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Posted: 4 years ago

Hi guys

I'm not so good writer

But I got a thought 

 Im so interested to write

Wanna know ur views on this

If u all r ok with concept

I will move further 

First of all this is abt meenu story

I don't know bt I feel I'm the first one.who is going to write back story for meenu


I always feel meenu is so egoistic person n she became like that becz of her ego n also failed marriage 

And I didnt find any other way to redeam her

So I'm gonna bring a person in meenu life..

Like meenu ki dulha😆

..no chappals plz

If u don't wanna imagine rupal as meenu plz suggest me some others in that place

 

And coming to concept


It's based on before leap track

Meenu black mail abir to leave misthi

Abir cancel marriage 

Misthi  go to London

After 1 year

Abir  will tell to meenu that he is going to London for ngo work purpose

Meenu gets tensed

As she know that misthi will be in london only

She don't want to loose abir

She decides to accompany abir along with kuku

Abir and meenu goes to meet the abir partner

Meenu get shock after.seeing  that person


Who is he?

How msihbir reunite?

Wat about kuku?

And how is relation between parul n Kunal

For all these questions 

Plz comment so that I  will continue


#title yet to decide

Plz give suggestions for that too

Edited by vardhinirosid - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Thank you guys for likes

Please don't mind I am not so good writer

So please forgive me for any mistakes 

Here is there first part

Abir: maa what are you saying

Meenu: ha abir I said the fact which was hidden from years from you n Kunal

Kuna is illegitimate son of mehul kapadia and parul

Kunal Meri sautan ka beta

Abir is shocked

He can't able to believe 

Tear scrolled from his eyes

Abir: maa plz say this is lie.you are just saying lie to separate me with misthi

Plz maa..plz

Meenu: abir this is the truth.

Abir  turned to parul who is sobbing silent

Abir: maasi ..plz tell me this is not truth.

Plz maasi

He said holding her shoulder both sides

Meenu: abir truth will be always truth..It can't be changed

Meenu signed parul to accept the truth in front of abir

Parul closed her eyes with pain

Parul: ha abir beta. Kunal is not ur own brother. He is son of me n mehul

Abir shattered 

He felt like some earth quake under his feet.

Meenu: abir I'm sure now u believe..and yes think wat ever u want..u may feel it as dhamki ya black mail ya order wat ever

But one thing is sure..if u won't break ur ristha with misthi then ur relation with Kunal also break. I will disclose this truth to Kunal and I will throw him out.

Abir: maa what are you talking maa..Kunal love u lot maa. He will be shattered how can u do this to him

Meenu: yes I know..I know he will be broken after knowing this truth..I don't want to see him in that state. But at same time I don't want my family to b broken because of misthi. I'm doing this for my family. If u don't want to see Kunal in broken state u have to accept my condition

Break ur relation with misthi

Abir: maa

He abt to say something

Meenu signed him to stop by showing her hand

Meenu: abir don't waste ur time by arguing with me..my decision will not change any cost..now u have only one option to choose..misthi ya Kunal

It's ur choice whom to choose

Abir looked at parul

She folded her hands before abir

Parul: please abir beta..my son will be shattered..please do some thing..I can't see him in pain

Abir hold her hands

Abir: I too can't see him in pain maasi..no matter what..he is my own brother..mere nanko hai woh .hamesha rahega

meenu: Abir let's go..maheswaris are on the way..we have to reach home at time..and u have to tell ur decision to misthi

Meenu about to go towards car

Abir: maa u both go..I will come later

Meenu: no..u have to come..I know if I leave u .u will plan some thing

Abir: maa it's not like that..I just need some time n space.

Meenu about to say some thing

Parul: Ben baa..it's his life's difficult decision. At least we have to give some time to digest the fact we told to him..please Ben ba let's go..he will come later

Meenu to herself: there will be no signals in this area.

so there is no chance for him to contact misthi..and he can't go to maheswaris house as they are about to reach rajvansh sadan..there is no need to worry

Meenu agreed

Meenu and parul left

Abir sat down

After some time

Maheswaris and Rv's waiting for abir

Misthi is looking at entrance for her ajeeb rajvansh

Abeer reached 

Kunal came to him

Kunal,: bhai where u went..we are waiting for you 

Abeer hugged Kunal tightly

Kunal was confused

Kunal: bhai are you alright?

Abeer released hug

Abeer nodded his head as yes

Abeer: you will be there with me na..everything will be alright

Bade maa: abir come beta..let's start rituals..

Abir looked at meenu

She is already giving Hitler look n signed him looking at Kunal( indirectly giving dhamki to abir that she will reveal truth to Kunal)

Abir took deep breath

Abir: this rituals are not going to happen

All are shocked except meenu

Who is giving devil Wala smirk

Misthi: abeer what are you saying

Abeer: misthi I'm saying that this marriage is not going to happen

Badepapa: Abeer what happened..why are you talking like this

Bade maa: ha Abeer beta..Kya hua

Misthi: abir tell me what happened..I know something happened..I know our love is not that weak to break like this..what ever problem is..let's face each other. Let's sort out

Abir : love?

Abir laughed 

Abir: I never loved u misthi..this is revenge..revenge for saying no to Kunal

( Sorry guys..u may not like reason I gave..but please be patient I will sort it out..I know abir helped n supported misthi when she broke engagement with Kunal. But I don't like abir saying misthi you are from broken family..so I changed like this but I promise I will clear this mess)

Misthi: Abeer..no abir you are lying

Abir:..this is truth misthi..I want to reject you on same way you rejected Kunal 

That's it..baath katham

And good bye misthi

By saying this he left to his room

Badepapa about to go to abir room to confront him

Misthi shattered

She fell down n started crying

Bade papa Turned back n saw misthi who is totally broken

Maheswaris rushed to her

Naanu about to go towards misthi

Bade papa stopped him

Bp: don't want more favour from ur family

By saying this he made misthi stand up

Bp looked at Rv's 

Bp: ur family don't know what u lost..think as warning r wat ever..but when u realise wat u lost..don't come back..u lost right 

By saying this he left with his family members 

Days are going on

After that incident kunal naanu tried to talk about that to abeer bt he forbidden them to talk abt that matter

Abeer kept himself busy with ngo work 

Every one thinking he moved on

Meenu is super happy as her plan worked

Only parul knows how much Abeer suffering..how much pain is there behind his fake smile..

And his shades help him others not to see his pain in his eyes

Here misthi left to London as per badepapa insistense

In mean while kuhu and Kunal applied for divorce

They didn't reveal to this family

Kuhu became silent after mishbir relation broken

She stopped talking to Kunal 

She just talks when needed

This is hurting Kunal

Kuhu decided to work as event manager

She became busy with works

She went to other city for one week for work purpose

Kunal started missing her

Kunal: Kunal what's happening to you yar.you are the one who told kuhu that you don't like her you asked her to stop talking..you asked her divorce

Then now what happened

Y her silence hurting you

Y her  absence effecting you

Y her  ignorance troubling  you 

First of all y u r missing her

What is happening to you

For just 7 days you are missing her this much..then what about after divorce

Oh god please show me way so that I wont miss her much

At night

Abeer in his room

He is sleeping

he heard some sound

He woke up

He looked around

Abeer confused : what is this sound..I'm feeling like some one entered in this room

Abeer switched on light 

He didn't find any one

He went to window 

Which was open

He closed it

N turned 

He was shocked to see misthi in jugnu dress

He got smile

He lost in her for few seconds

Then realisation hit him

Abeer: misthi..Wat are you doing here? And how u came here?

Misthi: thum kaun banega karod pathi host ho?

Abir nodded as no

Misthi: thum journalist ho?

Abir nodded no

Misthi: thum Meri proffesor ho?

Abeer nodded no

Misthi took stool n got on it

And reached abir level

Misthi: then y u ask these many questions

Abir looked into her eyes

Abir: he understood she came to ask so many questions

He about to go

Misthi blocked him by placing her hands on both sides 

Misthi: no ajeeb rajvansh..now u can't run away from me without answering me

I don't ask so many questions .just accept one thing our love is true it's not a revenge 

Abir: misthi plz

He tried to go

But misthi held his shoulder

She looked into his eyes 

( Saathiya mere bgm)

Misthi moved towards him

She kissed on his forehead

Abir closed his eyes

She kissed his right cheek

And then left cheek

Abir was just enjoying that moment

He felt like time should stop there itself

Misthi placed her lips on his eyes and kissed them

And moved towards tip of his nose

And kissed him

And then moved towards his lips

And placed her lips on his

Soon Abeer allowed her

And kiss became passionate

They forgot the world around then

And living in different world

After misthi left kiss because of lack of breath

Misthi  smiled at Abeer who is still closed his eyes and feeling the moment

Misthi: I got the answer

By saying this she rushed from the place and opened the window and jumped to go out.

Abeer came out of world

Abeer shouted

Abeer: misthi no...don't go

He got up

And looked around

Misthi is not there

He understood it's dream

Abeer: i love you misthi..in my dreams r in reality ur only my love..


Note: This is some wat same as serial..there will be change from next part

Edited by vardhinirosid - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

wow very nice yaar eagerly waiting for next part..I liked Abir dream even in the show mishti should have tried this technique instead of nishmish abi tak mishbir shaadi ho chukki hogi🤣

Posted: 4 years ago

Part 2

Guys in this story im gonna concentrate on all the charcters

Kuku confession

Kunal accepting parul as maa

Meenu flashback

And of course mishbir true love

Bt guys it's take some time for mishbir union

Bt I don't want u all missing mishbir in updates

So there will be some dream sequences n flash backs

I hope u guys are ok with it

Tq for guys who are reading it and also liking it

Plz support my next updates

And this part is more of kuhu Kunal

Will give mishbir in next part

Part 2:

Kunal started missing kuhu

Bt he didn't realised he fell in love with her

He is missing her kuhuness

The girl who used to talk 24/7 now hardly speaking

Kunal decided to irritate her 

So that In that angry she will speak something

He started taunting for everything

Kuhu lost her patience 

And started giving back

This made Kunal happy

He is enjoying this fights

Slowly he initiated friendship with her

Even thought she denied at start

Slowly accepted his friendship

Now they both are in good terms..like friends they are sharing everyhtng..

Kuhu felt happy seeing changes in Kunal

Scene2:

Abir : what are u saying maa..again dhamki. Do u really treat me as human?

I have feelings 

I'm feeling pity about my self.

OMG Abeer in which situation u are

U r trying to proove to ur mom that u r not a robot..you r human

His voice is shivering

Parul felt bad seeing abir in that state

Meenu stood like rock 

Any one can melt by seeing his broken state

But here the great Meenakshi rajvansh stood firmly with out moving an inch

Parul went to Meenakshi

Parul: benbaa please think once..see Abeer state..how can he marry some one else when he loves misthi so much

Please benbaa. He choosen Kunal that doesn't mean his love for misthi is less.

He did that for me n Kunal

He can bear the pain of losing love

But he can't see pain of Kunal 

he  decided to suffer to keep Kunal happy

Please benbaa Im folding my hands infront of you..don't do this to abeer..I can't see him in pain

Meenu : parul do u think I won't think about my son.

I took this decision for his good life

And I said him to break up with misthi so that I can choose a better life partner for him 

And not  for sulking for her n live life with her thoughts

And this is my decision ..if he won't agree to marriage 

this time definitely I'm  gonna reveal this truth to Kunal

Nothing can stop me

Decide fast Abeer 

So that I vl start marriage preparations

By saying this she left

Abeer sat down

And closed his eyes tightly

Parul came to him n sat beside him

She kept her hand on his head and carassed his hair

Abeer looked at her

Parul: no more sacrifices Abeer

Abeer looked at her shockingly 

Abeer: maasi

Parul: ha Abeer enough of this sacrifices. For Kunal happiness I can't see my another son in pain

Let's tell truth to Kunal

Abeer: maasi

Wat are u saying..no maasi we can't do this

Parul: y can't Abeer..at any day truth will come out one or in another way..we can't live with this lie entire life. n I know it's difficult for Kunal to accept truth. But we are there na..we will be always there for him to support..and I know his brother Abeer will be always there for him..Hein aa?

Abeer became emotional

He hugged her

Abeer: ha maasi ..he is my nanko. No one can separate us

Parul: I knew..I think we should tell this to kuhu too so that she will  also handle him..he needs our support

At that time they heard voice

Wat truth?

Abeer and parul saw that person

Abeer: bro

Parul: kuhu beta

Kuhu: so what's going on..hashtag any secret mission

Parul: ha beta some what like that only

Kuhu: wow excited..then will u guys join me in this mission hashtag sherlok kuhu 

Parul: beta this is very serious thing 

Kuhu now observed seriousness in parul n Abeer faces

Now she was tensed

She looked at Abeer

Kuhu: bro is everything alright

Abeer nodded no

Kuhu: what happened bro

Abeer: not here let's go out

Parul Abeer n kuhu went out

After some time

Kuhu: what?

Parul: ha beta..what u heard is right..Kunal is my son

And Abeer broke up with misthi because benba told him to break up with misthi otherwise she will reveal this truth to Kunal

Kuhu got tears

Kuhu went to abeer and kept her hand on his shoulder

Kuhu: bro you know what

if I were in ur place and anyone ask me to choose between misthi and Kunal..I will choose Kunal ..I will choose my love

But u choosen Kunal..I have no words bro..Kunal is lucky to have a brother like you..after seeing ur bro's relation ship I'm really feeling ashamed..I never treated misthi as my sister.. I hurt her lot..now I understood relation of siblings

Now I really want to be like you

Abeer smiled

Abeer:  kuhu..I know there is some distance between you n misthi..but ur relationship with her is not that weak

I know this 

because after I broke up with misthi u became so silent..u hardly speaking with me..because you are hurt as I hurt ur sister 

Kuhu got tears

Kuhu:ha bro I felt bad..we both fight a lot..tease each other..I some times feel inferior as she gets lime light but I don't know y I can't able to see her in broken state.

Abeer smiled: that is the purity in  relationship of siblings 

Kuhu smiled

Kuhu:  bro..I understood.. n parul maasi is correct it's better to tell truth to Kunal so that meenu maa didn't get chance to black mail you again

But I was tensed how will Kunal take it..he loves meenu maa a lot

Parul: ha beta..that is our mission..we have to tell truth to Kunal..but he should not be broken

We have to think idea for that

Kuhu: ok ma we will do it

In mean while I think some ideas

Abeer kuhu n parul joined their hands

At rajvansh sadan

Abeer in his room

Holding misthi photo frame like hugging

Abeer: I know so much happened in our lives..which we never imagined..misthi I miss u so much..bas wait for few days..I will sort out everything and will come to you

I love u misthi

By saying this he kissed her photo

( Dheere dheere se bgm)

In kuku room

Kuhu is thinking deeply

Kunal came to room and saw her who is in deep thinking

Kunal cleared his throat

But no response from her

Kunal to himself: crazy girl..what she is thinking so deeply

Kunal went to her

And shook her shoulder 

Kuhu came out thoughts 

She looked at him, his hand is still on her shoulder

She looked into his eyes

He lost in her eyes

She too list in him

(Bekudhi bgm)

After some time

Kuhu came out of world

Kunal too

Both felt embrassed 

Kunal thought of diverting topic

Kunal: by the way wat this hashtag ki bacchi is thinking too deeply

Kuhu pouted her lips

Kunal: ok cool tell me wat happened

Kuhu: Kunal..I was just thinking..about my life

Kunal looked at her confusingly 

Kuhu smiled understanding his confusion 

Kuhu: ha Kunal..my life which is filled with so much uniquness I never thought everything in my life become unique # uniquness queen

Kunal raised his eyebrow

Kuhu ignored his look

Kuhu: u know na Kunal

I was an illigitimate child

A tear dropped from her eyes

Kunal felt bad

He understood she need support( Kunal became sharp🤭)

He held her hand tightly

And signed her to continue

A little smile crept on her lips

Kuhu: and God knows how to balance life ..I used to feel im unlucky as I'm illegitimate but may be god felt whats  this #hashtag cute girl wrong in that so he made me lucky by giving varsha maa and bade papa  n bade maa

Varsha maa accepted me whole heartedly 

On that day I felt I'm luckiest person on the earth

And next  when u said u never loved me

Kunal face became pale

His heart became heavy hearing that

Kuhu: I felt so bad..I cried a lot as I'm unlucky but again God balanced that..he gave a family who loves me lot..from childhood I used to feel I should be in lime light ..I should be center of attraction.i should get special treatment and this family  gave me that..he gave me Abeer bro

And now leave about husband / love I got best friend in u

Kuhu said emotionally

Kunal smiled

He saw tears in her eyes 

He wiped her tears

Can't able to control she hugged him

Kunal inturn hugged her and carassed her hair with his hand

Kuhu: till now I used to feel im unlucky for everything Kunal..but few minutes back when I self analysed I saw these many positives in my life

I understood life itself like this

When we busy in planning some thingg

God plans some thing else

But at the end .he will give what u deserve 

In our case he gave a supportive family and Abeer bro who loves family a lot..who gives everything for us

We are so lucky

I hope you to see  life in postive  light

Kunal got confused

He broke hug

And looked at her confusingly

Kunal: kuhu what are you trying to say

Kuhu: woh...woh

She started  stammering

Woh Kunal I got some important work

I will talk with u later

By saying this she left the place

Edited by vardhinirosid - 4 years ago
Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by Agrata23


wow very nice yaar eagerly waiting for next part..I liked Abir dream even in the show mishti should have tried this technique instead of nishmish abi tak mishbir shaadi ho chukki hogi🤣

Thank you yar.ha ha nishmish attack see poora story karab kar diya🤦 here my story demands so I shown as dream otherwise I might shown as real sequence 😝

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