi is looking at entrance for her ajeeb rajvansh
Abeer reached
Kunal came to him
Kunal,: bhai where u went..we are waiting for you
Abeer hugged Kunal tightly
Kunal was confused
Kunal: bhai are you alright?
Abeer released hug
Abeer nodded his head as yes
Abeer: you will be there with me na..everything will be alright
Bade maa: abir come beta..let's start rituals..
Abir looked at meenu
She is already giving Hitler look n signed him looking at Kunal( indirectly giving dhamki to abir that she will reveal truth to Kunal)
Abir took deep breath
Abir: this rituals are not going to happen
All are shocked except meenu
Who is giving devil Wala smirk
Misthi: abeer what are you saying
Abeer: misthi I'm saying that this marriage is not going to happen
Badepapa: Abeer what happened..why are you talking like this
Bade maa: ha Abeer beta..Kya hua
Misthi: abir tell me what happened..I know something happened..I know our love is not that weak to break like this..what ever problem is..let's face each other. Let's sort out
Abir : love?
Abir laughed
Abir: I never loved u misthi..this is revenge..revenge for saying no to Kunal
( Sorry guys..u may not like reason I gave..but please be patient I will sort it out..I know abir helped n supported misthi when she broke engagement with Kunal. But I don't like abir saying misthi you are from broken family..so I changed like this but I promise I will clear this mess)
Misthi: Abeer..no abir you are lying
Abir:..this is truth misthi..I want to reject you on same way you rejected Kunal
That's it..baath katham
And good bye misthi
By saying this he left to his room
Badepapa about to go to abir room to confront him
Misthi shattered
She fell down n started crying
Bade papa Turned back n saw misthi who is totally broken
Maheswaris rushed to her
Naanu about to go towards misthi
Bade papa stopped him
Bp: don't want more favour from ur family
By saying this he made misthi stand up
Bp looked at Rv's
Bp: ur family don't know what u lost..think as warning r wat ever..but when u realise wat u lost..don't come back..u lost right
By saying this he left with his family members
Days are going on
After that incident kunal naanu tried to talk about that to abeer bt he forbidden them to talk abt that matter
Abeer kept himself busy with ngo work
Every one thinking he moved on
Meenu is super happy as her plan worked
Only parul knows how much Abeer suffering..how much pain is there behind his fake smile..
And his shades help him others not to see his pain in his eyes
Here misthi left to London as per badepapa insistense
In mean while kuhu and Kunal applied for divorce
They didn't reveal to this family
Kuhu became silent after mishbir relation broken
She stopped talking to Kunal
She just talks when needed
This is hurting Kunal
Kuhu decided to work as event manager
She became busy with works
She went to other city for one week for work purpose
Kunal started missing her
Kunal: Kunal what's happening to you yar.you are the one who told kuhu that you don't like her you asked her to stop talking..you asked her divorce
Then now what happened
Y her silence hurting you
Y her absence effecting you
Y her ignorance troubling you
First of all y u r missing her
What is happening to you
For just 7 days you are missing her this much..then what about after divorce
Oh god please show me way so that I wont miss her much
At night
Abeer in his room
He is sleeping
he heard some sound
He woke up
He looked around
Abeer confused : what is this sound..I'm feeling like some one entered in this room
Abeer switched on light
He didn't find any one
He went to window
Which was open
He closed it
N turned
He was shocked to see misthi in jugnu dress
He got smile
He lost in her for few seconds
Then realisation hit him
Abeer: misthi..Wat are you doing here? And how u came here?
Misthi: thum kaun banega karod pathi host ho?
Abir nodded as no
Misthi: thum journalist ho?
Abir nodded no
Misthi: thum Meri proffesor ho?
Abeer nodded no
Misthi took stool n got on it
And reached abir level
Misthi: then y u ask these many questions
Abir looked into her eyes
Abir: he understood she came to ask so many questions
He about to go
Misthi blocked him by placing her hands on both sides
Misthi: no ajeeb rajvansh..now u can't run away from me without answering me
I don't ask so many questions .just accept one thing our love is true it's not a revenge
Abir: misthi plz
He tried to go
But misthi held his shoulder
She looked into his eyes
( Saathiya mere bgm)
Misthi moved towards him
She kissed on his forehead
Abir closed his eyes
She kissed his right cheek
And then left cheek
Abir was just enjoying that moment
He felt like time should stop there itself
Misthi placed her lips on his eyes and kissed them
And moved towards tip of his nose
And kissed him
And then moved towards his lips
And placed her lips on his
Soon Abeer allowed her
And kiss became passionate
They forgot the world around then
And living in different world
After misthi left kiss because of lack of breath
Misthi smiled at Abeer who is still closed his eyes and feeling the moment
Misthi: I got the answer
By saying this she rushed from the place and opened the window and jumped to go out.
Abeer came out of world
Abeer shouted
Abeer: misthi no...don't go
He got up
And looked around
Misthi is not there
He understood it's dream
Abeer: i love you misthi..in my dreams r in reality ur only my love..
Note: This is some wat same as serial..there will be change from next part
Edited by vardhinirosid - 4 years agoPart 2
Guys in this story im gonna concentrate on all the charcters
Kuku confession
Kunal accepting parul as maa
Meenu flashback
And of course mishbir true love
Bt guys it's take some time for mishbir union
Bt I don't want u all missing mishbir in updates
So there will be some dream sequences n flash backs
I hope u guys are ok with it
Tq for guys who are reading it and also liking it
Plz support my next updates
And this part is more of kuhu Kunal
Will give mishbir in next part
Part 2:
Kunal started missing kuhu
Bt he didn't realised he fell in love with her
He is missing her kuhuness
The girl who used to talk 24/7 now hardly speaking
Kunal decided to irritate her
So that In that angry she will speak something
He started taunting for everything
Kuhu lost her patience
And started giving back
This made Kunal happy
He is enjoying this fights
Slowly he initiated friendship with her
Even thought she denied at start
Slowly accepted his friendship
Now they both are in good terms..like friends they are sharing everyhtng..
Kuhu felt happy seeing changes in Kunal
Scene2:
Abir : what are u saying maa..again dhamki. Do u really treat me as human?
I have feelings
I'm feeling pity about my self.
OMG Abeer in which situation u are
U r trying to proove to ur mom that u r not a robot..you r human
His voice is shivering
Parul felt bad seeing abir in that state
Meenu stood like rock
Any one can melt by seeing his broken state
But here the great Meenakshi rajvansh stood firmly with out moving an inch
Parul went to Meenakshi
Parul: benbaa please think once..see Abeer state..how can he marry some one else when he loves misthi so much
Please benbaa. He choosen Kunal that doesn't mean his love for misthi is less.
He did that for me n Kunal
He can bear the pain of losing love
But he can't see pain of Kunal
he decided to suffer to keep Kunal happy
Please benbaa Im folding my hands infront of you..don't do this to abeer..I can't see him in pain
Meenu : parul do u think I won't think about my son.
I took this decision for his good life
And I said him to break up with misthi so that I can choose a better life partner for him
And not for sulking for her n live life with her thoughts
And this is my decision ..if he won't agree to marriage
this time definitely I'm gonna reveal this truth to Kunal
Nothing can stop me
Decide fast Abeer
So that I vl start marriage preparations
By saying this she left
Abeer sat down
And closed his eyes tightly
Parul came to him n sat beside him
She kept her hand on his head and carassed his hair
Abeer looked at her
Parul: no more sacrifices Abeer
Abeer looked at her shockingly
Abeer: maasi
Parul: ha Abeer enough of this sacrifices. For Kunal happiness I can't see my another son in pain
Let's tell truth to Kunal
Abeer: maasi
Wat are u saying..no maasi we can't do this
Parul: y can't Abeer..at any day truth will come out one or in another way..we can't live with this lie entire life. n I know it's difficult for Kunal to accept truth. But we are there na..we will be always there for him to support..and I know his brother Abeer will be always there for him..Hein aa?
Abeer became emotional
He hugged her
Abeer: ha maasi ..he is my nanko. No one can separate us
Parul: I knew..I think we should tell this to kuhu too so that she will also handle him..he needs our support
At that time they heard voice
Wat truth?
Abeer and parul saw that person
Abeer: bro
Parul: kuhu beta
Kuhu: so what's going on..hashtag any secret mission
Parul: ha beta some what like that only
Kuhu: wow excited..then will u guys join me in this mission hashtag sherlok kuhu
Parul: beta this is very serious thing
Kuhu now observed seriousness in parul n Abeer faces
Now she was tensed
She looked at Abeer
Kuhu: bro is everything alright
Abeer nodded no
Kuhu: what happened bro
Abeer: not here let's go out
Parul Abeer n kuhu went out
After some time
Kuhu: what?
Parul: ha beta..what u heard is right..Kunal is my son
And Abeer broke up with misthi because benba told him to break up with misthi otherwise she will reveal this truth to Kunal
Kuhu got tears
Kuhu went to abeer and kept her hand on his shoulder
Kuhu: bro you know what
if I were in ur place and anyone ask me to choose between misthi and Kunal..I will choose Kunal ..I will choose my love
But u choosen Kunal..I have no words bro..Kunal is lucky to have a brother like you..after seeing ur bro's relation ship I'm really feeling ashamed..I never treated misthi as my sister.. I hurt her lot..now I understood relation of siblings
Now I really want to be like you
Abeer smiled
Abeer: kuhu..I know there is some distance between you n misthi..but ur relationship with her is not that weak
I know this
because after I broke up with misthi u became so silent..u hardly speaking with me..because you are hurt as I hurt ur sister
Kuhu got tears
Kuhu:ha bro I felt bad..we both fight a lot..tease each other..I some times feel inferior as she gets lime light but I don't know y I can't able to see her in broken state.
Abeer smiled: that is the purity in relationship of siblings
Kuhu smiled
Kuhu: bro..I understood.. n parul maasi is correct it's better to tell truth to Kunal so that meenu maa didn't get chance to black mail you again
But I was tensed how will Kunal take it..he loves meenu maa a lot
Parul: ha beta..that is our mission..we have to tell truth to Kunal..but he should not be broken
We have to think idea for that
Kuhu: ok ma we will do it
In mean while I think some ideas
Abeer kuhu n parul joined their hands
At rajvansh sadan
Abeer in his room
Holding misthi photo frame like hugging
Abeer: I know so much happened in our lives..which we never imagined..misthi I miss u so much..bas wait for few days..I will sort out everything and will come to you
I love u misthi
By saying this he kissed her photo
( Dheere dheere se bgm)
In kuku room
Kuhu is thinking deeply
Kunal came to room and saw her who is in deep thinking
Kunal cleared his throat
But no response from her
Kunal to himself: crazy girl..what she is thinking so deeply
Kunal went to her
And shook her shoulder
Kuhu came out thoughts
She looked at him, his hand is still on her shoulder
She looked into his eyes
He lost in her eyes
She too list in him
(Bekudhi bgm)
After some time
Kuhu came out of world
Kunal too
Both felt embrassed
Kunal thought of diverting topic
Kunal: by the way wat this hashtag ki bacchi is thinking too deeply
Kuhu pouted her lips
Kunal: ok cool tell me wat happened
Kuhu: Kunal..I was just thinking..about my life
Kunal looked at her confusingly
Kuhu smiled understanding his confusion
Kuhu: ha Kunal..my life which is filled with so much uniquness I never thought everything in my life become unique # uniquness queen
Kunal raised his eyebrow
Kuhu ignored his look
Kuhu: u know na Kunal
I was an illigitimate child
A tear dropped from her eyes
Kunal felt bad
He understood she need support( Kunal became sharp🤭)
He held her hand tightly
And signed her to continue
A little smile crept on her lips
Kuhu: and God knows how to balance life ..I used to feel im unlucky as I'm illegitimate but may be god felt whats this #hashtag cute girl wrong in that so he made me lucky by giving varsha maa and bade papa n bade maa
Varsha maa accepted me whole heartedly
On that day I felt I'm luckiest person on the earth
And next when u said u never loved me
Kunal face became pale
His heart became heavy hearing that
Kuhu: I felt so bad..I cried a lot as I'm unlucky but again God balanced that..he gave a family who loves me lot..from childhood I used to feel I should be in lime light ..I should be center of attraction.i should get special treatment and this family gave me that..he gave me Abeer bro
And now leave about husband / love I got best friend in u
Kuhu said emotionally
Kunal smiled
He saw tears in her eyes
He wiped her tears
Can't able to control she hugged him
Kunal inturn hugged her and carassed her hair with his hand
Kuhu: till now I used to feel im unlucky for everything Kunal..but few minutes back when I self analysed I saw these many positives in my life
I understood life itself like this
When we busy in planning some thingg
God plans some thing else
But at the end .he will give what u deserve
In our case he gave a supportive family and Abeer bro who loves family a lot..who gives everything for us
We are so lucky
I hope you to see life in postive light
Kunal got confused
He broke hug
And looked at her confusingly
Kunal: kuhu what are you trying to say
Kuhu: woh...woh
She started stammering
Woh Kunal I got some important work
I will talk with u later
By saying this she left the place
Edited by vardhinirosid - 4 years agowow very nice yaar eagerly waiting for next part..I liked Abir dream even in the show mishti should have tried this technique instead of nishmish abi tak mishbir shaadi ho chukki hogi🤣
Thank you yar.ha ha nishmish attack see poora story karab kar diya🤦 here my story demands so I shown as dream otherwise I might shown as real sequence 😝