Hi everyone I'm here today to complete a story I'd started during the Australia track of Yeh Hai Mohabbatein. It was basically about how Pihu accepts Ishita as her mother. I want to complete it by starting a second thread.
I will post all the shots of the story and gauge your response. I hope you like it. Thank you.
Shot One
JAB TAK SAANSON KA SAATH HAI
In this moment all he wanted was to curl up and hide himself in her embrace. It wasn't possible. It was far from possible. He picked up her photo from the side table and ran his finger tips over her angelic form as tears formed in his eyes.
FLASHBACK
Raman paced back and forth in his room as Ishita packed up his suitcase. Tears brimming his eyes, he engulfed her in a back hug; nuzzling his nose in the crook of her neck as she reluctantly released herself out of his hold, knowing well, she wouldn't be able to resist him... he pulled her at the waist and threw her on the bed; dropping wet kisses on each pore of her being showering her with the unconditional love in his being, for her ... perhaps for the one last time ...
She pulled his hair and bit his earlobe crawling up to his lap opening his shirt buttons drawing patterns on his warm chest; cuddling onto him as his lips lingered over her forehead as he carried her towards their bed and they made love till dawn settled in.
THE NEXT MORNING
As the sun rays hit them, Ishita woke up to find her head resting on her Raman's chest as she tickled his chest with her nose as he woke up with a chuckle. He wrapped his strong arms around her neck and picked her up and proceeded to their bathroom.
They came out together wrapped in their towels as Raman ran to the wardrobe to pull out his favourite black saari with golden embroidery. She took it from him, fondly running her hands over it whilst she pulled out an all black suit and white shirt for him. Raman excitedly took the saari from Ishita and volunteered to put it on her as she teased
"Oh ho Ravan Kumar apni Madrasan ko khud apne hathon se kapdo ki thaan pehnayenge?"
"Kya hai! Kabhi kabhi Biwi pe pyaar bhi lutaana chaiye! Har baar katne ko dauroon, acha nahi lagta!"
"Chalo, get started! Waise yaad hai abhi bhi?"
"Beta saath saal aur koi kaam tha kya hume?"
"Haw!!"
"Chichori harkatein chod, kaam pe lag!"
"Shuru karo!"
Raman lovingly made Ishita wear the saari, adorning her glowing form. They joined their heads and locked their hands as Raman kissed her milky hands. She took him in a bone crushing hug and he held her protectively, caressing her hair. They got up hand in hand as Ishita made Raman get his suit on; getting his cologne and spraying it onto his clothes. Sharing one last hug, they descended downstairs and Raman announced to the family
"Jaise ke aap sab jaante hain Shagun Pihu ko Bangkok leke ja rahi hai toh issi liye maine yeh decide kiya hai ke main bhi unke peeche jaonga ..."
"Raman Puttar tu aise kaise Puttar ... Ishita aur bachon ka kya bannega Puttar?"
"Jaane dijiye innhe Mummyji inko sukoon Pihu ke saath hi milega"
"Chalta hoon Mummyji. Chalo Papa ..."
Everyone walked off: AdiRu shocked to see their Papa leave behind THEM, their happy family ... unable to absorb any of it ... they ran off to their rooms ...
IshRa were left alone and wiping her tears, hoping for their plan to bear fruit, Raman left ... a teary eyed Ishita, her legs giving way at the threshold.
FLASHBACK ENDS (ek saal baad)
"I love you Madrasan aur woh din dur nahi jab Pihu bhi tujhse yahi kahe gi!" Raman caressed a sleeping Pihu's hairs.
TO BE CONTINUED
JAB TAK SAANSON KA SAATH HAI
Pihu slept hugging him tight and he fondly kissed her forehead resulting in her sleep to get disturbed with the pricking of his beard. She sprang from her bed and said "aapki daari chubti hai" he chuckled remembering Ruhi had said the same, long back
Dropping Pihu to school, he returned home and called up Ishita.
FLASHBACK
Ishita sat at the threshold, her body too weak to get up. AdiRu came up to their mother and took her to their room. They lay her in bed and hugged on to her tightly. She stroked their hair as Adi questioned
"Kya Papa ki life mein humaari koi importance nahi hai Ishimaa? Kya hum sab, aap, unke liye important nahi ho?" he questioned, crying holding tightly onto his mother.
Ishita caressed his hair and calmed him "Papa hum sabse bahut pyaar karte hain lekin Pihu bhi toh important hai ... woh tum dono ki choti behen hai ... Papa ka Pihu ke saath hona important hai!"
Ruhi looked on in disbelief "Ishimaa Pihu ke saath saath wahan Shagun bhi hai ... kya aap ko fadak nahi padhta...??"
Ishita smiled "Main koi choti bachi nahi hoon, teenager nahi hoon ke jealous yaa insecure feel karungi Ruhi! Humaara motive sirf yahi hai ke Shagun Pihu ko manipulate na kar sakke. Mere kehne pe hi toh tumhaare Papa Pihu ke peeche gaye. Adi, Ruhi tum dono ko jitni taqleef ho rahi hai, usse kahi zyaada tumhaare Papa ko ho rahi hai magar unhe jaana padha kyunki hum jaante hain ke Shagun, bhale hi woh cheehk, cheehk ke kahe ke woh achi Maa hai, uska yeh jhooth kabhi sach nahi kehla sakta"
AdiRu spoke in unison, "Agar isse humaari Pihu humaare paas aajaati hai, tum hum bahut khush hain!" Ishita engulfs them in a hug!
THE NEXT DAY
AdiRu spoke to Raman over the phone to tell him that they loved him for being the best Papa in the world and for always doing the best for them. Raman felt relieved and felt like a big burden was off his shoulders. He requested his children to take care of his Madrasan not wanting to see a rise in her BP. He strictly asked Adi to take responsibility of the office and asked Ruhi to concentrate on her studies and excel which would make him and Ishita exceptionally proud. He said " I love you" to his children and took blessings from his parents whilst Ishita looked on happily, hoping all would be well!
Upon arriving in Bangkok, Raman realised that Shagun fooled Mani. Asking the travel agency about Shagun he found out she had flown to Australia and off he went ... for Pihu ...!!
A FEW MONTHS LATER
Raman had rented an apartment in Australia and was living two streets away from Pihu who lived with Shagun. Pihu was very uncomfortable in this new environment and had hardly made any friends. She did poorly at school with Shagun neglecting her, splurging the money she'd stolen from Mani. Pihu had become a recluse who was always quiet, didn't talk to anyone but her face always lit up around her Papa's presence. Raman would take Pihu to his apartment and they would have the time of their life together.
Shagun had become a gambler and alcoholic and would come home post midnight having no knowledge where Pihu was. Pihu was happy with her Papa who encouraged her to make friends, made her join MMA. Pihu had become a happier child in her father's presence who had made new friends and opened up. Her teachers noticed vast improvement in her studies. Raman shared this back home and the family was ecstatic! Pihu now also seemed to have started caring about her Dadu, Daadi, Bhaiya, Didi, Bua, Chachu and to Raman's surprise on one occasion, Raman in between talks heard Pihu utter "Ishimaa"
His happiness knew no bounds. Their daughter had finally acknowledged her mother. He took Pihu in a bone crushing hug and Pihu reciprocated
PRESENT TIME
Ishita who had just entered their room picked up their wedding photo frame and stroked her hands over his face. She blew a kiss over at him and just then his name flashed as the caller id. She couldn't help but smile hearing his husky tone asking her to come over to Australia because, he had a surprise ...
JAB TAK SAANSON KA SAATH HAI
Raman collected Pihu from school and together, they got down to cleaning their house. A curious Pihu asked who was coming and to hear Raman say "Ishita" she got very excited and asked her Papa to order South Indian food to which he happily obliged, tearful at the beautiful turn of events! Ishita landed over in Australia and PiMan went over to receive her. Pihu greeted Ishita happily as though there had never been any discord between them and also tightly hugged Ishita whilst Ishita just absorbed the moment and lovingly stroked her hair; picking her in her lap and dropping kisses over Pihu's face. Raman took the duo in a bear hug and the trio smiled, giggled and cheered at having found each other, finally!
IshRaHu entered their house and to see Pihu be so helpful and welcoming, overwhelmed Ishita. It was now that Pihu casually uttered "Ishimaa" that Ishita couldn't help control her happy tears from flowing. Raman halted setting the table, picked Pihu in his arm and held Ishita with his other. The trio settled at the dining table with Pihu in Ishu's lap and Raman admiring them. Suddenly, whilst Ishita was amidst feeding Pihu she asked "aap ab kabhi bhi mujhe chod ke nahi jaoge na?" Ishita pushed Pihu's hair strands behind and dropping a light kiss spoke "Ishimaa Pihu ko kabhi kahin nahi chod ke jayengi, Pihu promise!" and took Pihu's hand to kiss it as the little girl snuggled onto her mother's chest.
It was soon night and Pihu had slept off. IshRa were sitting on their bed satisfied with Pihu acknowledging Ishita as a mother. However, one trouble lingered
Pihu's custody
The next morning, Shagun who had been oblivious to Pihu's whereabouts due to her drunkedness; woke up, made a nimbu paani and noticed a bouquet of flowers with a bottle of champagne. In the bouquet was a chit that read "meet you at your house, tonight and do wear the dress I've sent" she heard a knock and rushed to the door. She received a parcel and ripped it open. The greedy woman that she was got excited and started to adore the red gown.
Shagun paced back and forth from her living room to the door and finally a guy knocked at her door introducing himself as Vidhyut
TO BE CONTINUED
I hope I get a good response so I could then complete this story. Thank you guys.
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